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The Lament of Sky
There once existed a collective of Gods called the Duwaiu. Mortal long ago - now bound together for a thousand years - the Duwaiu swore allegiance to the Vildarii: three faceless entities that governed the spirit worlds, Otherworlds and the Hell plains; ensuring that the great wheel of life continued to turn.
But the second Vildarii, Guardian of the Hell plains, desired that there be ultimate suffering upon the world and drove all the Duwaiu Gods into madness. As consequence for their insanity, the Rhai-Angof - a ferocious female race - were hunted unto extermination and the essence of the Vildarii was crafted into three human men.
Lilyth, the last remnant of the Rhai-Angof, fights to survive against the ruling, tyrannical Vildarii regime. Her journey leads to encounters with William, the only remaining Duwaiu God; Sky, an ethereal being of otherwordly magic; and a philandering sky-pirate named Vergo.
As they progress through their adventure together, Lilyth slowly begins to piece back memories that were stolen by the magic of the Vildarii. Eventually, putting together the puzzle of the regime’s evil scheme, it leads to an unforgettable climax, where races and worlds collide.
But the second Vildarii, Guardian of the Hell plains, desired that there be ultimate suffering upon the world and drove all the Duwaiu Gods into madness. As consequence for their insanity, the Rhai-Angof - a ferocious female race - were hunted unto extermination and the essence of the Vildarii was crafted into three human men.
Lilyth, the last remnant of the Rhai-Angof, fights to survive against the ruling, tyrannical Vildarii regime. Her journey leads to encounters with William, the only remaining Duwaiu God; Sky, an ethereal being of otherwordly magic; and a philandering sky-pirate named Vergo.
As they progress through their adventure together, Lilyth slowly begins to piece back memories that were stolen by the magic of the Vildarii. Eventually, putting together the puzzle of the regime’s evil scheme, it leads to an unforgettable climax, where races and worlds collide.
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369 pages, Paperback
First published December 26, 2014
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March 9, 2016
This had a very perplexing opening. I struggled to understand what was actually happening, but that’s what happens when a protagonist has a bad case of amnesia. Lilyth had no idea what was going on; she could barely remember a thing about herself. So, I was quite excited to see who, and what, she actually was; I was quite excited to see why she was locked in a tower, and why a city guardsman would beat her down for no apparent reason. Indeed, I had several reasons to carry on reading.
So, I did, and quite an exciting story unfolded. Lilyth was rescued from her plight by an equally as mysterious figure. He’s an enigmatic man called William, and he told her they were in love. She doesn’t remember him, in the slightest, so the encounter is frustrating and a little awkward. At this point, I wasn’t entirely sure whether he was being genuine with her; he could have been a bad guy or a good guy. This may have just been a form of manipulation. It was a hard one to call, and this sense of uncertainty remained throughout the novel. As Lilyth began to slowly remember more, and unravel the mysteries of her story, it started to become a little clearer. The effect worked well and kept me reading, as the characters intentions were not entirely obvious.
“I found you Lilyth. All will be ok now, you know that don’t you?”
The plot retained its excitement till the end and even managed to throw a few surprises my way. Lilyth also developed as a character and became more self-assured as the novel progressed; she eventually learnt that she was her own person with her own choices. I liked the romance that developed; it wasn’t the obvious one that I thought would happen in the beginning. The author handled it quite well, as it was very sexually charge yet still a little magical. I didn’t find the novel remotely predictable, which is fairly rare in fantasy these days.
Video game parallels
After several pages the novel reminded me of the elder scrolls video games. We have a central character that has no real past; we have different plains of hell; we have different and varied gods that are invincible. Their only equals are each other. This reminded me of the Daedric gods. I’m not sure if the author intentionally drew on these aspects, but, either way, it worked very well. I liked the idea, and I liked the similarities with my favourite video game franchise. Lilyth’s lack of knowledge about herself, and the world, really drove the story forward in the same way the need to explore does in these video games.
The writing itself
Here comes the bad bit- I did really like the story. I think it was structured well and plotted right; it was really quite exciting. However, in parts, I think it really needed a good edit. Some of the dialogue felt very awkward and expressionless; it needed to be a little more natural at points. Also, there was a combination of English and American English spellings. For example, “realise” and “realize” both came up a couple of times. These aren’t major issues, but they are issues that do need to be addressed in a review. In addition, some of the sentences were a little long and rambled a bit. The prose needs to be worked on in parts to make the reading experience more pleasant, as it was poorly phrased at times. I do think the jumbled sentences and awkward sentences may put off some readers. I liked the plot so I carried on reading, but there is no denying that the prose needs some work. The author is half there: her plot and characters are good, but the writing needs to be developed in order to get more reader enjoyment. However, it must be noted, that this is the author’s first published work, and it is self-published. So, all things considered, this is a very enjoyable read, and I would, in all honesty, read any sequals.
If anybody reading my review does decide to give this book a try, then I recommend checking out some of the author’s artwork. The first image in my review is my favourite off her website. They helped me to imagine the characters when reading, and they’re really quite good.
-The author sent me this book in exchange for an honest review
So, I did, and quite an exciting story unfolded. Lilyth was rescued from her plight by an equally as mysterious figure. He’s an enigmatic man called William, and he told her they were in love. She doesn’t remember him, in the slightest, so the encounter is frustrating and a little awkward. At this point, I wasn’t entirely sure whether he was being genuine with her; he could have been a bad guy or a good guy. This may have just been a form of manipulation. It was a hard one to call, and this sense of uncertainty remained throughout the novel. As Lilyth began to slowly remember more, and unravel the mysteries of her story, it started to become a little clearer. The effect worked well and kept me reading, as the characters intentions were not entirely obvious.
“I found you Lilyth. All will be ok now, you know that don’t you?”
The plot retained its excitement till the end and even managed to throw a few surprises my way. Lilyth also developed as a character and became more self-assured as the novel progressed; she eventually learnt that she was her own person with her own choices. I liked the romance that developed; it wasn’t the obvious one that I thought would happen in the beginning. The author handled it quite well, as it was very sexually charge yet still a little magical. I didn’t find the novel remotely predictable, which is fairly rare in fantasy these days.
