👑🐺🩷 Savage Crown ARC Review 🩷🐺👑
Book 2 of the Bonded by Fate duet
⭐⭐✨ (rounded up)
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I thoroughly enjoyed Savage Crown, but sadly cannot say the same for Savage Crown. 🥺
🫵🏼 Savage Crown is for readers who:
• enjoy romantasy with shape shifters
• enjoy a romantic storyline mixed with war and adventure
• enjoy romantasy with a headstrong FMC
• appreciate a duology with shorter books
• enjoy Leia Stone's other books
• appreciate no on page explicit scenes
The Positives:
📓 Savage Crown wraps up the Bonded by Fate duet with a thrilling mix of action, heart, and magic. It's a story about freedom, sacrifice, and redefining power told through a romantic bond and high-stakes fantasy worldbuilding. Fans of protectors and warriors, magical legacies, and romances that matter beyond the lovers themselves will likely find it a rewarding finale.
Brynn's journey is about far more than just gaining physical strength. It's a bone deep transformation of identity and purpose. Her evolution reflects the idea that true power comes from breaking the confines that you, society, and others place on you, not just raw, brute force. The physical transformation she undergoes symbolizes shedding fear and embracing one's fullest potential.
⛓️💥 A certain person's use of mind-control magic is more than simply a plot threat or device. It represents the ultimate form of oppression: the loss of agency. The story repeatedly asks what it truly means to be free, especially when one's thoughts and choices can be manipulated. This aspect is used as a metaphor for systemic oppression and loss of self.
🤝🏽 The narrative challenges traditional notions of rulership tied to inherited status or brute power. Leadership is reframed as service, humility, and shared destiny with the people.
🗺️ The majority of the world was built in Traitor Wolf, with Savage Crown expanding the world. I enjoyed seeing a bit more of the world and learning more about how some of it works.
The Negatives
📕 I thoroughly enjoyed Traitor Wolf, but didn't enjoy Savage Crown as much.
⌛It's a pretty short book (ebook is 231 pages) and I think it needed to be a bit longer. It felt rushed and things, especially certain things, happened too quickly for my tastes. One example: Brynn forgives Kaelric basically instantly, and I know they're mates but damn.
I want them to have to work for it at least a little. I want to feel that he's sorry, I want to feel her emotions about the whole situation. A longer chat between them regarding the situation would've been great.
"Forgive me, even though I said I’d never forgive you. It was a lie. It is myself who I will never forgive if you stay mad at me."
I really didn't like this part of the "apology." Especially the last sentence because it feels manipulative. He can't forgive himself as long as she stays mad at me. Not even if she forgives him, but if she stays mad.
But I also don't like the first sentence (or the second) in the apology letter. It started off emotionally mature and got me right in the heart (talking about not knowing how to love), but then he closes with this. And then signs off "Your Mate, Kaelric" - it felt like he was reminding her they're mates, so she really doesn't have a choice but to forgive him.
It reads as more juvenile overall, some of the dialogue in particular. Dialogue was part of why I enjoyed Traitor Wolf so much, but here it was (at times) stilted and felt a bit flat.
✍🏼 While I enjoy a quicker pace, this felt too fast. Some things needed/deserved more exploration and/or explanation, some things happened so quickly. There was a good bit of build up for a couple things and then they occurred and finished too quickly.
Tension never really built for me and I found that I didn't particularly care what happened (aside from hoping that for once Brynn's bullheaded behavior would have consequences). It read like I was only skimming for the highlights, and never read got deep into the meat of the story.
🎙️The dialogue felt stilted at times, not as dynamic as in book 1. I didn't enjoy the banter in this one as much as the previous book, either. Brynn read as a bit immature here, something I don't recall noticing in book 1. When Brynn says "Girl power." Really annoyed me lol.
She acknowledges that Kaelric is on the war front talking to Cassian. On the way to meet up with Kaelric, she thinks: "...Leaving home had felt like stepping toward war. Now I was certain of it." She literally knew she was headed to the war front, so saying it felt like stepping toward war... Well, you quite literally are. Or maybe my brain is just overthinking it.
🗺️ For fantasy fans, I feel like it's a bit light on worldbuilding and lore. It stayed surface level, and even then it wasn't super detailed.
🔮 The choice in how magic was handled, I'm torn. On one hand, it's a different and potentially interesting choice. But since this is the final book, we don't get to experience it beyond the immediate reaction. I would love to experience more of the after the events at the mountain, to see how it's handled down the road. To see if it truly does cause real change. How Brynn went about this event is true to her character, but damn it Brynn. 😂
And how/why was Cassian where he was at the end?
👥 While the MCs had a lot of development in book 1, they didn't have any meaningful development in this book (particularly in regards to the romance).
"The family tree was starting to confuse me." Maybe it's just due to (or in part due to) my brain not functioning as normal, but I struggled to keep some of the connections and names straight. I don't recall having an issue with that in book 1, but, again, that could just be my memory not being back to normal yet and I did struggle to some degree. I don't remember either way. But we do get more secondary and tertiary characters in this book, though.
Brynn is stubborn and strong willed, nearing a point of being bullheaded at times. She's gonna do what she wants, what she thinks is right and screw anyone who stands in her way. And because it always worked out fine time and time again, it felt contrived in places. She didn't care (much, if any) about the undue stress she was putting on her loved ones, the danger she put herself and others in. With little to no training, she's able to best the best swordsman around, but she does have a super-enchanted sword guiding her, so I can suspend disbelief to some extent.
She forces two people she cares deeply about to do something they very much don't want to do (something that could've ended VERY badly for them if the results had been different). It felt selfish of her. Typing all this out is making me realize I really do not like Brynn now. 😆
🩷 The romance worked so well for me in Traitor Wolf. However, Kaelric isn't present for much of the book and most of what we get with him is mind speak between he and Brynn. Their dynamic didn't feel like a healthy partnership. At one point, she knows he isn't going to "let" her do the dangerous thing she wants to, so she plans to lie. Or all the times she tells him she isn't part of his pack, she isn't his Alpha, so she doesn't have to listen to him. But then when she is, she still does what she wants. I wasn't sold on their love and at times found it made me uncomfortable.
I'm not even the biggest fan of love triangles, but Traitor Wolf left me thinking that might be in store. This book shut that down, but in a way that I didn't love. It made me sad for the other guy.
🌶️ Fade to black. What I didn't enjoy was "I wanted to bed my mate. I’d been patient. So had he. It was time." Idk, the way it was handled just didn't work for me.
Thank you @ Leia Stone author for the opportunity to read this eARC. All thoughts and opinions expressed are my own and freely given.