The goddess needs a nobody. The prince needs a miracle. Soli Graymind might be both.
Soli has spent most of her life being invisible—an indentured servant, a library mold-scrubber, the girl no one sees unless she’s in the way. So, when the king’s guards show up with swords drawn, she assumes it’s a mistake.
It’s not.
Moments later, she’s standing in the throne room while the king tells her she’s been chosen to retrieve a set of ancient keys—only the keys can save the goddess and stop the chaos beyond the palace walls. Because the world isn’t waiting to be saved.
It’s already burning.
And beside him stands Prince Kaelen: devastatingly beautiful, mercilessly cold, and certain Soli won’t survive the hard journey ahead.
He’s probably right.
But Soli's survived a lifetime of hard everything. She may be a nobody—no training, no real power, and no idea why she was chosen—but she refuses to be expendable. Even if the quest ahead is anything but simple. When assassins, monsters, and impossible choices fracture the fragile alliance slowly building with the Prince, Soli realizes she can’t hide in the shadows anymore.
Because, for the first time in her life, she has something to lose…
A high-stakes romantasy filled with slow-burn romance, found family, and a heroine who never expected to be anyone’s first choice.
ALYSSA DAY is a New York Times and USA Today bestselling author of romantasy, paranormal romance, and mystery novels whose books have sold more than a million copies and been translated into many languages, although she’s holding out for Klingon. She has lived with and battled chronic depression for her entire life and finally admitted it to her family—and the world—in 2014. Life is better now, because depression lies and tells us we’re alone.
We’re not.
Alyssa (as Alesia Holliday) is a diehard Buckeye from The Ohio State University who graduated summa cum laude from Capital University Law School in Ohio and practiced as a trial lawyer for several years before coming to her senses and letting the voices in her head loose on paper. She has lived all over the country and all over the world, including the Philippines, Turkey, and Japan.
When she’s not traveling to new adventures, she lives in Florida with her Navy Guy husband, spends time with her two amazing kids, and rescues dogs.
this reads somehow simultaneously juvenile and incomprehensible at the same time. in the first 40 pages, we get kidnapped from our crappy job by the kings guards, meet the king AND the prince, get a bath, meet like 8 new characters, be escorted to touch a cursed amulet, get a bunch of worldly exposition weirdly freely given that we are a literal peasant, watch someone spontaneously burst into flames from touching said cursed amulet, touch the cursed amulet ourselves, get possessed by a goddess and begin to formulate a quest plan with the king's closest advisors.
i simply cannot.
**thank you to Entangled / Red Tower for the ARC copy**
Everything is so one-dimensional, there are no unique characteristics or hints of intrigue, and the pacing feels very jumbled. DNFing ARCs makes me feel very guilty because I usually feel obligated to push through, but I’m just done with this one. I just can’t; I’ve been in such a slump for the past few months, and I need good, quality literature.
Thank you to Entangled Publishing for sending me an advanced reader copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
The blurb had me immediately interested, especially with the promise of exploring depression in a fantasy setting. Instead, I spent most of the book fighting the urge to scream, 'Yes, I KNOW she's a Nobody.' The book makes sure you don't forget.
The world-building also felt underdeveloped and I never felt fully immersed in the world.
Then we have the purple-eyed prince who is immediately fascinated by our 'NOBODY' FMC and was screaming 'Who did this to you?' and ready to die for her at first glance. Unfortunately, insta-lust is a trope I rarely enjoy, and this was no exception.
I kept reading because I was convinced the story would eventually win me over. It did not. I should have DNF'd.
Thank you Entangled Publishing/ Red Tower for the ARC. Soli suffers from Gray Mind (GM) and is branded for it. I love how the book addresses some of the stigma that can be associated with depression. She is tasked with going on a quest that ultimately leads to her freedom as an indentured servant which caused great physical and mental suffering. Soli tries to find herself as she sheds her old identity which she struggles with greatly when the Valourian Prince takes an interest in her. I found the book does read YA. I don’t want to say too much as even mentioning some tropes can be spoilers. This was a 3.5 ⭐️ for me, rounded up to 4. I did like the concept. I do feel like it’s missing some elements that may have been edited out causing some readers to dnf as it seems to have an impact on the pacing. Overall, I enjoyed it. The epilogue reads more like a last chapter so don’t skip or skim over. I’m looking forward to book 2.
“The bravest people I’ve ever met aren’t those who don’t fear. They’re those who fear and yet move toward the challenge—fear and yet protect the innocent. Find a way to pretend your courage is greater than your fear, and soon it will rise to meet the danger and become so.”
