Most of us are familiar with the story of Jonah, either from reading it in the Bible or hearing it in Sunday school. Now, Pastor Greg Haslam takes us "behind the scenes," so to speak, and explains what was really happening in those four short chapters.
(I usually prefer to communicate directly with the author, but I couldn't find a contact email address for Pastor Haslam. This is a summary of the editing oversights I found in the Kindle text:
Page 7, Thank you James / Thank YOU, James ; 14, provides us with a further conundrums / provides us WITH FURTHER conundrums (omit "a") ; 22, story is it's tight narrative brevity / story is ITS tight narrative brevity ; 22, His invitation for you and I to enter / His invitation for you and ME to enter (the preposition "for" requires the objective pronoun "me") ; 25, few books possess it's power / few books possess ITS power ;
(Here's a hint for better writing: "IT'S" is always a contraction of either "IT IS" or "IT HAS". If you cannot replace the "IT'S" in your sentence by one of these phrases, drop the apostrophe and use "ITS" instead.)
Page 26, before it would completely obliterated / before it would BE completely obliterated ; 26, the attention his people / the attention OF his people ; 28, adding to it's flavour / adding to ITS flavour ; 28, The extent to which Nineveh had sunk, propelled it / The extent to which Nineveh had SUNK PROPELLED it (omit unnecessary comma) ; 30, with it's technological advancements / with ITS technological advancements ;
Page 31, the city from it's core / the city from ITS core ; 33, the face of the power of one / the FACT (?) of the power of one ; 39, the style of it's delivery / the style of ITS delivery ; 39, There is no point God speaking / There is no point IN God speaking ; 40, A ship to Tarshish anyone? / A ship to TARSHISH, anyone? ; 43, Use me Lord / Use ME, Lord ; 50, even among it's most far off / even among ITS most far off ;
Page 57, What a remarkable co-incidence / What a remarkable COINCIDENCE (no hyphen) ; 58, everything is alright with the world / everything is ALL RIGHT with the world ; 60, freshness of unchartered waters / freshness of UNCHARTED waters ; 64, We submit to it's reductionism / We submit to ITS reductionism ; 66, son of a Gloucester inn-keeper / son of a Gloucester INNKEEPER (no hyphen) ;
Page 70, This working ship, sailing inconspicuously through familiar and predictable waters was about to be tossed / This working ship, sailing inconspicuously through familiar and predictable WATERS, was about to be tossed ; 72, remained in a comatozed state / ("comatozed" is not even a
legitimate word, and "comatose" has a specific medical definition; I suggest the following alternative) remained in AN INSENSIBLE state ;
Page 72, foundations of it's past / foundations of ITS past ; 74, just as our forbears did / just as our FOREBEARS did (forebears = ancestors or predecessors) ; 78, it could issue in some kind / it could ENSUE in some kind ; 79, It's answers are the foundation / ITS answers are the foundation ; 80, to avert Gods anger / to avert GOD'S anger ; 86, allow Him speak to you / allow Him TO speak to you ;
Page 87, determined by His design not yours / determined by His DESIGN, not yours ; 89, who you will eventually effect / WHOM you will eventually AFFECT ; 90, the purpose God has for you life / the purpose God has for YOUR life ; 92, unless he changes our passions / unless He changes our passions ("he" refers to God, so should be capitalized) ; 95, the creative voice God / the creative voice OF God ;
Page 100, discarded as obsolete having failed / discarded as OBSOLETE, having failed ; 100, it is people not things that can be / it is PEOPLE, not THINGS, that can be ; 102, I saw first hand / I saw FIRSTHAND ; 105, Lord, I believe you are exposing me / Lord, I believe You are exposing me ("you" refers to God) ; 109, it is God Himself who has sentenced us / it is God Himself Who has sentenced us ("who" refers to God) ;
Page 110, Can I have my church back please? / Can I have My church BACK, please? ("my" refers to Jesus) ; 110, a ship that has keeled over in a storm and lunged to the sea bed / a ship that has keeled over in a storm and PLUNGED to the sea bed ; 113, Contained within it's four short chapters / Contained within ITS four short chapters ; 113, break our small minded thinking / break our SMALL-MINDED thinking ;
Page 121, They all had die to false hopes / They all had TO die to false hopes ; 121, George Muller caught God's heart / George MUELLER caught God's heart (spelled with "UE" in all other occurrences in book) ; 128, God who hears him commands / God Who hears him commands ("who" refers to God) ; 129, making a surprising come back / making a surprising COMEBACK ;
Page 131, to God and the leaders he has placed / to God and the leaders He has placed ("he" refers to God) ; 131, that It's not just His ministry / that it's not just His ministry ("it's" should not be capitalized) ; 131, and he can trust and use you / and He can trust and use you ("he" refers to God) ; 133, Jonah forfeited, "the grace that could have been his" / Jonah FORFEITED "the grace that could have been his" (omit comma) ;
Page 134, It is He who ministers / It is He Who ministers ("who" refers to God) ; 134, with you relationship with Himself / with YOUR relationship with Himself ; 136, God insists we we retrace our steps / God insists THAT WE retrace our steps (omit second "we") ; 138, acknowledge its not our personal property / acknowledge IT'S not our personal property (IT IS not ...) ;
Page 145, a nation that turns it back / a nation that turns ITS back ; 146, the whole town of Northampton, Massachusetts awaken / the whole town of Northampton, MASSACHUSETTS, awaken ; 151, filtered into every strata of Nineveh's society / filtered into every STRATUM of Nineveh's society ("strata" is plural; "stratum" is the singular form) ; 151, It issued in repentance / It ENSUED in repentance ;
Page 151, revival in Pensacola, Florida in the mid / revival in Pensacola, FLORIDA, in the mid ; 153, to open the flood gates of God's mercy / to open the FLOODGATES of God's mercy ; 155, notorious for it's cruel, rapacious, ruthless and genocidal, ambitions for conquest / notorious for ITS cruel, rapacious, RUTHLESS, and GENOCIDAL AMBITIONS for conquest (move comma) ;
Page 162, If our pride and religious spirit keeps people away / If our pride and religious spirit KEEP people away ("pride and religious spirit" is a plural subject, requiring a plural verb) ; 162, that he in effect he said to God / that he in EFFECT SAID to God (--OR--) THAT IN effect he said to God (omit duplicate "he") ; 165, not only whips up a sandstorm it also desiccates / not only whips up a SANDSTORM, it also desiccates ;
Page 168, He saved you and me didn't he? / He saved you and ME, didn't he? ; 169, this narrative and it's ending that isn't an ending / this narrative and ITS ending that isn't an ending .)