I so much hope for this book but there is just so many inconsistencies, the scenes are too blended together-I mean, two pages apart we went through three/four days and also having the MMC come and go super convenient and the fact he can overhear everything the FMC says to his men just kinda feels so forced. Idk I hate to diss, because again, this concept sounds pretty good! But if it weren’t for the hard Hunger Games moment in the beginning, and the way the story unfolds that makes the chemistry seem a bit forced-it could’ve be great. Plus, by the time they get into it for the first time, it seems so forced and kinda out of no where. I basically reacted with shock and “oh wow okay we’re doing this” than screaming for more.
And my biggest issue- some of it seems like the work of ai and the fact the cover is made with ai doesn’t help :/