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Brides in the Dark
In Wicke, menfolk hunt their wives in the dim forests. On the Burning Coast, they snatch them from the sea. But in Patrick’s mountain village of Blackfrye, lonely boys lure their brides down from the night sky itself. And these, everybody knows—these make the happiest marriages of them all.
But when the young shepherd scales the mountain to win a wife of his own, he gets almost more than he can handle with Stella. She’s got bats’ wings, for one—and a tongue far sharper than her yellow fangs. And in exchange for her hand in wedlock, she wants something from Patrick in return…something that, once given, might turn his humble home upside-down forever.
Can Patrick and his feral bride-on-the-wing find happiness in the world of men? Or will a silent horror rotting under Blackfrye consume them both?
But when the young shepherd scales the mountain to win a wife of his own, he gets almost more than he can handle with Stella. She’s got bats’ wings, for one—and a tongue far sharper than her yellow fangs. And in exchange for her hand in wedlock, she wants something from Patrick in return…something that, once given, might turn his humble home upside-down forever.
Can Patrick and his feral bride-on-the-wing find happiness in the world of men? Or will a silent horror rotting under Blackfrye consume them both?
122 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 23, 2026
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Jacob Steven Mohr
25 books56 followersJacob Steven Mohr does not believe in human consciousness; his works emerge as though from the ether, fully formed and fully ominous. Selections of these can be observed in Cosmic Horror Monthly, Shortwave Magazine, Chthonic Matter Quarterly, Weird Horror Magazine, and The Best Horror of the Year Vol. 15. He exists in Columbus OH. Follow him everywhere @jacobstevenmohr.
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November 13, 2025
4.5 rounded up
This is a story that sucks you in from the first page and refuses to let you go until the last sentence. And even then, it still clings to you because it forces you to think.
To start, the writing is absolutely beautiful, descriptive, incredible. I really don't know how to explain it, but the author's writing just gives you that feeling. It's not purple prose that pulls you out of the story; it's deliberate details, imagery, and feelings delivered with the perfect words. I just thought the writing was great - I could envision everything, feel Patrick's feelings with him, and felt immersed in the story.
The story is short, but there is just enough world-building for me to be captivated by the fantasy of the story. The concept of 'hunting' for wives is unique from what I've read before and gripped me from the start. I absolutely was enthralled by the premise, and I LOVED getting to know the 'history'/workings/rules of the whole setup (the 'ritual,' if you will). I would love for there to be more stories that perhaps explore the other places we get hints of that 'capture' their wives in different ways compared to getting them from the skies, as in this one!
At the heart of the story is a meaningful message about gender, society, and how women and others are treated. It speaks to toxic expectations for men, too! I loved how the fantasy elements of the brides being harpies came into play and how their wings were symbolic and a big role of the plot. From not being able to talk to having their wings hidden, talk about a reflection of society! There is SO MUCH to be said about the meaningful messages conveyed through the story, though the experience of absorbing that as you read is truly an experience I wouldn't want to take away from other readers by talking too much about it. Again, it makes you think.
I loved following Patrick, Stella, and the town Patrick lives in. I found his mother and the other wives captivating - they're all trapped literally and figuratively, and the 'letters' at the start of different sections of the story were incredibly intriguing and added so much depth to the story. Patrick and Stella are both complex characters, and I appreciated getting to experience Patrick's ambivalence - he struggles, going back and forth with what is expected of him from others versus what he truly feels. Stella and Patrick's mother were incredible characters to follow, too, and I couldn't eat up the details about their history faster. Patrick and Stella's partnership was heartwarming, and Patrick's strength truly shone through. I was rooting for him the whole way, and his character growth/arc is expertly done.
The pacing of the story was perfect for me - again, I was always engaged, and I truly felt immersed in the story. I picked this up and didn't put it down until I was finished (the first book/story I've read in one sitting since I can remember). It really does feel like a 'new fairy tale.' It's unique, it's hard-hitting, it's beautiful. The ending is absolutely PERFECT. It ties everything up in the best way. The last line?!?!? I would love more stories in this 'world,' to say the least.
There were just two things that didn't make it a 5 star, but honestly I could probably be persuaded?
- There were 'reveals'/connections that I had predicted/inferred. The caveat to this is that I'm not entirely sure they were supposed to be shocking; I could entirely see if the author intended for them to be seen ahead of time (alas, the inability for readers to know an author's intentions).