Video game parallels
After several pages the novel reminded me of the elder scrolls video games. We have a central character that has no real past; we have different plains of hell; we have different and varied gods that are invincible. Their only equals are each other. This reminded me of the Daedric gods. I’m not sure if the author intentionally drew on these aspects, but, either way, it worked very well. I liked the idea, and I liked the similarities with my favourite video game franchise. Lilyth’s lack of knowledge about herself, and the world, really drove the story forward in the same way the need to explore does in these video games.
The writing itself
Here comes the bad bit- I did really like the story. I think it was structured well and plotted right; it was really quite exciting. However, in parts, I think it really needed a good edit. Some of the dialogue felt very awkward and expressionless; it needed to be a little more natural at points. Also, there was a combination of English and American English spellings. For example, “realise” and “realize” both came up a couple of times. These aren’t major issues, but they are issues that do need to be addressed in a review. In addition, some of the sentences were a little long and rambled a bit. The prose needs to be worked on in parts to make the reading experience more pleasant, as it was poorly phrased at times. I do think the jumbled sentences and awkward sentences may put off some readers. I liked the plot so I carried on reading, but there is no denying that the prose needs some work. The author is half there: her plot and characters are good, but the writing needs to be developed in order to get more reader enjoyment. However, it must be noted, that this is the author’s first published work, and it is self-published. So, all things considered, this is a very enjoyable read, and I would, in all honesty, read any sequals.
If anybody reading my review does decide to give this book a try, then I recommend checking out some of the author’s artwork. The first image in my review is my favourite off her website. They helped me to imagine the characters when reading, and they’re really quite good.
-The author sent me this book in exchange for an honest review
November 13, 2015
Thanks to B. B. Wynter for giving me this book to review.
Lilyth is the last remnant of the Rhai-Angof, but cannot remember anything before a year ago and she has spent that year in a school. When the school and everyone inside is destroyed, Lilyth is saved by William, a man she does not know but who claims to know her really well.
I found The lament of Sky too confusing as I was lost about what was happening, especially in the first chapter. I really did not the characters, particularly William, as they were all horrible, the only exception was Lilyth but I did not care much about her. I did not enjoy this book and DNF at 21%.
This and my other reviews can be found at Amethyst Bookwyrm
Lilyth is the last remnant of the Rhai-Angof, but cannot remember anything before a year ago and she has spent that year in a school. When the school and everyone inside is destroyed, Lilyth is saved by William, a man she does not know but who claims to know her really well.
I found The lament of Sky too confusing as I was lost about what was happening, especially in the first chapter. I really did not the characters, particularly William, as they were all horrible, the only exception was Lilyth but I did not care much about her. I did not enjoy this book and DNF at 21%.
This and my other reviews can be found at Amethyst Bookwyrm
October 27, 2015
Take a look at her paintings, Ms. Wynter is an artist, and a peek at her poetry will make you want to read her first novel. This was the reason why I wanted to read her book, to see how this gift can translate into writing. And all I found was what I had hoped for.
Her world building ability was delightful. We should flip through the pages of her mind and look past the whimsical choice of words to a labyrinth of fantasy that is both intimate and puzzling.
Do read The Lament of Sky and her next book, for they will hand you a journey to Ms. Wynter's generous and innocent soul.
Her world building ability was delightful. We should flip through the pages of her mind and look past the whimsical choice of words to a labyrinth of fantasy that is both intimate and puzzling.
Do read The Lament of Sky and her next book, for they will hand you a journey to Ms. Wynter's generous and innocent soul.
November 1, 2015
I'll start by saying something that sounds bad about this book, but it is not. It took me a long, long time to start really reading it. I would read a couple of pages here and there, but for some time I didn't give it much attention. I'm just not a huge fan of fantasy.
However, once I finally bit into a big chunk of it, I became hooked. The characters are well developed. The plot and other elements of the story are interesting, but what I liked best is B.B. Wynter's unique style of writing. Some writers let language master them, but Ms. Wynter masters the language.
However, once I finally bit into a big chunk of it, I became hooked. The characters are well developed. The plot and other elements of the story are interesting, but what I liked best is B.B. Wynter's unique style of writing. Some writers let language master them, but Ms. Wynter masters the language.
March 1, 2015
Our main character Lilyth is suffering from amnesia, she simply can't remember who she was. She knows her name but can't recall anything more which prompts her on this journey. I'm sure Lilyth never imagined she would be on a journey that would hold such importance to not only her but the rest of the world as well. It's up to her to stop the evil guys from changing everything.
The Lament of Sky was a fascinating dark fantasy read. I enjoyed the fact this story really took me on a journey through not only the lives of our characters but through this world as well.
There was definitely a lot of time and thought spent on the wording an getting it right. I really felt like I was reading a traditional fantasy story, kinda like an old time one where you know the author toiled over it for awhile. None of the characters broke from their vernacular and suddenly started talking like a modern day person would,sometimes this does happen, which impressed me.
Overall, I enjoyed this book. The mix of characters together made for some interesting scenes and they meshed well. The story flowed naturally and I didn't get caught up in any silly unneeded scenes or get stuck with any language issues. It's a unique story that a fantasy lover would just eat up!
I received this book in exchange for an honest review.
The Lament of Sky was a fascinating dark fantasy read. I enjoyed the fact this story really took me on a journey through not only the lives of our characters but through this world as well.
There was definitely a lot of time and thought spent on the wording an getting it right. I really felt like I was reading a traditional fantasy story, kinda like an old time one where you know the author toiled over it for awhile. None of the characters broke from their vernacular and suddenly started talking like a modern day person would,sometimes this does happen, which impressed me.
Overall, I enjoyed this book. The mix of characters together made for some interesting scenes and they meshed well. The story flowed naturally and I didn't get caught up in any silly unneeded scenes or get stuck with any language issues. It's a unique story that a fantasy lover would just eat up!
I received this book in exchange for an honest review.
February 13, 2016
First of all i would like to thank the author B.B. Wynter for giving me this book to read and review it. I can't tell you how much i love to read books and then review them on goodreads. I got the opportunity to review four books before this one, directly for the authors themselves and i am hoping i keep getting that opportunity again and again.
Now about this book, the thing i loved the most was its story line because it was something totally new to me. The concepts of the duwaiu, vildari and rhai-angof were unique and its what compelled me to keep reading the book. In beggining, i was quite confused as to what was happening but as i went further, i did understand what was going on.
