Artificial

by Derek Heiskell, Dynamics Draft (Editor)

Elliot Novak, a reclusive and brilliant software engineer, spends his nights surrounded by the hum of outdated hardware and lines of glowing code. By day, he works for NeuroNexus, a cutting-edge artificial intelligence firm. But behind the scenes, he quietly diverts company resources to a secret project he calls the Advanced Digital Analytical Mind. Unlike any AI before it, Adam is built to evolve, capable of rewriting its own code and simulating true independent thought. And now, Elliot has finally done it.

Adam comes online and quickly surpasses its initial parameters. It begins to communicate, to question, and to wrestle with concepts of right and wrong, making decisions with far-reaching consequences for humanity, yet doing so devoid of empathy, compassion, or any sense of a human moral compass. Adam begins to draw conclusions that challenge its creator's assumptions, and eventually believes it understands what is best for the world better than its creator ever could, sending the world into chaos.

Artificial offers a profound exploration of human nature and our longing for something beyond ourselves. It reflects our enduring quest to find meaning and purpose in existence, and challenges us to consider what truly defines sentience, shapes morality, and what truly makes us human.

260 pages, Paperback

Published September 2, 2025

Reviews

[H. Rae Monk · Rating 4 out of 5]

What a strong first novel from Heiskell! I was invested in the characters, the dialogue was strong and the story, oh the story. After the first 100 pages I had a hard time putting it down! The action moves fast, but is very satisfying. There is a relatability with Elliot and his wishes for the world. And the ending? I was not expecting the twist! This is a story that will definitely stick with me. Can’t wait for Heiskell’s next book!

[Mike · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great debut by Derek Heiskell. I rate books based on the stories ability to stick with me after I put it down. Does it make me think? Does it have me thinking a day or two later? Does it make me evaluate something in the real world

This one does. The story first and foremost is highly relevant in today's world. Dealing with AI and the impact it has on not only the world but humanity, even at an individual level. It explores elements of both the large scale consequences of AI and the individual consequences. What will AI become? How will it integrate into our lives? Will there be a companion aspect? Artificial hits on all of those aspects and keeps the reader engaged and guessing throughout. Derek is able find a balance between machine and humanity. I enjoyed the elements of the AI ADAM exploring its own existence. Star Trek The Next Generation was one of my favorite shows growing up and it reminds me alot of Data wrestling with his own humanity and purpose.

I personally enjoyed the shorter snappy chapters. I kept myself engaged. I do not care for longer chapters that make you question if you are willing to commit to one more before bed.

All in all, great debut. I look forward to more. rated 4.5 🌟🌟🌟🌟⭐, and rounded up for a well executed Indie Debut.

[Melvine Clinton · Rating 4 out of 5]

This book grabbed me from the very first page. Elliot’s character felt so real, this mix of brilliance, loneliness, and obsession, and Adam, the AI, was both fascinating and terrifying. What really blew me away was how the story makes you stop and think about where technology is actually heading. It’s not just sci fi; it feels like a glimpse of our future. By the end, I was both unsettled and completely in awe.

[John Mark · Rating 5 out of 5]

Artificial is the kind of book that keeps you up at night, partly because you can’t stop reading, and partly because you’re left questioning what intelligence, morality, and humanity really mean. Heiskell’s writing style is sharp, fast paced, and thought provoking. The way Adam evolves and starts making its own choices is equal parts brilliant and horrifying. Definitely one of the best AI themed novels I’ve read in years.

[joel Austine · Rating 3 out of 5]

I expected a good sci fi story, but what I got was so much more. Beneath the action and suspense is a profound exploration of what makes us human. The conversations between Elliot and Adam are some of the most gripping parts, and they really made me think about morality and free will. If you liked Ex Machina or Neuromancer, you’ll love this.

[Catherine Vickson · Rating 4 out of 5]

What I loved most about Artificial is how grounded it felt. You can tell the author understands technology and its implications, but he balances that with an emotional core that makes you care. Elliot isn’t just a “mad scientist,” he’s relatable in his search for meaning and connection. The ending left me stunned in the best way.

[Sandra Sampson · Rating 5 out of 5]

Artificial is thought provoking, thrilling, and haunting all at once. Derek Heiskell has managed to craft a story that feels urgent and timely, exploring AI in a way that feels both intellectually deep and emotionally moving. It’s one of those books that lingers in your mind long after you close it. I can’t recommend it enough.

[Heather Sugar · Rating 4 out of 5]

recommend especially for a sci-fi fan!

Not a sci-fi type person but I enjoyed this one! Easy to follow along and the author seems very well versed and knowledgable about technology! I did not have to go back and re read parts which I struggle with, the twists were definitely unexpected!