- I didn't *totally* buy into Patrick's love for Stella. On the opposite end, I feel like there is depth to Stella's feelings for Patrick, but Patrick's love in return felt a bit like insta-love to me, which is just a personal trope preference I don't love. But for readers who don't mind it, I can imagine this being a perfect 5 star!
As a side note, the cover?! Stunning. Would make a great shelf trophy!
Thank you to NetGalley and Quill & Crow Publishing House for an eARC!
This is a story that sucks you in from the first page and refuses to let you go until the last sentence. And even then, it still clings to you because it forces you to think.
To start, the writing is absolutely beautiful, descriptive, incredible. I really don't know how to explain it, but the author's writing just gives you that feeling. It's not purple prose that pulls you out of the story; it's deliberate details, imagery, and feelings delivered with the perfect words. I just thought the writing was great - I could envision everything, feel Patrick's feelings with him, and felt immersed in the story.
The story is short, but there is just enough world-building for me to be captivated by the fantasy of the story. The concept of 'hunting' for wives is unique from what I've read before and gripped me from the start. I absolutely was enthralled by the premise, and I LOVED getting to know the 'history'/workings/rules of the whole setup (the 'ritual,' if you will). I would love for there to be more stories that perhaps explore the other places we get hints of that 'capture' their wives in different ways compared to getting them from the skies, as in this one!
At the heart of the story is a meaningful message about gender, society, and how women and others are treated. It speaks to toxic expectations for men, too! I loved how the fantasy elements of the brides being harpies came into play and how their wings were symbolic and a big role of the plot. From not being able to talk to having their wings hidden, talk about a reflection of society! There is SO MUCH to be said about the meaningful messages conveyed through the story, though the experience of absorbing that as you read is truly an experience I wouldn't want to take away from other readers by talking too much about it. Again, it makes you think.
I loved following Patrick, Stella, and the town Patrick lives in. I found his mother and the other wives captivating - they're all trapped literally and figuratively, and the 'letters' at the start of different sections of the story were incredibly intriguing and added so much depth to the story. Patrick and Stella are both complex characters, and I appreciated getting to experience Patrick's ambivalence - he struggles, going back and forth with what is expected of him from others versus what he truly feels. Stella and Patrick's mother were incredible characters to follow, too, and I couldn't eat up the details about their history faster. Patrick and Stella's partnership was heartwarming, and Patrick's strength truly shone through. I was rooting for him the whole way, and his character growth/arc is expertly done.
The pacing of the story was perfect for me - again, I was always engaged, and I truly felt immersed in the story. I picked this up and didn't put it down until I was finished (the first book/story I've read in one sitting since I can remember). It really does feel like a 'new fairy tale.' It's unique, it's hard-hitting, it's beautiful. The ending is absolutely PERFECT. It ties everything up in the best way. The last line?!?!? I would love more stories in this 'world,' to say the least.
There were just two things that didn't make it a 5 star, but honestly I could probably be persuaded?
- There were 'reveals'/connections that I had predicted/inferred. The caveat to this is that I'm not entirely sure they were supposed to be shocking; I could entirely see if the author intended for them to be seen ahead of time (alas, the inability for readers to know an author's intentions).
- I didn't *totally* buy into Patrick's love for Stella. On the opposite end, I feel like there is depth to Stella's feelings for Patrick, but Patrick's love in return felt a bit like insta-love to me, which is just a personal trope preference I don't love. But for readers who don't mind it, I can imagine this being a perfect 5 star!
As a side note, the cover?! Stunning. Would make a great shelf trophy!
Thank you to NetGalley and Quill & Crow Publishing House for an eARC!
November 7, 2025
⭐ Gothic Fantasy | Gender inequality & Unsettling
Thank you to Quill & Crow Publishing House for this ARC in exchange for my honest review!
The cover art is captivating which help me spot this book among others. Jacob pulled me in from the very first page, I finished it in a single day because I couldn’t put it down. The story begins with Patrick, who kills a wolf to protect the sheep his town depends on. His father, Old Matthew, who wears a lambskin eye patch over his damaged eye, celebrates this act as Patrick’s passage into manhood, along with the rest of the village.
