This book was read and reviewed by my co-worker, Emily:
The sequel to Divided We Fall. Seventeen-year-old Daniel Wright has inadvertently started the second American civil war through his actions during a protest in his home state of Idaho during the first book. This one covers the aftermath, where Idaho declares itself independent from the United States, and Daniel and his fellow rebels are in hiding from federal government agents.
This book starts in the middle of a battle scene, so I’m led to believe it starts right after the events of the first book. Daniel and co. find a hiding place under a car repair shop, where they stay and try to take care of their wounded and figure out their next move. They sneak around the town stealing supplies and seeing who is on their side and who isn’t, and one of the soldiers gets infected and dies despite their efforts to clean his wounds. These various scenes are periodically interrupted by 2-3 pages of italicized news broadcasts and social media posts about the incident and the events that follow, giving the reader a feel for what’s going on in the rest of the country while the teenagers pretend to be revolutionaries.
When everyone isn’t arguing about what to do next, they’re arguing about “the girls”—JoBell, Daniel’s girlfriend who wants to support him but predictably also tries for a peaceful solution to the situation and gets herself shot, and Becca, Daniel’s childhood friend who is predictably also in love with him, but doesn’t say anything about it until the worst possible moment. Both are mostly there to up the female main cast to three—there is one female soldier in the group—and give Daniel something else to angst about besides having single-handedly started a war. He and his comrades constantly mention that who Daniel should be with romantically is the least of their problems, but then they keep on talking about it.
Eventually they decide to actually fight back against the Fed, which they do by setting fire to someone’s home and luring soldiers there so they can ambush them. The ensuing battle scene, complete with explosions and soldiers being burned alive, are described in grisly detail. One scene involves one of Daniel’s friends hacking people with a sword. While Daniel and several others talk later about how they feel bad about killing these soldiers, they all eventually chalk it up to “doing what they had to do,” for the sake of the newly minted Independent Republic of Idaho.
A group of federal soldiers led by a man named Alsovar manage to find their hiding place and capture Daniel and Sparrow, the female soldier. They torture them for information, which is horrifying firstly because it’s adults doing it to minors, and secondly because it seems to be more out of Alsovar’s desire for revenge than out of actual need for the information. After several excruciating pages of Daniel’s increasingly incoherent description of the torture, the Brotherhood, a special resistance group fighting for Idaho’s independence, finally rescues them.
Later, there is a final encounter with Alsovar. He and Daniel fight one-on-one, Alsovar gets impaled on a metal rod, and Daniel takes a few moments deciding whether or not to kill him. Eventually he decides the “right” thing to do is to turn away and leave the man to die alone from the stab wound, but Cal—the same guy who went ballistic with the sword before—hacks him to pieces. He shows no remorse, and no one seems willing to say or do anything about it. With this, Daniel’s town is free from the Fed for now, and when neighboring states send over food and supplies, the Brotherhood invites everyone into town for a “community picnic” to celebrate Idaho’s independence. Just as everyone is enjoying their hard-earned temporary peace, Becca’s parents show up to yell at Daniel for bringing their little girl into the fight—she joined of her free will, but they don’t listen to her—and then the Brotherhood brings out three people who turned out to be traitors to the cause. Despite Daniel’s protests, the Brotherhood hangs them in front of everybody. The end.
Problematic content: war-level violence, grisly wounds, torture. Foul language—everything but the f-word is used frequently. Crude humor and sexual jokes—Eric in particular likes to refer to himself as the “Great Asian Lovemaster” and has a naked animated female avatar for his phone, complete with a sexy voice that speaks only in innuendo. Daniel and JoBell have several lead-up-to-sex scenes that are interrupted or fade-to-black, and he makes out with Becca as well.
Other complaints: The book often refers to 9/11 and the events leading after it that make the book feel like anti-government propaganda, the teens are obviously too immature to be involved in war, as they use video game and zombie movie tropes to determine their strategies, and it’s misogynistic. Note that this is supposed to be set in the near future, and the supposed evil president of the United States is a woman, while all the state governors who secede—the “good guys”—are men. While everyone enthusiastically bashes the president for whatever it was she apparently did in the first book to trigger all of this, the governor of Idaho seems to be a hero just by seceding from the Union and declaring himself president of Idaho, with no clear strategy for what to do from there. The teens instantly start addressing him as “Mr. President” in a heartbeat, as if this were a totally logical step for the man to take. There are no high-ranking female soldiers or officers in the entire book on either side of the conflict, and the other adult women they meet in the town are either useless on their own or traitors. There are several passages where JoBell and Becca attempt to speak up during the soldiers’ battle planning, and higher-ranked male officers simply ignore them. While all of this may be “authentic” to how real soldiers act, it was never treated as something that can or should improve.
It felt like a teenage boys’ reenactment of a Call of Duty video game—all guns and gore and glory. Daniel occasionally attempts to add some ethical weight to it by saying how horrible it is to have to kill someone; then he sees Becca riding her horse—yes, her non-combat-trained horse—into battle firing a huge gun, and his reaction is: “I’m not gonna lie. It was kindof awesome.” And so we go back to Call of Duty in the space of maybe a minute.
(I felt sorrier for that poor horse than any of the humans in the book.)
I saw that this book is well-reviewed by quite a few people—male and female—on Goodreads, but I just don’t see the appeal. It’s possible that my complaints can be viewed as a matter of different taste, but at the same time, because of the graphic battle scenes, instances of underage drinking and foul language, I would not recommend this to anyone under 16.