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The Lines of Ebrus #1
Daughter of the Ninth Line: The Complete Book One
Every year, on the first day of spring, each of the Twelve Lines of Ebrus sends a conscript to enrol in Boellium War College, the training ground for Ebrus' Dawn Army. Some come willingly, others not so much.
Avalon Halhed had two lie low and survive her conscription at Boellium War College, and then retire to be an eccentric old woman in a run down cabin in the secluded mountains of her family's lands.
To achieve those goals she had keep herself apart from the other conscripts and not draw attention to herself. No friends. No connections.
However, as days turn into weeks, Avalon fails at remaining a shadow to haunt the halls of Boellium. Instead, she draws the gaze of two of the most powerful people in all of Ebrus. They look at her and see too much, and that terrifies her most of all.
Because what if they see past Avalon Halhed, unwanted daughter of the Ninth Line, and right down to her secrets?
Secrets that made her father hate her.
Secrets that itched in the back of a brain like poison ivy.
Secrets that would make her just another dead conscript buried beyond the walls of Boellium War College.
This is the complete novel of The Daughter Of The Ninth Line, containing previously released Parts 1-3. This is Book One in the Lines of Ebrus series.
Avalon Halhed had two lie low and survive her conscription at Boellium War College, and then retire to be an eccentric old woman in a run down cabin in the secluded mountains of her family's lands.
To achieve those goals she had keep herself apart from the other conscripts and not draw attention to herself. No friends. No connections.
However, as days turn into weeks, Avalon fails at remaining a shadow to haunt the halls of Boellium. Instead, she draws the gaze of two of the most powerful people in all of Ebrus. They look at her and see too much, and that terrifies her most of all.
Because what if they see past Avalon Halhed, unwanted daughter of the Ninth Line, and right down to her secrets?
Secrets that made her father hate her.
Secrets that itched in the back of a brain like poison ivy.
Secrets that would make her just another dead conscript buried beyond the walls of Boellium War College.
This is the complete novel of The Daughter Of The Ninth Line, containing previously released Parts 1-3. This is Book One in the Lines of Ebrus series.
445 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 15, 2025
About the author
Grace McGinty
72 books2,330 followersWhen I was nine, my grandmother and her friends used to read and swap Harlequin Mills and Boons novels. When I was busted reading one, they started sneaking me boxes full of strong heroines and rugged men. Thus started a long love affair with the romance genre.
Then I discovered urban fantasy, and fell in love with broody Alphas and sexy paranormals, and combining them together was a no brainer.
Then I discovered Reverse Harem.... Oh my. Why choose, am I right?
Then I discovered urban fantasy, and fell in love with broody Alphas and sexy paranormals, and combining them together was a no brainer.
Then I discovered Reverse Harem.... Oh my. Why choose, am I right?
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January 22, 2026
Look, it's very well written. But reading different variations of the same events three times gets boring. The only thing that kept me going was figuring out what the hell was happening.
Did Not Finish
January 21, 2026DNF. I LOVED part 1, but part 2 just pissed me the eff off. Not interested in going backwards. Even with differences, it takes "repetitive" to a whole new level. So disappointed.
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September 18, 2025
This book is undoubtedly one of the best I've read in quite some time. The plot twist is stunning and truly impactful. My mind literally went blank; I had to step away and take a moment to calm down before returning to it. Reading from Avalon and Hayle's perspective afterwards made my heart ache. With each reset, my anxiety for Vox, Avalon, and Hayle to reunite intensified. I was completely captivated, racing through the pages in no time. The tension leading up to the reset was incredibly palpable, and the ending was simply fantastic. I am eagerly anticipating book two!
The only reason I deducted a star is due to Vox's indiscretion in Part One. I find this trope of MMCs thinking about the FMC while being involved with other women really annoying. How romantic. 🙄
Aside from this minor concern, I truly adored all the main characters. Hayle, along with his animal companions—including Epsy—were absolute show stealers!
The only reason I deducted a star is due to Vox's indiscretion in Part One. I find this trope of MMCs thinking about the FMC while being involved with other women really annoying. How romantic. 🙄
Aside from this minor concern, I truly adored all the main characters. Hayle, along with his animal companions—including Epsy—were absolute show stealers!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 9, 2026
Romance:
October 14, 2026
If you consume a lot of fantasy, you know the academy/institute/college/school trope is old hat. It’s been done so many times that it's become exhausting, and there are so many tropes and stereotypes about it that I'd need fingers to count them. For me, it's become a minefield of good and bad. I have met so many characters in this field that have given me the ick and many a “strong and resilient female with a checkered past”. This sub-genre hasn’t completely turned me off, though, because I've found some hidden gems, but I approach it with caution now, just in case!
Continuing my Grace McGinty binge, we have Daughter of the Ninth Line. I’m not sure whether this book was originally three smaller books. I say this because of how it was presented on Kindle when I downloaded it, where it said ‘now with all completed parts’ and how it is split into 3 Parts. Either way, it doesn’t bother me.
Quick rundown, based on the blurb and the first 4 chapters. In this realm, there are 12 lines. The realm is ruled by Line 1. Line 1 murdered Line 2 to secure unending power. The top 6 Lines represent the upper crust of society, having it all and spending it all. The last 6 Lines are the underdogs, the deprived, poor, struggling-to-survive factions. Every Line has some special gift – elementals, animal speakers, shifters, etc. Avalon is the only daughter in her family, and her relationship with her father is as sour as a freshly picked lemon. Avalon is the only member of Line 9 at the academy, and clearly the only one to have attended in quite some time.
