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377 pages, Hardcover
First published October 19, 2006
This is the first time I ever reviewed on a story, so bear with me ya'll!
When I picked up this book, it wasn't recommended by a friend, I just saw it on the shelf by its lonesome and decided to buy it. I confess to not reading the other ten books (sue me), but I thought the first chapter of the Eternal Flame was great.
Also, the words didn't drag on and on. But as it went on, I noticed that the story doesn't really focus much on the personalities of its characters and I found them lacking.
I mean, they're heroes but they didn't show much flaws. There wasn't any intense mental struggle or anything else that delved in their personas.
Action was aplenty in The Eternal Flame but is there some sort of Deux Ex Machina? Because I find it terribly convenient how Brionna, in a few minutes, found a fool-proof way of freeing themselves in the cell. Not to mention the librarian in the City of Light. While there was foreshadowing, its sort of telling and I wholly expected someone to suddenly be alive in that City before I even read the part about Grikkolo. And how did the old elf survive without food and water? I know he loves books so much but books can't be consumed, really. T.A. Barron needs to work on subtlety and learn to add things in his story that isn't for the convenience of plot or whatever.
The fighting scenes were alright but I have an issue with the chapter where Scree was dealing with the rebel tribe. He also has to work on 'struggle' scenes where some of the characters' thought processes are explained. They were, but there needs to be more of them to add suspense in the story line. I feel that their personalities would greatly influence and make the plot unexpected that it would be an excellent read, not just great, but excellent.
I'm not saying that this is a bad read, it was alright but it needs a whole lot of work. Even so, he deserves my respect. It takes a lot of guts and awesomeness to write a great story after all!!!