I really loved the concept of Nobody’s Quest. The play on words within a prophecy sounded fun, and I was interested to read about a main character struggling with depression undertaking a great journey. Unfortunately, I thought the delivery of this story had some issues that prevented me from really connecting to the characters or world.
The overarching idea presented in the book, that someone low in society with no powers can be the chosen one, is good, and the quest provided structure for the novel. But I found the bulk of the quest boring. There wasn’t much escalating tension, and most of the time it seemed the FMC had an impenetrable bubble around her. No matter what obstacles she was utterly unprepared to face, most of the time she came out ultimately unscathed. And while I appreciated the inclusion of depression in the form of Gray Mind and thought the descriptions of the attacks Soli's own mind initiated were well done, her struggle seemed sugar-coated to me because she had so much overwhelming support from those around her. It was predominantly presented as an internal struggle, and only briefly touched on the complications depression can bring to interpersonal relationships in real life.
I really struggled with the world-building. I felt like there were misses on both high-level and detailed descriptions. Places and terms were thrown in without building a history or reference for them, and I struggled to build a clear picture in my mind of the society or setting. There were also a lot of random facts about the magic system added throughout the novel that seemed out of nowhere. By the end of the book, I was not surprised at “surprising” magical events because I’d been conditioned that there was no rhyme or reason to when new information was presented.
From the beginning I was confused by Soli. She so quickly alternated between cowardness and boldness that I couldn’t grasp what her personality really was. There was so little focus on her background too. For example, she says Trick is her best friend but doesn’t provide any details about how they became friends or practiced their friendship. This is emblematic of this novel telling rather than showing character history, which prevented me from building the characters up in my mind, and forming connections to them. The supporting characters were all rather bland; there was maybe one morally gray character in the entire novel. They were all evil for no reason, or so sweet it was giving me cavities. There was no nuance, and so there was no range in the treatment of Soli as a Gray Mind to challenge and elevate her personal growth in a way I was craving.
While the novel’s story could stand on its own without the romantic subplot, it was a constant focus. There are individual moments that I thought were fun (like when Soli and the Prince pretend to be mercenaries), but overall, I wasn’t into the romance. It’s very much instant love and didn’t bring any kind of meaningful storyline to the novel. Romance would also occur in moments that made no sense, which is one of my biggest literary pet peeves. While they did have struggles in the relationship, it felt very cliché and I thought it could have been more closely associated with the Gray Mind to bring more emphasis to it. That told me as a reader that these two people haven’t looked at each other much beyond the surface.
I really wanted to like this novel, but it ultimately fell short for me. I could see why people would enjoy it; it has a lot of elements that I usually find super enjoyable. But that missing connection to the people and places prevented me from really getting into it.
Thanks to Entangled Publishing for an Advanced Reader Copy in exchange for my honest review.
Soli Graymind is a nobody. She’s an indentured servant, who scrubs the floor at the library, who stuffs word clippings in her hair secretly so the Sisters of the library won’t punish her for her love of reading. One day, to her surprise she’s gathered up from the floor by the King’s guards, and whisked away to the palace. She’s informed that she and the others surrounding her were selected because they are all nobodies. Furthermore, one of these nobodies could possibly be the key to saving the kingdom…should they survive touching the amulet, and the quest that follows. Soli, having been a nobody her whole life, knows this must be a huge mistake and realizes her life is in immediate danger.
Nobody’s Quest is a fun adventure filled read with suspense, thrills, humor, found family, and romance. The FMC struggles with a mental health issue called the “Gray Mind.” Soli has always believed her social status is servitude, her mental health makes her useless to the kingdom, and she’s of no importance to anyone, let alone saving a kingdom. Nobody’s Quest is not only a story about an adventure quest, but it’s the quest of a nobody growing and believing in themself until they become a somebody. This story is a window into those who struggle with self-doubt and how courage, friendship, and self-confidence can change a person’s journey through life.
This was a wonderful read with lots of humor, compassion, romance and excitement.
Thank you to NetGalley and Entangled Publishing for the eARC in return for my unbiased review.
2 🌟 I read the whole thing so you don’t have to!! I’ll say that if you’re only looking for a book that has an FMC with depression and you don’t mind every other element of a book to be lacking, then this is the book for you (this is not sarcasm). What I struggled with: everything.
✨ The writing. Everything felt juvenile to the point I wondered if it should be YA? I found the dialogue to be cringe and the author spoon fed you every detail they found necessary but skimmed or didn’t even acknowledge elements that would make the world and characters feel fleshed out. I unfortunately guessed from the first chapter that the writing wouldn’t be for me but persevered because I thought “oh it might get better” and I can confirm that it in fact does not.
