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The Mist and the Flame: Book I of The New Bardiverse
What’s really behind the story of star-crossed lovers Romeo and Juliet?
Let’s start with the truth about Rosaline—Romeo’s actual first love. Rosaline scorns romance and instead craves magic. To free herself from Romeo’s amorous attention as well as her dull life in Verona, she uses her limited sorcery skills to bring him and Juliet together. Renaming herself Foschia Luminosa, she then gleefully runs off to join a school of magic.
Just when Lumi’s dreams are about to come true, disaster Syra, the intimidating witch who runs the school, denies her entry and demands she return to Verona. She must repair the damage done by her spell or the young couple is doomed and Lumi will be outcast forever.
As tragedy looms ever nearer, Lumi reluctantly teams up with a mysterious, sullen girl calling herself Fiamma Fredda, an orphan of unknown parentage. Freddi is an astonishingly skilled fighter, but who is she, and does she really want to help—or is she using Lumi for her own purposes?
Join Lumi and Freddi in their thrilling quest to save Romeo and Juliet, learn of Freddi’s origins, and grapple with Syra’s own dark past. They—and you—are in for a great many surprises along the way…
Let’s start with the truth about Rosaline—Romeo’s actual first love. Rosaline scorns romance and instead craves magic. To free herself from Romeo’s amorous attention as well as her dull life in Verona, she uses her limited sorcery skills to bring him and Juliet together. Renaming herself Foschia Luminosa, she then gleefully runs off to join a school of magic.
Just when Lumi’s dreams are about to come true, disaster Syra, the intimidating witch who runs the school, denies her entry and demands she return to Verona. She must repair the damage done by her spell or the young couple is doomed and Lumi will be outcast forever.
As tragedy looms ever nearer, Lumi reluctantly teams up with a mysterious, sullen girl calling herself Fiamma Fredda, an orphan of unknown parentage. Freddi is an astonishingly skilled fighter, but who is she, and does she really want to help—or is she using Lumi for her own purposes?
Join Lumi and Freddi in their thrilling quest to save Romeo and Juliet, learn of Freddi’s origins, and grapple with Syra’s own dark past. They—and you—are in for a great many surprises along the way…
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Published September 15, 2025
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1 book8 followersCoral-Li St. Helen is the pen name of a writer who lived all over the United States before settling down somewhere roughly in the middle parts. She loves reading and writing, hiking and napping, coffee, noodles, her spouse and her dog. The pen name honors her late mother.
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December 29, 2025
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I love reading adaptations of the classics, and this book sounded so good. I wouldn't say it was the best adaptation of Romeo and Juliet that I have read, but it still was amazing. There are tons of plot twists that keep the reader engaged throughout the entire book.
I love reading adaptations of the classics, and this book sounded so good. I wouldn't say it was the best adaptation of Romeo and Juliet that I have read, but it still was amazing. There are tons of plot twists that keep the reader engaged throughout the entire book.
November 30, 2025
I'm not a huge lover of the original Romeo and Juliet tale. At least, not the way some people see it: as a love story. It's not a love story. It's a lot of people being insanely stupid leading to a lot of people dying (And probably that's exactly what Shakespeare was trying to do). However, that was exactly why I got so curious about this book! I was therefore really happy that Cantraip Press granted me a review copy.
I have to admit that I was on the brink of not finishing this book today. If it weren't a quick and easy read and if I weren't at 60% already, I would have simply decided that this story was not for me. Now I felt like reading that last 40% was not that much of an issue. It's not that I hated the book. I think the plot, characters and story in general had a lot of potential. It's more that it felt like I was reading an outline for two books instead of the fleshed out story.
Things were happening so incredibly fast! We barely got the time to understand what was going on. Problems arose and before we grasped the issue, the problems were already solved. There were a lot of perspective changes, a lot of people told us their backstories. But it's insanely hard to really care about people whose stories are only told and never really shown. This book could have easily been two 300+ pages novels and would then have a lot more emotional impact.
I also wonder why the author and publisher chose to tackle both Romeo and Juliet and The Tempest in one book. I understand that this book takes place in a universe and that Romeo and Juliet is only the beginning of events, but it feels like this were two stories put into one volume, probably because otherwise the amount of pages would be too low. And that's sad, because there is more than enough story, more than enough possible emotion and more than enough lore to flesh this out into a series where each full length novel would deal with one Shakespeare play.
