"The Good Eye" is competently written and occasionally intriguing but too often the stories feel like sketches rather than fully realized narrative, a little too flat for me, and any sense of a plot is nonexistent: a few things happen and then they end. The title story is intriguing with its art-world "twist," , but then nothing comes from that, no conflict, no tension. Surely anyone can string a few scenes together? I want something more.
Without escalation, conflict, or meaningful consequence, the collection feels a little inert. It's as though gesture alone were enough. There's talent here, certainly, and sharp premises, but I wanted more propulsion and tension, I wanted the stories to be building toward something rather than simply fading out.