Their Will Undone

by R.J. Valldeperas

A debut YA fantasy must-read for fans of The Winner’s Curse, What the River Knows, and This Woven Kingdom.

When a maiden is selected to marry the emperor, her journey to the palace will see her fighting both a spark of magical power and her growing feelings for her broody escort in this romantic fantasy duology opener, inspired by a true story from the Inca empire. 

In the Amaru Empire, it’s considered an honor to be chosen for the annual harvest. But when guards stole Nina’s brother away, it devastated her family. So, when the guards returned for Nina’s sweet sister, she threw herself into their clutches instead. And Nina has spent every moment since then in the acllahuasi, a gilded cage where women are trained to become servants or wives.

When Kasik, an obedient lieutenant in Amaru’s army, is sent to the acllahuasi to retrieve the emperor’s new wife, it’s only the promise of his own command—and a chance to escape his controlling father—that forces him to accept.

Kasik has no reason to trust Nina, nor she to trust him. But, as they begin their journey, their chemistry is hard to ignore. Also hard to ignore? The tugging sensation of magic in Nina’s chest, awakening more questions than she can possibly answer as she travels with a handsome stranger to her unknown fate.

Genres: Fantasy, Young Adult, Fiction, Young Adult Fantasy, Historical Fiction, Historical, Historical Fantasy

368 pages, Hardcover

Expected publication June 2, 2026

About the author

RJ is a Peruvian/Venezuelan writer from Florida, where she lives with her husband, five children, three goats and nine chickens. When she’s not playing chauffeur or chef, she spends her time creating stories steeped in culture with characters who look just like her, or she’s shirking all responsibility to escape into the pages of someone else’s world.

Reviews

[jenny reads a lot · Rating 4 out of 5]

Their Will Undone has a rich, interesting world and magic, feminine rage, and kicking you feet and giggling romance!

I think this is a well executed YA fantasy and will wok very well for YA readers!

Whats to love…
- interesting, richly detailed world
- political machinations
- simmering feminine rage
- well executed micro tropes that’ll have you squealing!
- touch her and ☠️
- chosen one (a personal fav)
- only one (animal mode of transport)
- hand flex

What didn’t work for me…
- I think the author does a decent job showing you the world & the magic, but when it comes to emotions the book relies heavily on telling you how the characters are feeling rather than showing you how they feel. This became a bit repetitive, because even in cases where we were shown the emotions, it was followed up the exact details, telling us how we were to interpret those signals. I prefer a little less explanation and a little more faith in the reader to understand what we’re being shown. Granted this is a YA book, so a bit of hand holding is to be expected but it felt overly so at times.

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Thank you to the publisher for the gifted book. All opinions are my own.

[Lindsey Robison (theinfernalqueen)]

JUST ME PATIENTLY (not patiently) WAITING

[Zana]

DNF @ 87%

The story was really predictable. Nina volunteers herself as tribute. Nina and Kasik grow feelings for each other in like a few days on the road. Nina finds out that she's the "true chosen one." Then Nina and Kasik out that there's a darker fate in store for her. The emperor is a tyrant. Cue the possible rumblings of a rebellion.

I liked Nina's rage and the Incan worldbuilding. But unfortunately, they weren't enough to hold my interest. The story read like your generic YA fantasy with a Chosen One living under empire. None of the characters really stood out to me.

Thank you to HarperCollins and NetGalley for this arc.

[Starr ❇✌❇]

"the first book in a debut YA fantasy duology in which an Inca girl imprisoned in a priestess temple is summoned to the palace by an unexpected marriage proposal from the emperor, and must contend with both his infuriatingly handsome right-hand man and the dark magic growing inside her—and decide whether she'll be a bride or a weapon."

[Breanne Randall · Rating 5 out of 5]

Literally just waiting with bated breath. Everyone add this to your tbr!!!!