I have to admit that I was on the brink of not finishing this book today. If it weren't a quick and easy read and if I weren't at 60% already, I would have simply decided that this story was not for me. Now I felt like reading that last 40% was not that much of an issue. It's not that I hated the book. I think the plot, characters and story in general had a lot of potential. It's more that it felt like I was reading an outline for two books instead of the fleshed out story.
Things were happening so incredibly fast! We barely got the time to understand what was going on. Problems arose and before we grasped the issue, the problems were already solved. There were a lot of perspective changes, a lot of people told us their backstories. But it's insanely hard to really care about people whose stories are only told and never really shown. This book could have easily been two 300+ pages novels and would then have a lot more emotional impact.
I also wonder why the author and publisher chose to tackle both Romeo and Juliet and The Tempest in one book. I understand that this book takes place in a universe and that Romeo and Juliet is only the beginning of events, but it feels like this were two stories put into one volume, probably because otherwise the amount of pages would be too low. And that's sad, because there is more than enough story, more than enough possible emotion and more than enough lore to flesh this out into a series where each full length novel would deal with one Shakespeare play.
December 5, 2025
The Mist and Flame by St. Helen is an interesting retelling of Romeo and Juliet, though this time the focus is on those that want to change their fate.
Two girls, one who has had a tough childhood after being swapped at birth, the other who doesn’t believe in love nor does she feel like she fits in. Together they make a decent team.
I found this book to be fast-paced. The events took place only to be solved the next minute. The inclusion of magic was nothing short of exemplary. Love, freedom, and finding one’s path are themes in this narrative. I found this book to be entertaining as swords are drawn and magic stirs. A good quick read.
Two girls, one who has had a tough childhood after being swapped at birth, the other who doesn’t believe in love nor does she feel like she fits in. Together they make a decent team.
I found this book to be fast-paced. The events took place only to be solved the next minute. The inclusion of magic was nothing short of exemplary. Love, freedom, and finding one’s path are themes in this narrative. I found this book to be entertaining as swords are drawn and magic stirs. A good quick read.
October 19, 2025
A new take on the Romeo and Juliet storyline we all know. This author takes creative liberties with it to make it new and exciting :)
November 20, 2025
This was a quick and engaging read with a vivid cast of characters and plenty of intrigue that kept me turning the pages, and while the multiple perspectives required attention, they ultimately added depth and richness to the world and the story. On rare occasion the addition of another POV would throw me off guard but it was nice to be able to again insight into each character's own feelings and thoughts that were suppressed to others. A solid, enjoyable read that will especially appeal to readers who love multi-POV storytelling and rich world-building.
Thank you to NetGalley for the copy!
Thank you to NetGalley for the copy!
January 7, 2026
If Romeo and Juliet has ever made you want to shake the characters by the shoulders and yell, “Please make better choices,” The Mist and the Flame might be exactly your kind of retelling. Coral-Li St. Helen doesn’t try to romanticize the tragedy—we already know how that ends. Instead, she steps sideways and hands the story to Rosaline, the girl history quietly forgets, and asks a far more interesting question: what if she wanted magic instead of love?
Rosaline—soon rebranded as Foschia “Lumi” Luminosa—has zero interest in being anyone’s poetic heartbreak. She’s restless, clever, and itching to escape Verona’s narrow expectations. So she does something impulsive, slightly reckless, and very human: she uses a bit of half-trained magic to shove Romeo toward Juliet and then runs off to chase her own future. It’s funny, sharp, and immediately establishes the book’s core theme—choice, and the consequences that follow it whether you’re ready or not.
Things don’t go as planned (because of course they don’t). Lumi’s dream of entering a magical stronghold collapses under the icy authority of Syra, a witch whose presence alone suggests there’s more rot beneath the surface. Forced to return to Verona and fix the damage she caused, Lumi is paired with Freddi—a guarded, dangerous, deeply intriguing girl who carries secrets like weapons. Their reluctant alliance becomes the emotional anchor of the story.
The Lumi–Freddi dynamic is where the book truly shines. They’re opposites in the best way: Lumi impulsive and idealistic, Freddi controlled and hardened by survival. Their relationship develops quickly but convincingly, rooted in shared danger rather than instant trust. Freddi, in particular, feels like a character with a long shadow—every scene with her hints at history we’re only just beginning to glimpse.
