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Christian

I’ve always been a fan of the unconventional. Arya and I love to share, and Devon is a temptation I can’t resist. I just want a little fun while we’re on tour, no strings, no complications. They say that Ohio is for lovers, but will Devon be down to let me experiment?

Devon

Everyone comes, but nobody stays. I’ve stopped hoping they will. So when Christian offers something casual, just for the tour, I should’ve known better than to say yes. Now I’m caught between wanting him, and hating myself for always wanting more.

Loving Ohio is an MMF 17K word novella previously part of the We Shall Rise charity anthology containing themes and situations not intended for readers under the age of 18, now with bonus content. This story features a curious MMC, spicy bets, and explosive action...both on and off the dirt bike. It's book 2.5 in the State of Us series and can be read as a standalone.

75 pages, Kindle Edition

Published September 13, 2025

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194 reviews1 follower
October 22, 2025
I mean, I have nothing bad to say about this novella, only that it’s so damn short. I desperately NEED more from these three, but if I’m being honest, I especially need more of Christian and Devon. I’m so glad it seems like this is just the beginning for them because I need a full novel about those two. I don’t want just a few mentions of them in Logan and Salem’s book. No, no, Bree Wiley, don’t you dare do that! I need a whole novel.

I like Arya, I really do, but I love the connection Christian and Devon are developing even more. Devon intrigues me so much, and in this novella, it’s clear that he cares and wants someone to love him. The way he felt used was heartbreaking, and Christian’s confusion was palpable. And my god, the spice in this was WOW. Basically, almost every quote I want to share is dirty, and I love it. The Pride show they did was beautiful, and as always, the friend group is as nosy and amazing as ever. I’m so excited to see what’s next for this series.

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“Such a beautiful sight. But she's not who I want to serve. Eyes on Christian, I fall to my knees at his feet like the sinful little altar boy that I am and pray to the only deity I know. The only one who still listens.”

“The taste of her lipstick has faded, but the salt remains, Devon's cum still layering her tongue. As I set her onto our lumpy mattress and drop between her legs, I savor the taste of him before it's gone, still pissed off that he just left me. Us. Left us.”

“I like the way my cum looks on that pretty face, pastelito.”
I blink, my stomach flipping uncharacteristically at the praise. “Pastelito?”
His grin turns wolfish. “My little cake, covered in my frosting.”

“I can still taste her strawberry lip gloss on my tongue. Wish I could taste it on his dick.”

“You close, hot shot?” he murmurs. “Gonna come all over my cock and your girl’s mouth?”
“Oh, my god,” I bite out, clenching my teeth when his piercing drags over the side of my shaft. I throw my head back and erupt like the Fourth of July.
“There we go,” Dev groans thickly. “Feed her your cum. She’s going to swallow like a good girl.”

“Between Arya sucking my face, Christian's general vibe, and Taylor's attitude, I'm in a constant state of blue balls.”

“Jesus, is everyone in this friend group always so fucking nosy?” I bite out, and all three of them answer ‘yes’ in unison.”

“Taylor's standing to my left, fists clenched while Huck has a protective hand on his arm. Salem stands next to them, looking murderous. Arya is on the right, already twisting her hair into a bun like she's preparing to kick some ass in her heels, and I've never been more proud of my friends. My family.”
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208 reviews13 followers
October 24, 2025
Poor Devon 😢💔 He deserves better 🥺.
I really, really hope it's gonna be MM and not MFM, cause Arya just doesn't fit with them.
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458 reviews20 followers
September 22, 2025
Loving Ohio
A State of US Novella
Bree Wiley

Devon, Christian & Arya
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
🌶🌶🌶

MMF
Prelude Novella
Spicy bets
Sharing threesomes
Standing up to hate
Dirt bike tricks
Cliffhanger

Well this was a short and spicy little treat that left me begging for more

Wow I loved this

Christian and Arya are in a relationship. They frequently “play” with others.
Christian and Arya both I think for different reasons.

Devon being one of their play partners feels he is never chosen, just used and honestly my heart hurt for him.

“part of me always hopes— just once— someone might stick around for more.”

I'd love for someone to choose him.

The dynamic between Christian and Devon is tense yet hot as well.

“You know what I think you'd really like, hot shot? Taking my cock down your throat after I've fucked your girl like the filthy cuck you are.”

Devon wanting more and Christian i think is unaware yet of what he truly wants

“The night sky used to make me feel safe— the promise of something out there having my back, listening when I needed someone to talk to.”