[Priscilla · Rating 5 out of 5]

✨Stay calm and in control. Do not let them see what you love. It is the only power that matters, and you are its only master✨

✨How strange it was to have the power to choose, and what a privilege✨

✨If I am a monster for protecting them. Then so be it. ✨

✨They couldn’t be friends, but he didn’t want to be her enemy ✨

✨No longer was she a forgotten nobody. No longer could she claim ignorance ✨

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📖Summary:
Inspired by a true story from the Inca Empire, this debut YA fantasy duology opener will appeal to fans of The Winner’s Curse, What the River Knows, and This Woven Kingdom. When Nina volunteers to take her sister’s place as a chosen bride for Amaru’s god-favored emperor, she is taken from the acllahuasi and escorted to the capital by Kasik, the emperor’s loyal soldier. Their perilous journey through hostile lands ignites mistrust, forbidden attraction, and awakens a dark, divine magic within Nina that ties her to the gods themselves. As duty and desire collide, Nina and Kasik must choose between loyalty to the emperor and the fate of their people—or the pull of their own hearts.

🖊️💞My thoughts:

Now this—THIS—is a debut novel. Wow. Just… WOW. The world-building and cultural depth are nothing short of phenomenal, and R.J. masterfully pulls you into the story from the very first page. NOT A SINGLE MOMENT DRAGS—I was on the edge of my seat the entire time, completely consumed, like I was watching a high-stakes telenovela unfold. Every chapter raises the bar with nonstop action, suspense, mystery, and absolutely addictive political drama. The story is immersive without ever being confusing, flowing seamlessly and effortlessly. From the moment you open the book, you’re transported to another world—and there’s no chance to breathe. It’s exhilarating, unputdownable, and impossible to forget.
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THE TWO MCs? I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THEM.
They are rich, layered, and unforgettable characters. Nina’s character development was handled beautifully- watching her grow into her strength felt earned and deeply satisfying. And Kamayuq—KASIK—oh my goodness!! THIS MAN. Seeing him come into his own was everything; I was rooting for him every. single. time. Dare I say it… Cyrus-level YEARNING. Yes, I said it. He became a new favorite almost instantly. My heart ached for him, for the impossible choices he had to make and the weight of loyalty he carried. He’s complicated, captivating, honorable—and devastatingly human (and let’s be real; it doesn’t hurt that he’s gorgeous). What makes them unforgettable is that both Nina and Kasik are loyal; both are desperately trying to do the right thing, and the reader is left rooting for both. You see every side, feel every conflict, and end up wrestling with their choices right alongside them. It’s emotional, powerful, and utterly consuming.
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THE DIALOGUE AND TENSION BETWEEN THESE TWO?!
I could write a PhD dissertation on it and still not do it justice. OH. MY. GOSH. There was literally a moment where I had to shut the book, stare at the wall, and question my entire life because my brain couldn’t cope. INSANE. Their chemistry? Masterclass. Chef’s kiss. Hotter than the sun on a Texas summer day. I am not saying I fangirled uncontrollably… but my neighbors may have called the cops. Mark my words peeps: this is going to be one of the top debut fantasy novels of the year. Come June 2nd, if you don’t have this on your TBR, do you even like fantasy? I was genuinely heartbroken when it ended, like “where do I go from here?”. And Ms. R.J. Valldeperas, please accept my eternal loyalty & all pre-orders from now on — because I am counting the days until book two. Te amooo!
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Huge thank you to NetGalley, HarperCollins Children's Books & R.J. Valldeperas for the ARC I am beyond grateful for the opportunity 💌.
All opinions are my own. Stay blessed, everyone!

[Chloe · Rating 5 out of 5]

Oh, this was absolutely incredible. It's everything that a YA fantasy should be, and the perfect mix of both anger and love. There is such a rich world, with such rich characters. It's utterly spectacular.

[Kate · Rating 4 out of 5]

I really enjoyed the way the author weaved this story together with a cultural integration that really made it feel quite unique! The book itself is very well written, especially for a YA.

I do think the relationship part of the book could have used some work. It felt a bit stilted, and some of their behaviors were a bit infuriating to me. I also really, realllllly disliked the ending. It made it quite clear that this book is not a standalone, but I really don't like how it ends.

All that said, I did enjoy reading it and found it to be engaging and an interesting read.