St. Helen’s world is playful and imaginative, blending Shakespearean bones with magic, swordplay, and just enough irreverence to keep things lively. Verona feels familiar but tilted, like a version of the story that slipped sideways into something new. The writing has a lightness to it, even when dealing with darker themes like fate, exile, and identity.
That said, the pacing is fast. Sometimes almost too fast. Major revelations, emotional beats, and big plot turns arrive and resolve in quick succession, occasionally leaving you wishing the story would pause and let the weight of certain moments land. There’s a sense that this book is laying a lot of groundwork—introducing lore, backstories, and future conflicts—without always lingering long enough to fully explore them.
Still, as an opening act, The Mist and the Flame does its job well. It’s energetic, inventive, and refreshingly uninterested in retelling the “greatest love story ever told” as-is. Instead, it’s about girls who refuse the roles they were assigned—whether that’s tragic lover, obedient student, or silent bystander.
By the final pages, it’s clear this is just the beginning. Questions remain unanswered, loyalties are still murky, and the larger Bardiverse is only starting to take shape. But Lumi and Freddi are compelling guides, and I’m curious enough about where their paths lead to keep going.
A clever, fast-moving reimagining that trades doomed romance for magic, agency, and unlikely friendship. It’s not perfect, but it’s bold, fun, and full of promise—especially for readers who like their Shakespeare shaken, stirred, and set slightly on fire.
Rosaline—soon rebranded as Foschia “Lumi” Luminosa—has zero interest in being anyone’s poetic heartbreak. She’s restless, clever, and itching to escape Verona’s narrow expectations. So she does something impulsive, slightly reckless, and very human: she uses a bit of half-trained magic to shove Romeo toward Juliet and then runs off to chase her own future. It’s funny, sharp, and immediately establishes the book’s core theme—choice, and the consequences that follow it whether you’re ready or not.
Things don’t go as planned (because of course they don’t). Lumi’s dream of entering a magical stronghold collapses under the icy authority of Syra, a witch whose presence alone suggests there’s more rot beneath the surface. Forced to return to Verona and fix the damage she caused, Lumi is paired with Freddi—a guarded, dangerous, deeply intriguing girl who carries secrets like weapons. Their reluctant alliance becomes the emotional anchor of the story.
The Lumi–Freddi dynamic is where the book truly shines. They’re opposites in the best way: Lumi impulsive and idealistic, Freddi controlled and hardened by survival. Their relationship develops quickly but convincingly, rooted in shared danger rather than instant trust. Freddi, in particular, feels like a character with a long shadow—every scene with her hints at history we’re only just beginning to glimpse.
St. Helen’s world is playful and imaginative, blending Shakespearean bones with magic, swordplay, and just enough irreverence to keep things lively. Verona feels familiar but tilted, like a version of the story that slipped sideways into something new. The writing has a lightness to it, even when dealing with darker themes like fate, exile, and identity.
That said, the pacing is fast. Sometimes almost too fast. Major revelations, emotional beats, and big plot turns arrive and resolve in quick succession, occasionally leaving you wishing the story would pause and let the weight of certain moments land. There’s a sense that this book is laying a lot of groundwork—introducing lore, backstories, and future conflicts—without always lingering long enough to fully explore them.
Still, as an opening act, The Mist and the Flame does its job well. It’s energetic, inventive, and refreshingly uninterested in retelling the “greatest love story ever told” as-is. Instead, it’s about girls who refuse the roles they were assigned—whether that’s tragic lover, obedient student, or silent bystander.
By the final pages, it’s clear this is just the beginning. Questions remain unanswered, loyalties are still murky, and the larger Bardiverse is only starting to take shape. But Lumi and Freddi are compelling guides, and I’m curious enough about where their paths lead to keep going.
A clever, fast-moving reimagining that trades doomed romance for magic, agency, and unlikely friendship. It’s not perfect, but it’s bold, fun, and full of promise—especially for readers who like their Shakespeare shaken, stirred, and set slightly on fire.
October 25, 2025
It's the classic story of Romeo and Juliet... with a Twist. The story is written from Rosaline's perspective. A Rosaline who, not scorned by Romeo's indifference but rather manipulative of it. This particular world that Shakespeare once dreamed up has an element of magic to it. A magic Rosaline can use.
But how much of fate can be changed by magic? And what consequences will follow when a fate written in the stars has suddenly gone off course? Can Rosaline "do no harm" and set things right? Is her magic enough to push fate the right way?
