Honestly, this was pretty great!
Ok, we all know short stories can struggle with plot and are often riddled with editing errors, but this one was honestly pretty great. Especially when you consider how short it is. It had a bit of drama, definite steam and a cute HEA. It’s not riddled with spelling errors and my literal only critique would be the use of the word hole, but honestly, that’s a personal preference so I’m not going to dock points for that. Enjoy reading!