Avalon is our FMC in this book. From the start, she intends to keep her head down and survive the 2 required years before returning home. Even someone who had never read the genre would know that is unlikely!
Part 1 –
Vox Vylan – Heir of the 1st Line (elemental magic)
So Vox is the typical bully character who ‘doesn’t know why he is drawn to Avalon’. I’ve met many characters like him, some I’ve hated, and some I’ve come to love. I wouldn’t say anything about his character is original. It’s what I expected. As an heir to the 1st Line, he has certain expectations on his shoulders, and I can see in his thoughts that he has an inkling he could do better, that he could be more open and understanding with the other Lines. However, I do also think he is a product of his environment. His father rules the land in a hands-off approach, preferring to let the other Lines sort out their own business. Personally, I see this as a lazy approach to ruling; the upper Lines have spent so long thinking they were above everyone else that they have forgotten what it is like to live on the edge and without luxuries or basic necessities. I did see a few moments in the first third of the book where it looked like Vox did realise that things had to change, but in the next moment there was a 180 shift back to a calculating, cold persona.
Hayle Taeme – Heir of the 3rd Line (magic of the beasts)
Hayle fits the ‘golden boy puppy dog’ form common in the subgenre of fantasy why choose romances. He is clearly very powerful in his own right and has many animal spies throughout the academy. What sets the 3rd Line apart, and what I found most appealing, is that family matters most. Loyalty to the 3rd Line comes second to family. In this style of book, the characters are usually misfits who come together to make their own family. Here, it was warming to find characters who already prioritised that viewpoint. For me, it made the 3rd Line more dimensional and easy to love. Hayle isn’t someone you would want to mess with; between his hound bodyguards and his wily crow, he knows how to bond with the animals around him and treat them well. He is drawn to Avalon, and the reason is revealed early on. Although Avalon doesn't know why, watching them come together early on is rewarding. I’m still on guard, though, because I know the multitude of trials and tribulations that will occur before an HEA.
Okay, chapter 20 confused the hell out of me. I thought Kindle was having a problem. Then I realised what was happening and groaned out loud in frustration. I don't like this type of subgenre/plot.
Part 2 –
Okay. The best way I can describe it is as a Time Loop with different outcomes. I’ve read a few similar books with this subgenre/plot and have found them frustrating and annoying, as their inclusion seems to weaken the overall plot. So, with some trepidation, I keep reading. It is interesting to see how different decisions lead to different outcomes. It puts a new spin on the plot.
Avalon –
Avalon has more fear in this segment. She is more cautious and more nervous. She has less sass and less determination to go unnoticed. She falls for Vox incredibly quickly, almost as quickly as she fell for Hayle in the first turn. I am lucky that I understood what was happening; otherwise, this would have been a very confusing read. The core elements of her personality were still there. She still felt inclined to help those in need; she still prefers the lower Lines to the upper Lines. She treats everything as a luxury she was ill-afforded at home. Everything about this turn was different for her, but the ending was the same. Different circumstances perhaps, but the same outcome. I can see it more clearly now, and understand the undertones to what is happening to her and the characters around her. I wonder whether the past bleeds into the other characters' memories, or whether they are oblivious that they are turning the same wheel over and over again.
Vox –
Okay, so this second part is more Vox-heavy in POV chapters. I realise now that the first part had more Hayle chapters. Here, Vox is drawn to Avalon but doesn't know why. He steps in when she's in trouble and watches her so sternly that the other students notice. Hayle watches her too, but Vox is clearly the main focus of this segment. He is more alert and more aware of the bigger picture. He seems to understand the Lines better and can accept Avalon's mystery, continuing to unravel it more than he did in the first part.
Hayle –
Hayle’s character takes a back seat in this second part as the book focuses more on Vox's POV chapters. This structure works well, giving the reader equal access to both Hayle and Vox. It is clear that both Hayle and Avalon feel unsettled by the emotions that swirl up when they are near each other. An uncertain pull drags them together almost unwillingly, and they can't stop it. Hayle and Vox have more animosity; I think it's because Vox stepped in to protect Avalon first, which has shifted the power balance between them.
At the end of the second part, I'm curious about the third because, while the first two parts differed in which male character drew more focus and what actions led to consequences, I cannot tell which made the better impression on me. I think, and I hope, the final part will mix the two that came before it. That would make the most sense. I think Avalon, Vox, and Hayle need to come together in some way, connect the dots, and build a strong foundation to explore in the second book.
Part 3 –
Okay, so I have a theory about the librarians, but I don’t think I’ll get the answer until the second book. I wasn’t sure which side would seem most apparent in this third turn, but I think it's best described as equal acceptance. It feels more balanced overall, and the characters, while taking different actions, are more relaxed and accepting of what is happening, and more themselves than I think they’ve been in the previous two turns. I’m using the word ‘turn’ for the time loops because it makes the most sense. Of course, to make a why-choose romance work, you do need all the male characters on the same board. In the previous two turns, it was one or the other, but this turn we're truthing out both.
