Threads of Fate: Chronicles of the Sovereigns

by Lana J. Williams

Ten Sovereigns guard the fragile balance of Life, Death, Mercy, Revenge, Pleasure, Pain, Fury, Peace, Joy, and Sorrow. Bound by ancient Law, they may whisper to mortals and guide them within the limits of their charge. But above all, one command to love a mortal is forbidden.

Eira, Sovereign of Peace, has always obeyed. Her realm is still and kept in Balance until she meets Adrian, a mortal artist whose paintings capture the the very threads of destiny itself. Drawn to him against her will, Eira crosses the veil again and again, risking discovery and the disruption of Balance.

When the Fates learn what Eira has done, the Sovereigns are divided. Some demand punishment, others see opportunity, and the Loom begins to unravel. To protect Adrian, Eira must face her siblings, the Laws that bind her, and the truth about who Adrian really is.

A forbidden love.
A secret older than the Sovereigns.
And a choice that could shatter the threads of existence forever.

Threads of Fate is the first installment in the sweeping romantasy saga Chronicles of the Sovereigns.

Genres: Romance, Romantasy

178 pages, Kindle Edition

Published August 24, 2025

About the author

Lana has loved writing since childhood, beginning with poetry before expanding into full-length stories. A lifelong reader, she gravitates toward fantasy, science fiction, and romance—especially when there’s a touch of spice! These genres continue to inspire her storytelling, and she loves crafting immersive fantasy and romance worlds, with much more still to come.

When she isn’t writing, Lana enjoys traveling, tending to her ever-growing collection of plants, and spending time outdoors, where she finds both creativity and peace. She is a wife, a mother, and recently earned her MA. When her head isn’t buried in a book, she can usually be found binging Outlander, working on new arts and crafts projects, or spending time with her family. She also enjoys telling corny jokes—none of which ever land, but she tells them nonetheless.

Reviews

[Catherine (catisbookedup) · Rating 4 out of 5]

As a non Romantasy and even just as a low fantasy reader, I didn't know how I would find this. I gave it a go because the title got me. I love stories about fate, that's where I dabble in the fantasy. I had to flex my mythology muscles with this which I hadn't used since I was young. Even though this isn't based necessarily on any historical mythology, it has similar concepts which I did love. 10 sibling called sovereigns who reign over an aspect of life. Each one having their own opposite (Life & Death, Revenge & Mercy, Pain & Pleasure, Peace & Fury, Joy & Sorrow) each with their own realm and name - I have to admit I'd rather their names were just what they are as I found it difficult to remember which name was which sovereign.
We follow Peace as she pops in and out of the mortal realm and is drawn to Adrian a mortal artist with a special ability he shouldn't have. The law of Balance forbids sovereigns to fall in love with a mortal and so the conflict begins and the war of the fates begins.
Although short, the writing is poetic. Descriptive, ethereal and emotional. The book packs a punch of information and immersed me into a whole new world of possibilities. Warning the book ends in a cliffhanger so we are going to have to wait for more instalments in the series.

Many thanks to Lana J Publishing for providing me with a copy of the book for review via NetGalley. All opinions are my own.

[Vanessa Candelaria · Rating 5 out of 5]

I am grateful to have been selected for this ARC. I have found myself drawn to fantasy and slow burns lately and this was an amazing mixture of both. He is the stillness that Peace needs…

I am excited to read more.

[Aries Richmond · Rating 4 out of 5]

ARC Review Incoming:

I’ll be honest—Threads of Fate didn’t grab me right away. The opening felt like being dropped into a world already in motion, and I struggled to keep up with all the names, laws, and titles. For a while, I worried it would be one of those fantasies where the atmosphere overshadows the story.

But somewhere around the second act, things changed. As Eira’s inner conflict deepened and Adrian blurred the line between muse and mystery, I realized I’d quietly fallen under its spell. What started as distant and cosmic became unexpectedly intimate. There’s a line where Eira talks about “the silence between heartbeats,” and it captures the ache of wanting something you can’t have perfectly.

