I wish someone would give me back the hours I spend reading this book, cus it was so fucking bad, I don't know where to start
About the writing:
It was the worst, idk if the text didn't went through any corrections or something, but it was written like 10 year's old first wattpad fanfic.
Many times I needed to read again the whole paragraph just to understand what the sentence meant or go back few pages so I'd know what is happening where and even then, I still couldn't understand some scenes.
Also what drove me mad were dialogues, to be specific - how men talked, cus they didn't talk, they GROWLED, ROARED, HISSED EVERY DAMN TIME THEY OPENED THEIR MOUTH wtf are they dogs???
About the plot
There wasn't any
This book has no interest being this long, cus nothing actually happened, it was a mix of random scenes put together.
False advertising:
Marriage of convenience - no, they didn't get married
Fake dating - they didn't date, they jumped each other almost immediately after first meeting
Workplace romance - there were maybe three scenes in the office
About the characters
Main girl was so not like other girls, insecure, cus he's so handsome and wealthy and could have every model and miss worldwide he wanted, but she's so plain🥺 *insert eye roll*
Despite this book being over 400 pages idk anything about this girl besides three facts:
1) she was dating Beck's younger brother
2) she likes to draw
3) she likes some weird coffee
Nothing else, no description of anything except how much she wants to fuck Beck 🙄
Beck was supposed to be this billionaire possessive boyfriend all booktok love yeah??? Well he wasn't, also don't know anything about him except three facts:
1) he's very rich
2) has younger brother
3) "can talk dirty, but sweet at the same time"🙄
But imo he was borderline too possessive and controlling, example, he took main girl to her apartment to pack so they could fly to his apartment in NY, which he informed her abt like
5 min earlier, to which she makes argument, cus like bro should've given her some time to prepare??? So when she didn't want to go, he grabbed her and forced her to go pack, like there were these few scenes that he grabbed her too roughly and like it didn't feel like good kind of possessiveness just borderline lil abusive
Their relationship
There wasn't ANY kind of chemist between the main characters, he fell in love the first time he saw her🙄, she loved him since like week after they met🙄
They were just cardboard pieces without any history, thoughts, or personalities, just let's fuck hot billionaire and let's force this girl into fake marriage so she'd love me, yey😀
The pacing was so much off, she literally saw the guy for the second time, moved into his apartment, got him coffee as his new "assistant" fucked him, drama, the end, in the span of a month.
It all felt like the author saw a bunch of these quote videos on tiktok, decided to take the most viral ones into the book, throw sex scenes and publish it.
This is the longest review I've ever wrote so hope enjoyed, cus I suffered so u don't have to.
Also it's after midnight and I should very much prefer to be sleeping so idk if anything I wrote makes sense.