Thank you to HarperCollins and Netgalley for the opportunity to read an advanced reader's copy. All opinions are my own and I was not required to leave a review.

[Wanderlust Booknook]

I see Inca I add to tbr

[Maria Viale · Rating 3 out of 5]

I really really enjoyed this YA “coming of rage” fantasy.

This is a book I’ve been super excited to read, and it didn’t disappoint. The story follows Nina as she gets kidnapped by the emperor’s men, and Kasik, a loyal soldier who has been sent to collect Nina and bring her to the emperor as his new wife.

Nina and Kasik go on a journey through the forest where they start to develop feelings for each other.

The romance really took a back seat for me with this one. I was too busy wrapped into the Incan lore, and this book is rich with it. RJ Valldeperas created such a beautiful world with so much culture and color. It was expected for a YA fantasy - I just wasn’t excepting the depths to the world we were experiencing.

My real issue with the story is that I wanted a little more. A lot of big plot points lack in build-up and therefor don’t feel as tense or as monumental as they should - and I think it’s because a lot of things are happening and progressing off-page. I do think it’s the nature of the book being YA…we spend a lot of time reading about Nina’s rage, and Kasik’s inner turmoil, when we can spend that time building more of a foundation in the story or helping build a bit more tension.

Overall, I was really impressed with this one! Super excited to read RJV’s adult debut this fall and excited to see where the rest of the story goes.

[Kristine Gift · Rating 2 out of 5]

*Disclaimer:* A digital ARC of this book was provided by NetGalley and the publisher in exchange for an honest review.

I had high hopes for Their Will Undone after following its author R.J. Valldeperas on Instagram for ages, but unfortunately I was disappointed. While the writing itself was fine (I’m likely to pick up new work from Valldeperas in the future!), there were three things that repeatedly took me out of the story that I just could not look past.

I am going to spoiler tag the bulk of my review, since I am reviewing so far ahead of release. I don't think that the points below are truly spoilers, but I want readers to be able to go in without any preconceived ideas if possible!

First, the timeline. The beginning of the book did not make any sense to me. It takes Kasik 15 days to get to the acllahausi where Nina is taken. However, she was on the road for 3 days, then is there for 10 days, locked in for 3 days before he arrives (16 days total). So somehow, Kasik was sent out 1 day after she was captured, but how did anyone know to send him? How would someone have communicated back to the emperor in a single day to tell him to send Kasik out? And then on the way back, Nina and Kasik are waylaid for 2 days, and yet make it back to Amaru Kancha in the same amount of time (or one day faster?) as it took Kasik on the way out. I know this kind of complaint sounds like a nitpick, but we were given explicit numbers on how long these journeys took, so the fact they didn't click was something I couldn't shake.

Second, Nina and Kasik have insta-lust which comes off kind of ick because she is 17 and he is… some age older than that. We never get his age, but I pinned him to be probably 20 or so. However I did not feel any chemistry between them, so the overtures in their internal narrations rang hollow. And the instant attraction between them impacts my third point.

Third, Nina and Kasik have wildly inconsistent internal motivations. Nina, when traveling the woods with Kasik, vacillates between feeling loyal to Kasik, to remembering she has to protect her sister, to thinking she wants to stay in the woods, to deciding to go the palace and do vengeance… but vengeance for what? We kept getting these reminders of how she is so full of rage, but it was never clear what she was enraged about. It felt hollow and forced on the reader and mentions of her rage rarely came up organically. And Kasik… somehow he is a disappointment to his father, who he hates, but wants to impress, and also he’s friends with the emperor, but doesn’t really like him, and maybe will abandon him for this girl he met two weeks ago. He just couldn’t pick a lane and I never had a good sense of who he was.

Between the timeline, the insta-lust, and the inconsistent motivations, I never settled into this book. I found myself frustrated with the characters more than rooting for them. Really bummed to be giving this such a low rating, but I think this needed some more time in the developmental stage before release to iron out some of the issues re: pacing and character work. That said, I think this will absolutely find its fans in the romantasy space, especially among fans of The Jasad Heir which has similar pacing/female rage.