✨ The FMC. I appreciate what the author tried to do in writing an FMC with depression and overcoming the hardships she had but I struggled with the character overall. First off, her whole thing is that she’s a “nobody” but it doesn’t take her any time to start talking back to the highest members of society. To the point where her inner dialogue is continuously “who do I think I am talking to these people?” but continuing to do it instead of slowly unlearning habits of keeping her head down (which would have been more believable). She’d try to be funny but it came out forced and unnatural. Also, she goes crazy trying to save someone she literally met 5 minutes ago but couldn’t muster up the energy to say a single word when her “best friend” is about to be unalived? Make it make sense. And the fact that the entire story is told from her perspective you don’t really get an escape.
✨ The world. What world? Nothing was fleshed out and the magic was interspersed with no rhyme or reason. It seems like there is a caste system but the only levels that had any relevance was the gray mind, sorcerer, prince/ ruler, and goddess but everything in between felt vague. It did not feel like a true world at all to me.
✨ The romance. Tell me why this man was saying things like “who did this to you?” like a chapter after they met?? My guy is also supposed to be a prince (not a spoiler since it’s in the first 20 pages) and you’re telling me he’s head over heels for this “nobody” immediately? It’s just so unbelievable and again no logic to why he felt this way. We can say it’s insta-love but it felt ridiculous the whole way through. Also, when he said “I’m a bandit” I lost it. Had to put the book down and walk away because that was not the line for me. The romance is at least 50% of the book so just all around I found it to be lacking.
LASTLY who puts in a 20 page epilogue?! That’s insane! I called it quits after three of those pages because it was not going to change how I felt about the story. If it was not clear, I would not recommend this book.
Thank you to Red Tower/Entangled and Tantor Audio for entrusting me with a gifted galley and ALC!
Nobody's Quest by Alyssa Day The Nobody Chronicles book 1 Releases June 2!
Narrated by Maeve York Maeve did an excellent job with this story! I have enjoyed books by her before, so was happy to see her name on this one! I loved her emotion and the voices she used for the characters. She especially brought our main gal to life with both humor and somber notes when she is struggling with her depression. Audio note: My brain needs faster speeds for audio and this narration/recording sounded great at higher speeds.
Dangerous quest to release a trapped goddess Found family Mental health rep Prophecy/chosen one Slow burn Who did this to you One horse
Soli is nobody. Indentured to a library to scrub floors. But one day she is brought to the king. They need a "nobody" to defeat the goddess of war. She is sent on a quest with an unlikely crew to be the last hope of the kingdom.
I enjoyed this adventure! It was great to see Soli go on such a journey to no only being free, but to believing in herself! It was also fun that she was such a knowledge nerd from books, but then would run into problems with real world - like not knowing how to swim. I also liked the crew she found herself with and their antics. The MMC and Soli had great chemistry and certain things were discovered along the way for him too, though I admit to still side eyeing him a bit after some comments he made along the way. Finally, I'm especially happy with a sassy new addition a the end that I can't wait to see more in the next book! Will be looking forward to the next part of the adventure!
This unfortunately read like a romantasy trope and cliche check list, with extremely shallow characters and a "who hurt you?" from a supposedly "mercilessly cold" prince who everyone fears to an indentured servant he's only glimpsed twice within the first 30 pages.
Thank you to Entangled/Red Tower for the advanced copy.
5 stars - thank you to Entangled Publishing for including me in the ARC campaign! A fantastic, five-star, romantic fantasy. I loved the concept of this book and the amount of different classic fantasy elements that were woven in. Soli Graymind has been marked for making gray mind disease and is deemed a nobody, until several soldiers come to find her at request of the king. Soli is exactly what the king needs, a nobody. Someone tied to nothing, unknown by all, a true nobody. To save the old goddess, a nobody needs to go on a quest. Soli takes on this epic challenge to save their kingdom. The romantic fantasty aspect was spot on! It wasn’t a romantasy, it was a true romantic fantasy and one of the best I’ve read in a long time. I loved the way Day was able to focus so much on mental illness, especially depression, throughout this book. It was handled with great care and was such an important part of the story. I am already looking forward to the continuation of the series!
I thought this book sounded so interesting but unfortunately it fell flat for me.
I loved the idea of a quest & the side characters were all very interesting & enjoyable! I also really liked the mental health representation in our main character Soli. She had so much potential & there were definitely moments where she shined.
What I didn’t love was trying to figure out the magic & history. I don’t feel like it was explained very well & there was very little world building. I also felt Soli was a bit too young to be the female heroine. She seemed to constantly need affirmations from her group. I think if she was a bit older & more sure of herself it would have worked better. Once she was chosen by the goddess, I feel like that should have been quite the confidence boost but she continuously questioned herself.
Also what was that ending??? So random. I don’t think I’ll be continuing the series.