The romance here is slow and reverent, not fiery or rushed. Eira and Adrian feel like two lost pieces finally finding each other. Adrian especially surprised me—he isn’t a typical mortal love interest. His art, gentleness, and quiet defiance give him real depth.

The concept of ten Sovereigns, each ruling an aspect of existence, is fascinating. It could’ve felt gimmicky, but Williams uses it to explore how even divine beings can unravel under the weight of emotion.

It’s not a flawless book—the first quarter drags and the prose can get heavy—but by the end, it’s poetic, emotional, and haunting in the best way. Threads of Fate starts as mist and ends as fire, leaving that bittersweet stillness after the last page.

A luminous beginning—I’ll definitely be watching for the next book.

[Vanessa · Rating 5 out of 5]

I read this book in one sitting during class (sorry professor) and it was truly beautiful. I love the concept of threads and fates and I think the way it is executed in this story is so well done and made it really hard to put down!

Thank you NetGalley for the copy!

[Émilie SoonjiBooks · Rating 5 out of 5]

I really loved this captivating and intense romantasy! It was my first time reading a story like this, and I thoroughly enjoyed every minute. The forbidden love keeps you on the edge of your seat. The gods, the sovereign, everything was very well written. I’m so glad I read it as an ARC and can’t wait to see what’s next!

[Natalie Merritt · Rating 4 out of 5]

Quick little gem!

[Ashley Ross · Rating 3 out of 5]

I wanted to love this book but the story fell flat for me. I feel like it was more of a set up for the series than an individual story line with a full arc.
It is written well with great visual descriptions.
I am undecided if I will read the next book.

[Sarah Wood · Rating 5 out of 5]

I absolutely loved the premise of this! The weaving (excuse the pun) of mythologies, gods, and mortals was great. But ma’am, what in the holy cliffhanger was that?! Can’t wait for the next one.

[T || · Rating 5 out of 5]

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⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 5 stars from me. I read it pretty quickly too....

I had an instant connection to our MFC Eira. Fated to be immortal, bound to duty as "Peace"... somehow connecting to her character unknown why. Feeling what ahe felt, how she felt. So much pain, and anxiety for wanting to live a life , finally how she wanted.

Enter Adrian, someone who she has a bond with and unsure why. That i wont spoil. Because O.M.G

Lana, really though. Cliffhanger? We had words. They remain 😆🤣 (and yes i stand by what i said in our convo for book 2... if it happens.... RIOT!!!)

Overall 5 Star rating. It is a quick read and fast paced. but SOOOO goood. Roll on Book 2.

#threadsoffate #lanajwilliams #adrian #eria #forbiddenlove #immortality #recommendedread #5starrating

[Delilah Snyder · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book was absolutely amazing words can’t describe how much I enjoyed this book the plot was amazing and the characters are also very interesting and amazing I can’t wait for book 2

[Maddie · Rating 3 out of 5]

This book was different to what I expected but was an interesting and unique read. Don’t go into reading this expecting it to be your typical slow-burn romantasy. Due to its shorter length, there isn’t much time to build the tension so it jumps straight into it. At times it can feel maybe a bit rushed, which is where I don’t feel it was a total 5 star read for me personally, but despite this I really enjoyed the unique premise of the gods and threads of fate and the loom. The world was unique and could really get the imagination going. I think I would’ve really gotten into it had there been more time for world building and character development. I felt like I didn’t really get to know the characters in the length of pages we had and was sometimes left confused by all of the names of people being discussed. But if you’re looking for a quicker read with a unique storyline and very descriptive writing, this is a great read. Overall, I give it a 3/5, because while it may not be my usual go-to, it was a unique and interesting story and I think could be a great read for someone looking for this faster paced storyline. Thank you Lana for providing me with an ARC copy.