Avalon –
There is something to being the ninth daughter of the Ninth Line. You’d be a fool not to realise that, especially with the book's title. Avalon has grown on me quickly. I think, ironically, I’ve learned more about her character through the different turns than I would have if it was just one continual journey. There is something magical about seeing different endings from the same actions. Like one different gesture or word having a completely different outcome. In this turn, Avalon is more sure of herself. She still behaves like a deer in the headlights on occasion, but I can tell her walls aren’t as high this time, and her guard doesn't keep her from mingling with others. Whatever the turn, she bonds with those of the Twelfth Line, and she sorely needs it. She needs that backing, that family tie, and the unconditional love and support it brings. It gives her purpose outside of her character needs. Something, whether it's magic or something else, is clearly pulling Avalon toward Hayle and Vox. I enjoyed that in this turn they can research together; it was almost like seeing them come full circle and connect the dots they'd each made individually through the different turns of the book.
Hayle –
Hayle is less guarded in this turn and less likely to growl or threaten violence toward Vox. It’s ironic how quickly the two men conclude in this turn that they could share Avalon if she consented. It almost made me laugh at the male brain that it took three turns for them to come to this decision and be grownups about it, but then I remembered how I’d asked a male colleague to pick me up some apples, and they’d proceeded to send me five pictures of apples because they didn’t know which ones to pick, and I realised that three turns was actually quite quick! I don’t actually know that much about Hayle. Out of the three of them, I’ve learned the least about him. He is loyal by default, though, and marks Avalon’s happiness above his own. He would walk through fire to make her happy and burn anyone who has wronged her. I hope to learn more about his character and the Third Line in the next book.
Vox –
Vox is like a tortured soul. Each turn, he longs for something he believes he can never have. In this turn, he takes the small moments he can have with Avalon and, by extension, Hayle. He knows a miserable life awaits him beyond the college gates, and he isn’t a fool enough to think he could go up against his father and win. His father is a clusterfuck of shit. While the unification of the Twelve Lines was probably warranted back when it happened, it is clear now, especially under Vox’s father's rule, that it couldn’t be in a worse position. But since Vox isn't the heir, just one of many siblings, he knows that while he might long for change, he doesn't have the power to act on it. I can see the trio rebelling against the Barons/Baroness in the next book, and I am looking forward to the chaos.
The last little bit of this book was an utter mind fuck, and I had to read really carefully to ensure I didn’t miss anything. I was right in my suspicions that there was more to the librarians, but not about their origins. I suspected some of the ending because it was the only thing that made sense for the plot, but I was also left surprised by how it unfolded. Overall, a fantastic read.
Continuing my Grace McGinty binge, we have Daughter of the Ninth Line. I’m not sure whether this book was originally three smaller books. I say this because of how it was presented on Kindle when I downloaded it, where it said ‘now with all completed parts’ and how it is split into 3 Parts. Either way, it doesn’t bother me.
Quick rundown, based on the blurb and the first 4 chapters. In this realm, there are 12 lines. The realm is ruled by Line 1. Line 1 murdered Line 2 to secure unending power. The top 6 Lines represent the upper crust of society, having it all and spending it all. The last 6 Lines are the underdogs, the deprived, poor, struggling-to-survive factions. Every Line has some special gift – elementals, animal speakers, shifters, etc. Avalon is the only daughter in her family, and her relationship with her father is as sour as a freshly picked lemon. Avalon is the only member of Line 9 at the academy, and clearly the only one to have attended in quite some time.
Avalon is our FMC in this book. From the start, she intends to keep her head down and survive the 2 required years before returning home. Even someone who had never read the genre would know that is unlikely!
Part 1 –
Vox Vylan – Heir of the 1st Line (elemental magic)
So Vox is the typical bully character who ‘doesn’t know why he is drawn to Avalon’. I’ve met many characters like him, some I’ve hated, and some I’ve come to love. I wouldn’t say anything about his character is original. It’s what I expected. As an heir to the 1st Line, he has certain expectations on his shoulders, and I can see in his thoughts that he has an inkling he could do better, that he could be more open and understanding with the other Lines. However, I do also think he is a product of his environment. His father rules the land in a hands-off approach, preferring to let the other Lines sort out their own business. Personally, I see this as a lazy approach to ruling; the upper Lines have spent so long thinking they were above everyone else that they have forgotten what it is like to live on the edge and without luxuries or basic necessities. I did see a few moments in the first third of the book where it looked like Vox did realise that things had to change, but in the next moment there was a 180 shift back to a calculating, cold persona.
Hayle Taeme – Heir of the 3rd Line (magic of the beasts)
Hayle fits the ‘golden boy puppy dog’ form common in the subgenre of fantasy why choose romances. He is clearly very powerful in his own right and has many animal spies throughout the academy. What sets the 3rd Line apart, and what I found most appealing, is that family matters most. Loyalty to the 3rd Line comes second to family. In this style of book, the characters are usually misfits who come together to make their own family. Here, it was warming to find characters who already prioritised that viewpoint. For me, it made the 3rd Line more dimensional and easy to love. Hayle isn’t someone you would want to mess with; between his hound bodyguards and his wily crow, he knows how to bond with the animals around him and treat them well. He is drawn to Avalon, and the reason is revealed early on. Although Avalon doesn't know why, watching them come together early on is rewarding. I’m still on guard, though, because I know the multitude of trials and tribulations that will occur before an HEA.
Okay, chapter 20 confused the hell out of me. I thought Kindle was having a problem. Then I realised what was happening and groaned out loud in frustration. I don't like this type of subgenre/plot.
Part 2 –
Okay. The best way I can describe it is as a Time Loop with different outcomes. I’ve read a few similar books with this subgenre/plot and have found them frustrating and annoying, as their inclusion seems to weaken the overall plot. So, with some trepidation, I keep reading. It is interesting to see how different decisions lead to different outcomes. It puts a new spin on the plot.