Thank you Red Tower & Entangled publishing for the early copy to review.
This was such a unique story! It kept me interested the whole way through their journey and trying to figure out more about each of the characters on the quest and whether I trusted them or not. Some really surprised me! I also love the representation in it as Soli deals with her disability through their difficult quest. I absolutely loved the epilogue though. The new character introduced and some events that happened just before have me so excited for where the next book will lead!
Thank you to the publisher for the early copy of this book!
Both a devastating ending but also hopeful for what’s next, I’m excited for the next book and the continuation of this quest after the author left off with it unfinished but not a total cliffhanger!
You follow the story through the eyes of Soli - a girl who has spent most of her life in indentured servitude at the library cleaning and marked as a Gray mind because of the way her brain works and sometimes send her into this headspace she cannot escape from sometimes for weeks at a time and she’s forced to shutdown and become unresponsive. When she’s summoned by the king, along with other “nobody’s” from his kingdom to complete a goddesses quest and find keys to unlock her from her prison her sister trapped her in and save their dying realm, turns out she is the true nobody in the prophecy and is able to touch the amulet that burns all others to dust. She is sent off on a mission along with the prince she finds immensely attractive, her thief friend, and several others to collect the other keys on a dangerous quest before the year runs out and the world can no longer be saved.
This book was filled with exciting battle scenes that had me on the edge of my seat, plenty of tension with the MMC and a bound of friendship and found family between the FMC and the rest of the quest gang that had me happy she finally found people to rely on. I was so nervous for this group the entire book and couldn’t believe a few of the reveals at the end and the devastation of losing anyone along the way. I can’t wait to see how the author continues this story next and continues to build this complex and immense world into the princes fallen kingdom. Overall my rating 4.7/5!
Thanks to the author for the gifted copy, all opinions given are my own!
Oh I absolutely loved this book! I'm always down for an epic quest and Nobody's Quest definitely did not disappoint! I loved watching Soli find her footing in the world and come out of her shell. Soli and her rag tag little group of companions have totally wormed their way into my heart, especially Chitai and Sergeant Neville, what can I say? I'm a sucker for badass women and fatherly figures! I really can't wait to see where the story goes and I'm beyond excited to see more of Kaelen and Soli's *ahem* love story.
You can find this review of Nobody's Quest on my blog, Heart's Content!
A big shout out and thank you to the publisher for providing me with an early copy of Nobody’s Quest in exchange for an honest review!
Side Note: This book was read while I was travelling, sight seeing and being generally busy. So any aspect of this book I speak about should be considered at a measure higher than mentioned. For example, if I say the pace was even, consider it as the pace having been swift. The only reason I mention the possibility of this elevated measure is because of break-reading (to read with considerable gaps between one sitting and the next) which can sometimes influence the experience of a book. Imagine it being similar to rounding up of an estimate.
The blurb of this book drew me in faster than a hook and I was extremely pleased that the release date of the book was so close, because it meant I could prioritise starting it immediately. Which is exactly what I did.
I believe good books are made not by its many elements, but by how difficult it is to separate one element from another while speaking about the book. Day has achieved that in her story, which means when I speak about the world-building, it’s hard not to rope in the plot or the characters and vice versa. However, I shall endeavour to do so anyway.
The writing in this book is what immediately stood out to me. Outside of the fact that the book jumps straight into the “meat” of the story, the writing has you dive deep into the psyche and situation of the FMC and there’s something emotional and addictive about that in a book. I personally think that the aspect that draws a reader deeper into a book is the emotional themes in it that resonate within them. Even if I may not have the same struggles as the heroine, I have experienced the same feelings as her. The author does a wonderful job keeping that thread of emotion alive throughout the whole book.
This was my first Alyssa Day book, but there’s something about her voice that feels so familiar, like I’ve walked this path and heard this tale many times before—in a good way. It didn’t take me more than a moment to lose myself in this book and I was so grateful for that. This is simply kudos to the author’s writing.
The world-building is honestly quite extensive, but somehow, it does not read or feel that way. There’s something interesting the author has done, by tucking a little bit of every element into each ‘strand’ that runs the length of the story, that renders a sense of balance and ease while reading the book. This means that the world building begins the moment the first word is read; you understand the socioeconomic conditions, some of the magical elements and are introduced to the characters that are most important/influential to the story nearly immediately. The world isn’t overwhelming, though it absolutely should have been given the several sub and main plots that expand through the course of the book and add more details about the magic, the people and the rules of the world. But something about the book makes it feel light on the heavy details and rightfully heavy in the important places.
However, I will say—by not saying much as I’ve done this whole review—despite everything that has been revealed, you will leave the story with more questions than answers. It doesn’t end on a cliff-hanger, no, it’s more a … hill of potential we’re left on.