I found this book too slow, i was waiting for the moment when something exciting and totally thrilling would happen and i knew that moment would come towards the end and truly i was captivated by the ending of this novel and by the character of lilyth, because she was brave, did not gave up at all and she kept fighting and did not lose love and compassion.
I also accept the fact that this book contained such vivid words which gave fuel to my imagination even more.
Overall it was unique and new for me from what i usually read. Thank you again to the author for giving me this opportunity.
Now about this book, the thing i loved the most was its story line because it was something totally new to me. The concepts of the duwaiu, vildari and rhai-angof were unique and its what compelled me to keep reading the book. In beggining, i was quite confused as to what was happening but as i went further, i did understand what was going on.
I found this book too slow, i was waiting for the moment when something exciting and totally thrilling would happen and i knew that moment would come towards the end and truly i was captivated by the ending of this novel and by the character of lilyth, because she was brave, did not gave up at all and she kept fighting and did not lose love and compassion.
I also accept the fact that this book contained such vivid words which gave fuel to my imagination even more.
Overall it was unique and new for me from what i usually read. Thank you again to the author for giving me this opportunity.
March 17, 2016
As I get older, I forget the potential that Authors have to paint characters and worlds as well as any painter with a brush and canvas, but then I read something like that reminds me of long-gone times where every book held at the least a glimmer of real-world magic for me.
This is one of those books, and the magic it contains is real.
This is one of those books, and the magic it contains is real.
February 2, 2017
Received an advance reader copy in exchange for a fair review
Hm..I really don't know how to feel about this book. I feel like I when I read the synopsis I felt so excited about reading a fantasy book, I am a big lover of this genre. However I felt like my hopes just plummeted down, kind of like someone removing the floor from underneath your feet.
There were so many times in the book when I felt like I could go on no more and wanted to just DNF it but I was adamant to give the book a fair chance, I had hoped it would change my mind.
(let's bring the tissues out, although this book was not for me that is not to discourage anyone else reading it)
Shall we get to the impending list then?
1. The writing style
2. Language
I am not sure if this goes hand to hand or not but my reasons would be similar so instead of repeating myself I wanted to answer this once. I wouldn't say the way it is written is terrible but I because I have no idea what era this book is set in, I feel like the style and language used is like from the old passages, like the 15th century. Now I personally find it hard to comprehend the meaning behind the text sometimes so I found it really hard to read this book. When I was reading I would go over the chapters again to make sure I was reading it properly, this no doubt takes more time which makes it harder to get in to the book and enjoy it.
3. I found Lilyth quite annoying and rude
There is must be a limit to how someone can annoy you right? I found Lilyth constantly annoying and bad mouthed, she literally spoke her mind with no filter which is not always a bad thing BUT sometimes she was just saying silly things which made no sense. Honestly isn't she a drama queen? Everything must be done her way!
That is not to say I didn't enjoy certain aspects of the book I really loved her humour sometimes as much as she had a mouth on her she was just really funny about her perspective on things!
The characters were okay, I actually only read the book because of Sky. He is hiding a lot of secrets that come to light and I can't say I am surprised you are actually given little clues in each chapter leading up to it. He is actually kind of cute, although he deceives Lilyth I do love the way he treats her #couplegoals
The romance had a interesting twist, before losing her memory she was in love with William for so many years (100 was it?) as soon as she starts to regain some back she changes directions. I suppose I can't blame her because her memory was gone for some time.
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Hm..I really don't know how to feel about this book. I feel like I when I read the synopsis I felt so excited about reading a fantasy book, I am a big lover of this genre. However I felt like my hopes just plummeted down, kind of like someone removing the floor from underneath your feet.
There were so many times in the book when I felt like I could go on no more and wanted to just DNF it but I was adamant to give the book a fair chance, I had hoped it would change my mind.
(let's bring the tissues out, although this book was not for me that is not to discourage anyone else reading it)
Shall we get to the impending list then?
1. The writing style
2. Language
I am not sure if this goes hand to hand or not but my reasons would be similar so instead of repeating myself I wanted to answer this once. I wouldn't say the way it is written is terrible but I because I have no idea what era this book is set in, I feel like the style and language used is like from the old passages, like the 15th century. Now I personally find it hard to comprehend the meaning behind the text sometimes so I found it really hard to read this book. When I was reading I would go over the chapters again to make sure I was reading it properly, this no doubt takes more time which makes it harder to get in to the book and enjoy it.
3. I found Lilyth quite annoying and rude
There is must be a limit to how someone can annoy you right? I found Lilyth constantly annoying and bad mouthed, she literally spoke her mind with no filter which is not always a bad thing BUT sometimes she was just saying silly things which made no sense. Honestly isn't she a drama queen? Everything must be done her way!
That is not to say I didn't enjoy certain aspects of the book I really loved her humour sometimes as much as she had a mouth on her she was just really funny about her perspective on things!
“How strange, but why would I know what a cabbage man is?” she spluttered rudely.
“Not cabbage Lilyth, but Caraid – the beings of light. All Rhai-Angof know these things.”
“Well do you know how cheesy that just sounded? ‘Beings of light’…really, I feel embarrassed being in your presence. Wait…you’re not a fairy? Now I feel even more uncomfortable. And I don’t believe you either! Sprout your wings or I wont be convinced of such drivel.”
“I am not a cabbage or a fairy, I am Caraid. We guide and assist hopeless humans like you, though we have been known to travel down a rather darkened path, once in a while,” he smiled rather cheekily.”
The characters were okay, I actually only read the book because of Sky. He is hiding a lot of secrets that come to light and I can't say I am surprised you are actually given little clues in each chapter leading up to it. He is actually kind of cute, although he deceives Lilyth I do love the way he treats her #couplegoals
The romance had a interesting twist, before losing her memory she was in love with William for so many years (100 was it?) as soon as she starts to regain some back she changes directions. I suppose I can't blame her because her memory was gone for some time.
