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MoonFall
A lone wanderer trudges through the post-apocalyptic wasteland, trying to run away from what humanity has become after the Fall. When he is caught in the conflict between two rival factions, he is forced to choose between his freedom and saving what is left of civilization. A post-apocalyptic adventure that is “full of action, heart, and human nature.” ~ Tina MarieMoonFall is the first book in a series of four.________________________________________________ Books in the MoonFall Book 1: MoonFall - amazon.com/dp/B00R6UT2G0Book 2: MoonFire - amazon.com/dp/B00R8JM8XSBook 3: MoonDust - amazon.com/dp/B00SV4QUCYBook 4: MoonRise - amazon.com/dp/B00U1QFS32
216 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 17, 2014
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May 28, 2015
I really, REALLY liked this story! It takes me back to some of the postapoc books I read in the 80's and 90's. Many times I want to read a book simply to be entertained - taken into a world where I can relate to the main character and follow him on his quest. MoonFall absolutely did that for me. Not to say that there isn't a message - there is, but it is just really refreshing to get drawn into a broken world where the main character does what he can to survive and struggles with becoming a reluctant hero (I'm a sucker for a reluctant hero).
I have no problem with the fact that there was not a lot of backstory in regards to what happened to the moon. It just wasn't important enough to me to take me away from what was happening in the story. I'm certainly curious to know why it happened, but perhaps we will get more backstory in the later books. Even if we don't, I'm just not caught up enough in the "why it happened" to deter me from reading more. I would seriously doubt that the survivors of this catastrophe are caring all that much about "why it happened" twenty years later.
I felt the book was well written and did not have a plethora of grammatical errors that are so often found in some indie published books - especially those that can be found for free. This is a helluva story for free! In fact, I will be downloading books 2, 3, and 4 - if they are as good as book 1, they'll be worth it.
I have no problem with the fact that there was not a lot of backstory in regards to what happened to the moon. It just wasn't important enough to me to take me away from what was happening in the story. I'm certainly curious to know why it happened, but perhaps we will get more backstory in the later books. Even if we don't, I'm just not caught up enough in the "why it happened" to deter me from reading more. I would seriously doubt that the survivors of this catastrophe are caring all that much about "why it happened" twenty years later.
I felt the book was well written and did not have a plethora of grammatical errors that are so often found in some indie published books - especially those that can be found for free. This is a helluva story for free! In fact, I will be downloading books 2, 3, and 4 - if they are as good as book 1, they'll be worth it.
April 6, 2019
The moon explodes (It's not explained why), leading to the immediate collapse of civilisation (also not explained, though I infer from the rest of the book's tone that the reason is "because people are almost all unreasonably awful").
Twenty years later, our protag is a cynical loner who expects the worst of pretty much everyone and only looks out for himself. The author's clearly going for a "but he learns to find the hero within" arc here, but it's not terribly convincing, given just how much time is spent wallowing in the general awfulness of everyone in this setting.
Even less convincing is the romantic subplot, which is clearly going for the "antagonism = sexual interest" vibe. Here's a hint: if your first meeting with someone involves them deliberately beating you until you are bloody and nearly unconscious, and then throwing you in a cell with someone they expect to try to rape you, THEY ARE NOT DATING MATERIAL.
Twenty years later, our protag is a cynical loner who expects the worst of pretty much everyone and only looks out for himself. The author's clearly going for a "but he learns to find the hero within" arc here, but it's not terribly convincing, given just how much time is spent wallowing in the general awfulness of everyone in this setting.
Even less convincing is the romantic subplot, which is clearly going for the "antagonism = sexual interest" vibe. Here's a hint: if your first meeting with someone involves them deliberately beating you until you are bloody and nearly unconscious, and then throwing you in a cell with someone they expect to try to rape you, THEY ARE NOT DATING MATERIAL.
February 28, 2019
Nice start to a new series, on with number 2
April 17, 2015
I picked this ebook up when it was given away free from Amazon as, for that price, I thought you couldn't really beat it - if you didn't like it, so what? You wouldn't have lost anything.
Spoiler alert: I did like it.
This is also the first in a 4-book series, set in a post-apocalyptic world where, 20 years ago, the moon exploded and society crumbled. That, however, is more given as back drop to the story contained within: there's never any real investigation or import given to what, for example, the lack of the moon would have on the tides, nor any real description as to how society crumbled.
If I had to choose a similar post-apocalyptic story to compare this to, I would have to choose either David Gemmell's Jon Shannow trilogy, or maybe David Brin's The Postman: both share a similar view of a crumbled society as in this, with Shannow (in particular) also a drifter, like the main character in this of Noah Brennan.
The difference, however, is that Shannow has a mission whereas Brennan (as the novel starts) doesn't. That, however, changes by the end of the novel, which ends on a decided cliff-hanger.