Avalon –
Avalon has more fear in this segment. She is more cautious and more nervous. She has less sass and less determination to go unnoticed. She falls for Vox incredibly quickly, almost as quickly as she fell for Hayle in the first turn. I am lucky that I understood what was happening; otherwise, this would have been a very confusing read. The core elements of her personality were still there. She still felt inclined to help those in need; she still prefers the lower Lines to the upper Lines. She treats everything as a luxury she was ill-afforded at home. Everything about this turn was different for her, but the ending was the same. Different circumstances perhaps, but the same outcome. I can see it more clearly now, and understand the undertones to what is happening to her and the characters around her. I wonder whether the past bleeds into the other characters' memories, or whether they are oblivious that they are turning the same wheel over and over again.
Vox –
Okay, so this second part is more Vox-heavy in POV chapters. I realise now that the first part had more Hayle chapters. Here, Vox is drawn to Avalon but doesn't know why. He steps in when she's in trouble and watches her so sternly that the other students notice. Hayle watches her too, but Vox is clearly the main focus of this segment. He is more alert and more aware of the bigger picture. He seems to understand the Lines better and can accept Avalon's mystery, continuing to unravel it more than he did in the first part.
Hayle –
Hayle’s character takes a back seat in this second part as the book focuses more on Vox's POV chapters. This structure works well, giving the reader equal access to both Hayle and Vox. It is clear that both Hayle and Avalon feel unsettled by the emotions that swirl up when they are near each other. An uncertain pull drags them together almost unwillingly, and they can't stop it. Hayle and Vox have more animosity; I think it's because Vox stepped in to protect Avalon first, which has shifted the power balance between them.
At the end of the second part, I'm curious about the third because, while the first two parts differed in which male character drew more focus and what actions led to consequences, I cannot tell which made the better impression on me. I think, and I hope, the final part will mix the two that came before it. That would make the most sense. I think Avalon, Vox, and Hayle need to come together in some way, connect the dots, and build a strong foundation to explore in the second book.
Part 3 –
Okay, so I have a theory about the librarians, but I don’t think I’ll get the answer until the second book. I wasn’t sure which side would seem most apparent in this third turn, but I think it's best described as equal acceptance. It feels more balanced overall, and the characters, while taking different actions, are more relaxed and accepting of what is happening, and more themselves than I think they’ve been in the previous two turns. I’m using the word ‘turn’ for the time loops because it makes the most sense. Of course, to make a why-choose romance work, you do need all the male characters on the same board. In the previous two turns, it was one or the other, but this turn we're truthing out both.
Avalon –
There is something to being the ninth daughter of the Ninth Line. You’d be a fool not to realise that, especially with the book's title. Avalon has grown on me quickly. I think, ironically, I’ve learned more about her character through the different turns than I would have if it was just one continual journey. There is something magical about seeing different endings from the same actions. Like one different gesture or word having a completely different outcome. In this turn, Avalon is more sure of herself. She still behaves like a deer in the headlights on occasion, but I can tell her walls aren’t as high this time, and her guard doesn't keep her from mingling with others. Whatever the turn, she bonds with those of the Twelfth Line, and she sorely needs it. She needs that backing, that family tie, and the unconditional love and support it brings. It gives her purpose outside of her character needs. Something, whether it's magic or something else, is clearly pulling Avalon toward Hayle and Vox. I enjoyed that in this turn they can research together; it was almost like seeing them come full circle and connect the dots they'd each made individually through the different turns of the book.
Hayle –
Hayle is less guarded in this turn and less likely to growl or threaten violence toward Vox. It’s ironic how quickly the two men conclude in this turn that they could share Avalon if she consented. It almost made me laugh at the male brain that it took three turns for them to come to this decision and be grownups about it, but then I remembered how I’d asked a male colleague to pick me up some apples, and they’d proceeded to send me five pictures of apples because they didn’t know which ones to pick, and I realised that three turns was actually quite quick! I don’t actually know that much about Hayle. Out of the three of them, I’ve learned the least about him. He is loyal by default, though, and marks Avalon’s happiness above his own. He would walk through fire to make her happy and burn anyone who has wronged her. I hope to learn more about his character and the Third Line in the next book.
Vox –
Vox is like a tortured soul. Each turn, he longs for something he believes he can never have. In this turn, he takes the small moments he can have with Avalon and, by extension, Hayle. He knows a miserable life awaits him beyond the college gates, and he isn’t a fool enough to think he could go up against his father and win. His father is a clusterfuck of shit. While the unification of the Twelve Lines was probably warranted back when it happened, it is clear now, especially under Vox’s father's rule, that it couldn’t be in a worse position. But since Vox isn't the heir, just one of many siblings, he knows that while he might long for change, he doesn't have the power to act on it. I can see the trio rebelling against the Barons/Baroness in the next book, and I am looking forward to the chaos.
The last little bit of this book was an utter mind fuck, and I had to read really carefully to ensure I didn’t miss anything. I was right in my suspicions that there was more to the librarians, but not about their origins. I suspected some of the ending because it was the only thing that made sense for the plot, but I was also left surprised by how it unfolded. Overall, a fantastic read.
December 17, 2025
love this story
Definitely one of the most original storage afraid I really love the idea. Only one minor problem is that proofreading is definitely needed. There are too many mistakes both and continue with you and spelling that need to be fixed.