[Farrahlea · Rating 5 out of 5]

The descriptions of death, revenge, and pleasure are so intense! The author's writing is evocative, painting vivid pictures in your mind. It's like you're right there with the characters, feeling the emotions and sensations. That mix of darkness and passion is intoxicating! OH MY GOD. What a cliffhanger! I'm literally on the edge of my seat, and I can't wait to dive into the second book to find out what happens next! The suspense is killing me!

[Kristine Falla · Rating 3 out of 5]

i read this in half a day. it's the kind of story that you just have to finish when started. it's captivating but you kind of understand where the Story is going from the start.... But i'm still excited about the rest and will definetly read the rest when published ❤️

[Chanel Wilson · Rating 3 out of 5]

A good quick read with a slow burn.

I definitely felt for Eira and was not expecting that ending.

[Emi · Rating 2 out of 5]

Publishing date: 23.09.2025 (DD/MM/YYYY)
Thank you to Netgalley and Lana J Publishing for the ARC. My opinions are my own.


TLDR //
Gods and goddesses get in trouble when one of their own gets a little too entangled with a mortal. 2 stars


Quickfire likes and gripes //
Dreamy atmosphere
Is this goddess really so obsessed with this man …
Wish the gods and goddesses went either by their title or their names only


Characters //
Our main girl Eira was an okay protagonist, but she felt a little empty. Her two main characteristics were her obsession with Adrian, and the fact that she is peace. That was really it. I didn’t find her annoying or endearing, just there. I hope she gets more development in the second book.


Adrian was a little more interesting. I assume he has a lot more backstory than what was revealed here (without spoiling anything lol). He had a certain melancholy and loneliness I found just interesting enough.


All the other characters had little to no proper character other than being plot devices. I hope they get some more development and backstory in the next entries. One of them did get some backstory, but I wish there was more.


Pacing & Plot //
The plot is entirely character driven and has a very heavy focus on the romance and the consequences of it. If you like divine chaos and rebellion this might hit well for you. The pacing is quick and reads in snapshots.


Genre thoughts //
This has a good 50/50 split of both fantasy and romance. No notes here.


How it was to read //
I found this worked best as an audiobook for me. The writing style was a little heavy to read for me personally. Just a writing style issue.


Audience //
I think the best audience for this series would be new adults with an interest for divine fantasies where the focus is romance.


Continuation & Final Verdict //
I do not think I will be continuing this series. This wasn’t really for me. I think this is a just fine book. Giving this 2 stars.

[Sara Keeling · Rating 4 out of 5]

Threads of Fate pulls you into a world ruled by the Sovereigns, immortals who control every thread existence. Eira, the Sovereign of Peace, is drawn to a human, Aidan, and they discover a love for each other that is strictly forbidden. As she continues to seek him out, she sets off a chain of events that could alter fate itself.

This was not my typical read; however, I was drawn in by the Forbidden Romance and dove in. I'm so glad I did. The author's writing is unlike any I have ever read - deep, emotional, and I was truly pulled into the story like it was playing out in front of me. I felt calm and at peace while reading, which would track and Eira is the Sovereign of Peace. I was captivated by her and Adrian's love story; so little words between them, but their eyes said more than enough.

I truly didn't know which direction the ending was going. All throughout the book, I was wondering how a HEA could ever be possible without fate crumbling around them. But then the plot twists started, and they just kept coming, and I devoured all of it. I was captivated, intrigued, and extremely disappointed that I was left with all my questions unanswered! I am extremely excited for the next book; I need to know how these twists in fate play out!!

The sole reason for it losing the star is the fact that it's written in third POV. I have a harder time connecting with the characters when I'm reading about them, and not as them. As amazing of a read it was, I honestly just prefer a duo POV, where I can feel like I'm living the story in their eyes, feeling what they are feeling, rather than watching it from the outside.

All in all, an amazing read, I would absolutely recommend and will be continuing Eira and Adrian's story with them when the next chapter releases!

[Brittni · Rating 4 out of 5]

I want to preface this by saying the writing is beautiful, so descriptive and creative but story was just not for me.

