*Rating: 2.5*
I have so many problems with this book, which I'll get into below. Yet, it was oddly enjoyable. As much as I was cringing, I couldn't stop reading. What is wrong with me?
I actually made a list of everything I disliked about this book. I'm awful, I know. But I thought it would help when writing this review.
Let's start with the writing style, shall we? It was awful, juvenile, and terribly cringey. The paragraphs had no flow to them. At first I was bored out of my mind because of the writing style. It was all written in passive voice, which can get old quickly. The characters lacked depth, and I couldn't connect to them well. (That, and they had confusing names...) Run-on sentences and spelling errors plagued this book. And, lord, help me, after every sentence, the characters would say "no?" (Such as "I'll bake a special cake, no?" or "You should ask her, no?") Starting from chapter thirteen, the word "no?" was used after a sentence eight times. That was only counting from chapter thirteen and on!! Also, Gertie, the MC, said "hee-hee-hee!" once, and I wanted to claw my eyes out. *sighs*
AND DO NOT GET ME STARTED ON THE INSTA-LOVE!! As soon as Gertie met a guy, she would try to make out with him, and then two seconds later, she was practically promising to be the mother of the his children. This happened with two guys in the story. So guess what that means?! Of course, a love triangle!! Now, as much as I enjoy love triangles, this one bothered me. Why? Because Gertie wasn't all like "Hey, give me time to figure this out because I love you both." No, she would lie to each person and say she didn't love the other, when she so obviously did, which would hurt both of them so much.
Now onto the characters:
Gertie. Gertrude. Self-centered, arrogant brat. Call her what you want. Her life is perfect. She's rich and beautiful; her parents force her to live in Greece for a year, and what does she do? Complain!! (Well, for the first few chapters, at least.) Like I said above, she constantly tries to make out with people. She is an emotional rollercoaster, always yelling at people one second and then kissing them the next. She is such a problematic teenager, too—always woe is me. And goodness, she trusts everyone after talking to them for a millisecond. On the first day she arrived, she made out with Hector without knowing him. Then on her second date with Jeno, she asked him to drink her blood. Like girl, you barely even know this dude. What are you doing????? She is also stupid. She literally walks into a cave of vampires, after being told not to by Jeno. And oh my, does this girl playfully punch wayyyyyy too much. Like if I were Jeno, I would've drop kicked her after how much she punched him "playfully." Last but not least, she is inconsiderate and mean. She never thinks of others' feelings. She is awful about her mom. She 1000000% disobeyed Nikita's parents, and then lied to them over and over. And then, after everything, she begs Marta to let her stay because "she loves her more than that woman (referring to her real mom) in New York."
Jeno and Hector were both arrogant, inconsiderate, and overly dramatic. (Oh, and Jeno was oftentimes extremely creepy—cute, but creepy...)
Now onto problems I had with the story that had to do with how it was written:
So obviously, the author forgot half the stuff she wrote because there were so many pieces of the story that contradicted other parts.
Such as.....
Jeno said that he could only take one pint of blood a month from the same human. Yet, after he takes Gertie's the first time, about ten days later, he feeds on her again. This cycle continued throughout the book. Ugh... Like how was he not killed by Hector from feeding on her so much??
Another one was that Jeno couldn't enter Phoebe's mind because he hadn't been invited into the Angelis's home, but he had entered Gertie's mind before just fine. Like she would be sleeping in their home, and he would just call her up. I'm confused????????
All in all, this book had so many flaws. But I liked it because I have no taste. Help me.
P.S. I kind of need the second book now....
P.P.S. Wait, I forgot to add this, but was Jeno just using her the whole time?? That cliffhanger nearly murdered me.