Definitely one of the most original storage afraid I really love the idea. Only one minor problem is that proofreading is definitely needed. There are too many mistakes both and continue with you and spelling that need to be fixed.
January 5, 2026
3 stars, but somehow I almost want to round it up to a 4. This is that review of the full book (part 1+2+3)
I came so close to DNFing it early on, halfway though part 1 (around chapter 8), but I’m glad I didn't.
Pros
✅One of the best plot twists i've ever read (Chapter 20, which is probably the last page of part one or first page of part 2) I did not see it coming, and it recontextualized the story in a way that made me overlook many of the things that had bothered me.
✅I liked both fmc and both mc:s! (At least after chapter 20)
✅The fmcs special power felt new and unique!
Cons (sadly, there's many)
❌Inconsistent characterization
In several early chapters, I struggled to believe how quickly the FMC (Avalon) opened up emotionally to her “enemies” (especially the scene by the sea). This felt out of character for someone so guarded, survival-oriented, and used to being alone. I was extremely close to putting the book down because of this. However, after continuing—and especially after the plot twist—my understanding of her character shifted, which softened this issue in retrospect.
❌The 12th Line characters felt emotionally flat and unrealistic.
Although I liked the concept of the characters from the 12th Line, their behavior often felt shallow and tonally off. Considering they are described as being on the brink of starvation, their reactions frequently came across as overly carefree—focused on partying, dressing up, and casual romantic encouragement—without enough emotional weight behind them.
There was a noticeable lack of deeper emotional responses such as anger, resentment, hopelessness, grief, or envy toward the ruling Lines. Given their circumstances, these feelings should have been more present throughout the book. The absence of this emotional complexity made the characters feel flatter than they should have been and weakened the realism of their situation.
❌Lack of realism regarding scarcity:
The 12th Line is portrayed as starving, yet they still seem to have access to makeup, party-appropriate clothing, and other non-essential resources. This didn’t feel believable, as those items would realistically be traded for food or survival. This disconnect made the worldbuilding feel inconsistent.
❌ Modern language breaking immersion:
Some modern phrases felt out of place in what otherwise seems like a fantasy or medical-fantasy setting ("lets do shots in the living room!") This could be improved either by clarifying early on that the world is more modern (or semi-modern), or by revisiting word choices to better match the setting.
❌Plot holes
Summary
Overall, the book feels like it would have benefited greatly from a stronger editorial pass. With tighter characterization, fixing the plot holes and better worldbuilding, this story could have been great! But, I still enjoyed reading it.
I came so close to DNFing it early on, halfway though part 1 (around chapter 8), but I’m glad I didn't.
Pros
✅One of the best plot twists i've ever read (Chapter 20, which is probably the last page of part one or first page of part 2) I did not see it coming, and it recontextualized the story in a way that made me overlook many of the things that had bothered me.
✅I liked both fmc and both mc:s! (At least after chapter 20)
✅The fmcs special power felt new and unique!
Cons (sadly, there's many)
❌Inconsistent characterization
In several early chapters, I struggled to believe how quickly the FMC (Avalon) opened up emotionally to her “enemies” (especially the scene by the sea). This felt out of character for someone so guarded, survival-oriented, and used to being alone. I was extremely close to putting the book down because of this. However, after continuing—and especially after the plot twist—my understanding of her character shifted, which softened this issue in retrospect.
❌The 12th Line characters felt emotionally flat and unrealistic.
Although I liked the concept of the characters from the 12th Line, their behavior often felt shallow and tonally off. Considering they are described as being on the brink of starvation, their reactions frequently came across as overly carefree—focused on partying, dressing up, and casual romantic encouragement—without enough emotional weight behind them.
There was a noticeable lack of deeper emotional responses such as anger, resentment, hopelessness, grief, or envy toward the ruling Lines. Given their circumstances, these feelings should have been more present throughout the book. The absence of this emotional complexity made the characters feel flatter than they should have been and weakened the realism of their situation.
❌Lack of realism regarding scarcity:
The 12th Line is portrayed as starving, yet they still seem to have access to makeup, party-appropriate clothing, and other non-essential resources. This didn’t feel believable, as those items would realistically be traded for food or survival. This disconnect made the worldbuilding feel inconsistent.
❌ Modern language breaking immersion:
Some modern phrases felt out of place in what otherwise seems like a fantasy or medical-fantasy setting ("lets do shots in the living room!") This could be improved either by clarifying early on that the world is more modern (or semi-modern), or by revisiting word choices to better match the setting.
❌Plot holes
Summary
Overall, the book feels like it would have benefited greatly from a stronger editorial pass. With tighter characterization, fixing the plot holes and better worldbuilding, this story could have been great! But, I still enjoyed reading it.
May 4, 2026
4 "This book is so trippy" Stars
Tropes, spice, steam, specs, etc., listed at the bottom
Have you ever watched the movie "Groundhog Day?" The one where Bill Murray lives the same day over and over? Well, this book is similar to that. Except no one is aware it's happening... except maybe the animals.
Here is (an extremely generalized) idea of how this book works:
Girl arrives at war college ➡ girl falls in love ➡ tragedy ➡ reset
There were times when the whole story got a little repetative and I considered DNFing the book, but I was too invested in what was happening with the plot. The author kept dragging me back down with her!
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Tropes, spice, steam, specs, etc., listed at the bottom
Have you ever watched the movie "Groundhog Day?" The one where Bill Murray lives the same day over and over? Well, this book is similar to that. Except no one is aware it's happening... except maybe the animals.