Overall, it was a good body of work. It read well, the characters were well thought out, and I cannot go on enough about how descriptive the author is in their writing. I felt like I was there oftentimes. The longing between the main characters was palpable and I could feel MYSELF feeling anxious as the FMC was faced with her actions. It took me longer to read than normal because I struggled to be drawn in, although the last 25% of the book I could not put it down.

One recommendation I would have is maybe a glossary to keep track of all the players and what different objects are within the world of the Sovereigns. That would probably be the only thing I could add. I really did enjoy reading Lana’s words but I struggled with the story and that was more theme preference than fault of the body of work. Lana is very talented, the way she can put you into Eira’s world or make your heart race as the climax comes to a head. I will definitely consider reading more work by the author because I could see myself coming around to the themes and genre of the book.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

[briebriereads · Rating 4 out of 5]

4 ★
Threads of Fate by Lana J. Williams

This story starts off with a bang you’re immediately dropped into a world woven with divine laws, destiny threads, and emotions that hit deep. The writing feels lyrical and intentional, like a tapestry being crafted right in front of you.

We follow Adrian, a mortal artist who can see the threads of fate, and Eira, the Sovereign of Peace, one of ten powerful immortals who maintain balance in the world. Their love is forbidden, dangerous, and high-stakes in every sense. If Eira breaks the ancient laws of the Sovereigns, the consequences echo far beyond just their hearts.

I loved the emotional tone of the writing. It’s soft and heavy all at once beautifully crafted, beautifully felt. The world-building around the Sovereigns (peace, death, mercy, revenge, etc.) was unique and atmospheric, though as the first book in the series, you can tell it’s setting a foundation for bigger things to come.

If you love:
✨ forbidden romance
✨ mortal × divine dynamics
✨ fate threads + mythic world-building
✨ emotional, poetic writing

…this one will absolutely grab you.

4 stars from me, gorgeously written, romantic, and packed with feeling. Can’t wait to see where the series goes next.

[☾arina⭐︎ · Rating 4 out of 5]

I enjoyed this so much that I finished it in one sitting. Since it's a short story, I wasn't sure how well the world-building and character development would be, but I quickly realized I didn’t need to worry. The writing was beautiful, and the story was compelling. The Sovereigns and The Fates were fascinating characters, especially Eira, the Sovereign of Peace, whom this story is about.

I love when the FMC is powerful but also gentle and sweet. Eira is a powerful immortal who always follows the rules and keeps to herself. When she meets Adrian, she feels an instant connection. Although she knows she's forbidden to love, she can’t help falling for him but must face the consequences when she breaks the most important law. This had two tropes I really love—when the FMC lets people know “he’s MINE” and when she’s willing to burn the world for him. I haven’t read much where the FMC is the one saying these things, so whenever I see it in a story, I eat it up—especially when it’s someone who seems unexpected. I can’t wait to see how Eira helps get Adrian out of his situation and learn more about him after discovering his secret.

Thank you NetGalley and Lana J. Publishing for the ARC.

[Kirsty Harley · Rating 4 out of 5]

"He is a place where my stillness learns to move" - Eira

What a wirlwind of a read. From the very first chapter, the pace sweeps you along, never giving you a chance to lose interest. The writing itself is stunning and lyrical, almost poetic at times, drawing you deeper into the world with vivid descriptions of both the characters and the richly crafted settings.

What stood out most was the depth of the characters. Each felt layered and alive, and the way their personalities and struggles were woven into the story made it easy to become invested. The scenes themselves were painted with such clarity that it felt almost cinematic—like you could step into the world and see every detail unfolding before your eyes.

That said, the book did feel rushed. With so much potential in the characters and worldbuilding, it could have easily been stretched into 450+ pages without losing momentum. Instead, I found myself craving more build up, more breathing space between the action, and more time to linger with the characters. Despite that, it left me eager to dive into the next installment. If this is just the beginning, I can’t wait to see where Book Two will take us.