Possible Spoilers Ahead:::::
The first half of the story focuses on these questions. It challenges a story most people have grown up hearing about. Unfortunately, the story does veer off course and become something else entirely. Almost as if the author changed their mind about what story they were writing. There are many questions left unanswered, the characters are underdeveloped and the addition of the monikers near the end are not explained. The reader is left to wonder what they actually read. I'm not sure that these are spoilers exactly but if you do intend to read it, just know that there are two different stories squashed together with sideline plots that aren't tied up at the end.
Who is Syra? What does the Bright Mist and Cold Flame mean? What happens to Freddie in the end? How was their magic developed in the beginning? How was Ariel enslaved to Prospero? And how does all of this tie back to the original plot of Romeo and Juliet? Unfortunately, there is just too much going on.
A little more focused developed may have helped.
But how much of fate can be changed by magic? And what consequences will follow when a fate written in the stars has suddenly gone off course? Can Rosaline "do no harm" and set things right? Is her magic enough to push fate the right way?
Possible Spoilers Ahead:::::
The first half of the story focuses on these questions. It challenges a story most people have grown up hearing about. Unfortunately, the story does veer off course and become something else entirely. Almost as if the author changed their mind about what story they were writing. There are many questions left unanswered, the characters are underdeveloped and the addition of the monikers near the end are not explained. The reader is left to wonder what they actually read. I'm not sure that these are spoilers exactly but if you do intend to read it, just know that there are two different stories squashed together with sideline plots that aren't tied up at the end.
Who is Syra? What does the Bright Mist and Cold Flame mean? What happens to Freddie in the end? How was their magic developed in the beginning? How was Ariel enslaved to Prospero? And how does all of this tie back to the original plot of Romeo and Juliet? Unfortunately, there is just too much going on.
A little more focused developed may have helped.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 5, 2025
THE MIST AND THE FLAME: BOOK I OF THE NEW BARDIVERSE offers a refreshing, imaginative reworking of Shakespeare’s most famous tragedy, blending humor, magic, and character-driven storytelling into something entirely its own. Instead of retreading the tale of Romeo and Juliet, the novel shifts the spotlight to Rosaline, Romeo’s true first love, who has absolutely no interest in romance. Craving enchantment over affection, she uses her limited magic to nudge Romeo and Juliet together, then reinvents herself as Foschia “Lumi” Luminosa and eagerly escapes to pursue training at a school of magic.
But Lumi’s plans unravel when Syra, the school’s fearsome head witch, refuses her entry and orders her back to Verona. Lumi must repair the unintended consequences of her spell or risk ruining the couple’s future, and losing her place in the magical world she longs for. Forced into this daunting task, she partners with Fiamma “Freddi” Fredda, a stoic and mysterious fighter with shadowy origins and unclear motives. Together, they embark on a dangerous quest that uncovers hidden histories, dark secrets, and dramatic revelations as the tragic fate of Romeo and Juliet draws closer.
This reimagined tale shines through its unique spin on a classic story, offering delightful character growth and witty, comedic dialogue. The expanded worldbuilding adds depth to familiar lore while introducing enchanting new elements. With its magic, charm, and brisk pacing, the book provides a wonderfully quick and engaging read. A clever, heartfelt adventure that reinvents Verona with spark and spell craft.
But Lumi’s plans unravel when Syra, the school’s fearsome head witch, refuses her entry and orders her back to Verona. Lumi must repair the unintended consequences of her spell or risk ruining the couple’s future, and losing her place in the magical world she longs for. Forced into this daunting task, she partners with Fiamma “Freddi” Fredda, a stoic and mysterious fighter with shadowy origins and unclear motives. Together, they embark on a dangerous quest that uncovers hidden histories, dark secrets, and dramatic revelations as the tragic fate of Romeo and Juliet draws closer.
This reimagined tale shines through its unique spin on a classic story, offering delightful character growth and witty, comedic dialogue. The expanded worldbuilding adds depth to familiar lore while introducing enchanting new elements. With its magic, charm, and brisk pacing, the book provides a wonderfully quick and engaging read. A clever, heartfelt adventure that reinvents Verona with spark and spell craft.
December 15, 2025
A Fresh and Magical Twist on Shakespeare’s Classic
THE MIST AND THE FLAME offers a lively and imaginative reimagining of Romeo and Juliet by shifting the spotlight to Rosaline and giving her an entirely new purpose. Instead of being a forgotten footnote, she becomes Lumi, a young woman who wants magic more than romance. Her attempt to redirect Romeo’s affection sets off a chain of events that is both humorous and unpredictable. The story moves at a quick pace, making it easy to settle into this playful new version of Verona.