As mentioned before, the plot in this story is both evident and straightforward and at the same time vast and beyond what the author has revealed in this book. There are several sub-plots that include and illustrate the pasts of the characters in the story and even subtle paths have been laid for possible sequels (I think). Usually in a book with an evident plot-line, it’s hard to see past it. However in Day’s book, it’s so easy to forget the main plot and get lost in the small and big moments of the ‘everyday’. There so much happening—not enough to saturate, but just enough to enchant—and you’re so caught up in them: in the little stories, the building connections, the emotional moments, the thrilling tasks and the seemingly endless (in a good way) journey. It makes me feel like this series has a much bigger story to reveal that what we see in the pages of this book. It feels like this book is nothing but a toe dipped into a vast ocean. If I’m not wrong, there’s more coming… and it just might hurt.
The characters in this story are aplenty. I will say this is the aspect of the book that I recommend readers keep their attention riveted to, to be able to enjoy the rest of the book without confusion. The book—as the name suggests—follows a quest that’s embarked upon by the FMC, who’s joined by a small group of people. This group is of course very important and a large part of the story focuses on and dives into their interactions and connections. It took me awhile to place everyone because I hadn’t expected a larger-than-four-people-group to take part in the quest. But there’s a reason for everything, and there’s a promise of a found family trope, so pay attention and dive right in!
The pace in this story is wonderfully even and can easily be considered fast. It’s easy to sprint through the story, but interestingly there’s something about its nature (perhaps the way it was written?) that makes us quietly savour and appreciate every moment, knowing it may not last.
Four and a half stars! There are themes in this story that can be difficult for some, so please check trigger warnings as always!
Nobody’s Quest does a wonderful job in keeping its readers engaged, entertained and emotionally invested in it, throughout. Happy reading!
This was a surprise book for me this week. I THINK it was the author's debut (I might be wrong about that, but I think I remember reading that). One thing I will say about this book is that it had very good bones. The storyline and the plot is unbelievably unique and interesting and I also enjoyed the motley crew that finds themselves on a very dangerous search for some hidden keys that just might be the actual salvation of their entire continent.
The book starts by introducing us to FMC Soli Graymind, who in her own words is a "nobody". She became an indentured servant when her mother died when she was 4 years old and she has been treated worse than the animals for her entire life. Luckily though, as she is under the rule of the scholars, she has taught herself to read and spends every available moment in the library reading everything she can get her hands on in secret.
There is this amulet that is the one test to discover the person the goddess believes is only the person that can succeed in the quest. This amulet will burn anyone who touches it who is NOT that person and many, many people have erupted in flames in the attempt to be that person.
Of course, Soli is chosen and immediately leaves on the quest with a group of characters who each have their own secrets. One thing that I think will get better in her future books is that she did not flesh out the secondary characters as much as she needed to. I would have liked to know more about their back stories to see what their actual reason was for joining the search.
Also, I really like the Prince, but there was a bit of an insta-love situation that didn't really make too much sense - with how quickly it happened and with the level of intensity that the Prince supposedly felt towards Soli. I don't mind the two as a couple, but some information about the reasons behind the feelings would have been helpful.
Other than a couple of little things that are easily fixable going forward, I will be excited to read the next book. I like Soli as a main character and I even really like the Prince. Honestly, most of the secondary characters grew on me by the end of the book so I am looking forward to seeing what is going to happen next.
Nobody’s Quest had such a cool premise that I couldn’t wait to read this one. I loved the idea of a ‘nobody’ becoming the hero in the story. Even better we get an epic adventure quest. I also really enjoyed the chronic depression representation featured through Soli’s ‘grey mind’. I also thought Soli’s development arc was incredibly well written. The chemistry between Soli and the Prince was everything. I loved watching their relationship unfold. I’m also a huge fan of the found family trope, and it was used expertly in this book. I do wish that Day had used more show to get points across rather than just telling readers things. The ending has me hooked into the series. The audiobook narration was enjoyable and easy to follow. I felt the narrator captured Soli’s essence well and nailed the overall vibe of the story. I definitely plan to continue on with this series.
eARC courtesy of Redtower Books ALC courtesy of Tantor
I really enjoyed these characters! They are perfect because of all their imperfections.
The goddess needs a Nobody, and Solitude Graymind is the perfect fit. A servant who never expected to matter to anyone. Soli is tasked by the king with helping find the keys needed to save the people. She finds the prince to be kind and he’s immediately drawn to her.
What I loved most was the group of characters that forms for the quest. Each character is unique and strong in their own way. Together they create such a wonderful found family. Soli struggles with something called the “gray,” a form of depression that has always made her feel different and alone. Watching her discover that she is accepted exactly as she is was one of my favorite parts of the story.