4.5⭐️

[Kerri · Rating 5 out of 5]

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

*Threads of Fate* by Lana Williams completely took me by surprise in the best possible way. It was unlike anything I’ve ever read. From the very first chapter, I was drawn into a world so richly imagined and beautifully layered that it felt alive. The world-building is absolute perfection—every detail thoughtfully crafted, every setting vivid and immersive without ever feeling overwhelming.

But what truly sets this story apart is the emotion. The depth of feeling woven through every page is breathtaking. The characters don’t just exist—you *feel* them. Their struggles, their hopes, their heartache, their triumphs… it all resonates on such a powerful level. I found myself completely invested, thinking about them long after I put the book down.

Lana Williams has created something truly special here. A story that is both epic in scope and intimate in emotion. If you’re looking for a book that transports you to another world while still gripping your heart, *Threads of Fate* is an absolute must-read. I can’t recommend it highly enough!

[Mandy Britt · Rating 5 out of 5]

Wow, this book was everything! I was completely swept up in this captivating and intense romantasy. From the very first page, the forbidden romance between Eria and Adrian is masterful, creating a palpable tension that kept me on the edge of my seat. Watching Eria grapple with the choice between her lifelong duty and her heart's true desire was so compelling—it literally had me staying up late just to see what would happen next.
​The author did a fantastic job with the world-building, and I was completely invested in every aspect of the story. I particularly loved how each of the sovereigns and gods were brought to life, feeling both ancient and incredibly present. I was lucky enough to receive this as an ARC, and I am so glad I did because that cliffhanger ending left me absolutely reeling and dying to know what happens next. This book is a must-read, and I'm already counting down the days until the next book in the series!

[Chanelle · Rating 5 out of 5]

Just ‘wow’!
I immensely enjoyed this story. The main thing that captivated me was the way it was beautifully written. The author showed an amazing use of words and descriptions.
I could literally envision everything I was reading, see the world build before my eyes. I could feel the want, the anger, the pain, the love.
For a short story, I feel like I got a so much out of it.
I seen somewhere it can be compared to The Sandman Tv series, and I got that. Fates, looms and threads, divine beings. The fantasy part was there, and it was fantastic.
But there was also the romance, and it was a slow burn, but it was like seeing it unravel in real time. It was forbidden, it was wanting, it was burn the world down for love kind of romance.
And then there was the family bond. The caring and the rivalry. Standing together for each other.
And then the ending, oh the cliffhanger has got me wanting more!
Overall I thoroughly enjoyed this story and hope to see what comes next.

[Mallory Dapice · Rating 5 out of 5]

Where. Is. The. Next. Book.

I'm screaming inside my body. How could it end like this?!

Threads of Fate is so beautifully written. As soon as Chapter 1 started, I could hear the rain and smell the cinnamon. There is nothing I love more than an author who can weave (get it 😂) words together and create vivid images in my mind, who can put me into the scene I am reading. I feel like I am walking with them, visiting their realms.

This story is Sandman meets Divine Rivals meets Fragile Threads. It was the exact world I needed in my life.

I was so invested in Eira and Adrian. I hated Thaloré, then liked him. I became attached to all of the Sovereigns and I think that is so rare for any book, let alone a book that is less than 200 pages.

I need about 600 more pages in order to feel complete. I will read any book in this series. So please, make so many more.

“Love is not forbidden for its weakness. It is forbidden for its strength."

[Karen Wendling · Rating 5 out of 5]

Lana J. Williams’ Threads of Fate Chronicles of the Sovereigns is a fresh take on the premise of free will and the impact we have on our surroundings.

In this romantic fantasy, the Loom weaved the threads of existence creating the ten Sovereigns: Life, Death, Mercy, Revenge, Pleasure, Pain, Fury, Peace, Joy and Sorrow. They are the Guardians bound by the Loom’s Law - never shape a mortal's will nor love a mortal, because fate is meant to be unchangeable.