[BagginsMyFrodo · Rating 3 out of 5]

Their Will Undone in many ways was refreshing due to an over saturated market of the same recycled plots and characters. I’m always yearning for something unique and this seemed to fit the bill.

The setting of Their Will Undone is one that we the reader don’t stumble upon too often. This is largely where the book excels as the religious aspects, culture, and customs of this society definitely transport the reader into feeling a bit like we’ve time traveled.

The reader can tell that the author put work into sculpting this world even drawing from real Incan subjects and terms as well as aspects of this ancient society. It lends credence to the story and helps it find its footing.

Nina herself is a strong, courageous character whose innermost desire is to protect her family and will sacrifice anything in order to do so. She never deviates from this cause. The chapters with her POV were always a delight to read.

Kasik the MMC, however, was a disappointment entirely. The main words I think of when he comes to mind is weak and ineffectual. He is described as unfalteringly loyal but blind allegiance is imbecilic. Kasik knows that his emperor is a murderer who killed his own brother in cold blood and yet Kasik turns a blind eye to this horrendous act that he himself witnessed and continues to do the emperor’s bidding. Only a weak man would continue down such a path.

For over half of the book he stubbornly clings to this duty and loyalty despite its dubious nature. As if that wasn’t frustrating enough, at about the 60 percent mark, suddenly Kasik becomes incredibly wishy washy.

Throughout their journey, Kasik’s heart softened very quickly towards Nina but at a crucial point in the plot he is easily convinced that Nina is the enemy. Then a chapter later, Kasik lays it all out that he’d do anything for Nina, including forsaking his vows and allegiance to the emperor. Not long after, Kasik folds again and retreats back into to withholding secrets from her: secrets that very much deal with crucial information about her survival. This was an incredible betrayal in my eyes.

The romantic relationship that forms between Nina and Kasik doesn’t appear based at all on a soul match but merely out of the bond they formed through mutual sacrifice and survival as they traveled towards the imperial city. You can feel the attraction between the two but a lasting relationship is built more on a compatibility in the substance of who you are and what you believe. Kasik and Nina could not be more different in those aspects.

There are a lot of terms in the book that were hard to digest at first and I wish the author could have somehow made that easier to for the reader to comprehend. I had to keep backtracking to figure out what these foreign words were referring to.

There were inconsistencies as well in terms of how Ninas’s magic functioned that were frustrating. At times her “attay”, or magic, seemed to work like a solve-all-your-problems big red button and then at other times, it completely failed for no other reason than it didn’t suit the plot at that point.

The villains were deliciously villainous and were another strength of the story. You couldn’t help wanting to reach through the pages and stab them for their audacity and wickedness.

I will say that I do think the story kept a good pace, drawing the reader into wondering what would happen next and the ending left room for a lot more questions to be answered in part two. Everything culminates in a final showdown with moments that had my heart in my throat and had me speed reading to see the conclusion.

Honestly, I think the biggest weakness of the book was Kasik. Had he been removed I would’ve enjoyed it even more. I do think it’s worth checking out book two, if only Kasik can find it in himself as the Mulan movie says to “Be a Man”.

A big thank you to HarperCollins Children's Books for allowing me an ARC of Their Will Undone in exchange for an honest review!

[Laura Elisabeth · Rating 4 out of 5]

4 ⭐️

Thank you so much to NetGalley and the publisher for allowing me to read an ARC of this book. I am leaving this review voluntarily and all thoughts are my own.

Brilliant story with an intriguing world and a solid plot. I loved the writing and I think it had a really nice flow to it throughout the whole book. Great storytelling and wonderfully complex in its character arcs. I think Nina was such a strong main character to read about, and I especially loved the powerful ending and the way her rage is written and woven into the story.

