4 stars. I’ve fallen down the rabbit hole of Thai GL novels so prepare to be sick of me. I really liked this one a lot. Okbab and Rin were likable characters and their romance was adorable as hell. A very enjoyable read.
I will analyze the text as a series screenplay (script) rather than as a short story. The story is simple, beautiful, emotional and poetic. I love that the main characters are artists. The Japanese setting is really lovely. The storyline is great but the original soundtrack, the acting and the lighting in the show elevate the writing even more. I loved it!