This book sets us up beautifully for the next book to come.

I honestly can't wait
159 reviews
September 13, 2025
Go quick. Go on, off you go. stop reading this review immediately and download this book.
It was everything. I want more!!!
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1,024 reviews44 followers
January 3, 2026
What a ride. Devon just wants to be with someone that loves and appreciates him. He feels like just an experiment for Christian and Arya. He and Christian have a connection, can it be more?
732 reviews4 followers
September 21, 2025
It was ok. I don’t know what the point of the novella was. And I hated that it just ended unfinished. The next book is Salem and Logan’s book. So not sure if this is it for these 3 or if their story is a part of Salem and Logan’s.
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105 reviews2 followers
September 13, 2025
I first read this short story as part of an anthology but this novella has an additional chapter and OMFG I need Devon's full book! 😭 While he may be an a**hole, there's definitely more than meets the eye when it comes to him and I can't wait to see more of him and Christian.
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16 reviews2 followers
September 16, 2025
Attention Grabber

What a roller coaster of emotions this story brings! Just a taste of what's to come later, it's the perfect mini story. I can't wait to see more of these characters in 2026!
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297 reviews133 followers
September 18, 2025
I'm definitely intrigued by the chemistry between Christian & Dev and can't wait to see more of them in the future.
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66 reviews2 followers
December 23, 2025
They better get their own book!
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131 reviews5 followers
October 9, 2025
Devon! This guy definitely deserves an HEA. After getting a few chapters of him, I definitely need more. I hope Christian pulls his head out of his ass soon. Overall, I loved it. Haven't read a bad one yet from Bree 💚💚
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123 reviews10 followers
October 8, 2025
ℝ𝕖𝕧𝕚𝕖𝕨
𝕃𝕠𝕧𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕆𝕙𝕚𝕠
𝔹𝕣𝕖𝕖 𝕎𝕚𝕝𝕖𝕪
ꜱᴛᴀᴛᴇ ᴏꜰ ᴜꜱ ʙᴏᴏᴋ 1.5

𝕆𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕒𝕝𝕝 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
ℙ𝕝𝕠𝕥 📚📚📚📚📚
𝕊𝕡𝕚𝕔𝕖 🌶🌶🌶🌶🌶

Bree Wiley really knows how to mess with my emotions 😅 Loving Ohio might be a novella, but wow, it packed a punch. Christian, Arya and Devon completely pulled me in—I loved how Christian’s “queeriosity” was explored, and we finally got a deeper look at Dev’s struggles with identity and isolation. My heart just broke for him.

I swear, no one writes characters like Bree. I felt instantly connected to these three… which made the ending hurt even more. Bree, seriously, WHAT was that ending?! 😭 This book was like 500 pages too short, I could’ve lived in their world so much longer.

Fun story: I had to message Bree to get a visual on Dev, my mind just could not imagine him hot! I just kept picturing Tiger King 😅
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84 reviews
September 13, 2025
ALRIGHT BREE!!!! Way to comeback chica!!!

Delaware…life affirming!!! All the ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️s will forever have a special place for the great state of Delaware. It had alllll the love a human can stand with amazing storytelling and plenty angst to keep our full attention along the way.

Arizona….noooooo bueno!!!! Nothing else needs to be said about that.

And then here comes Ohio sneaking into my recommendations list seemingly out of nowhere AND I’m soooo grateful for it.

Yes, 75 pages was waaaay too short for the story I didn’t even know I was dying to read. But it was long enough to remind me that Bree is STILL that gurl!!!! I may not be exactly excited to read a whole book about Salem…not a fan of hers to say the least…BUT if it includes even a teeny tiny bit more detail about Dev, Christian and Arya, I am definitely willing to suffer the good fight for more of THEIR story. You have my full attention Ms Wiley!!!
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51 reviews
September 22, 2025
Ugh this novella made me really really want a HEA for Devon. He’s so misunderstood 😢

Ok spoilers ahead!!

But this novella also confused me a little… there’s obvious chemistry between Devon and Christian but it sort of seemed like Arya was just a pawn amongst it all instead of an mmf relationship I thought they were ganna have. I kinda really want just Devon and Christian to get together, I think they’re perfect for each other! But that also makes me sad for Arya, I find she’s often overlooked. She seems like such a sweetheart with so much passion but people just always seem annoyed with her presence.