I did have a few issues with Kasik and his blind loyalty... He had no trouble delivering (what he thought would be) a child bride to the emperor and had zero understanding for her situation and how it might not be seen as an honor for her when she is being forced to give herself and her body to a stranger who would be in complete control of her. I understand the purpose of showing us his unflinching loyalty and how he is shaped by the beliefs (and lies) of the people around him – I also acknowledge that he begins to question and challenge some of these beliefs later on and that it's a part of his growth and development. But: it's not the concept of the fact that girls and women are thought of as mere commodities to be traded around and used as "gifts" for powerful men that he begins to question – that's just the way it is, and it doesn't seem like he has any issue with this. But he does want to save this one particular girl, because he falls in love with her. Not because it's the right thing to do or because the whole foundation of their customs and their views of girls and women are horrible. At least that's what it seemed like to me, and I would have liked to see Kasik remove himself from this a bit more. I would like for him to feel bad, and not just because he wants to be with Nina.

I also struggled a bit with the fact that she is so young, and we know that he is older (we don't know exactly how much, but I'm assuming at least a few years). He is prepared for her to be a child (his words, not mine) and of course notices that she is older than what he initially thought – but he just found out (and still technically doesn't know how old she is yet), and yet he notices and stares at her naked thigh immediately and thinks about the way her body feels pressed against his. These are classic romantic tropes and I normally eat it up – it just felt a bit weird and inappropriate when she was so young and he was older and more powerful (in terms of position) than her. And I know it's a YA and therefore the characters are bound to be young, which is fine. It's just the fact that he wants her in a sexual way so early on and how that seems completely normal, and it just wasn't my favorite.

But overall, this was a strong book with a great premise and an insane ending (that I loved!), and I am very excited to see where everything goes from here.

[Betsy Holden]

I was excited to read Their Will Undone initially because of the premise being set around the Incan Empire (personally, I just traveled to Peru last fall and was mesmerized by the history) and the story of a this powerful young woman with this incredible undiscovered magic.

The novel centers around Nina, a young woman living in a small village with family and is taken one day while outdoors with her sisters by two men that work for the Emperor. She's brough to a home with other young women who are "touched by the gods" as she is (and is first learning truly). These women have been preparing their whole lives to be taken to live, serve or potentially marry the Emperor (despite him already being married).

Nina however is only there a short time before she is collected by our MMC, Kasik, who is a loyal lieutenant and childhood friend to the Emperor (and who's father is the Emperor's right-hand).

After taking her from the home Nina and Kasik have a long journey together, defying dangers in the dark forest, a group of people who are life changing for Nina and overtime developing feelings for each other. Once they reach the capital the story unfolds on a greater scale as we learn more about Nina's arrival, meet the various members of court (including the current empress who's my favorite) and learn a history we did not expect...

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First, I do believe it would have been helpful to put the glossary at the front of the book. I got very confused at times and kept wishing I had one. Then I finished and I didnt even know it existed until I had completed the book.

Overall, I did enjoy the story. The world is detailed and vibrant. I enjoyed hearing the legends of the Gods and the time that is spent with Shayim in the village before arriving to the capitol (I wish it had been longer frankly, I felt like that could have been flushed out a bit more) and then with Master Wara. I would have loved to have spent more time with them both. The supporting cast as a whole was great actually. And I liked the political intrigue as a whole, hearing what happened before Nina came into the picture.

The story naturally progressed with the stops in the two lead's journey but was a little redundant at times. Specifically in them actually getting to the capitol. It also was a bit insta-love in his immediate need to protect to her. However, that's not a deal breaker for me.

Nina's character growth felt slow initially and really picked up the last third of the book and it was very engaging but I did not care for the ending that much (despite knowing it's a cliffhanger....I'll get over it).

Ultimately, I had fun reading their story. Nina's emotions in the final moments took me by surprise, despite what happened, so I'll be very curious what that looks like moving forward. I don't even know where to start with Kasik! Honestly, I'm rooting for the Empress. :)

Book 2 should be a fun ride! 4 stars.


Thank you to NetGalley for an advanced copy in exchange for an honest review!

[Julia Rachelle · Rating 5 out of 5]

⚔️Their Will Undone⚔️

Prepare to hear me shout about this book from the rooftops because it was SO GOOD!! I’ve been excited to read TWU since before it was picked up by a publisher, so when I was approved for an ARC on @netgalley, I was jumping off the walls in excitement😂

The author pitched this book as an “Inca inspired coming of rage fantasy” and it absolutely lived up to that description!

