I appreciated the chemistry and romantic undertones between Ava and Jean. From the start, it’s clear that Ava brings out the best in Jean, especially when Jean is navigating her sense of self both personally and professionally. I also appreciated the author’s note on making this a single POV, highlighting Jean’s journey through character development—her sexuality identity (and internal homophobia), her career as a lawyer, and her growing relationship with Ava.
My main gripe is the writing style. I’m not sure if “not a fan of the prose” is the right way to put it, but I found myself struggling to get through certain sections. While I usually am okay with third-person POV, the abundance of corporate work scenes (though necessary to set up a later moment) felt forgettable once read. Many of these parts didn’t seem to add much to the overall story after introducing the side characters.
Jean could also felt SO unlikable at times, but it was clear that much of this came from fear and projection tied to her internal homophobia. When it mattered most, she stepped up. The third act was kinda predictable, and I personally wished it had gone in the opposite direction, but I understand why it served to solidify Jean’s ARC.
Despite the title, the book isn’t overly spicy, but each intimate scene felt purposeful—tying into Jean’s journey of discovering and accepting her sexuality later in life (at 55) while deepening her connection with Ava.
Thank you, NetGalley, Hera Books, and Lou Morgan for the advanced copy!