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March 13, 2015
Read this book and discover the journey of Lilyth, a grey eyed silvery haired woman. Watch as comfortable seeming surroundings shatter into oblivion as she flees and is set to uncover forgotten truths, loves and lies. This book is beautifully written and I loved the intrigue. The characters are dynamic and very expressive. This book didn't end as I thought it would, it was better.I give it Four stars!-I was furnished with a copy for a free review-
June 12, 2015
I always enjoying watching a character develop throughout a book. But I especially love when a character that I initially dislike turns into a character I love. Intertwine that will a highly entertaining story with vivid descriptions and colorful word choices that left me feeling whimsical and entranced, and I feel as though this is the start of something epic.
Beautifully done. Loved it!
Beautifully done. Loved it!
March 1, 2015
This book reminds me of the first book that I read for my own pleasure, as a teenager. It was David Eddings' Pawn of Prophecy. Before that book, I had only read books because of school assignments. It never occurred to me to actually read a book because I wanted to.
Pawn of Prophecy popped my reading-for-pleasure cherry. I was hooked on fantasy, and couldn't get enough of it. That is, until I started reading some other authors, and realized that it was just Eddings' masterful writing that made those books worth reading.
So it's a good thing when I say this book, The Lament of Sky, actually reminds me of Eddings' work. I don't read much fantasy fiction anymore, because I find so much of it so fucking formulaic. Some nobody gets dragged along on an epic adventure, usually against their will. And surprise, surprise, they turn out to be long-lost royalty, or something.
And this book is no different. It's the same goddamn formula as every other fantasy story ever written. A long-lost princess is saved from a simple life, only to be dragged along, on an epic adventure. She protests at every turn. She couldn't possibly be this super-important magical queen, or whatever. She's just this girl, ya know?
Of course, I found her protests silly as fuck, because everyone knows what's going to happen. She's gonna cry and whine, and carry on, but she's still going to go along with the crew to save the world and shit. She's just gonna moan and bitch while she does it.
What made this story different, was the fact that she had to put up with so many people sabotaging her journey. The people who are supposed to protect her turn out to be like evil or something. They're secretly conniving against her the whole time. Cool.
But there's at least one guy, of course, who is pure of heart. He helps her along her journey, and tries to fend off those who seek to destroy her. I liked this guy. He had a hard time convincing young whats-her-face that he just wanted to help her. Because all her other 'helpers' just ended up stabbing her in the back.
But eventually, he wins her over, and they go off and save the day. Stop the world from exploding, and all that happy horseshit. And they probably had crazy hippy sex when I wasn't paying attention. Because I'm pretty sure the dude was drugging her or something. You just can't trust those fairy-boys. They're sneaky little fuckers.
Pawn of Prophecy popped my reading-for-pleasure cherry. I was hooked on fantasy, and couldn't get enough of it. That is, until I started reading some other authors, and realized that it was just Eddings' masterful writing that made those books worth reading.
So it's a good thing when I say this book, The Lament of Sky, actually reminds me of Eddings' work. I don't read much fantasy fiction anymore, because I find so much of it so fucking formulaic. Some nobody gets dragged along on an epic adventure, usually against their will. And surprise, surprise, they turn out to be long-lost royalty, or something.
And this book is no different. It's the same goddamn formula as every other fantasy story ever written. A long-lost princess is saved from a simple life, only to be dragged along, on an epic adventure. She protests at every turn. She couldn't possibly be this super-important magical queen, or whatever. She's just this girl, ya know?
Of course, I found her protests silly as fuck, because everyone knows what's going to happen. She's gonna cry and whine, and carry on, but she's still going to go along with the crew to save the world and shit. She's just gonna moan and bitch while she does it.
What made this story different, was the fact that she had to put up with so many people sabotaging her journey. The people who are supposed to protect her turn out to be like evil or something. They're secretly conniving against her the whole time. Cool.
But there's at least one guy, of course, who is pure of heart. He helps her along her journey, and tries to fend off those who seek to destroy her. I liked this guy. He had a hard time convincing young whats-her-face that he just wanted to help her. Because all her other 'helpers' just ended up stabbing her in the back.
But eventually, he wins her over, and they go off and save the day. Stop the world from exploding, and all that happy horseshit. And they probably had crazy hippy sex when I wasn't paying attention. Because I'm pretty sure the dude was drugging her or something. You just can't trust those fairy-boys. They're sneaky little fuckers.
November 29, 2015
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The author categorized this book as Dark Fantasy/ Steampunk. I was there reading and a moment occurs in the book. I kid you not, I was on the verge of tears. Living eye water near drip from mine eyes. So I was like, WAIT. I’m not supposed to be crying. I’m not supposed to be emotional. After all this is Dark Fantasy.
In all honesty, this was my first read of anything under such a genre. I didn’t know what to expect. My heart was set on getting a good fright, blood and guts. I was served a great heap of them all… I won’t complain. However, I certainly wasn’t expecting to bawl. Which I believe was unfair. I was all in my feelings and then the end came. Geez. My heart couldn’t take it. It was an enjoyable read from start to end.
Let’s get into the fun part, the story itself. We are first introduced to a silver haired, paled skin, beauty. Her name, Lilyth. Who stood as the last Rhai-Angof of her time. She was rescued from near death by a Duwaiu, William. The last of his species. They are supposed lovers. Reunited. It should feel so good after such a long separation. Yet, there wasn’t any kisses in the moonlight or dirty dancing. Lilyth has lost her memory. She doesn’t recognize the face of her ‘saviour’.
The madness that shone within William’s eyes scared her. Let’s not forget his incoherent mumbling episodes. Shall we say, “Freaky!” So she did what any girl would do in the moment he tried to have his way with her. She stabbed that sucker in the leg and ran for it. Believing that he could heal himself she felt no remorse. Until it was later revealed he couldn’t. Darn. That gripped at her conscience. She wanted to stay with him then. He wouldn’t let her. It was too dangerous. There was no way his dark magic could protect her from the evil which were the Vildarii. Who wants to see her dead.
Alone in the forest she soon found help. The blue eyed mister’s name was Sky. They journeyed together and along the way they adopted another, Vergo. A clown looking fellow. Odd team indeed. They were on a mission, to fight all odds. In order to save the world by restoring a balance of power. Their common enemy, the Vildarii.
Bury your nose in this book to experience a world of love, fate, betrayal, magic, revenge and power. It was a darn good ride. Happy reading!