My favorite part of the book was the setting and culture. The author writes in such a way that I could hear the sounds of the forest and see the colors on the walls, and she brought a rich world inspired by the Incas to life so beautifully on the page.

Nina, our FMC, is kidnapped literally in chapter 1 and the rest of the book follows her journey to the emperor’s palace. Along the way, she discovers an abundance of secrets and lies that stoke her fury until eventually, she snaps. Kasik, on the other hand, is a loyal soldier and friend of the emperor who follows orders without questioning them, even when he’s sent to escort a mysterious girl back to the palace. They encounter their fair share of unexpected trouble along the way, and Kasik begins to realize that he too has been lied to and Nina is not all she seems. I absolutely loved his wrestle between being a good soldier and following orders or following in Nina’s footsteps to question those in authority. It’s rare for me to love an FMC and MMC the same amount, but I loved Nina and Kasik so much💛

The ending of this book was BRUTAL in the absolute best way and delivered everything I was hoping for and more. R. J. Valldeperas is an absolute genius, and I can’t wait to see how she finishes this story in Book 2! This book is especially close to my heart because I grew up in Brazil (admittedly not the region that used to be the Inca Empire), but I couldn’t be more excited to see more fantasy books inspired by South American culture and mythology hitting the shelves!

Their Will Undone releases June 2, 2026, so there’s still time to preorder!

[Livros & Letters · Rating 4 out of 5]

First, they took her brother. Then they came for her sister. In a world where girls are taken and trained to become wives and servants, Nina steps in to protect her sister and ends up in the acllahuasi instead. Until one day, a soldier shows up and tells her he is there to take her away. Desperate to leave, she goes with him, and they embark on a journey, only to discover she is being brought to the emperor to become his wife.

Their Will Undone by R.J. Valldeperas shines with its rich world-building. You easily get pulled in, whether you’re running through the fields with the sisters or walking beside Nina along the gold-brushed walls of the kancha, the emperor’s home.

Nina’s journey explores what you would do to protect the people you love, and whether you would be able to live with the cost. I absolutely love the sister bond and how much it shapes Nina’s character and the choices she makes throughout the book. And while there is a romantic plot, I enjoy it when authors showcase other relationships.

The MMC POV was frustrating at times, but it made sense. He is someone who's starting to question everything he has been taught, and that shift doesn't happen overnight.

There were moments that felt a bit overexplained; however, the pacing was solid and kept things moving. I never felt bored. And the ending was not what I expected. I loved the ending. It opens the door in a way that feels different from the usual YA fantasy, and I am really curious to see where book two goes.

Thank you to NetGalley and HarperCollins for the eARC in exchange for an honest review.

[Mary Brahos · Rating 4 out of 5]

I first heard about Their Will Undone, a debut YA fantasy from RJ Valldeperas, on Instagram over a year ago and have been anxiously anticipating it since. Billed as an Inca-inspired "coming of rage" story, we follow Nina, a seemingly ordinary girl who volunteers as the emperor's chosen for the annual Harvest in an effort to save her sister, and later learns that she is destined to become his bride. Whisked from the chosen's acllahuasi by Kasik, the emperor's childhood friend and general, Nina must travel through a treacherous forest on her journey to the capital and uncover the meaning of a dark power that has recently awakened within her.

In Their Will Undone, Valldeperas has created an immersive and richly detailed world with memorable and multilayered characters. Nina in particular is everything I want in an FMC - smart, strong, and logical while remaining aware of her limitations and striving to adapt to whatever challenges come her way. The plot was well-paced and consistently engaging, and the climax truly made me gasp as all of the strings finally came together. While I wish elements of the magic system and the history of the gods were a bit more fleshed out, Their Will Undone is a strong YA debut and I am excited to see what Valldeperas has in store for us next.

Thank you to NetGalley and HarperCollins Children's Books for the ARC in exchange for an honest review!