In this world, men “capture” their brides, and women exist as voiceless, harpy-like creatures. Patrick’s father often compares women to sheep who must be sheared, claiming they learn to love the men who “help” them because they cannot help themselves. Patrick’s mother never spoke during his childhood but expressed love through quiet gestures, shaping how Patrick views compassion and connection.When Patrick embarks on his mountain journey to capture a wife, he begins questioning his family’s traditions and the morality of his world.
The writing is atmospheric, haunting, and symbolic, with a strong undercurrent of reflection on gender, choice, and inherited belief.
The ending is powerful and absolutely worth the read. Brides in the Dark is a darkly poetic tale that lingers long after you close the book, perfect for fans of eerie folklore and gothic allegories.
Thank you to Quill & Crow Publishing House for this ARC in exchange for my honest review!
The cover art is captivating which help me spot this book among others. Jacob pulled me in from the very first page, I finished it in a single day because I couldn’t put it down. The story begins with Patrick, who kills a wolf to protect the sheep his town depends on. His father, Old Matthew, who wears a lambskin eye patch over his damaged eye, celebrates this act as Patrick’s passage into manhood, along with the rest of the village.
In this world, men “capture” their brides, and women exist as voiceless, harpy-like creatures. Patrick’s father often compares women to sheep who must be sheared, claiming they learn to love the men who “help” them because they cannot help themselves. Patrick’s mother never spoke during his childhood but expressed love through quiet gestures, shaping how Patrick views compassion and connection.When Patrick embarks on his mountain journey to capture a wife, he begins questioning his family’s traditions and the morality of his world.
The writing is atmospheric, haunting, and symbolic, with a strong undercurrent of reflection on gender, choice, and inherited belief.
The ending is powerful and absolutely worth the read. Brides in the Dark is a darkly poetic tale that lingers long after you close the book, perfect for fans of eerie folklore and gothic allegories.
December 4, 2025
This is the kind of story that immediately pulls you in and refuses to let go. From the opening sentence, the unique and compelling premise; the ritual of 'hunting for wives'. It grips the reader, promising a narrative that feels fresh and like a "new fairy tale." The writing itself is undeniably beautiful. It's not about flowery prose, but rather a deliberate, descriptive style that perfectly immerses you in the world. I found myself easily connecting with Patrick’s feelings and envisioning every scene.
The pacing is pitch-perfect, making this a story I couldn't put down until the final, impactful line. The world-building, while brief, is enough to feel truly captivated. I loved getting glimpses into the history, workings and rules of this societal ritual. The core of the narrative delivers a meaningful message, cleverly using fantasy elements such as the symbolic harpy wings to explore toxic expectations for men and the treatment of women in society.
The characters are complex and well-realized. Patrick and Stella’s partnership is genuinely heartwarming and Patrick's internal struggle with societal pressure is handled well. The supporting women, including Patrick's mother, are equally captivating.
For readers who appreciate beautiful writing and a narrative that genuinely forces you to think, this is an excellent read. Highly recommended and I sincerely hope we get more stories set in this intriguing world.
Thank you to Netgalley and the author for the ARC.
The pacing is pitch-perfect, making this a story I couldn't put down until the final, impactful line. The world-building, while brief, is enough to feel truly captivated. I loved getting glimpses into the history, workings and rules of this societal ritual. The core of the narrative delivers a meaningful message, cleverly using fantasy elements such as the symbolic harpy wings to explore toxic expectations for men and the treatment of women in society.
The characters are complex and well-realized. Patrick and Stella’s partnership is genuinely heartwarming and Patrick's internal struggle with societal pressure is handled well. The supporting women, including Patrick's mother, are equally captivating.
For readers who appreciate beautiful writing and a narrative that genuinely forces you to think, this is an excellent read. Highly recommended and I sincerely hope we get more stories set in this intriguing world.
Thank you to Netgalley and the author for the ARC.
November 9, 2025
Thank you to Quill & Crow Publishing for this ARC!
I haven’t been able to stop thinking about this story since I finished it! I was sucked in from the very first scene. The writing and the world building feels lush and alive, like running your hands over a dark tapestry.
In this world, men catch their brides in various places - the sea, the forest, the sky - and the story follows Patrick as he nets his own bride from the sky. The message of this book is a powerful one that I will carry with me for a long time.
I would really only like to change two things about this book. One, I wish it were longer. The writing is vibrant and I wanted more of it. The second, is that I wish Patrick and Fay and the other women of the village had been able to tear the whole system down. I liked the ending as a kind of reverse little mermaid situation but it felt like it left some things undone.