Lumi’s partnership with Freddi adds warmth and balance to the story, especially as the two girls navigate secrets, unexpected dangers, and the consequences of magic used too lightly. Their interactions feel genuine, and their growth gives the narrative emotional weight amid the adventure. The worldbuilding expands familiar Shakespearean lore into something brighter and more whimsical, blending potions, training schools, and mysterious mentors into the plot. Readers who enjoy character-driven fantasy with a classic twist may find this especially appealing.
Overall, THE MIST AND THE FLAME is a creative and accessible entry into a reimagined Bardiverse. It keeps the spirit of the original play while allowing new characters to shine and reshape the story. The result is a fun and engaging read that easily mixes magic, friendship, and self-discovery. It sets a solid foundation for the series and invites readers to see a well-known tale from a refreshing new angle.
THE MIST AND THE FLAME offers a lively and imaginative reimagining of Romeo and Juliet by shifting the spotlight to Rosaline and giving her an entirely new purpose. Instead of being a forgotten footnote, she becomes Lumi, a young woman who wants magic more than romance. Her attempt to redirect Romeo’s affection sets off a chain of events that is both humorous and unpredictable. The story moves at a quick pace, making it easy to settle into this playful new version of Verona.
Lumi’s partnership with Freddi adds warmth and balance to the story, especially as the two girls navigate secrets, unexpected dangers, and the consequences of magic used too lightly. Their interactions feel genuine, and their growth gives the narrative emotional weight amid the adventure. The worldbuilding expands familiar Shakespearean lore into something brighter and more whimsical, blending potions, training schools, and mysterious mentors into the plot. Readers who enjoy character-driven fantasy with a classic twist may find this especially appealing.
Overall, THE MIST AND THE FLAME is a creative and accessible entry into a reimagined Bardiverse. It keeps the spirit of the original play while allowing new characters to shine and reshape the story. The result is a fun and engaging read that easily mixes magic, friendship, and self-discovery. It sets a solid foundation for the series and invites readers to see a well-known tale from a refreshing new angle.
December 13, 2025
The read offers a journey with frequent use of magic and adventure. These elements drive a bigger part of the story’s momentum. THE MIST AND THE FLAME by Coral-Li explores contrasting views on love through its characters: Juliet perceives love itself as a type of magic while on the other hand, Rosaline differentiates between the supernatural and what she describes as the “real magic”, suggesting a more foundational understanding instead of self-delusion.
Rosaline’s devotion to magic is dominant to the plot. Her decision to abandon her home, family and hair in order to go to La Fortezza highlights the significance of magic in the story’s world. La Fortezza, due to its magical element becomes the center where the action unfolds. On arrival, Rosaline changes her name to Lumi. The transformation is a signal of a personal shift and the start of unforeseen challenges for her and her cousin Freddi.
The pace of this book is energetic with many surprises and twists that ensure reader engagement. One major storyline involves Sycorax sending Lumi and Freddi on a scary mission to rescue her son Caliban who has been taken captive by Prospero. The expedition adds to more tension in the read.
Overall, Coral-Li has ensured that the reader is engaged with the rich imaginations of magical elements. The merging of personal transformation, magic, and love introduces depth in the narrative which makes it intriguing for readers of character and fantasy-driven tales.
Rosaline’s devotion to magic is dominant to the plot. Her decision to abandon her home, family and hair in order to go to La Fortezza highlights the significance of magic in the story’s world. La Fortezza, due to its magical element becomes the center where the action unfolds. On arrival, Rosaline changes her name to Lumi. The transformation is a signal of a personal shift and the start of unforeseen challenges for her and her cousin Freddi.
The pace of this book is energetic with many surprises and twists that ensure reader engagement. One major storyline involves Sycorax sending Lumi and Freddi on a scary mission to rescue her son Caliban who has been taken captive by Prospero. The expedition adds to more tension in the read.
Overall, Coral-Li has ensured that the reader is engaged with the rich imaginations of magical elements. The merging of personal transformation, magic, and love introduces depth in the narrative which makes it intriguing for readers of character and fantasy-driven tales.
November 19, 2025
An Interesting Tale of Love Vengeance and Rivalry
Coral-Li St. Helen's THE MIST AND THE FLAME is an exciting romance novel that takes readers on an emotional rollercoaster. The book introduces a fresh twist to the classic love story of Romeo and Juliet. It is immersive, suspenseful, and engaging, making it enjoyable for many readers.