[JodiMarie Meyer · Rating 5 out of 5]

I have been following the author's journey to publishing this YA Fantasy on Instagram for about two years now, and I’m so glad that I picked up an advance copy of it because it is stunning. I mean, it is so, so gorgeously written. I love her writing style and can’t wait to read more by her.

Their Will Undone is the first book in a romantic fantasy duology, inspired by a true story from the Inca empire, about a young woman who is selected to marry the emperor but is struggling with the dark power growing inside her and is, much to her chagrin, growing increasingly attached to her broody escort. The story world is wonderfully rich and atmospheric; the political intrigue feels both intensely high-stakes and intensely personal; and you will feel immediately connected to both Nina and Kasik (yes, it’s dual POV!), who are both cunning and sympathetic, soft-hearted and strong-willed.

I will warn you that there is a LOT of mounting tension that ends on a brutal cliffhanger, but if you like to be tortured in your reading, both romantically and mythologically, you will love it.

[claudia reads it all · Rating 5 out of 5]

A brilliant start to a YA duology set in an Inca-empire inspired world, Their Will Undone has compelling characters, detailed research, and a story that now has me waiting impatiently for the next book.

Nina is taken from her home in order to serve the empire. This is not an unusual practice but it is a brutal one nevertheless. Kasik is the warrior sent to retrieve her so she can marry the emperor, and while this may be an honor for her, she has lost enough that it is anger that fuels her now.

Kasik is steadfast and loyal to the empire, has been since childhood, but even he cannot stop himself from questioning everything he is told. And now there is this girl that gets under his skin and maybe Kasik doesn't really want to deliver her to the emperor, but that is his duty.

I loved the setting and the fire that burns between Nina and Kasik. The mythology and magic system are also well done and I can't wait for the second book to see how everything resolves!

[Nasrin · Rating 4 out of 5]

I rated this book 3.75 stars and rounded up to 4.
I was very intrigued with the book being inspired by a true story from the Inca Empire and the cover looking absolutely stunning.
Nina’s character development and her moral compass were done beautifully. She struggles with wanting to protect her family, especially her sister, and wanting to live her life on her terms. The same is with Kasik. He has known the emperor of most of his life and has been by his side essentially since childhood. He struggles with coming to terms with the fact that this was his friend and he is now doing some crazy things.
My biggest issue was the romance. It was trying its best to be enemies to lovers and at best it was annoyed to insta lust. The relationship wasn’t as developed as it needed to be for this book’s ending.

Thank you NetGalley for the eARC.

[Maya · Rating 4 out of 5]

This book is inspired by the Inca Maiden, which is a piece of history I knew absolutely nothing about until I started reading. I can always be appreciative when I learn something new, so I really enjoyed the reading experience. It's such a well-written piece of work for a debut novel, and that must be a great feeling for the author. I never felt like my attention was faltering, each chapter was just so interesting that it kind of felt like I was flipping through the pages because I was so eager to see what happened next. There were some sleepless nights while reading. The story was detailed oriented, the political aspect was intriguing, and a few other aspects/tropes that are enjoyable. The romance did kind of feel insta-lovey, which I'm not a huge fan of that. I feel like the relationship progressed too quickly for my taste, especially considering it had this forbidden aspect to it. I would have liked if it developed differently, but at the end of the day I still found it to be cute.

[Alexis Peters · Rating 3 out of 5]

I know this will be someone's favorite book, but unfortunately it's not mine.

This was a bit slow for me. We were halfway through before our main character really got her groove. It's described as "coming of rage" which I thought would be fun, but she's already plenty angry in the beginning of this book, so I didn't find her arc very compelling. Their attraction to each other was too fast, out of nowhere, and completely unfounded, so I did not care for the development of their relationship. In general, I just didn't care about what was happening.

There is a cool story here, and the world and lore is rich. It just didn't hit for me specifically, but I'm sure someone else will love this.

Thanks to Netgalley for the arc!

