I like a good coming-of-age epic fantasy, and the Elwin Escari Chronicles is shaping up to be just that. I particularly like the two main characters, Elwin and Feffer. That said, the book has its weaknesses. Elwin is made out to be a bookish smart kid early on, but later keeps doing dumb things, including leaving a special book behind. Twice. And the female characters just seem to be there to be foils to male characters. Elwin apparently has a crush on Zarah, but as far as I can tell, the only thing he likes about her is that she is pretty. Other than pretty, she is portrayed as strong, but in a particularly annoying way common to epic fantasies (Wheel of Time, I'm looking at you). Please, Mr. Ekrut, in future volumes, pretend as if your female characters are humans with their own hopes and desires, and they will start seeming more real.