The story centers around Lumi, Juliet's cousin and Romeo's crush. In this new take, the narrator reveals Juliet's true identity, how she fell in love with Romeo, what happened to the real Juliet, and uncovers the mystery behind the rivalry, and more.
The author excelled in plot development and world-building; the scenes are well-crafted and vividly described, helping readers visualize the events. The story flows smoothly, is easy to follow, and keeps readers engaged without feeling dull.
Additionally, the author incorporated humor and used dialogue and a conversational tone, making the story more lively and interesting. The book contains no profanity or explicit content, making it suitable for readers of all ages. Fans of romance fiction will enjoy this book.
Coral-Li St. Helen's THE MIST AND THE FLAME is an exciting romance novel that takes readers on an emotional rollercoaster. The book introduces a fresh twist to the classic love story of Romeo and Juliet. It is immersive, suspenseful, and engaging, making it enjoyable for many readers.
The story centers around Lumi, Juliet's cousin and Romeo's crush. In this new take, the narrator reveals Juliet's true identity, how she fell in love with Romeo, what happened to the real Juliet, and uncovers the mystery behind the rivalry, and more.
The author excelled in plot development and world-building; the scenes are well-crafted and vividly described, helping readers visualize the events. The story flows smoothly, is easy to follow, and keeps readers engaged without feeling dull.
Additionally, the author incorporated humor and used dialogue and a conversational tone, making the story more lively and interesting. The book contains no profanity or explicit content, making it suitable for readers of all ages. Fans of romance fiction will enjoy this book.
December 10, 2025
The seed of this book is excellent - Rosencrantz & Guildenstern Are Dead with magic ladies changing fate - and honestly it was what kept me going all the way through. Unfortunately, that never pays off in a rewarding or interesting way.
The first big problem is the pitch: this book is presented as a magical school yarn set in Shakespeare’s Verona, but there’s no school and the main characters feel separate from the R+J plot in a weird way, despite being central to it! We also leave Verona for the Tempest at the 2/3rds point and it’s even more underwhelming than the resolution of the R+J story.
Challenges are overcome almost as soon as they’re introduced, and often in ways that are incongruous with what little we know about the character motivations/backstories. The magic system is barely there with very unclear rules and Lumi and Freddi are very flat protagonists.
However, the interludes from the perspectives of Lady Capulet and Miranda are stupendous. Deeply moving, and introspective in a way that moves the plot forward and elevates the original play. I found myself wishing the entire book was like this.
Despite it all, I am still curious about what book 2 of “the new bardiverse” might hold.
Thank you to NetGalley for this digital review copy!
The first big problem is the pitch: this book is presented as a magical school yarn set in Shakespeare’s Verona, but there’s no school and the main characters feel separate from the R+J plot in a weird way, despite being central to it! We also leave Verona for the Tempest at the 2/3rds point and it’s even more underwhelming than the resolution of the R+J story.
Challenges are overcome almost as soon as they’re introduced, and often in ways that are incongruous with what little we know about the character motivations/backstories. The magic system is barely there with very unclear rules and Lumi and Freddi are very flat protagonists.
However, the interludes from the perspectives of Lady Capulet and Miranda are stupendous. Deeply moving, and introspective in a way that moves the plot forward and elevates the original play. I found myself wishing the entire book was like this.
Despite it all, I am still curious about what book 2 of “the new bardiverse” might hold.
Thank you to NetGalley for this digital review copy!
December 8, 2025
THE MIST AND THE FLAME by Coral-Li St. Helen is a creative retelling of Romeo and Juliet with a modern, magical touch. Instead of repeating the original tragedy, the story focuses on Lumi, Juliet’s cousin. Her choices set off a quick series of events that bring in new characters and add humor, warmth, and personal growth to the story.
The author expands Shakespeare’s world with imaginative details, lively conversations, and a fantasy setting filled with magic, potions, and adventure. The relationship between Lumi and Freddi is one of the strongest parts of the book, giving the story a genuine emotional center. Themes such as love, freedom, identity, and making one’s own choices run throughout, making the book appealing to younger and modern readers.
Overall, THE MIST AND THE FLAME is fast-moving, fun, and easy to enjoy. It offers a fresh take on a classic play and provides an uplifting reading experience, even for those who may not usually connect with Shakespeare.