SO I personally predict that she will leave both Christian and Devon forcing the two into a close relationship where they realize their love for each other. Then she will find love elsewhere hopefully with a girly because I would love Bree Wiley to write a sapphic romance, I think she’d be really good at that!

So yeah although this novella was very short it left me with a lot of questions and speculations. I’m really hoping these guys get their own books because we can’t possibly get all the answers in Logan and Salems book.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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123 reviews6 followers
September 29, 2025
“I can't help but wonder why I'm always the pitstop in everyone's lives on their way to something greater.“

Everything Bree writes is gold - and I’ll read every single word written in this series! I was so excited to be back in this world, even if just for a little. Note - if you haven’t read books 1 and 2, you need to do so before reading this!

This book took place while Christian and Taylor were on tour for their T.O.T show.

My heart really hurt for Dev - he felt so unwanted and like he didn’t matter to anyone - and I hated that. And Christian made me wanna scream - he needed to open his mouth and use his words! But I also understand him and his struggles to do that. And then there is Arya - who I definitely am excited to see her point of view when it comes to these boys.

I love Dev and Christian and I cannot WAIT to see what happens in their book! That cliffhanger?! 😩😩😩

What you’re getting:
MMF
Prelude novella
Spicy bets
Dirt bike tricks
Threesomes
Standing up to hate
Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️
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141 reviews7 followers
November 12, 2025
Christian and Devon! Oh and Arya.. But CHRISTIAN AND DEVON. We've been desperate for these two for a while now and thank you Bree for delivering!

This short story has me so fu*king pumped for their full length book! It's short and sweet but oh so spicy. Devon clearly has a lot of trauma to unpack, and the more we learn about him the more I can forgive the way he treated our baby Xed in CA.

Christian has been a constant favourite from FD and this glimpse into his queer awakening has me desperate for more.

The spice in this novelette is just delicious. The scenes with Arya are some of the best MFM I've ever read. While I'm definitely team Christian and Devon, I can appreciate Arya's talents and the part she's played in bringing our boys together.

This Definity feels like the beginning of something good for Devon and Christian and I am here for it!

Vibes:
• MFM to MM
• Queer awakening
• Broken boy
• Motocross
• Found family

Rating: 4.5⭐️
Spice: 3.5🌶
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131 reviews
December 4, 2025
Holly Molly!! What a ride!!

*spoilers*

Breeeee I basically loved the scene where dev calls christian out in the motel!! That just got me head over heels dev! I need more dev, his life so hopefully after Salem (which I'm super excited about too) we can get his story!! And I'm so sorry but yeah there's no way a throuple can work with Arya, her character feels like just that, a character that isn't that interesting (sorry) I tried I just don't see it. Hopefully we get MM Dev and christian I actually thought about them before I even knew of this novella. But of course you are the writer. I didn't mind the cliff hanger because if they get a book we have a pre quel, like we know the why. Something tells me is a second chances thing too. Christian and Devin have a lot of self work to do before the fall in love. Especially Christian, he is unable to separate lust from love, which if you think about it Arya does deserve someone better.
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141 reviews
December 3, 2025
I grabbed Loving Ohio as a quick read because, honestly, I’ve been missing this friend group and was excited to slip back into their world for a bit. But somewhere along the way, my enjoyment fizzled.

Christian has never been my favorite, but this book pushed me firmly into nope territory. The way he treats both Dev and Arya - like pieces on a board he can manipulate to get what he wants - left me more irritated than invested. Every interaction felt like another reminder that he’s playing a game only he benefits from, and I honestly hope he can recover in the books following.

There are still flashes of the charm and camaraderie I love in this series. But overall, this installment just didn’t land for me. I walked away feeling more “ugh” than anything else.

Hoping the next book brings back the heart I know this series can deliver.
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47 reviews1 follower
December 22, 2025
CHRISTIAN AND DEVON!!! 🫠
I already know Devon’s story is going to kill me. I am such a huge sucker for the “bad”—but really just broken—guys. Getting to see glimpses of their soft, sensitive sides that just need love and care is absolute perfection, and this story was chock full of these moments. The raw vulnerability and emotion behind Devon’s thoughts (and actions) had me hooked immediately. And Christian opening up and exploring his sexuality? I am so here for it. I cannot wait for more of these two. Or three, if Arya sticks with them. Although, I honestly hope Arya finds someone better for her and just Christian and Devon end up together.

