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First published October 8, 2024
• Movement on the Frisha issue! Frisha finally escaped and her golem was defeated. That's a huge relief to me, as this situation was very stressful. However, Tieran acted like an irrational, angry blockhead during this entire episode, and I'm not sure I will forgive him for it.
• I thought it was really funny when Caydean's bloody, over-the-top ritualistic demon summoning ended with all the demons wishing death on fae and humankind and then Avikeev is like "AND WESSON IN PARTICULAR." Like wow somebody's obsessed.
• I thought it was REALLY funny when Rezkin tries to impersonate a ladies' maid and gets called out for not walking right and it says, "Disappointed that he had failed in his femininity, Rezkin retreated." CRIT FAIL on femininity roll.
• I still like Wesson a lot.
• Rezkin's elvish powers have leaped so far forward now that he was able to do all his subterfuge and spying as the Raven with magical disguises and illusions. Kinda neat, but also is just a massive shortcut for him and the playing field didn't seem to be leveled by the opposition of demonic powers as much as it might have been.
• Seena as baby dragon companion was fine. I like her taking the place of Cat as the companion animal that Rezkin loves almost against his will. I even like her functioning as one of the mental/spiritual ties that is shielding him against the elven madness. "Rezkin was saved from the madness by his early emotional repression, and now that he is becoming more open it is connection to others that saves him" is a GREAT development along a theme, I think. HOWEVER, Seena's actual purpose, which is to act as a convenient fast travel mechanic, is not nearly as great. There were times when I genuinely didn't know where Rezkin was for several paragraphs because he was jumping so frequently from city to city. It just felt cheap.
• After being saved from Lon Leresh (my beloathed) in the previous book, what did we do in this book but go RIGHT BACK to that cursed land! We spent a full half of the book there. I like Yserria and I don't mind what she and Malcius have going on. It's kind of cute. But oh my goodness the queenship contest was mind-numbingly stupid. The arena fight and parallel Godzilla vs Kong match that was going on in the city just had me flipping pages as fast as possible out of monotony rather than suspense. And after all that, we didn't even uncover Caydean's real purpose in Lon Leresh. What are we doing? What are we accomplishing? It felt like this book used so many pages and so many words to barely take one half of one step forward.
• Developments on the Tam front? What even WAS that? He's barely back after FINALLY being rescued, and now he's missing again, captive again? And we don't even hear about it until halfway through the book? Does nobody in this WORLD care about Tam except Rezkin? And then he found him after like one chapter, and again nothing at all was resolved.
• Entire massive swaths of characters were offscreen for this entire book. The cast may have reached a point of critical overload, if this is the best we can do. The strikers? Reaylin? Anything going on in Cael that's not Tieran fighting with Frisha's golem? What about that other kingdom Rezkin conquered, with the sword? The wolves, from last book? There are so many tangled threads we have to pull on, and instead we chose to spend half the book on Lon Leresh and all of our relationship-exploring points on Azeria.
• AZERIA. I don't mind Azeria as a character. She doesn't fawn over Rezkin and she stands up to him. Other than that, there's not much to her, which to be fair isn't that unusual in this series. However, what I DO mind is our incredibly fast, unearned speedrun of Rezkin and Azeria suddenly becoming this endgame couple with an unbreakable yearning bond. Need I remind anyone that this is the sixth book in this series, and we met Azeria JUST LAST BOOK?
As I said before, there are SO MANY TANGLED THREADS. Not only in a plot sense, but in a relationship sense! I am wild to see developments on the fronts of Frisha, Tam, Rezkin's mom, Striker Farson, even Rezkin meeting Thresson! We have spent such a long time seeing these tiny little cracks open up in Rezkin's impenetrable facade as he learned how to be vulnerable and care about people. (Temporary blindness in book 3, my beloved!!!) To do all that and then have all the characters I care about either offscreen or completely separated from one another, while Rezkin is suddenly pledging unfettered honesty, vulnerability, and faith to a character I met ONE BOOK AGO feels like a total farce.
There just doesn't seem to have been even a token effort at making this relationship something load-bearing, and because of that a large part of this book falls completely flat. Rezkin's incognito meetup with Azeria has none of the irony or bittersweet feeling that it should carry. Azeria's supposed sorrow and Rezkin's supposed yearning failed to provoke a single answering emotion in me. Rezkin's final reveal of himself to Azeria lacked all of the drama, pathos, and swelling triumphant music in the background that should have accompanied that moment. There's just nothing there, and there never has been.