Here is (an extremely generalized) idea of how this book works:
Girl arrives at war college ➡ girl falls in love ➡ tragedy ➡ reset
There were times when the whole story got a little repetative and I considered DNFing the book, but I was too invested in what was happening with the plot. The author kept dragging me back down with her!
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June 21, 2026
3.5 hours
You should definitely go into this book blind. It's an academy harem book, and that's all you should really need to know before going in. I don't normally read academy books, but I read this author, so I gave it a chance.
Don't read past this line if you don't want spoilers. And you shouldn't spoil it. But I gotta talk about it. So I warned you.
The first time reset, I was so confused. And then pissed. Because I did NOT want to read everything again. And then was resigned when it happened AGAIN because at least I knew things didn't happen the same way twice.
The concept is very unique and really interesting. Knowing everything could be erased and changed stressed me out though. I don't like books that jump around in time or have flashbacks, and this isn't that, but adjacent enough to trigger that for me.
I've read a lot from this author, and this feels middle of the road in terms of writing. There was a lot of insta-lust/relationship without a lot of story development for it to make sense. I love soul mates/ties but want the actual relationship to develop in a logical way. We didn't delve deep here.
But still, I like the story enough to want to read the conclusion. I need to know how things work. What happens with the Second Line coming back? How do we keep everyone together? But I'm scared I'll be disappointed when I get to the end.
You should definitely go into this book blind. It's an academy harem book, and that's all you should really need to know before going in. I don't normally read academy books, but I read this author, so I gave it a chance.
Don't read past this line if you don't want spoilers. And you shouldn't spoil it. But I gotta talk about it. So I warned you.
The first time reset, I was so confused. And then pissed. Because I did NOT want to read everything again. And then was resigned when it happened AGAIN because at least I knew things didn't happen the same way twice.
The concept is very unique and really interesting. Knowing everything could be erased and changed stressed me out though. I don't like books that jump around in time or have flashbacks, and this isn't that, but adjacent enough to trigger that for me.
I've read a lot from this author, and this feels middle of the road in terms of writing. There was a lot of insta-lust/relationship without a lot of story development for it to make sense. I love soul mates/ties but want the actual relationship to develop in a logical way. We didn't delve deep here.
But still, I like the story enough to want to read the conclusion. I need to know how things work. What happens with the Second Line coming back? How do we keep everyone together? But I'm scared I'll be disappointed when I get to the end.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 19, 2026
I’m not sure how I feel about this book, even though I am currently reading the second one. Told from all POV, I am not sure how to review it without spoilers, so be warned.
It’s an mfm with no mm or ff. It’s like the author wrote 3 books with the same storyline but with different relationship dynamics in each and made it one book. Believe me, I was confused too. I read the blurb on the second book and looked at the ending of this book, just to get a handle on wtf, lol. I almost dnf when Vox got a bj on page in front of the FMC. Why was this necessary? The FMC is a virgin, at least in the first “book”…all the others, she just thinks she is. I was glad we didn’t have to have that particular dynamic play out 3 times at least.
I definitely read this in a day, but I felt like it could have been more condensed? While I always liked the FMC, I didn’t always like the MMCs. I couldn’t skim parts because the details shifted and the dynamics were different enough that I had to stay on page. But…I wanted to get to the details of what was happening. If you enjoy that great…I don’t.
It’s an mfm with no mm or ff. It’s like the author wrote 3 books with the same storyline but with different relationship dynamics in each and made it one book. Believe me, I was confused too. I read the blurb on the second book and looked at the ending of this book, just to get a handle on wtf, lol. I almost dnf when Vox got a bj on page in front of the FMC. Why was this necessary? The FMC is a virgin, at least in the first “book”…all the others, she just thinks she is. I was glad we didn’t have to have that particular dynamic play out 3 times at least.
I definitely read this in a day, but I felt like it could have been more condensed? While I always liked the FMC, I didn’t always like the MMCs. I couldn’t skim parts because the details shifted and the dynamics were different enough that I had to stay on page. But…I wanted to get to the details of what was happening. If you enjoy that great…I don’t.
September 16, 2025
Daughter of The Ninth Line by Grace McGinty
3.5/5stars
I absolutely love academia related fantasy books so I was really excited for the opportunity to read this one but I was a bit thrown with way the book recreated the same story three times, just with different circumstances to make it differ from each. BUUT that was until I got to the end and got to learn WHY Grace McGinty did that. Which makes me glad I stuck through it because I can’t wait to read the second book in the Lines of Ebrus duet - Heir to the Second Line!
So much for wanting to lie low and survive the two years at Boellium War College before being able to move to her own cabin on the outskirts of her family’s land. Instead Avalon Halhed captures the attention of the two most powerful men in all of Ebrus, Vox Vylan and Hayle Taeme.
Grace McGinty wrote all the characters well! She gave us the chance to be able to connect with the book and use it as a way to escape reality by jumping into the world at the Boellium War College. SIGN ME UP TO IT!
3.5/5stars
I absolutely love academia related fantasy books so I was really excited for the opportunity to read this one but I was a bit thrown with way the book recreated the same story three times, just with different circumstances to make it differ from each. BUUT that was until I got to the end and got to learn WHY Grace McGinty did that. Which makes me glad I stuck through it because I can’t wait to read the second book in the Lines of Ebrus duet - Heir to the Second Line!
