It always makes me sad to leave a low rating for an indie/smaller author, but this one just didn’t work for me. The premise is fun — accidental marriage, fake dating, small-town fall festival vibes — but the execution fell apart quickly.
The biggest issue was the editing (or lack of it). There were entire sentences and even full pages repeated almost word-for-word, like earlier drafts hadn’t been cleaned up. The timeline was also messy — the “last” event in the festival happened multiple times, and the wedding plotline disappeared for a week before resurfacing without explanation. It made the story feel disjointed and hard to follow.
Character-wise, I struggled the most with Evie (the FMC). As someone with real OCD (not “oh I need everything rainbow colored and organized!!”), I don’t say this lightly: her characterization felt exaggerated and inaccurate, almost like OCD quirks were thrown in to make her “relatable,” but instead it came across as grating and inauthentic. Declan (the MMC) had potential, but he stayed very surface-level, never really growing beyond the broody placeholder love interest.
I’m giving this 2 stars instead of 1 because the concept (romance bookstore owner + grumpy wilderness guide stuck in a fake honeymoon competition) was intriguing and had so much potential. But between the sloppy editing, timeline confusion, and frustrating character work, this one was a miss for me.
Tropes: accidental marriage, fake dating, small-town romance, grumpy x sunshine, slow burn
Trigger/content notes: divorce, family drama