This book had action and adventure. The characters and the friendships they built along the way that made this such a good read.
Well, that was disappointing. The premise sounded good, but the book did not live up to the promise. There was no world building and no transitions, I had no idea what was going on the first 40% at least, and the story jumped scenes so quickly that I was sure I had missed whole chapters. No time is spent building relationships between the characters, we're simply told they care about each other now or whatever. The quest was kind of interesting, though predictable, so I may continue the series if I'm ever bored but here's hoping the author puts a lot of work into improving their craft until then.
DNF 18%. Horrendous. I don't know why I keep expecting a Red Tower book to be even remotely adequate, but this is just the same poorly written, poorly edited, trope-filled slop dressed up in sprayed edges they keep putting out. I was intrigued by the synopsis and the author exploring depression in a fantasy world, and I appreciate the mental health rep overall, but it's just badly done. I'm all for flawed characters, but it takes a particularly skilled writer to make a character with such low self-esteem compelling and not just frustratingly annoying. I was baffled by Soli thinking of herself as a Nobody only to then suddenly turn around and be like, "I'm tired of these powerful people talking down to me! I control my fate!" and then immediately be cowed again in the next few paragraphs. I can sort of see what the author was trying to do with that, but it was just executed very clumsily and makes Soli seem kind of stupid, especially when she talks back to her superiors and *doesn't* at all seem to register that she can take advantage of the fact that she is now their special chosen one and they're all relying on her.
It's also baffling that the king expects Soli to go on this quest to save the kingdom without any compensation or motivation other than that he won't kill her, I guess? Like....*Soli* is the one who was just chosen by the goddess and can wield the amulet everyone else was burnt to a crisp trying to touch. *Soli* is the one you need to make sure is on your side, but nope, there was no thought put into the power dynamic here, Soli is treated as utterly disposable for some reason because the king says there are more Nobodies who can take her place, even though there's absolutely no assurance that any of them can touch the amulet and the first few who tried DIED.
And speaking of the Nobodies who died touching the amulet, the writing is SO BAD. It's not only a lot of telling and repetition but it also lacks ANY TENSION WHATSOEVER. When a Nobody touches the amulet as Soli watches, it's basically described as "She touches [the amulet] and she doesn't die" and then a few paragraphs later, "Lil bursts into flames and dies". Then, when Soli touches the amulet, it's just like, "Shocking everyone, I don't die." Where is the BUILD UP? The DESCRIPTION? How do you expect to keep the reader on the edge of their seat if you're just going to spoon-feed them the immediate conclusion??? Also, on this note, the romance/lust is fucking *instant*. Soli describes the prince as the most perfect man to ever be perfect the second she sees him, and the prince develops a protectiveness over her for no reason and goes "Who did this to you?" after speaking like, 3 sentences to Soli. The synopsis says slow burn, WHAT SLOW BURN? I need authors and publishers to understand that just because the characters don't kiss or fuck until the end DOESN'T mean it's a slow burn if they're already salivating over each other at first sight!!!
Other things I can remember: uhh, the politicking is horrible, why is the king airing out his dirty laundry with the prince in front of his subjects? Why is the supposedly cold prince info-dumping his entire backstory on Soli when they barely know each other? Why is the majorly important royal sorceress or whoever she is testing if her spell to seal the amulet will work by touching the amulet herself??? Why doesn't Soli seem concerned at all for her supposed best friend after the king announces he'll be executed??? She just takes the prince at her word that her friend will be fine and doesn't ask any further questions?? Why does this pseudo-medieval world have the concept of misogyny and abusers, and why is Soli apparently so enlightened she can speak on how abusers or misogynists think about other people while also being so caught up in believing all the things they've said about her? WHY would the palace guards risk harming the Nobodies the king NEEDS IN GOOD SHAPE TO TOUCH THE AMULET, and especially why would the king allow them to continue mistreating Soli??? It just came off as like, oh look at poor, abused Soli and not for any real reason.
Everything in this book is so painfully superficial, like a story I'd find on Wattpad, and I feel a little bad saying that when the author clearly wants to send a message about depression, but this really needed several more drafts and rounds of edits to be something workable and it sucks that Red Tower doesn't seem to care enough about its authors and their stories to put in that extra effort. I want to believe I've learned my lesson at least, and I don't plan on touching another book by this author or published by Red Tower again.
The book was a mixed bag for me… not necessarily bad, but it didn’t quite hit the mark either. The romance felt like it rushed in without much buildup, and I couldn't fully commit to their chemistry. I don't know the MMC was constantly in a “hot and cold” mentality and it was kinda annoying. As well as, when it came to the whole "found family" aspect, it also fell flat; by the end, I still felt like the characters were strangers, (not only to me but to each other as well), despite claims that they had formed close bonds.