Threads of Fate follows Eira, Sovereign of Peace, who notices a beautiful mortal, Adrian, who compulsively draws the images in his head, the threads of the Loom. Thinking himself insane, he is startled when Eira understands what he is drawing. Their unstoppable attraction to each other affects the force of Balance creating havoc in the world. Their love will test the Loom and its laws.

Wow, I did not want the book to end! Can't wait for the next installment so I can continue this fantastic series. Highly recommend!

[Ann Adolphson · Rating 5 out of 5]

ARC provided by the author (voluntary review)

Threads of Fate: Chronicles of the Sovereigns by Lana J. Williams was such a pleasant surprise! It’s a beautifully written slow-burn romance set in a world of gods and goddesses, and I was hooked from page one.

This book gave me Sandman vibes (not exactly the same, but definitely similar in tone and atmosphere). The FMC, Peace, is a goddess who has always followed the laws of the sovereigns—one of which forbids them from loving mortals. But when she meets a mortal man, everything she’s ever believed begins to unravel.

The mythology, world-building, and emotional depth made this a fast, immersive read. It’s cozy, romantic, and thought-provoking, with an ending that leaves you wanting so much more. I can’t wait to see what Lana has in store for us in the next book!

Well done, Lana! 👏

[The Book Ssirren · Rating 5 out of 5]

What an amazing book! I can honestly say I've never read anything like this before. Fantasy was never my favorite, but my goal this year was to get out of my comfort zone and give it another try. And I'm so glad that I did, because I've enjoyed so many! including this one. the description of this book, the story itself, are so well written, so developed. And I loved how the characters just really brought this to life. like you're in the story at their side seeing and feeling everything that takes place.
the forbidden romance and all the turmoil really grabs you. I didn't mind at all that it was written in 3rd POV (I think I'm more used to it because being older, more writers back in the day wrote that way). but I truly enjoyed this book and am thankful that I was given the opportunity to read this as an ARC.

[Katherine's Books · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is an interesting love story between a mortal and sovereign. This is a short story and it does end on a cliff hanger. This book introduces us to the sovereigns and the fates. We have Life, Death, Mercy, Revenge, Pleasure, Pain, Fury, Peace, Joy, and Sorrow. They are allowed to help guide mortals but never allowed to fall in love. But of course they do! They just can’t resist us broken mortals. But we have Peace who does in fact fall in love in this book and that doesn’t quite go according to her plan and that one ended on a cliff hanger. This is the first book in a series. This is only the beginning look out for the second book A Mourner’s song that introduces us to more sovereigns.
If you like powerful beings knowing about each one and their personalities, intrigue, some mystery and fluid writing this is for you.

[Jehad Jabr · Rating 5 out of 5]

Threads of Fate pulled me in quickly with its atmospheric world and emotionally charged storytelling. The blend of fate, mythology, and forbidden connection is handled with care, allowing the story to build tension without rushing its emotional beats.

What stood out most to me was the sense of yearning that runs beneath the narrative. The characters feel conflicted, layered, and shaped by forces larger than themselves, which gives their choices real weight. The romantic elements are woven naturally into the plot rather than overpowering it, and the darker undertones add depth to the overall experience.

The pacing is steady, the world-building immersive without being overwhelming, and the emotional moments land with sincerity. Readers who enjoy romantasy with high stakes, complex relationships, and a mythic atmosphere will likely find this a rewarding read.

[Sonya · Rating 4 out of 5]

Beautiful forbidden love story between gods and mortals and the how their relationship interferes with the threads woven by fate. Emotional story from beginning to end leaving the reader to ponder the quote "Tis better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all"

We feel all of the new emotions Eira (the sovereign of Peace) feel when she breaks the ancient laws by falling in love with Adrian. Adrian is more than a mere mortal as an artist with the ability to see the threads of fate and painting the images he sees risking the very fabric of destiny. He should not be able to see the threads of fate nor fall in love with a goddess but connection between him and Eira was simply too strong to overcome.

I'm looking forward to seeing what fate has in store for this forbidden pair