*ARC received from Netgalley - all opinions are my own*
*2.5 stars
TL;DR: Death’s Daughter starts out pretty strong with a more unique magic system and world building but sadly starts to fall flat from about 30% onwards and never really recovers. It’s sadly a miss from me.
Review:
I’ll start with the strength of Death’s Daughter which is certainly its world-building and magic system. It’s a different spin on what is already out there and Barnes does a great job in my opinion of making it feel fresh and interesting.
The main difficulty I found was that because Jo, our FMC, doesn’t want anything to do with those of “her kind”, which are the “Old Ones” and their “Spawns”, it means that we don’t really get a chance to explore how the magic works or dive deeper into the lore of the world.
There is certainly room for this to be explored in a sequel though given how Death’s Daughter ended.
Unfortunately, that is where my enjoyment of the book ended. The writing definitely feels like an older urban fantasy which I enjoyed, however the plot was just all over the place and you can get lost so quickly. It also wasn’t helped by our main characters often forgetting about crucial things they were supposed to do or just glaring plot points.
For me, from about the halfway point and onwards, everything just sort of became more and more disconnected and I often found myself going back and rereading just to try and piece together where we were and how things happened.
The best way I can describe my reading experience of Deaths Daughter is that I was so aware that I was reading a story and it felt like everything was happening to Jo and that even she wasn’t a part of her own story, all the immersion fell away for me pretty quickly which was a shame as there are certainly some great moments.
I am aware this is still an ARC that isn’t set to be released for another 6 months, but I hope this goes through editing again as there are entire letter missing and grammar mistakes throughout which are so glaringly obvious throughout which certainly contributed to the lack of immersion.
Also, just as a side note, the whole convoluted love triangle wasn't executed well at all in my opinion. I certainly was only rooting for one of the love interests but I felt like there was just zero chemistry between Jo and the chosen love interest and even their (ill-timed) intimate moment felt a little cringey and forced.
Overall, Death’s Daughters strengths lie in the magic system and world-building which should definitely be leaned on more in future books as well as its more Urban Fantasy leaning elements. It would certainly help me feel more enticed to read a sequel!