However, I have to commend the representation of mental health in this story. Even though it would have been nice to see more depth in that area, I understand the author’s choice to focus on the progression of the plot. However, as someone who experienced depression myself, it makes sense that Soli was able to manage her struggles more effectively during her quest, especially in contrast to her previous life as an indentured servant.
Overall, it was a bit of a “meh” read for me. I couldn't shake the feeling that there was a disconnect among the characters that really hindered my enjoyment/engagement with the story. I wanted to feel more connected to their journeys, but, unfortunately, it just didn’t resonate with me.
I honestly don’t know if I will continue… it’s honestly a toss up.
FAVORITE QUOTES:
~ “Storms pass. Pain ends. I will never quit.”
~ “But guess what, pretty boy? I’m. Not. Prey.”
~ “Storms pass. They pass, and this happens be will, too,…”
~ “Kaelen stares at my hand, and I flush, trying to yank it back. But he wraps his fingers around my wrist with steady pressure, preventing me from moving. ‘What is wrong with you?’ I hiss, uncaring of the protocol. A full flush rises in his cheeks. ‘I wish I knew,’ he mutters, releasing me.”
~ “When the world tells you again and again that you’re nothing, it’s far too easy to shrink yourself into the size and space of their beliefs.”
~ “Everything I know, I learned from books, scrolls, and codices. The printed word has never let me down, never hurt me, never abandoned me. I’ve visited foreign lands, sailed the five seas, battled monsters, fought with snow leopards by my side, and soared through the skies on giant raptors. I’ve known world-bending loves and tragic disappointments. And I’ve learned things. So many, many things. Books have given me the world. They’re the basis for the little self-esteem I can still claim.”
~ “‘Our scars are the connective tissue between our frailties and our futures — the language of our stories written on our skin. We’re stronger for having them. Rather than denying them, we should honor them as a record of the obstacles we have survived.’”
~ “‘Be proud of the scars you survive.’”
~ “‘History gilds the past with the polished lenses of reminiscence,’ Kaelen drawls, the studied courtier in his mocking voice. ‘And the conquerors grind those lenses themselves, skewing perspective beyond all reason, as they wish.’”
~ “‘You’re the center of this mission, not the servant. We’ll do this together.’”
~ “There’s an old Valourian proverb: Be careful what you wish for. I never quite understood the meaning. Why not wish as big and bold as possible? Where else can dreams come true but in wishes, especially for someone like me? Someone whose flaws are literally branded on my skin?”
**(SLIGHT SPOILERS IN NEXT QUOTES)**
~ “Death is just another adventure.”
~ “‘She’ll have to go through me to take you.’ ‘You know she can,’ I whisper back, anguish all but choking me. ‘Then she’ll have to take me, too. We can go into the next adventure together.’”
~ “‘Success without balance cannot hold, or the quest fails.’”
~ “‘I came to you because the emptiness in my soul recognized the silence in yours.’”
A bit of a disappointment to say the least. A flurry of one-dimensional characters, character arcs that fell flat, and relationships that are in no way believable. I’ll say the writing itself is much less the problem than the storytelling. Moments where tension was supposed to be building felt emotionless. Also heavily reliant upon tropes for romantic tension—“who did this to you?” Within a few chapters of the book starting, and instalove/lust which is totally not for me.
*SPOILERS*
This book had a ton of potential. I haven’t often read about depression in a fantasy setting, but it felt like a weird choice for that to be a reason for a character to be branded and oppressed?
Soli (short for Solitude Grace) is such an unlikeable character. She’s whiny and unsure of herself but in the end, she comes around? Not really for anything she’s done other than carting around an amulet, but because of a love interest and the friends she made along the way. Clearly this book is set up to be a series and so I’m sure her arc isn’t complete but she seems to think she’s completely changed at the end but I see no real reason why or how that happened. Bizarrely everyone in her party loves her and thinks she’s the smartest person alive, immediately, following her every whim and suggestion. She teaches them what it means to be cold, even though she has soldiers in her midst. She suggests making a list at one point, which inspires awe in all. She gives away all of their food to wolves, not to get away from them but just because she said she would, and everyone is chill with it. She also puts an open pie in her pocket, which is unforgivably diabolical.
Above all though, her romance with Kaelen is just not believable. He’s obsessed immediately. There’s no time for buildup or for him to have any reason to love her. He just does. And we’re supposed to believe throughout the book that there’s this hot/cold with him but there’s not. He just sometimes has this external dialogue where he’s shocked he’s in love. But more often than not, he’s telling her he wants to jump her bones in the most explicit of ways and spending as little time away from her as possible.