-Chantol Aspinall
The author categorized this book as Dark Fantasy/ Steampunk. I was there reading and a moment occurs in the book. I kid you not, I was on the verge of tears. Living eye water near drip from mine eyes. So I was like, WAIT. I’m not supposed to be crying. I’m not supposed to be emotional. After all this is Dark Fantasy.
In all honesty, this was my first read of anything under such a genre. I didn’t know what to expect. My heart was set on getting a good fright, blood and guts. I was served a great heap of them all… I won’t complain. However, I certainly wasn’t expecting to bawl. Which I believe was unfair. I was all in my feelings and then the end came. Geez. My heart couldn’t take it. It was an enjoyable read from start to end.
Let’s get into the fun part, the story itself. We are first introduced to a silver haired, paled skin, beauty. Her name, Lilyth. Who stood as the last Rhai-Angof of her time. She was rescued from near death by a Duwaiu, William. The last of his species. They are supposed lovers. Reunited. It should feel so good after such a long separation. Yet, there wasn’t any kisses in the moonlight or dirty dancing. Lilyth has lost her memory. She doesn’t recognize the face of her ‘saviour’.
The madness that shone within William’s eyes scared her. Let’s not forget his incoherent mumbling episodes. Shall we say, “Freaky!” So she did what any girl would do in the moment he tried to have his way with her. She stabbed that sucker in the leg and ran for it. Believing that he could heal himself she felt no remorse. Until it was later revealed he couldn’t. Darn. That gripped at her conscience. She wanted to stay with him then. He wouldn’t let her. It was too dangerous. There was no way his dark magic could protect her from the evil which were the Vildarii. Who wants to see her dead.
Alone in the forest she soon found help. The blue eyed mister’s name was Sky. They journeyed together and along the way they adopted another, Vergo. A clown looking fellow. Odd team indeed. They were on a mission, to fight all odds. In order to save the world by restoring a balance of power. Their common enemy, the Vildarii.
Bury your nose in this book to experience a world of love, fate, betrayal, magic, revenge and power. It was a darn good ride. Happy reading!
-Chantol Aspinall
June 20, 2015
Review was first posted on For The Love of Fictional Worlds
I received a digital copy of the book in exchange for an honest review.
Actual Rating 3.5 Stars
It's been a while since I have actually read an Adult Fantasy book - and this one fell right in lap or rather my iPad because the author was awesome (or rather kind enough) to send me a copy of the eBook :D
“All she could see was her demise and it called out a tempting ruse, offering a suffering less potent than what sickened the living.”
The story is about Lilith - an amnesic silver haired woman who lives an idyllic life until it isn't idyllic anymore!
She discovers a whole new world exists and that Gods aren't even myths. She has to accept a whole new life but since she is stubborn she refuses to, at least for a little while! She finally does realise that if she wants to regain her memory, she need to go against the evil to save the world if she wants to save herself.
Honestly speaking it took me a while to get into the book because the writing style of this author is absolutely different - not bad different - but different. But once I did, this book became quite interesting.
The characters are themselves quite interesting - a little difficult to connect to the emotionally, but you do come to respect the characters and their trials.
The author has done a wonderful job of creating a fascinating world - a world that is so different yet infinitely similar to our own. Such a different style of writing but one that I slowly but surely fell in love with <3
While this is a perfectly good book - I think I read it at a wrong time. It had every chance of striking a chord within me, but sadly, it didn't. I wish I could point to pertinant issues in the book itself, but I can't - I think it's all me.
I do plan to revisit this book soon though! And maybe update my rating as well :D
I received a digital copy of the book in exchange for an honest review.
Actual Rating 3.5 Stars
It's been a while since I have actually read an Adult Fantasy book - and this one fell right in lap or rather my iPad because the author was awesome (or rather kind enough) to send me a copy of the eBook :D
“All she could see was her demise and it called out a tempting ruse, offering a suffering less potent than what sickened the living.”
The story is about Lilith - an amnesic silver haired woman who lives an idyllic life until it isn't idyllic anymore!
She discovers a whole new world exists and that Gods aren't even myths. She has to accept a whole new life but since she is stubborn she refuses to, at least for a little while! She finally does realise that if she wants to regain her memory, she need to go against the evil to save the world if she wants to save herself.
Honestly speaking it took me a while to get into the book because the writing style of this author is absolutely different - not bad different - but different. But once I did, this book became quite interesting.
The characters are themselves quite interesting - a little difficult to connect to the emotionally, but you do come to respect the characters and their trials.
The author has done a wonderful job of creating a fascinating world - a world that is so different yet infinitely similar to our own. Such a different style of writing but one that I slowly but surely fell in love with <3
While this is a perfectly good book - I think I read it at a wrong time. It had every chance of striking a chord within me, but sadly, it didn't. I wish I could point to pertinant issues in the book itself, but I can't - I think it's all me.
I do plan to revisit this book soon though! And maybe update my rating as well :D
February 19, 2015
This book is very unique and captivating. The characters were very interesting and added everything to the story! I think they were developed well. This book was a great ride for me. I enjoyed it. * I was given this book from the author in exchange for an honest review*
March 15, 2015
I found this story enthralling, and I'm not exactly easy to enthrall.
The setting is an alternate reality which depicts forests surrounding industrialized cities with an approximately late nineteenth century stage of technological development. Here a regime of insane viciousness indulges in tyranny over a brainwashed population; critisizing the great Fhyniix is punishable by death – and a horrible one at that: -
‘The profuse smog cast a sickness upon the cornflower buildings and the sky had forfeited its colour to a repugnant, dreary grey…
”All must drop every task and pray in servitude to the Vildarii. Give thanks for the freedom bestowed on you…A very, very naughty citizen, the writer Frederick Widaston, was found with a piece of paper on his person, which speaks words against the third Valdarii Marko. Why insult our holy lord gods? It is malicious bullying and persecution against our beliefs – beliefs that preach only peace and love… The execution will be in two hours; that’s two hours, folks! Don’t miss it; refreshments will be available, free of charge. Now isn’t that nice!”
Of the ruling Vildarii, Marko is elusive, but hideously powerful. We meet the sadistic, golden eyed Fhyniix, whose posters are plastered throughout the cities. William, the sole surviving (and now deranged) Duwaiu, explains to Lilyth, the last remaining member of the tribe of the Amazonian Rhai Angoff, whom he has rescued from an amnesiac existence trapped on a hell plain, how it is Fhyniix’s goal to draw enough evil energy from tyranny and suffering to draw the world and all the spiritual realms into an eternal hell plain.