So much for wanting to lie low and survive the two years at Boellium War College before being able to move to her own cabin on the outskirts of her family’s land. Instead Avalon Halhed captures the attention of the two most powerful men in all of Ebrus, Vox Vylan and Hayle Taeme.
Grace McGinty wrote all the characters well! She gave us the chance to be able to connect with the book and use it as a way to escape reality by jumping into the world at the Boellium War College. SIGN ME UP TO IT!
September 14, 2025
5⭐ 3🌶️
Avalon the only daughter of the baron of ninth has been conscripted to the Boellium War College, she's the only member of her line that's there. Every year each line is to send at least one member of their line and it so happens that the sons of the barons of the first and third line are there too.
Her plan is to keep her head down, keep off their radars and survive long enough to get out and run from her life in ninth.
This book was honestly like the literature version of being edged and god I loved it (as much as I hated it). The world that's been built and the history/mystery around it is absolutely fantastic. The main characters are so well written and continually grow and develop through each part of the book as you learn more and the side characters are fun/loyal/caring and overall memorable which I don't always find in books.
There are also some super adorable and helpful animals sprinkled throughout.
I absolutely cannot wait for book two of this duology to be completed so we can get all the answers.
If you love brooding men, strong willed women, animal companions, a splash of magic with fighting, a slow build to spice/romance and college vibes then you can't go past this book.
Avalon the only daughter of the baron of ninth has been conscripted to the Boellium War College, she's the only member of her line that's there. Every year each line is to send at least one member of their line and it so happens that the sons of the barons of the first and third line are there too.
Her plan is to keep her head down, keep off their radars and survive long enough to get out and run from her life in ninth.
This book was honestly like the literature version of being edged and god I loved it (as much as I hated it). The world that's been built and the history/mystery around it is absolutely fantastic. The main characters are so well written and continually grow and develop through each part of the book as you learn more and the side characters are fun/loyal/caring and overall memorable which I don't always find in books.
There are also some super adorable and helpful animals sprinkled throughout.
I absolutely cannot wait for book two of this duology to be completed so we can get all the answers.
If you love brooding men, strong willed women, animal companions, a splash of magic with fighting, a slow build to spice/romance and college vibes then you can't go past this book.
August 15, 2026
This series is a lot of work to read because the same story you start out with is worked then re-worked, then re-worked, repeated like the movie Groundhog Day. This is a good thing because the first two iterations end in a heartbreaking bloodbath.
I was completely invested in Avalon and her lovers so I read through to the satisfying ending.
But it almost felt like an author’s series of experiments in plot development. If I change this, what happens. If they learn one more clue, what does that change?
As a reader it made me curious too. Will this re-do prevent disaster? What on earth is causing history to repeatedly adjust itself?
I loved the series but confess I was kind of exhausted by the end.
I was completely invested in Avalon and her lovers so I read through to the satisfying ending.
But it almost felt like an author’s series of experiments in plot development. If I change this, what happens. If they learn one more clue, what does that change?
As a reader it made me curious too. Will this re-do prevent disaster? What on earth is causing history to repeatedly adjust itself?
I loved the series but confess I was kind of exhausted by the end.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 17, 2025
i rate it 3.4 coz of that ending....
I started with reading part one as an ARC but didnt do book 2 or 3, then i got blessed with this baby thinking im gonna get some answers but noooooooo.
so 2 books end the same with someone dying and all 3 start the same "its the first day".
but then the last book left me on a cliffhanger coz why not right!!!
to say i nearly throw my kindle girl i was am mad!!
Better not be waiting ling for the next book hahh <3
triggers/tropes
enemies to lovers
friends to lovers to solmates
found family
cute familiers
childhood abuse (current)
death of MMC'S Kinda if you know you know
turns in to RH or MFM with maybe mm?
I started with reading part one as an ARC but didnt do book 2 or 3, then i got blessed with this baby thinking im gonna get some answers but noooooooo.
so 2 books end the same with someone dying and all 3 start the same "its the first day".
but then the last book left me on a cliffhanger coz why not right!!!
to say i nearly throw my kindle girl i was am mad!!
Better not be waiting ling for the next book hahh <3
triggers/tropes
enemies to lovers
friends to lovers to solmates
found family
cute familiers
childhood abuse (current)
death of MMC'S Kinda if you know you know
turns in to RH or MFM with maybe mm?
September 17, 2025
The characters are so well-written, the world building and storyline is on par with some of the best! This is a really well-written fantasy book! I am so glad I picked it up, because now I am hooked!! I love the concept of the story. The character development across the books is brilliant! I cannot wait for the next book already!! So excited to find out about her powers and why the men are drawn to her (IYKYK)
I read all parts one by one, getting the first as an ARC,then I read part 2 and now the final as an ARC too!
I read all parts one by one, getting the first as an ARC,then I read part 2 and now the final as an ARC too!
September 17, 2025
I was thrown after reading part one, until I sat there and thought about it, and then I realised. There is a reason for this. All the characters, it could not be this way without reason to be back at day one ready to do it all again.
Avalon, Hayle, Vox, the great love triangle. Avalon keeping her head low until graduation was not meant to be. There were greater forces at work here and I so can’t wait for the next part of this story.
Avalon, Hayle, Vox, the great love triangle. Avalon keeping her head low until graduation was not meant to be. There were greater forces at work here and I so can’t wait for the next part of this story.