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January 18, 2026
I fell in love with Brides in the Dark from the very first page and ended up finishing it in one sitting. As a reader who grew up with Hans Christian Andersen’s stories and Grimm’s Fairy Tales as staples of my childhood, Jacob Steven Mohr has absolutely earned a place on my shelf next to the greats.
Mohr’s folklore pulls you straight into the village of Blackfrye, where men must literally catch their brides out of the sky. The story explores gender roles, societal expectations, and deeply rooted traditions, all wrapped in an atmospheric, hauntingly beautiful love story.
I was genuinely devastated when it was over, but I’m very much looking forward to reading more of Mohr’s work!
❤️ A big thank you to publisher Quill & Crow through NetGalley for the ARC!
Mohr’s folklore pulls you straight into the village of Blackfrye, where men must literally catch their brides out of the sky. The story explores gender roles, societal expectations, and deeply rooted traditions, all wrapped in an atmospheric, hauntingly beautiful love story.
I was genuinely devastated when it was over, but I’m very much looking forward to reading more of Mohr’s work!
❤️ A big thank you to publisher Quill & Crow through NetGalley for the ARC!
November 13, 2025
From the moment I read the blurb, I knew I had to read Brides in the Dark and it did not disappoint. The promise of a haunting love story wrapped in mystery and danger instantly caught my attention, and once I started, I couldn’t stop.
The writing is darkly poetic, the atmosphere thick with tension, and every chapter feels like stepping deeper into a beautifully twisted dream. The romance is both tender and terrifying in the best possible way exactly what I hoped for when I first read that blurb.
Thank you so much netgelly for providing me the arc.
The writing is darkly poetic, the atmosphere thick with tension, and every chapter feels like stepping deeper into a beautifully twisted dream. The romance is both tender and terrifying in the best possible way exactly what I hoped for when I first read that blurb.
Thank you so much netgelly for providing me the arc.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for the advance copy in exchange for my honest review.
I wish this was longer, I feel like it has so much potential if it is expended longer for Stella and Patrick. I would love to know more about Patrick's mother and how this male dominated clan started to exist. I feel like there's so many good chance of this becoming more.
I would said that this could be cousins of Isabel Agajanian's Modern Divination. Love the haunting, gothic and dark vibe it exude without being too heavy to handle. It is an easy read, kind of the read you sat at the corner of coffee shop on cold days and just get lost. You just finish it right up. 3.5 stars.
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arc reading again to past time from TWW :)
I wish this was longer, I feel like it has so much potential if it is expended longer for Stella and Patrick. I would love to know more about Patrick's mother and how this male dominated clan started to exist. I feel like there's so many good chance of this becoming more.
I would said that this could be cousins of Isabel Agajanian's Modern Divination. Love the haunting, gothic and dark vibe it exude without being too heavy to handle. It is an easy read, kind of the read you sat at the corner of coffee shop on cold days and just get lost. You just finish it right up. 3.5 stars.
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arc reading again to past time from TWW :)
November 13, 2025
♡︎ Book Summary ♡︎
Brides in the Dark is a short story (282 pages) by Jacob Steven Mohr. This story is set in a male-dominated world where they hunt their wives. Either by snatching them from the sea or tearing them down from the sky. Patrick and his village hunt from the sky. We follow his story, which is full of grief, compassion, and bravery.
✍︎︎ Review ✍︎︎
Stakes
Patrick’s bargain with Stella is palpable and compelling. Because the story is short, I’m not sure what the stakes were, but it didn’t remove the feeling of dread and had my anxiety high.
Writing
Jacob did an excellent job bringing this dark, cruel world alive. His lush and lyrical writing style had a gothic, poetic feel that fully immersed you in the story. Plus, he had a way that didn’t make this story feel rushed, although it is short. The pacing was perfect.
Unique Plot
I personally have never read a story where a man has to go “hunting” for their mystical being wives. From the offering will bring the wife wanted to having to “make” them love you. It was unsettling and tragic while also being fascinating and interesting.
❌ As I mentioned, it is short. I wish it were longer. I have so many questions that I will never get answers to.