The unknown first Vildarii? Ah, he’s the most intriguing of them all, and we certainly meet him, but I can’t describe him, because that would be to write a spoiler. I’ll just say that he is a totally unexpected and wonderful creation too.
This story is full of tension and fearsome desolation, both emotional and physical, of fearsome battles with psychic entities, of visions of a world become deranged, of grotesquely funny incidents and larger than life characters. The prose style is, I think, the most original I’ve come across; like Dylan Thomas, the writer often flouts the conventional grammatical rules and makes it a strength and not a weakness.
Lilyth, the female lead (she isn’t quite human) is a wonderful creation, strong and independent, brave and honourable, witty and a huge relief after too many hours spent reading about women who leave the battling to the men. She’s very distinctive looking, possessing both silver hair and eyes, and a very pale face, and has to go disguised, as her wanted poster is everywhere.
William, who runs his subterranean revolutionary ‘Clandestine’ with astounding savagery, is an equally arresting figure, with his massive build, strange tattooed almost maroon skin, jutting cheekbones, beady black eyes and mane of auburn hair, plaited with ornaments.
He also possesses some truly disgusting rugs: -
‘A litter of distasteful patterns between vibrant green pillows that were scattered alongside covers exploding with heavy embroidery. Vomit could only improve his choice of interior decoration.’
That was one of the things I enjoyed most about this book; the wonderful humour; Lilyth, on seeing some dilapidated tree houses belonging to a group of people turned cannibal in the forest, remarks succinctly, ‘What a load of crap’, and that’s typical of the wonderfully debunking style that runs throughout. Typically, too, she nicknames the magic being whom she meets in the forest a ‘cabbage fairy’ a title he doesn’t much appreciate.
I haven’t yet mentioned the jester Vergo, with his wildly uncontrolled libido and pervasive streak of cowardice, but remarkable loyalty. Lilyth first meets him getting drunk in a tavern, which is his favourite activity besides the inevitable one; he sometimes sleeps in bins; he’s always getting into trouble, and he’s madly jealous of the ‘cabbage fairy’.
This fantasy is anything but happy-ever-after stuff. It’s a strongly written, uncompromising tale of a battle between good and evil, but with both sides getting dirty hands in the process. Beneath the fantastical images, it makes serious points about political and religious indoctrination, freedom and tyranny.
Highly recommended by sourpuss.
The setting is an alternate reality which depicts forests surrounding industrialized cities with an approximately late nineteenth century stage of technological development. Here a regime of insane viciousness indulges in tyranny over a brainwashed population; critisizing the great Fhyniix is punishable by death – and a horrible one at that: -
‘The profuse smog cast a sickness upon the cornflower buildings and the sky had forfeited its colour to a repugnant, dreary grey…
”All must drop every task and pray in servitude to the Vildarii. Give thanks for the freedom bestowed on you…A very, very naughty citizen, the writer Frederick Widaston, was found with a piece of paper on his person, which speaks words against the third Valdarii Marko. Why insult our holy lord gods? It is malicious bullying and persecution against our beliefs – beliefs that preach only peace and love… The execution will be in two hours; that’s two hours, folks! Don’t miss it; refreshments will be available, free of charge. Now isn’t that nice!”
Of the ruling Vildarii, Marko is elusive, but hideously powerful. We meet the sadistic, golden eyed Fhyniix, whose posters are plastered throughout the cities. William, the sole surviving (and now deranged) Duwaiu, explains to Lilyth, the last remaining member of the tribe of the Amazonian Rhai Angoff, whom he has rescued from an amnesiac existence trapped on a hell plain, how it is Fhyniix’s goal to draw enough evil energy from tyranny and suffering to draw the world and all the spiritual realms into an eternal hell plain.
The unknown first Vildarii? Ah, he’s the most intriguing of them all, and we certainly meet him, but I can’t describe him, because that would be to write a spoiler. I’ll just say that he is a totally unexpected and wonderful creation too.
This story is full of tension and fearsome desolation, both emotional and physical, of fearsome battles with psychic entities, of visions of a world become deranged, of grotesquely funny incidents and larger than life characters. The prose style is, I think, the most original I’ve come across; like Dylan Thomas, the writer often flouts the conventional grammatical rules and makes it a strength and not a weakness.
Lilyth, the female lead (she isn’t quite human) is a wonderful creation, strong and independent, brave and honourable, witty and a huge relief after too many hours spent reading about women who leave the battling to the men. She’s very distinctive looking, possessing both silver hair and eyes, and a very pale face, and has to go disguised, as her wanted poster is everywhere.
William, who runs his subterranean revolutionary ‘Clandestine’ with astounding savagery, is an equally arresting figure, with his massive build, strange tattooed almost maroon skin, jutting cheekbones, beady black eyes and mane of auburn hair, plaited with ornaments.
He also possesses some truly disgusting rugs: -
‘A litter of distasteful patterns between vibrant green pillows that were scattered alongside covers exploding with heavy embroidery. Vomit could only improve his choice of interior decoration.’
That was one of the things I enjoyed most about this book; the wonderful humour; Lilyth, on seeing some dilapidated tree houses belonging to a group of people turned cannibal in the forest, remarks succinctly, ‘What a load of crap’, and that’s typical of the wonderfully debunking style that runs throughout. Typically, too, she nicknames the magic being whom she meets in the forest a ‘cabbage fairy’ a title he doesn’t much appreciate.
I haven’t yet mentioned the jester Vergo, with his wildly uncontrolled libido and pervasive streak of cowardice, but remarkable loyalty. Lilyth first meets him getting drunk in a tavern, which is his favourite activity besides the inevitable one; he sometimes sleeps in bins; he’s always getting into trouble, and he’s madly jealous of the ‘cabbage fairy’.
This fantasy is anything but happy-ever-after stuff. It’s a strongly written, uncompromising tale of a battle between good and evil, but with both sides getting dirty hands in the process. Beneath the fantastical images, it makes serious points about political and religious indoctrination, freedom and tyranny.
Highly recommended by sourpuss.