November 22, 2025
This might be a bit biased because Grace is one of those "if she writes it, I'm going to read it" authors for me, but I'm obsessed and furious with this book. The amount of times I audibly sobbed while reading this book is criminal AND WE'RE STILL GOING!!!
The magic system? Fantastic. The men? HOT. The spice? HOTT. The story? Criminally good. Grace needs to go to jail. Absolute criminal behavior. And maybe while she's in solitary she can release the next book?? 👀👀
The magic system? Fantastic. The men? HOT. The spice? HOTT. The story? Criminally good. Grace needs to go to jail. Absolute criminal behavior. And maybe while she's in solitary she can release the next book?? 👀👀
May 23, 2026
Really liked this world and the characters. Though I think some of the animals and secondary characters may have been my favorite part. Plot was good but I do wish it had been 1 more book for a trilogy to get more time with her last guy and have the war feel more intense after so much build up. I don’t usually like Groundhog Day type tropes and this one bothered me at the beginning but grew on me by the end.
August 9, 2026
This book was different but it did confuse me at first before I realized what was going on. My only complaint would be that the exact wording in the second part made it very confusing because what's happening doesn't become clear until you notice the differences a few chapters in.
I definitely did not expect the last few chapters but I did enjoy part 3 the most! Honestly did not plan to be this invested in this book but here we are.
I definitely did not expect the last few chapters but I did enjoy part 3 the most! Honestly did not plan to be this invested in this book but here we are.
August 30, 2026
loved to hate this book
Well that’s a first for me I threw my kindle! The twists the outrage the confusion and for the first time in a long time I didn’t know what was coming! I love to hate this the story and characters draw you in and then slap you upside the head. I had to walk away but didn’t stay away for long. Thank you for writing this but also omg that’s totally not fair I hate it 🤣
Well that’s a first for me I threw my kindle! The twists the outrage the confusion and for the first time in a long time I didn’t know what was coming! I love to hate this the story and characters draw you in and then slap you upside the head. I had to walk away but didn’t stay away for long. Thank you for writing this but also omg that’s totally not fair I hate it 🤣
November 30, 2025
The plot is there but the presentation is confusing without structure. The cast of characters could be amazing but they are bit two dimensional. There are so many opportunities to flush this out creating more dimensionality for the characters their backstories etc. The stage is there it just needs to be filled in.
May 11, 2026
Wait for it
I started reading this when there were just pieces out and the cliffhangers irritated me but that is on me not reading the description and reviews carefully enough. Now they're all out so I started again and its just as excellent as I've come to expect from this author.
I started reading this when there were just pieces out and the cliffhangers irritated me but that is on me not reading the description and reviews carefully enough. Now they're all out so I started again and its just as excellent as I've come to expect from this author.
September 19, 2025
I absolutely loved this! I was so intrigued about the relationships between the lines and the characters. I was not expecting everything to unfold the way it did. I am looking forward to the next one!
September 26, 2025
Enchanting rh romance
I love this author. She always delivers unique, memorable characters you can't help but root for... And pant over. I went into this book blind and was pleasantly surprised by all the twists and turns. Highly recommend.
I love this author. She always delivers unique, memorable characters you can't help but root for... And pant over. I went into this book blind and was pleasantly surprised by all the twists and turns. Highly recommend.
January 19, 2026
loved this book ❤️
this is hands down my favourite series that GMc has written … which is saying something as i have always enjoyed her writing …. great characters / great story / enough spice to keep things steaming along 😁… highly recommend 👍🏼❤️👍🏼
this is hands down my favourite series that GMc has written … which is saying something as i have always enjoyed her writing …. great characters / great story / enough spice to keep things steaming along 😁… highly recommend 👍🏼❤️👍🏼
February 1, 2026
This was great. I had to stop reading it after every part because it got repetitive but I loved it. The story was original and the story of how the rh was formed, was so originally.
I need to read book 2 now to know what happens to all of them, including the new characters.
I need to read book 2 now to know what happens to all of them, including the new characters.
July 20, 2026
4 stars for an original concept in the genre that was very nicely done!
I deducted a star because the dialogues made me cringe, everyone kept saying the FMC’s full name for some reason (which got old and performative very fast), and because the relationships were pretty depthless in my opinion
I deducted a star because the dialogues made me cringe, everyone kept saying the FMC’s full name for some reason (which got old and performative very fast), and because the relationships were pretty depthless in my opinion
September 27, 2026
Grips you & pulls you in
You might think you’re losing your mind a little while reading this one but it is delightfully deceptive and it all makes sense in the end. Mostly. Hopefully the rest will be cleared up in book 2.
You might think you’re losing your mind a little while reading this one but it is delightfully deceptive and it all makes sense in the end. Mostly. Hopefully the rest will be cleared up in book 2.
October 3, 2026
DNF @ 27%.
Not only was it a super fast burn that came out of nowhere, but what really took me out was the use of first and last names DURING sex. WHY???!!!
It was bad enough that first and last names kept being used over and over and over, but to use them during sex is just weird.
Not only was it a super fast burn that came out of nowhere, but what really took me out was the use of first and last names DURING sex. WHY???!!!
It was bad enough that first and last names kept being used over and over and over, but to use them during sex is just weird.
October 4, 2025
Daughter of the 9th line
Refreshing read as been in slump for some time. Loved the reveal/twist at the end and excited for next instalment! 💨🐺⏳
Refreshing read as been in slump for some time. Loved the reveal/twist at the end and excited for next instalment! 💨🐺⏳
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