The author expands Shakespeare’s world with imaginative details, lively conversations, and a fantasy setting filled with magic, potions, and adventure. The relationship between Lumi and Freddi is one of the strongest parts of the book, giving the story a genuine emotional center. Themes such as love, freedom, identity, and making one’s own choices run throughout, making the book appealing to younger and modern readers.
Overall, THE MIST AND THE FLAME is fast-moving, fun, and easy to enjoy. It offers a fresh take on a classic play and provides an uplifting reading experience, even for those who may not usually connect with Shakespeare.
December 8, 2025
Right from the start, I was totally hooked by Rosaline… or should I say, Lumi. She refuses to follow the script fate handed her, and instead of pining for Romeo, she’s out chasing magic, freedom, and her own path. It makes the whole story feel fresh, like it’s not just another retelling, but a real reclaim your life kind of tale, messy choices and all.
What I thought stood out was that actions have consequences here. Lumi’s choices actually matter, and she has to deal with the fallout. It gives the story a grounded feel even with all the magic and adventure swirling around.
Sure, a few parts lean into familiar fantasy setups (magical school, secret pasts, etc.), but the characters and writing totally carry it. By the end, I was fully invested in Lumi’s journey and dying to know more about Freddi.
Overall? The Mist and the Flame is clever, energetic, and straight up fun. Perfect if you love magic, adventure, and characters who break the mold. Can’t wait for the next one!
What I thought stood out was that actions have consequences here. Lumi’s choices actually matter, and she has to deal with the fallout. It gives the story a grounded feel even with all the magic and adventure swirling around.
Sure, a few parts lean into familiar fantasy setups (magical school, secret pasts, etc.), but the characters and writing totally carry it. By the end, I was fully invested in Lumi’s journey and dying to know more about Freddi.
Overall? The Mist and the Flame is clever, energetic, and straight up fun. Perfect if you love magic, adventure, and characters who break the mold. Can’t wait for the next one!
December 13, 2025
This starts with a retelling of Romeo and Juliet, in which Juliet is switched at birth with the nurse's daughter, based on the assumption that she would not survive. No details are given about her childhood, only her resentment at being raised as a servant. Romeo is also notified of Juliet’s fake death and they disappear together after being married. Juliet takes the name of Freddi and Rosaline is called Lumi, both seek to attend La Fortezza, which they assume is a school for magic. In reality, it is a front for Syra, who seeks to use them to free her son Caliban from Prospero’s imprisonment.
The retelling of Romeo and Juliet and The Tempest is interesting, but there is a lack of causal link and follow-up. Caliban is freed, but we don’t know how. The babies are switched at birth, but it makes no difference to the story. Romeo is spared a tragic death, but how are Romeo and Juliet’s lives impacted?
The retelling of Romeo and Juliet and The Tempest is interesting, but there is a lack of causal link and follow-up. Caliban is freed, but we don’t know how. The babies are switched at birth, but it makes no difference to the story. Romeo is spared a tragic death, but how are Romeo and Juliet’s lives impacted?
December 27, 2025
Super fast paced, short book that will sort of leave you grasping trying to slow down enough just to make sense of everything that was thrown at you. This is marketed as a Romeo and Juliet retelling but feels like it was more than one Shakesperean work being thrown together. I felt that the pacing was simply to fast for the reader to really sink into the world, the characters, the story line and fully appreciate what I think the author was trying to get across. I do appreciate that this explores the idea of changing fate and did enjoy the two female leads in this book. However, because of the super fast pace I found myself wanting to put it down instead of longing to pick it up. For this reason I am only giving three stars, because had I not been trying actively to finish in order to give an honest review I may have left this one undone. I don't want to feel like I ran a marathon while I am reading - my life as a mom of 7 kids at home is already a loud, chaotic marathon.
November 21, 2025
‘The Mist and the Flame’ by Coral-Li St. Helen was a strange journey into an age-old story. While the deviations from the well-known plot could be clever, it most often felt like a stretch. The addition of magic could have been incorporated more smoothly, making the story of Lumi and Freddi more enticing. The final part of the book, on the island with Prospero, was so odd and detached from the rest of the book that I felt like I was having whiplash. Not to mention the whole character arc of Syra.
My favorite part of the book was the development of the relationship between Freddi and Lumi, and how the cousins grew to want to adventure alongside one another rather than simply tolerate each other. It was heartwarming and felt to be one of the only natural, fluid aspects of this odd telling.