The highest praise I can give this? After finishing it, I picked up the next 3 instalments.
Spoiler alert: I did like it.
This is also the first in a 4-book series, set in a post-apocalyptic world where, 20 years ago, the moon exploded and society crumbled. That, however, is more given as back drop to the story contained within: there's never any real investigation or import given to what, for example, the lack of the moon would have on the tides, nor any real description as to how society crumbled.
If I had to choose a similar post-apocalyptic story to compare this to, I would have to choose either David Gemmell's Jon Shannow trilogy, or maybe David Brin's The Postman: both share a similar view of a crumbled society as in this, with Shannow (in particular) also a drifter, like the main character in this of Noah Brennan.
The difference, however, is that Shannow has a mission whereas Brennan (as the novel starts) doesn't. That, however, changes by the end of the novel, which ends on a decided cliff-hanger.
The highest praise I can give this? After finishing it, I picked up the next 3 instalments.
August 21, 2015
An entertaining romp through the apocalypse
The apocalyptic world was shown well. The main character was not some perfectly super-duper Special Forces action hero. He was average, flawed, and believable as he grew during the story. This was a big part of why I gave this four stars. This is a talented writer and the story is solid, with a touch of mystery in some places and humor in others, sandwiched between nice action scenes amid a truly screwed up world.
While I do recommend this book and intend to purchase the next in the series, I will say the writing could have been stronger in places. Nothing that made me stop reading, but I did notice. In some places, the writing was very strong and artistic, which made the weaker prose stand out due to the contrast. Like I said, though, nothing that pulled me out of the story.
The apocalyptic world was shown well. The main character was not some perfectly super-duper Special Forces action hero. He was average, flawed, and believable as he grew during the story. This was a big part of why I gave this four stars. This is a talented writer and the story is solid, with a touch of mystery in some places and humor in others, sandwiched between nice action scenes amid a truly screwed up world.
While I do recommend this book and intend to purchase the next in the series, I will say the writing could have been stronger in places. Nothing that made me stop reading, but I did notice. In some places, the writing was very strong and artistic, which made the weaker prose stand out due to the contrast. Like I said, though, nothing that pulled me out of the story.
December 30, 2014
Just another lonely boy in town..
The title is kind of misleading. I mean, there was mention of a disaster, and the moon disintegrated, but it's all background. The story takes place several years after the disaster and is mainly about Noah, a drifter just trying to survive in a world that has fallen apart.
He is trying to find some things to salvage when he is arrested and taken to jail in a case of mistaken identity. There is much violence, attempts at humor, (some of which are a bit amusing,) but I personally would have preferred more information about the disaster.
Results: it didn't really hold my interest, and I see no reason to continue the series, even if it's free.
The title is kind of misleading. I mean, there was mention of a disaster, and the moon disintegrated, but it's all background. The story takes place several years after the disaster and is mainly about Noah, a drifter just trying to survive in a world that has fallen apart.
He is trying to find some things to salvage when he is arrested and taken to jail in a case of mistaken identity. There is much violence, attempts at humor, (some of which are a bit amusing,) but I personally would have preferred more information about the disaster.
Results: it didn't really hold my interest, and I see no reason to continue the series, even if it's free.
March 29, 2015
I struggled a bit with this story and protagonist but the effort was worth it. The intrigue of a fallen civilization because of a moon explosion is fascinating and I was hoping for an explanation of what happens to our Earth with no tides; weather patterns, tidal problems, everything that I read in Asimov about why our moon is so important. Instead this is an adventure tale where the vision of the lunar cloud in the sky is only backdrop for a civilization fallen apart. The main character is compelling, though, and I enjoyed the battle scenes and the concept of city-states at war with wild savages. The story ends with a cliffhanger and I'm going to pick up the next in the series and see where it takes me.
June 17, 2015
This is a good post apocalyptic book without the frantic zombie type action a lot of this genre has. The story focuses on one man's quest to simply live the solitary wanderer's life. Twenty years after the moon broke apart and caused a global catastrophe Noah is caught in the middle of two factions without a way out until chaos gives him the chance. However, he is torn between the chance to escape and the possibility of being part of something important for the first time.
By this time in the book I really didn't know which way this character would go. Good writing such as A.G. Wyatt has done here makes the characters living breathing people who leave you on the edge of your seat waiting for what they will do next. If you want to know what Noah decides then pick up this book.
By this time in the book I really didn't know which way this character would go. Good writing such as A.G. Wyatt has done here makes the characters living breathing people who leave you on the edge of your seat waiting for what they will do next. If you want to know what Noah decides then pick up this book.
January 6, 2015
"MoonFall"
By A.G. Wyatt
Noah was young, just at the cusp of manhood, when the world ended. Meteorites destroyed the world and most of the working technology. After the tragic deaths of his older bothers, Noah picked up stakes and began to wander.
