5/5 ★★★★★
The Pack opens with a chapter that demonstrates a remarkably confident control of tone, pacing, and atmospheric tension.
What stands out immediately is the precision of the prose: every detail is deliberate, every sensory note sharpened to a point, and every silence carries narrative weight. Rowan writes not to decorate the scene, but to expose it.
The world of The Pack is introduced not through exposition, but through trauma, instinct, and physicality.
There is an almost literary brutality to the way the opening unfolds — Kiann moving through ash, ruin, and quiet as though the world itself were an autopsy he’s been forced to perform again and again.
This is world-building by immersion, not description, and it works exceptionally well.
Kiann is one of the most compelling aspects of the chapter.
Rowan resists every temptation to over-explain him. Instead, we are shown a protagonist defined by contrast:
strength and fragility, instinct and guilt, humanity and something feral that presses beneath the skin.
His internal conflict is palpable, even when unspoken; in fact, especially when unspoken.
The horror is handled with a sophisticated understanding of tension.
The Pack is not introduced as a spectacle, but as a disturbance in the natural order — wrong movement, wrong sound, wrong shape.
The creatures bend space more than they occupy it, giving them a mythic, almost folkloric terror that sets them apart from typical post-apocalyptic monsters.
The action sequence is a standout.
It is fast, visceral, but never chaotic. Rowan maintains clarity and emotional grounding even in the violence, a skill that many action writers struggle to master.
Every blow feels earned.
Every choice Kiann makes reveals character, not choreography.
By the end of the chapter, it’s clear that The Pack is not simply another survival tale.
It is a layered, character-driven, myth-infused descent into a world where humanity is fraying at the edges — both collectively and within Kiann himself.
The writing is confident, atmospheric, and deeply intentional.
A brilliant opening.