Overall, Brides in the Dark is a great dark, gothic, quick read. If you enjoy a story with morally complex characters, high stakes, mystery, and lush, poetic writing, then you will certainly love this book. This was my first book from Jacob, and I look forward to reading more of his books.
TL;DR
❥ Short story
❥ Men hunt for their wives
❥ Women are mystical creatures
❥ Morally complex characters
“Up here, we pluck our husbands from the earth.” 🦇
Book Information ⇩
Genre: Dark, gothic fantasy romance
POV: Patrick, 3rd person
Spice: 🫑
TW/CW: Violence, abuse & assault (mentioned), death, blood, and more. See author’s page for list.
Thank you, Quill & Crow Publishing House& NetGalley for my gifted advanced book copy. All my reviews are my own opinion. 💕
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Brides in the Dark is a short story (282 pages) by Jacob Steven Mohr. This story is set in a male-dominated world where they hunt their wives. Either by snatching them from the sea or tearing them down from the sky. Patrick and his village hunt from the sky. We follow his story, which is full of grief, compassion, and bravery.
✍︎︎ Review ✍︎︎
Stakes
Patrick’s bargain with Stella is palpable and compelling. Because the story is short, I’m not sure what the stakes were, but it didn’t remove the feeling of dread and had my anxiety high.
Writing
Jacob did an excellent job bringing this dark, cruel world alive. His lush and lyrical writing style had a gothic, poetic feel that fully immersed you in the story. Plus, he had a way that didn’t make this story feel rushed, although it is short. The pacing was perfect.
Unique Plot
I personally have never read a story where a man has to go “hunting” for their mystical being wives. From the offering will bring the wife wanted to having to “make” them love you. It was unsettling and tragic while also being fascinating and interesting.
❌ As I mentioned, it is short. I wish it were longer. I have so many questions that I will never get answers to.
Overall, Brides in the Dark is a great dark, gothic, quick read. If you enjoy a story with morally complex characters, high stakes, mystery, and lush, poetic writing, then you will certainly love this book. This was my first book from Jacob, and I look forward to reading more of his books.
TL;DR
❥ Short story
❥ Men hunt for their wives
❥ Women are mystical creatures
❥ Morally complex characters
“Up here, we pluck our husbands from the earth.” 🦇
Book Information ⇩
Genre: Dark, gothic fantasy romance
POV: Patrick, 3rd person
Spice: 🫑
TW/CW: Violence, abuse & assault (mentioned), death, blood, and more. See author’s page for list.
Thank you, Quill & Crow Publishing House& NetGalley for my gifted advanced book copy. All my reviews are my own opinion. 💕
IG
Storygraph
Amazon
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
In an era of high fae, the always-relevant vampire, and renewed spark of interest in the werewolf, Jacob Steven Mohr dredges up charged emotions of excitement and fear in this fresh take on the folk tale through a rarely explored creature: the harpy.
Be warned: this tale is short! I think this is why it's so effective. Mohr's prose is simple but evocative. The cadence of the story, especially when read aloud, feels like one told around a fire. This doesn't mean it lacks depth-in fact, it's a direct critique of toxic masculinity and a commentary on the persistent but antiquated concept that women belong to men and must be controlled through marriage. It explores the sacrifices of motherhood and how generational trauma, particularly when kept secret, can eventually be broken. It takes an excellent storyteller to drive home many points in a succinct and beautiful way without losing the story's shape and purpose.
I've seen some criticism that this novel could have been longer, that Stella and Patrick fall too much in love too quickly. I disagree. I think people are used to long novels and multi-book sagas. Don't get me wrong, I am a lover of these things too. But there is something both nostalgic and exciting about a short, well-spun fairytale. Brides in the Dark is akin to the stories found in those collected by the Brothers Grimm: dark, sweeping, and with a warning-or a promise-of blood.
Brides in the Dark is the injection of new folklore that I've been screaming and begging for, and I'm craving more. I'm glad this was my first read of 2026!
Thank you, NetGalley and Quill & Crow Publishing, for the eARC and the opportunity to review.
Be warned: this tale is short! I think this is why it's so effective. Mohr's prose is simple but evocative. The cadence of the story, especially when read aloud, feels like one told around a fire. This doesn't mean it lacks depth-in fact, it's a direct critique of toxic masculinity and a commentary on the persistent but antiquated concept that women belong to men and must be controlled through marriage. It explores the sacrifices of motherhood and how generational trauma, particularly when kept secret, can eventually be broken. It takes an excellent storyteller to drive home many points in a succinct and beautiful way without losing the story's shape and purpose.