This little novella packs a HUGE punch. I cannot get enough.

MMF & MM 🌶️🥵 - THE SPICE!! Ooof.

This can be read alone, but I recommend reading Finding Delaware and Crossing Arizona first for the best reader experience.

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1,638 reviews17 followers
December 20, 2025
Not a Complete Story

Title: Loving Ohio
Author: Bree Wiley
Format: ebook
Genre: Romance, MMF, Sports (motocross)
Standalone: nope - ends on a cliffhanger
Part of a Series: State of Us book 2.5
POV: Christian, Devon
Steam Level: toasty
2/5

Ugh I was not expecting a cliffhanger so I bumped my rating a full star down. The front said that it was best to read in order to avoid spoilers but nothing about there being no end.

Aside from that this book was okay. I didn’t really connect with the characters and their self-loathing had me feeling the same. Nobody talked and then got mad when the other characters didn’t know what was going on.

I probably won’t continue with this series.
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128 reviews1 follower
September 14, 2025
Christian, the other half of the Twins of Terror is a pretty open guy when it comes to his sex life. He and his gf Arya like to spice things up. A newcomer to the circuit, Devon is on Christian’s radar. Christian wants to add him as a third and just fool around on the tour. Devon is up for it, but ends up wanting more with Christian and Christian wants to be in control of things between Devon and Arya.Devon gathers what’s left of his Alf worth and walks away.
This novella is book 2.5 of The State of Us series with more to come. It ends on a cliffhanger.

Graphic sex, drug use, not meant for under age 18.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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9 reviews
November 2, 2025
I NEED MORE OF CHRISTIAN AND DEV. That’s it, that’s the review. But really….

I was really let down by Crossing Arizona but this was a good comeback but SO SHORT. I’ll read Logan and Salems story to get more of Dev, because color me intrigued, nothing I love more than a sad bad boy. I am really looking forward to Christian and Dev, sorry you’re cute Arya but I’m hoping it’s MM and not MMF because the chemistry between these two was 🥵. Fingers crossed.

Finding Delaware 5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Crossing Arizona ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Loving Ohio ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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189 reviews13 followers
January 8, 2026
I wish this was longer. Can’t wait for the book. I feel heartbroken for Devon 💔. I really like Dev and Christian chemistry together. I would like a POV of Arya. Currently I feel she is just there, i don’t know if she goes with the relationship between all 3 of them. Would understand her more if she had her own POV, otherwise I currently feel that Dev and Christian fit more together than all 3 of them together. I also hope Dev & Logan talk things out. What Salem said about Dev was just insensitive.
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222 reviews
September 17, 2025
⭐️⭐️⭐️.5

I had no idea what to expect with this story. This novella seems to be between Christian, Arya, and Devon.

Christian and Arya are a couple but Arya also likes to flirt and more with Devon. While they’re all on tour in Ohio, Christian decides to give the 3 of them a try but Devon seems to want more.

Supposedly this story will continue later as it ends in sort of a cliffhanger. The next book will be about a different couple Logan and Salem.
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273 reviews6 followers
October 31, 2025
My Spicy Rating: 4🔥

Noooo. 😭 I knew this novella would end in a cliffhanger and I still read it. I try to avoid those at all costs but I'm addicted to the author's writing. She is fantastic at writing smutty scenes. She is amazing at putting so much emotion into her characters story. There is so much pain and need. I just want to cry for Dev. I need more. I can't wait to read more from this throuple. It's going to be mind blowing and painful. I just know it.
10 reviews
November 24, 2025
A Look into Devon

I loved this messy little novella. Not only do we get to peek inside Dev’s head and get some good spice with him but we also have the mystery of him and Logan and their family in the background.

I can’t wait to hear more about this entire horny little friend group I love so much. I’m not sure if Dev will get his own book but I’m sure we will find out more about the mystery and why Dev feels he doesn’t belong when we get Salem and Logan’s book out early 2026. I’m hooked.
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148 reviews10 followers
January 16, 2026
3.5 stars
🌶️🌶️🌶️
First of all, phoooooey these guys are hoootttt! But also, wtf? I didn't realise this would end in a sad 'cliffhanger'! That's honestly the only reason I gave this 3.5 stars. It would've been 4.25 otherwise.
I guess now I have to read the next book in this series (I'm seriously so devastated 😏).
We already know Bree is amazing at writing complicated, flawed characters and Devon and Christian are no different.
Can't wait for the next one!
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