The world has changed but not people. Noah finds that he needs to stay away from people but he finds himself drawn into a group of strangers' drama.
This is a well written and edited book. I enjoyed it and highly recommend it.
By A.G. Wyatt
Noah was young, just at the cusp of manhood, when the world ended. Meteorites destroyed the world and most of the working technology. After the tragic deaths of his older bothers, Noah picked up stakes and began to wander.
The world has changed but not people. Noah finds that he needs to stay away from people but he finds himself drawn into a group of strangers' drama.
This is a well written and edited book. I enjoyed it and highly recommend it.
January 5, 2016
Absolutely nothing new here, but a good read nevertheless.
The world "fell" 20 years ago and Noah now scavenges for survival. He rarely sees people, but when he does, he avoids them. He prefers to walk alone. Which is why being imprisoned is not to his taste.
Part of a 4 part series, with a suitable cliffhanger leading into the next book.
The world "fell" 20 years ago and Noah now scavenges for survival. He rarely sees people, but when he does, he avoids them. He prefers to walk alone. Which is why being imprisoned is not to his taste.
Part of a 4 part series, with a suitable cliffhanger leading into the next book.
February 1, 2015
Loved it!!
This is a great action packed adventure into the post apocalyptic genre, with unique and provocative twist. Really enjoyed reading this title and can't wait to read more. A definite must read!
This is a great action packed adventure into the post apocalyptic genre, with unique and provocative twist. Really enjoyed reading this title and can't wait to read more. A definite must read!
January 5, 2015
I downloaded this because the premise sounded good and it was free. I was disappointed that there wasn't more discussion about what happened to the moon and the effects on the environment.
The protagonist was a bit ridiculous.
I doubt I will read anything else in the series.
The protagonist was a bit ridiculous.
I doubt I will read anything else in the series.
January 10, 2015
I really enjoyed reading this book. It's a different take on the end of the world apocalyptic stories others have told. I really liked the characters. Noah was very believable and I found reading his story to be entertaining! Looking forward to the next book.
May 4, 2015
An interesting post apocalyptic novel. Not too long. Nicely written. And a main character who, lets face it, talks to his (empty) gun. So all good there. I enjoyed it enough to be reading the sequel. That's not really fair. I liked it a lot.
May 6, 2015
Great setting. Interesting concept with the moon exploding and turning the world upside down. Like others, I wish that would have been explored more, but there are three more books. There's time. I'm in for Book 2.
August 4, 2015
This story had an interesting concept but I am not sure if its basis is sound, but maybe I have misunderstood?
The protagonist could do with some work, however, he possibly becomes more developed as the series continues.
An okay read.
The protagonist could do with some work, however, he possibly becomes more developed as the series continues.
An okay read.
January 6, 2015
Not my usual kind of book but it was good. A slightly different twist to the end of the world
January 11, 2015
Good read.
Found this book intriguing. Very curious to see where it goes and understand how it all began. Looking forward to the next one.
Found this book intriguing. Very curious to see where it goes and understand how it all began. Looking forward to the next one.
January 25, 2015
It was a freebie that....
Hooked me after the first couple of pages. I will most likely continue on with the second book. Very good read.
Hooked me after the first couple of pages. I will most likely continue on with the second book. Very good read.
February 16, 2015
Another apocalyptic novel. Seems like that is all I read of late. Good so far. Just started book 2 of the trilogy (I think) today. Interesting world Wyatt created here.
February 26, 2015
decent enough disaster book. Needed a little big more background to what actually happened. why the moon feel apart and the effects on the world. Other than that good read and good story.
March 20, 2015
interesting concept
It took me a while to get into this but now I'm hooked. Will download the next book as soon as possible!
It took me a while to get into this but now I'm hooked. Will download the next book as soon as possible!
April 1, 2015
This is a quick and fun book to read about a post apacolyptic survivor that saves the day.
April 17, 2015
Pretty good story.
March 29, 2015
Surprisingly good post apocalyptic debut.
May 28, 2015
Good book
A very good book. It makes you ask a lot of questions about the story lines and wonder what is coming next.
A very good book. It makes you ask a lot of questions about the story lines and wonder what is coming next.
Want to read
June 2, 2015kindle
June 16, 2015
A very descriptive, post-apocalyptic adventure of Noah Brennan's trek through this new world.
July 23, 2015
I could take it or leave it
Just didn't grab my attention and this book has post apocalyptic sword fights with civilization and anarchists. Wasn't terrible just not enough.
Just didn't grab my attention and this book has post apocalyptic sword fights with civilization and anarchists. Wasn't terrible just not enough.
December 4, 2015
Very good post apocalyptic tale. Not your ordinary story. The moon actually gets hit by a meteor and is destroyed.
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