I've seen some criticism that this novel could have been longer, that Stella and Patrick fall too much in love too quickly. I disagree. I think people are used to long novels and multi-book sagas. Don't get me wrong, I am a lover of these things too. But there is something both nostalgic and exciting about a short, well-spun fairytale. Brides in the Dark is akin to the stories found in those collected by the Brothers Grimm: dark, sweeping, and with a warning-or a promise-of blood.
Brides in the Dark is the injection of new folklore that I've been screaming and begging for, and I'm craving more. I'm glad this was my first read of 2026!
Thank you, NetGalley and Quill & Crow Publishing, for the eARC and the opportunity to review.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
Wow, wow, wow!! Brides in the Dark by Jacob Steven Mohr packs a heavy punch in a small package; when I requested, I neglected to see the page amount. Generally, I shy away from novellas but this one—whew!
Patrick lives in a village where they pull their wives from the air—this isn’t wholly unusual, as nearby villages take their wives from the forest or pluck them from the sea. He’s come of age now, and he has to seize a harpy for himself, and to make sure she stays, he has to remove her wings and silence her.
This is a great little tale about a young man who has been raised in a culture that views women as subservient tools—they don’t speak, the men don’t even know their names—and when they die, the men just go grab new ones to replace their previous wives. I loved Patrick’s struggle with how he was raised VS what is the right thing to do. Stella (his prospective bride) and Fay (his mother) were wonderful characters, too.
The ending was a delight, and the last line? It not only brought everything full circle but also answered a question of mine as to how, exactly, the harpies worked. Truly, this is something special. The descriptions are wonderful, the setting feels real, and, although a few points were easily guessed ahead of time, it was still very satisfying. Wholly recommended to those who like a bit of fantasy.
I received a copy of this book via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
Patrick lives in a village where they pull their wives from the air—this isn’t wholly unusual, as nearby villages take their wives from the forest or pluck them from the sea. He’s come of age now, and he has to seize a harpy for himself, and to make sure she stays, he has to remove her wings and silence her.
This is a great little tale about a young man who has been raised in a culture that views women as subservient tools—they don’t speak, the men don’t even know their names—and when they die, the men just go grab new ones to replace their previous wives. I loved Patrick’s struggle with how he was raised VS what is the right thing to do. Stella (his prospective bride) and Fay (his mother) were wonderful characters, too.
The ending was a delight, and the last line? It not only brought everything full circle but also answered a question of mine as to how, exactly, the harpies worked. Truly, this is something special. The descriptions are wonderful, the setting feels real, and, although a few points were easily guessed ahead of time, it was still very satisfying. Wholly recommended to those who like a bit of fantasy.
I received a copy of this book via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
November 26, 2025
“A man does what he must.”
The men of Blackfrye steal brides from the sky. That is the tradition, and so it will always be. This is also true for young Patrick, who sets out to find a bride of his own. But when he meets her, things don't go as the men from the village told him they would, and soon his world is turned upside down.
Your gift. To lure down the wife you want.
Your net – weighted and balanced, to make her stay.
Your ring if she’ll have you.
Your dagger if she won’t.
Brides in the Dark is a short story about a small village where men have always been in charge and keep their wives in the shadows. It is a very entertaining, yet exciting and atmospheric story in its own way. It is easy to imagine, for example, slogans being shouted in the pub. However, it is also a story about courage and bravery, and about women who are not content with living in the shadows. About the love between Patrick and Stella, which was so heartwarming.
I don't want to give too much away – the book is definitely recommended for atmospheric folklore fantasy, perfect for an evening of reading.
Many thanks to Mohr and the team at Quill & Crow Publishing House and NetGalley for the free ARC.
The men of Blackfrye steal brides from the sky. That is the tradition, and so it will always be. This is also true for young Patrick, who sets out to find a bride of his own. But when he meets her, things don't go as the men from the village told him they would, and soon his world is turned upside down.
Your gift. To lure down the wife you want.
Your net – weighted and balanced, to make her stay.
Your ring if she’ll have you.
Your dagger if she won’t.
