I rarely write reviews — and I’ve never written a negative one — but I had to this time. What a complete waste of time. I read five books hoping something would redeem the lack of plot, character development, or any sense of direction in a storyline that just draaaaaaaaggggsss.
Reviews on Amazon warned me that things wouldn’t get any better, and they were absolutely right. I saw no point in finishing book six. I spent all five first books waiting for the protagonist to finally grow a spine, yelling at the “bad guys,” and getting increasingly frustrated with all the errors. Characters’ names were changed or misspelled so often that it became impossible to keep track of who was who. And lawd, there were so many new, irrelevant characters introduced with no real purpose to the overall plot. There was no consistency, no cohesiveness — just chaos.
It honestly felt like the author was rage-baiting us into continuing, and unfortunately, it worked. I’m just mad at myself for sticking with it this long.
The story could have potential, but for the love of all that is holy, get an editor — and condense this mess into one decent book!