There seems to be some real inspiration from Throne of Glass and ACOTAR, and even a little Game of Thrones, but with these possible references combined with the trope-heavy prose, it came off sounding like fan fiction.
Tropes: 🗡️ Reluctant Chosen One 🎭 Band of Misfits ⚡ Gods at War 🤝 Reluctant Allies to Something More 🗺️ Quest Across Dangerous Land 🧠 Mental Health Representation
The goddess of nature and balance, Artemisen, has been locked in a crystal tomb after losing a battle against Corvynne, the goddess of war and death. For nearly a century, Artemisen’s imprisonment has caused droughts, withering crops, and even the stars to disappear in Altarra. It has been said by the Oracles that nobody can touch the amulet, that nobody can defeat Corvynne...
Nobody's Quest is a fast-paced romantasy about Soli, a 20-year-old indentured servant, taken to the castle and sent on a quest to gather the keys needed to free Artemisen before time runs out. Thank you to Entangled Publishing Insiders for introducing me to this book and giving me the chance to read it. Nobody’s Quest is full of hilarious inner monologue, adventure, and steamy romance. The found family, utter heartbreak, and nonstop action kept me eagerly turning the page. Soli is a strong character: orphaned at four, coping with “grey mind” (aka serious depression), and enduring harsh punishments from the library sisters. She is outspoken, witty, and selfless, which honestly makes her perfect for the quest. Then there's Prince Kaelen, who is not so different from Soli in many ways, except for being given a better opportunity in life due to his title. From the moment Kaelen says, “Who hurt you?”, I knew the connection between him and Soli was going to be strong. What I didn’t expect was how instantly steamy it would be, since the book was marketed as a slow-burn romance. I actually enjoyed the fast-paced romance between these two; it really added to Soli’s healing arc. Overall, Nobody’s Quest was a joy to read, and I am eager to continue The Nobody Chronicles!!
Thank you again to Entangled Publishing Insiders for providing me a digital copy of this book in exchange for my honest review!!
“Nobody can defeat Corvynne,” I say slowly. “Nobody can touch the amulet,” she repeats, still staring into my eyes. “And so, you searched for nobodies.” I can barely get the words out past my numbness; I feel like I’m in shock. Bizarrely, a quick burst of laughter escapes my lips. “I’ve been a nobody since I was four years old. I guess you succeeded.”
Ohmygoodness! I loved this book so much! I admit that stories about “found family” and unlikely heroes are near and dear to my heart. And Nobody’s Quest absolutely fit the bill. The group of people sent on this quest shouldn’t have even crossed paths with each other, much less been sent out to save the world together. But, they were perfectly suited to work together. Their strengths and weaknesses blended in a way that created a new family and truly each one of them was vital to their success. The world building, the magic system, the found family of truly unique characters all combined to create a truly unputdownable story. I absolutely loved Soli and how strong and compassionate she was. She could have easily given up after a lifetime of being underestimated and told that she was nothing, a nobody. I loved the way “graymind” was portrayed. So many suffer from depression and anxiety and are viewed as weaker or less than because of it, when nothing could be further from the truth. Those who battle mental health issues gain strength. Honestly the group of characters made me think of the book Five Broken Blades in many ways. I really loved the way the others with her rallied around Soli and helped her to see she could achieve more than she had ever dreamed. I loved the relationship between Prince Kaelin and Soli, but I also really enjoyed that the romance wasn’t the central element. The quest, the bond between the entire group, and Soli’s growth all took precedence. I absolutely loved the ending, even though it made me cry, and cannot wait for book 2.
Nobody's Quest is a fast-paced romantasy that blends adventure, found family and romance into an engaging and highly readable story.
What stood out most to me was the cast of characters. Alyssa Day takes the time to develop each member of the group, making their relationships feel authentic and giving the found family dynamic real emotional weight. Soli was an especially easy protagonist to root for. Her journey from feeling invisible and insignificant to confronting impossible challenges made her a relatable and compelling heroine.
I also enjoyed the relationship between Soli and Kaelen. Whilst I personally would not describe it as a slow burn, their dynamic was witty, entertaining and added plenty of heart to the story.
The adventure itself kept me invested throughout. Ancient keys, dangerous quests and a world on the brink of chaos created a story that never felt slow or repetitive. The opening in particular hooked me immediately and carried me through the book with ease.
The ending was unexpectedly emotional and left a lasting impression. One quote that perfectly captures the heart of the novel is: "Storms pass, pain ends, we will never quit."
Readers should be aware that the book explores themes of depression, negative self-talk and childhood trauma.
Overall, this was an enjoyable and heartfelt adventure with a memorable cast of characters and a message of hope at its core.