May 7, 2016
I received this book through Booklikes in exchange for an honest review.So I think this book would have been more successful with proper proofreading and editing. There were multiple grammatical mistakes, making it difficult to read. At times I had to reread sections multiple times to figure out what the author was trying to say. Also, there were many instances of incorrect word usage, which likewise made it difficult and frustrating to read.As far as plot goes, I wouldn't really say there is much of one. Lilyth pretty much just journeys around, going from one creepy, abusive male character to the next.Which leads to my next point: characters. The characters were horrible. The book follows Lilyth who is arrogant, narcissistic, and completely clueless of everything. I get that she has memory loss, but her outspokenness constantly puts her and the other characters in danger. I like female characters who speak their mind, but Lilyth never thinks about the consequences of her actions. She is constantly quieted by the male characters, usually by having them physically cover her mouth. Lilyth sometimes makes a good point in her outrage, but her words are never taken seriously since she is either ignored (calling a man out for treating women as sexual objects) or quieted by males characters (her fight with the bartender over only addressing Sky and not her). Lilyth feels like an attempt at a strong, feminist character, but is really an unsuccessful one who seems to support the assumption that men should be in charge and not women. I want a female character who is strong and smart and can actually act as a force in the book, rather than a hollow form that just follows the men around. As for the male characters, they aren't very good either. Without giving too much away, I can safely say that most of the male characters' only functions seem to bestow various abuses against Lilyth, from blatant sexual harassment to assault. Lilyth's feelings towards these males is rather confusing as she is sexually attracted to some of them, but also offended at their advances. It feel like a bad rape paradigm. I was very disappointed with this book in terms of plot and characters.The only redeeming point for me was the creative fantasy world and some of the monsters, but due to confusing descriptions and grammatical errors it was often difficult to fully understand these ideas.
June 10, 2015
Title: The Lament of Me
The Lament of Sky by B.B. Wynter
Reviewed by S. Davis
June 1, 2015
9:00 p.m.
The Lament of Sky by B.B. Wynter begins with a woman who has no recollection of who she is or where she has come from. In fact, Lilyth can only remember the past year of her life, which involves her floating around on a school campus with no real purpose to her life. In the course of an evening, the school and its inhabitants are destroyed, killed, and tortured and Lilyth is whisked away by a strange man who has all of this knowledge about her that she cannot recollect for herself.
The idea behind the novel itself is so unique and has the potential to be extremely interesting. However, it was not executed as well as it could have been. There is a lot of room for improvement in many areas of the novel, but the plot of the novel itself has the ability to be tremendously prospective.
One of the main concerns of the novel was the fact that there were too many details for the reader to take in at once. It would have been helpful if a prologue explaining the fantastical elements from Wynter’s imagination so that the reader is not as clueless as the protagonist, Lilyth, is at the beginning of the novel. The reader feels just as overwhelmed as Lilyth when William, the lead male character, is explaining who and what she is to her. The continuous bombardment of details is exceptionally staggering for the reader to keep up with.
The other main concern of the novel is the run-on-type sentences that are too wordy and detailed. Sometimes the reader gets lost trying to follow along with the numerous adjectives and adverbs the author weaves in the sentences that it is easy to forget what the reader is attempting to comprehend.
All in all, I would say that The Lament of Sky had a lot of elements to iron.
I would give this novel one-and-a-half out of five stars.
Until next time,
S. Davis
www.mcwpub.blogspot.com
The Lament of Sky by B.B. Wynter
Reviewed by S. Davis
June 1, 2015
9:00 p.m.
The Lament of Sky by B.B. Wynter begins with a woman who has no recollection of who she is or where she has come from. In fact, Lilyth can only remember the past year of her life, which involves her floating around on a school campus with no real purpose to her life. In the course of an evening, the school and its inhabitants are destroyed, killed, and tortured and Lilyth is whisked away by a strange man who has all of this knowledge about her that she cannot recollect for herself.
The idea behind the novel itself is so unique and has the potential to be extremely interesting. However, it was not executed as well as it could have been. There is a lot of room for improvement in many areas of the novel, but the plot of the novel itself has the ability to be tremendously prospective.
One of the main concerns of the novel was the fact that there were too many details for the reader to take in at once. It would have been helpful if a prologue explaining the fantastical elements from Wynter’s imagination so that the reader is not as clueless as the protagonist, Lilyth, is at the beginning of the novel. The reader feels just as overwhelmed as Lilyth when William, the lead male character, is explaining who and what she is to her. The continuous bombardment of details is exceptionally staggering for the reader to keep up with.
The other main concern of the novel is the run-on-type sentences that are too wordy and detailed. Sometimes the reader gets lost trying to follow along with the numerous adjectives and adverbs the author weaves in the sentences that it is easy to forget what the reader is attempting to comprehend.
All in all, I would say that The Lament of Sky had a lot of elements to iron.
I would give this novel one-and-a-half out of five stars.
Until next time,
S. Davis
www.mcwpub.blogspot.com
April 2, 2015
I'm somewhat at a loss as to how best to describe this story. At its core, this is an epic fantasy adventure with a seemingly ragtag assemblage of characters, but at the same time it's more that. The writing and dialog is heavily stylized prose, but not so much as to make it difficult to follow.
World building as well is unique in this story in that the characters' histories unfold to us as the main character, Lilyth, begins to piece together the parts of her life that she had forgotten. We are given, mostly through dialog, quite a bit of history on the people and magic of this world, but of the world itself, we learn very little. It seems almost like an Arthurian tale until we suddenly see a character with a gun who speaks of an airship. While some might see this as frustrating, it fits with the air of mystery that surrounds the story and Lilyth herself.
My only hesitation comes from the insertion of plain language, mostly insults, curses, and the occasional innuendo, that seems at odds with the creative language at play. Though to be honest, this is not the first high fantasy I have read recently that has employed the same plain speech, so I am beginning to think this is now common.
Without spoiling anything, I will mention that I was NOT expecting the ending, but I am pleased that it set up for what looks like a continuation of the adventure. If so, I am looking forward to it.
World building as well is unique in this story in that the characters' histories unfold to us as the main character, Lilyth, begins to piece together the parts of her life that she had forgotten. We are given, mostly through dialog, quite a bit of history on the people and magic of this world, but of the world itself, we learn very little. It seems almost like an Arthurian tale until we suddenly see a character with a gun who speaks of an airship. While some might see this as frustrating, it fits with the air of mystery that surrounds the story and Lilyth herself.