[Becky · Rating 3 out of 5]

I was so excited to receive this as an ARC. However, the story and I had a hard time connecting.
I actually loved the villains in this story. They were diabolical with plenty of twists and turns. The relationships they have with other characters example Atik and Kasik, are textbook.
It was our MMC and FMC that fell flat ( for me).
Nina, as the story progresses, begins to feel more and more anger and rage. Her inner monologue and thoughts become villainous, rather than that of a heroine. Kasik, our MMC, goes from being steadfast and blindly loyal to the emperor to suddenly offering to break his vows for her. Then, in the next chapter, he completely changes his mind. The relationship between them feels off and underdeveloped.

Thank you for choosing me to be an ARC Reader.

[Bebsi · Rating 4 out of 5]

The aspect that fuels me with SO MUCH adrenaline while reading is when the FMC goes from prey to predator. The female rage that capture this story was TOP TIER, Nina was the reason goosebumps erupted all over my arms.

Their Will Undone goes so deep into cultural factors and intricate world building, this book sucks you into its unique world from CHAPTER 1!!everyone knows a book is great when it’s first chapter is a masterpiece.

I loved the romance in this story. KASIK IS SUCH A SIMP. How I love it when men crawl to their woman because of injuries. THE DEDICATION? 😩🤌 this man knows his way around words and deserves a big warm hug and a good cup of coffee to enjot with his future wife!

[sya ☆ · Rating 3 out of 5]

This one ended up being an okay read for me. The Inca Empire-inspired setting really caught my attention, and I liked Nina’s coming of rage arc. Unfortunately, I wasn’t a big fan of her love interest, Kasik, since I found him more frustrating than appealing, which made it hard for me to root for their relationship. The pacing also felt slow, especially in the first half, and it took a while for things to really pick up. I also wished the magic system had been explored in more depth. Still, I enjoyed this overall, and I think it was a good debut.

[Anna O’Connell · Rating 3 out of 5]

Thank you NetGalley and HarperCollins for this early read. This was the first book that I have read that incorporates Mayan myths, history, culture, language, etc into a fantasy story. Though I found the romance to be a but predictable and cheesy, I did find the rest of the story to be interesting. I think it would be a great read for YA and teens interested in the romantasy, myth trope. I appreciated the connection between true history of the Mayans and white explorers in the story and how the author worked it into the fantasy storyline. Overall enjoyable read!

[Mystie · Rating 3 out of 5]

I received an advance copy of this book at no charge. This is my honest, voluntary review.

This book was weird for me. The plot was good. The writing was well done. I enjoyed the lore and where the story took the characters.
I understood the characters why they were how they were and the world they were in.

But... it just did not have that spark that takes a book from okay to great. And I really wanted it to and I expected it to. Sadly it did not for me.

All the elements were there for this one to be great, but in my opinion it fell short. Which is why I can only give it 3 stars.

[Jen Wagner · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.75 ⭐️ The worldbuilding was fascinating and lush! It felt fresh and I enjoyed reading a new culturally inspired fantasy. The plot was a good mix of tropey and new ideas that kept me on my toes. However some of the twists were too easy to spot. I also loved the characters and I’m excited to see how their arcs keep developing. I enjoyed the romance and the chemistry was good but it felt a bit rushed at the beginning.

Read if you like:
- female rage
- Inca inspired fantasy
- enemies to lovers
- soldier MMC
- powerful badass FMC

[Kie · Rating 4 out of 5]

Is it bad that I finished this in a day?

Thank you to Netgalley who gave me an ARC in exchange for a free review 💌

You dive straight into the story from the moment you turn to the first chapter, which I love!! The pacing of the story was perfect and I love how the author wasn’t afraid of giving her characters flaws. Also the YEARNING between Nina and Kasik is INSANE. The worldbuilding felt so unique and I loved every bit of it

[Shelby Schmidt · Rating 5 out of 5]

Thank you to NetGalley for this e-ARC.

A well-researched novel steeped in Andean history/mythology, stuffed with forbidden romance and political intrigue? Sign me up!

The gripping narrative is told by both Kasik's and Nina's point-of-view. Both characters have strong voices and are rich with personality. The plot is well-paced, keeping me engaged without stalling in the pages. I honestly couldn't put this story down and didn't want it to end!