Phoenix Rises Dragon Soars is one of those rare fantasy books that never quite steers itself in the expected direction. From the premise and the way the narrative progresses, you’d expect for this to be a heartwarming story of found-family, of four brave and heroic people coming together to aim their collective magical might at the nation’s depraved ruler.
It’s kind of like that, but better.
Firstly, the characters are far more complex and far less heroic. They’re human, riddled with realistic flaws that, on a few notable occasions, do get in the way of them achieving their goals. There are elements of the found family trope, but nothing overwhelming, and certainly no instantaneous connections between the four main characters that would’ve otherwise felt contrived or melodramatic. Their dynamic feels earned as it slowly develops. These aren’t four heroes who become best friends by being bound through a common cause; they are four morally complicated people whose paths cross by pure chance and who are forced together not only for convenience, but also for safety.
Secondly, the progression of the narrative was never smooth. The characters felt real in the sense that their plans were thwarted by something as simple as the weather. Rather than magic their way out of a situation to lower the stakes and risk reader investment, Shufang, Longwei, Jindai, and Huizhong had to adapt and, at times, halt their plans entirely.
Thirdly, there is no swift resolution. Not yet, anyway. This being only the first book in a series, the main antagonist remains at large, with the focus here being on a smaller step towards the bigger aim. It makes the bad guy feel more unreachable, more protected, which in turn raises the stakes.
There is a minor romantic subplot, but this feeds into the plot in a believable and rewarding way. The romantic dynamic is neither easily resolved nor without its hurdles. The fights and
disagreements felt authentic, to the point that one blistering confrontation between Longwei and Shufang left me feeling undecided who I’d side with because they both raised good points and both were right in their indignation.
The magical exploration was handled with tact and care. None of the characters came into their powers easily, and each display of Wuxing felt like the result of a hard lesson learned. A fantasy saga where an overpowered MC or two master their powers with a click of their fingers, this is not.
I also really appreciated the dark territory this book sometimes strayed into. Longwei and Jindai’s backstories, for example, hint at enslavement and the murder of entire families, respectively. Two different men tried, at different points, to force themsevles on Shufang, highlighting how dangerous this world is for women. Longwei is quite seriously assaulted, and in the aftermath feels confused and stressed and disgusted with himself as he grapples with what happened.
Overall, this was an enjoyable read. The only real drawback, for me, was how suddenly the book ends. There was a climax to the third act, but it felt like there was more to come, like we hadn’t yet encountered the true conflict of this part of the narrative. I’m sure book 2 will expand the plot, but I just wish this one had been a bit more explosive in its last act, when Longwei and Shufang are enacting their plan to secure their way into the Empress’s palace.