My only hesitation comes from the insertion of plain language, mostly insults, curses, and the occasional innuendo, that seems at odds with the creative language at play. Though to be honest, this is not the first high fantasy I have read recently that has employed the same plain speech, so I am beginning to think this is now common.
Without spoiling anything, I will mention that I was NOT expecting the ending, but I am pleased that it set up for what looks like a continuation of the adventure. If so, I am looking forward to it.
February 26, 2015
I will preface this review by saying that "The Lament of Sky" is my first foray into this genre of dark fantasy/romance and I have nothing really to benchmark it to. The closest thing to this that I have read is Dante's Inferno.
That said, I was totally amazed with the author's use of vocabulary, prose, and descriptions that created fascinating imagery of the story's characters, scenes, and story line. An Amazon review of this book likened the author to Dickinson and Tolkien. While these references may be jumping the gun somewhat, I believe that BB Wynter definitely has the potential to be a leading author in her genre in the years to come.
I will admit that after reading the first few pages, I was skeptical if this genre would be interesting to me, or that I would be able to finish the 314 pages. But the more I read, the more it drew me in, and I continued to be even more impressed with the author's writing style as I went along.
I fell in love with the main character, the feisty Lilyth, who fights for survival against the ruling Vildarii regime and enlists the help of Sky and others in a plot with many twists and turns. It all comes together in a surprising final climatic scene.
I would strongly recommend this book. The substance of this author's writing should not be missed.
That said, I was totally amazed with the author's use of vocabulary, prose, and descriptions that created fascinating imagery of the story's characters, scenes, and story line. An Amazon review of this book likened the author to Dickinson and Tolkien. While these references may be jumping the gun somewhat, I believe that BB Wynter definitely has the potential to be a leading author in her genre in the years to come.
I will admit that after reading the first few pages, I was skeptical if this genre would be interesting to me, or that I would be able to finish the 314 pages. But the more I read, the more it drew me in, and I continued to be even more impressed with the author's writing style as I went along.
I fell in love with the main character, the feisty Lilyth, who fights for survival against the ruling Vildarii regime and enlists the help of Sky and others in a plot with many twists and turns. It all comes together in a surprising final climatic scene.
I would strongly recommend this book. The substance of this author's writing should not be missed.
February 27, 2015
The Lament of Sky is the story of Lilyth, a human who walks among gods. She appears to be some kind of magnetic channeler of the godly energy, at least her ego is large enough to encompass such a power. In this fantasy, however, her main power seems to be the power over the male gods who walk with her. First there is William, a lesser god known as a Duwaiu. Then there is Sky, a stronger magic being whose extent remains a mystery. With Sky by her side Lilyth journeys over the land to find her rightful place and try to restore her memory. There is the idea the journey is part of a larger plan to save the world from the cruel fiery god, Fhoenix.
Wynter’s prose is florid and fantastical, which will be catnip to lovers of fantasy although I found it opaque in places. The dream-like pace of the story gives a flowing forward movement which compels the reader to follow Lilyth on her journey. The ending surprised me, which is good. I didn’t find closure, however, and wonder if this is meant to be part of a larger sequence of works. Overall, I’d like to hear more of Lilyth and William, and especially more about the magic being Sky with the scintillating blue eyes. Four stars — a nice read for a cold winter day.
Wynter’s prose is florid and fantastical, which will be catnip to lovers of fantasy although I found it opaque in places. The dream-like pace of the story gives a flowing forward movement which compels the reader to follow Lilyth on her journey. The ending surprised me, which is good. I didn’t find closure, however, and wonder if this is meant to be part of a larger sequence of works. Overall, I’d like to hear more of Lilyth and William, and especially more about the magic being Sky with the scintillating blue eyes. Four stars — a nice read for a cold winter day.
November 11, 2015
Not your typical Fantasy. It was a book that I didn’t want to put down. Still, there was so much going on that I found myself re-reading passages over and over just to get all that I could out of it. Normally I would say that as a criticism, but for this book it really isn’t. It is really was quite the page turning adventure.
I can honestly say this was not what I expected. This book is about Lilyth. At the beginning she seems to be not much more than a foundling. It doesn’t take long to find out she is much more than that, even if it takes a while to realize what she is capable of. Violence follows her wherever she goes, at first she has no memories to tell her why. As she regains her memories she is thrust into a civil war that threatens the fabric of reality itself.
This book surely did not go in the direction I thought it would and was one surprising turn after another. If you enjoy fantasy, you will enjoy this book, just give yourself plenty of time to read and absorb the pulse pounding adventure. I am looking forward to following the next installments to this series. Where this book ends promises to be great place to start again and there are so many unanswered questions.
I gratefully received a copy of this book in return for a fair and honest review
I can honestly say this was not what I expected. This book is about Lilyth. At the beginning she seems to be not much more than a foundling. It doesn’t take long to find out she is much more than that, even if it takes a while to realize what she is capable of. Violence follows her wherever she goes, at first she has no memories to tell her why. As she regains her memories she is thrust into a civil war that threatens the fabric of reality itself.
This book surely did not go in the direction I thought it would and was one surprising turn after another. If you enjoy fantasy, you will enjoy this book, just give yourself plenty of time to read and absorb the pulse pounding adventure. I am looking forward to following the next installments to this series. Where this book ends promises to be great place to start again and there are so many unanswered questions.
I gratefully received a copy of this book in return for a fair and honest review
April 16, 2015
Nice book to read, you enter to the world of Gods Duwaiu and the entities Vildarii, Lilyth fight a lot for save her life because Vildarii want to exterminate the race of Rhai-Angof .
Well written and BB has style for set the story and narrate it, characters are good.
I definitely recommend this Dark/Fantasy book, the lovers of this genre will like it a lot!
Well written and BB has style for set the story and narrate it, characters are good.
I definitely recommend this Dark/Fantasy book, the lovers of this genre will like it a lot!
December 18, 2015
“The Lament of Sky” is a unique take on a traditional fantasy novel. Ms. Wynter has written a story with a creative plot, and distinct world.
Read full review in the 2015 Holiday issue of InD'tale Magazine.
Read full review in the 2015 Holiday issue of InD'tale Magazine.
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