Foiled

by Jessica James

268 pages, Paperback

Published September 1, 2025

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Reviews

[Daisy · Rating 1 out of 5]

I made it 35 pages in, from the start it was difficult to read and understand with the lack of dialogue spacing on the page, commas, and the constantly changing storyline/characters/setting. In the first chapter we are introduced to 6 different characters which lack enough description to create solid imagery in order to follow the story. While also the immediate use of nicknames for poorly described characters creates even more confusion. Also in the first chapter we are in 4 different settings?? But we have no idea what city the story is in other than it is somewhat close to the state capital considering the characters in their childhood had a field trip there. So we have a death in the beginning of chapter one and a plane crash in the beginning of chapter two, this to me seems like the author wrote a story full of tropes to get the reader attentions and forgot to take into account the actual art of writing.