Brides in the Dark is a short story about a small village where men have always been in charge and keep their wives in the shadows. It is a very entertaining, yet exciting and atmospheric story in its own way. It is easy to imagine, for example, slogans being shouted in the pub. However, it is also a story about courage and bravery, and about women who are not content with living in the shadows. About the love between Patrick and Stella, which was so heartwarming.
I don't want to give too much away – the book is definitely recommended for atmospheric folklore fantasy, perfect for an evening of reading.
Many thanks to Mohr and the team at Quill & Crow Publishing House and NetGalley for the free ARC.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
Thank you to Netgalley and Quill & Crow Publishing House for this ARC. This is my honest review.
"A New Fairy Tale," I could agree!
The potential of this story is the main reason my rating is 3.5 stars. It felt magical and gothic, filled with blood and sharp teeth, romance and nightmares. All these factors painted a rich atmosphere. Patrick and Stella fit the mold perfectly. I am burning with a desire to spend more time with them; it was not enough!
Given the short length of this novel, Mohr was able to lay out a well-written plot. The purpose was there, the action was there. Character development? Could not be at its greatest because of limited time. I would've loved to see Patrick struggle more with his worldview, let him sit in discomfort for a while longer. His feelings for Stella, surprisingly believable, yet at the same time empty? I would argue maybe this could've been scrapped altogether? I am not saying it was for nothing, but their dynamic together had the potential to move in all sorts of ways. Alas, this is a fairy tale, is it not?
I enjoyed my time either way. The concept drew me in immediately. You will be left with questions, but the experience was unique that you HAVE to at least give it a try.
"A New Fairy Tale," I could agree!
The potential of this story is the main reason my rating is 3.5 stars. It felt magical and gothic, filled with blood and sharp teeth, romance and nightmares. All these factors painted a rich atmosphere. Patrick and Stella fit the mold perfectly. I am burning with a desire to spend more time with them; it was not enough!
Given the short length of this novel, Mohr was able to lay out a well-written plot. The purpose was there, the action was there. Character development? Could not be at its greatest because of limited time. I would've loved to see Patrick struggle more with his worldview, let him sit in discomfort for a while longer. His feelings for Stella, surprisingly believable, yet at the same time empty? I would argue maybe this could've been scrapped altogether? I am not saying it was for nothing, but their dynamic together had the potential to move in all sorts of ways. Alas, this is a fairy tale, is it not?
I enjoyed my time either way. The concept drew me in immediately. You will be left with questions, but the experience was unique that you HAVE to at least give it a try.
November 7, 2025
Thank you NetGallery for giving me early access!
Jacob Steven Mohr's 'Brides of the Dark' ties in mythology and historical fiction to tell the story of Patrick and Stella. Living in a male dominated society, Patrick is different from those around him. He does not enjoy taking advantage of the harpies in the mountains and forcing them into marriage.
A common event in Patrick's village of Blackfyre is the removal of the harpies' wings and voices. This action can be viewed as a metaphorical statement on the female objectification still viewed today. The message in this manuscript is clear, regardless of time period or place, women are often silenced and used for their bodies under the control of unemotional and selfish men.
Patrick's father Old Matthew gave me very big 'Alpha podcast' male vibes with his mistreatment to Fay and the women in the village in general. Him and so many other men degrade their wives through SA and DB to uphold their control.
This story, though a manuscript, should be viewed by all and its lessons taken to heart as the issue of objectifying women continues even to this day.
Jacob Steven Mohr's 'Brides of the Dark' ties in mythology and historical fiction to tell the story of Patrick and Stella. Living in a male dominated society, Patrick is different from those around him. He does not enjoy taking advantage of the harpies in the mountains and forcing them into marriage.
A common event in Patrick's village of Blackfyre is the removal of the harpies' wings and voices. This action can be viewed as a metaphorical statement on the female objectification still viewed today. The message in this manuscript is clear, regardless of time period or place, women are often silenced and used for their bodies under the control of unemotional and selfish men.
Patrick's father Old Matthew gave me very big 'Alpha podcast' male vibes with his mistreatment to Fay and the women in the village in general. Him and so many other men degrade their wives through SA and DB to uphold their control.
