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Claimed
Derek never bonded with an omega when he was of bonding age, escaping the fate of so many of his peers. When he's asked by his older sister to chaperon a high school party, however, he runs into an omega that smells sweeter than any he's ever encountered before...
This story is about 7000 words long. All characters are eighteen years old or older.
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“Man, I’m so sorry. I didn't realize that this room was-”
“Shut up,” Derek growled, taking a step closer. He barely recognized himself, skin feeling too tight, that scent filling his nose making him want… making him need. The boy took a step back, a sour note of fear wafting off his skin. Derek reacted - he had no other word for it - charging the boy and slamming him back into the door, closing them inside the room. This time he turned the lock, preventing any interloper from coming in and interrupting him while he claimed what was his.
“Dude! Just calm down, OK. I’m sorry I interrupted your- Argh!” Derek clamped his hand down over the boy’s lips, palm gnashing into his teeth, pinning him to the door as he pushed his face into the boy’s neck. He buried his nose in the skin under the boy’s ear, opening his mouth wide, teeth elongating and getting ready to stake his claim. To seal the boy to him, to make it so that no one could ever take him away.
“Man! You don’t want this, OK! Just, take a step back. Please!” the boy was begging - hands pushing uselessly at Derek’s chest - working himself into a panic. Derek ignored him. Pretty soon the boy would be bitten and claimed, and any objections he had would be drowned out by the need to please his new alpha...
This story is about 7000 words long. All characters are eighteen years old or older.
---
“Man, I’m so sorry. I didn't realize that this room was-”
“Shut up,” Derek growled, taking a step closer. He barely recognized himself, skin feeling too tight, that scent filling his nose making him want… making him need. The boy took a step back, a sour note of fear wafting off his skin. Derek reacted - he had no other word for it - charging the boy and slamming him back into the door, closing them inside the room. This time he turned the lock, preventing any interloper from coming in and interrupting him while he claimed what was his.
“Dude! Just calm down, OK. I’m sorry I interrupted your- Argh!” Derek clamped his hand down over the boy’s lips, palm gnashing into his teeth, pinning him to the door as he pushed his face into the boy’s neck. He buried his nose in the skin under the boy’s ear, opening his mouth wide, teeth elongating and getting ready to stake his claim. To seal the boy to him, to make it so that no one could ever take him away.
“Man! You don’t want this, OK! Just, take a step back. Please!” the boy was begging - hands pushing uselessly at Derek’s chest - working himself into a panic. Derek ignored him. Pretty soon the boy would be bitten and claimed, and any objections he had would be drowned out by the need to please his new alpha...
31 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 27, 2014
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December 22, 2015Is this Teen Wolf fanfic? Alpha MC named Derek, who wears dark jeans, henley shirt, and leather jacket. Other characters in the series include a Scott, an Erica, and a Jackson, at the very least.
April 10, 2015
This is a truly terrible story. Maybe the platonic ideal of a terrible story. Among it's many crimes:
- The Alpha, Derek, is stupid, brutish, incompetent, and tedious. At one point he . He doesn't notice this and denies it ever happened.
- The Omega, Scott, runs the emotional gamut from petulant to clingy. Near the beginning of the story he calls Derek something like "stupid alpha asshole" but that is the peak of his character development.
- Head hopping
- Each "story" is a fragment - basically a chapter. There are seven parts or some such. Luckily I used a Kindle borrow rather than spending any actual money on this, and I won't be needing any more chapters.
- The dumbest sex scene ever. Ten inches entering the virgin in one stoke dumb. Dull as hell also.
I've deleted this from my Kindle andI want my 20 minutes back. And may God have mercy on its soul.
- The Alpha, Derek, is stupid, brutish, incompetent, and tedious. At one point he . He doesn't notice this and denies it ever happened.
- The Omega, Scott, runs the emotional gamut from petulant to clingy. Near the beginning of the story he calls Derek something like "stupid alpha asshole" but that is the peak of his character development.
- Head hopping
- Each "story" is a fragment - basically a chapter. There are seven parts or some such. Luckily I used a Kindle borrow rather than spending any actual money on this, and I won't be needing any more chapters.
- The dumbest sex scene ever. Ten inches entering the virgin in one stoke dumb. Dull as hell also.
I've deleted this from my Kindle andI want my 20 minutes back. And may God have mercy on its soul.
January 12, 2015
What the.......
A bigoted thirty-one year old alpha with antiquated views about an omega's place in society assaults a teenage omega at a party he's supposed to be chaperoning. There is nothing sexy or appealing about this, and it's a whole 15 minutes to read.
It was free. I feel like I should be reimbursed for my 15 minutes, though.
A bigoted thirty-one year old alpha with antiquated views about an omega's place in society assaults a teenage omega at a party he's supposed to be chaperoning. There is nothing sexy or appealing about this, and it's a whole 15 minutes to read.
It was free. I feel like I should be reimbursed for my 15 minutes, though.
April 30, 2015
Claimed is one way to put it.
Great start to what could be an interesting read. I found myself hoping the alpha wouldn't be a large a-hole and the omega with a bit of spine. Yet it looks like they both have a lot to learn. Looking forward to finding out how they progress. So far very well done,worth the money spent.
Great start to what could be an interesting read. I found myself hoping the alpha wouldn't be a large a-hole and the omega with a bit of spine. Yet it looks like they both have a lot to learn. Looking forward to finding out how they progress. So far very well done,worth the money spent.
May 16, 2015
It's an alpha/omega fan fiction. You have to understand that they have very basic animal instincts, views on matings etc. It's a little like slave/master relationships. It is angsty because some consider omega to be less than alpha. And the interesting part is the fight for omega rights, for equal position in the relationship
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