My favorite part of the book was the development of the relationship between Freddi and Lumi, and how the cousins grew to want to adventure alongside one another rather than simply tolerate each other. It was heartwarming and felt to be one of the only natural, fluid aspects of this odd telling.
December 5, 2025
I wish I could say that I liked this because the description sounded genuinely interesting but I just couldn't get into it. I felt that all of the characters were unlikable and new characters just kept getting introduced to be even more unlikable. The further along I read the more I was questioning what was even happening, it just started getting more and more off topic. I actually had to go back and read the description to see if there was something I was missing after I was finished with the book. I felt that there were actually no real consequences. Every "evil" character was just like "hm, ok" when confronted and it just all felt very rushed and confusing. Unfortunately, I won't be recommending this one.
Thank you to Netgalley and Cantraip Press for this eARC.
Thank you to Netgalley and Cantraip Press for this eARC.
December 11, 2025
Unique twist on Shakespearean characters
THE MIST AND THE FLAME uses Shakespearean characters to create a fantasy novel involving magic.
Two young women, who are antagonists at first, team up to complete a series of missions to prevent harm to others. Along the way they develop a powerful friendship.
The main characters learn to look beyond the surface when forming an opinion of people as well as find their unique magic within to solve problems.
While the book focuses on discovering and developing individual strengths, it also identifies obstacles based on gender and class that were prevalent at the time as well as in some cultures today.
This is an interesting read for those who like magic or Shakespearean fan fiction.
THE MIST AND THE FLAME uses Shakespearean characters to create a fantasy novel involving magic.
Two young women, who are antagonists at first, team up to complete a series of missions to prevent harm to others. Along the way they develop a powerful friendship.
The main characters learn to look beyond the surface when forming an opinion of people as well as find their unique magic within to solve problems.
While the book focuses on discovering and developing individual strengths, it also identifies obstacles based on gender and class that were prevalent at the time as well as in some cultures today.
This is an interesting read for those who like magic or Shakespearean fan fiction.
November 13, 2025
A story that will take you on a wide-ranging journey from marriage to magic to battles and people who need saving. The story is set in an ancient time where arranged marriage was a thing, with a twist of fancy-themed parties.I loved how wide the story felt. It did not feel like being confined to a single set, but like many stories happening all at the same time. Romeo and Juliet in a different setting, Rosaline on her own path wanting to be something more than just a wife to someone she doesn't even know, so she becomes a nun and learns magic, and Freddi in her warrior spirit. I loved every bit of this story.
December 3, 2025
Coral Li St Helen made a wonderful rendition of the Romeo and Juliet story, and that instantly drew me in. I came for the relatable story, but her unique spin on it, adding in magic and love potions, made me stay till the end.
In the Mist and the Flame, Lumi, an original character who is also Juliet's cousin, sets off a wild course of events when she slips Romeo a love potion for Juliet. We follow Lumi on the ride she sets off, punctuated by landmark events from the original play. The book was a fun read full of character growth, comedic dialogue, and romantic undertones.
In the Mist and the Flame, Lumi, an original character who is also Juliet's cousin, sets off a wild course of events when she slips Romeo a love potion for Juliet. We follow Lumi on the ride she sets off, punctuated by landmark events from the original play. The book was a fun read full of character growth, comedic dialogue, and romantic undertones.
December 4, 2025
We've all read Romeo and Juliet, but in this novel, Coral-Li St Helen puts her own unique spin on the tale that opens it up to a whole new audience. St Helen keeps the romantic themes, but also adds in new characters, expands the world drastically, and incorporates magic and adventure, creating a story that's revolutionized for younger, modern audiences. The Mist and the Flame is not just a romance novel though: it's a story of growth featuring a whole new main character, and it's an adventure through a magical plane that the Shakespearan novel never explored.
November 13, 2025
The Mist and the Flame is a beautiful tale of magic and love based on the original Romeo and Juliet story. Author Coral-Li St Helen introduced a new main character, Rosaline, who, though well-intentioned, is flawed and has a habit of screwing things up and acting rashly. I like how St Helen portrayed her character growth, but what I loved most was the authors take on love in the story. It was used beautifully as a plot device to push the story forward. Great read.
November 24, 2025
I had so much fun writing this book. I hope readers have fun enjoying it too!
September 19, 2025
SO GOOD. Read it! (Full disclosure: I know the author.) :)
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