This story, though a manuscript, should be viewed by all and its lessons taken to heart as the issue of objectifying women continues even to this day.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 24, 2025
I had the chance to read an advance manuscript copy of this book and boy I cannot wait to get a physical copy to add to my shelves. As a long time lover of the fantasy genre, this book checks all the right blocks - with a dose of gothic horror thrown in for good measure. Patrick and Stella are well-written and compelling main characters that had me immediately engaged in their story...and concerned for their well-being. Mohr better get to work on some companion novels as I personally need to know what goes on in Wicke and the Burning Coast. Something truly horrific if the men of Blackfrye are anything to measure by. If you're a fan of fantasy, horror, or a combination of both, Brides in the Dark is a must read!
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
Beautifully written and brimming with old magic, Brides in the Dark is sure to delight dark fairy tale lovers! I appreciated the originality, creativity, breaking unhealthy family patterns, and the feral, bat-winged women in the book! It was so captivating and would've been an easy 5 stars for me if the relationship and love story between Patrick and Stella had been a bit more developed. It left me smiling and wanting more.
August 29, 2025
I had the opportunity to read this book as a manuscript and it was beautiful. It is a dark story, but there is a wonderful softness in the characters and their interactions. I always love the rhythm and texture of Mohr's writing, but it is particularly stunning here. A lovely fairytale-and-then-some for lovers of horror as well as dark fantasy.
September 6, 2025
I had the privilege of reading this as a manuscript and, as a longtime fan and friend of Jake, this is among his best work. It's everything you'd want out of a gothic story. Dark, moody, a fast read. It does an excellent job of suggesting a larger world within such a small space, and has a lot of important things to say.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
Thank you to Netgalley and Quill & Crow Publishing House for this ARC!
This was a fun and short read. The ambiance was well transcribed, and the universe was compelling and original.
I would have liked it to be slightly longer, maybe with more focus on the harpies, their dynamics, or even the story of the clan.
This was a fun and short read. The ambiance was well transcribed, and the universe was compelling and original.
I would have liked it to be slightly longer, maybe with more focus on the harpies, their dynamics, or even the story of the clan.
December 4, 2025
Both bloody yet deeply heartwarming, Brides in the Dark is a gripping tale of familial violence, cursed traditions, insular communities, and what it means to break away from cycles of abuse…and harpies! Can’t forget the harpies! I loved every minute of this dark fantasy, and you will too!
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
super short, and almost feels like a teaser or prequel for a much longer and more intense series, but with the time it does have it absolutely rips your heart out. 5 stars. tysm for the arc.
Review of advance copy received from NetGalley
genuinely enjoyed this so much!
more info:
- gothic, grim, dark
- interesting plot (blurb doesn't do it justice)
- sweet ending (is this a spoiler lol)
more info:
- gothic, grim, dark
- interesting plot (blurb doesn't do it justice)
- sweet ending (is this a spoiler lol)
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
Usually when a book says that it is a fairytale style or a fairytale retelling the author means the Disney type fairytale, sweet, fluffy, happy etc. When I say I want a fairytale style or a fairytale retelling I mean along the lines of the originals, dark, gruesome, bloody and a happy ending is entirely optional.
This delivered on the latter, and it really felt like reading an old-style fairytale. Dark, bloody and magical. I liked every minute of it! It’s not the longest read out there but it really doesn’t need to be, it felt like exactly the right amount of time. I would recommend this to anyone who prefers reading the dark fairytales.
Full YouTube Video: https://youtu.be/SFGAh8wp71g
This delivered on the latter, and it really felt like reading an old-style fairytale. Dark, bloody and magical. I liked every minute of it! It’s not the longest read out there but it really doesn’t need to be, it felt like exactly the right amount of time. I would recommend this to anyone who prefers reading the dark fairytales.
Full YouTube Video: https://youtu.be/SFGAh8wp71g
January 20, 2026
Thank you for NetGalley for my ARC!
There aren't NEARLY enough fiction books about harpies, and that's what originally sold me on this book the most! The atmosphere of the story was equal parts cozy and spooky, the town's lore and air of mystery kept me intrigued. I would love to read a prequel/another installment with or about the previous harpies, but this was entirely enjoyable and I recommend it to those itching for some good ol' fashion winged and clawed women!
There aren't NEARLY enough fiction books about harpies, and that's what originally sold me on this book the most! The atmosphere of the story was equal parts cozy and spooky, the town's lore and air of mystery kept me intrigued. I would love to read a prequel/another installment with or about the previous harpies, but this was entirely enjoyable and I recommend it to those itching for some good ol' fashion winged and clawed women!
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