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Una dulce mentira
No estaba buscando un nuevo trabajo y no tenía ninguna experiencia como niñera.
Solo había ido a entregar un pedido de cupcakes.
Pero una dulce mentira no le hace daño a nadie, ¿verdad?
Además, ser chef de repostería es mucho más difícil que cuidar niños, ¿no?
FALSO.
Antes de que pudiera confesar la verdad, el multimillonario más gruñón de Manhattan me hizo una oferta que no pude rechazar y fui lo bastante estúpida como para aceptarla.
Pero me olvidé dejar el corazón fuera de todo el asunto…
Solo había ido a entregar un pedido de cupcakes.
Pero una dulce mentira no le hace daño a nadie, ¿verdad?
Además, ser chef de repostería es mucho más difícil que cuidar niños, ¿no?
FALSO.
Antes de que pudiera confesar la verdad, el multimillonario más gruñón de Manhattan me hizo una oferta que no pude rechazar y fui lo bastante estúpida como para aceptarla.
Pero me olvidé dejar el corazón fuera de todo el asunto…
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First published October 1, 2024
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Whitney G.
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December 11, 2024
3.5 stars rounded up
An 18 year age gap from Whitney G had me one-clicking faster than I could blink 👀. This is my favorite from Whitney G’s newest releases 👏🏻.
Pierce (45) can’t believe he has twins; even after many positive paternity tests have confirmed it 😅, he’s in shock. Not only does he have newborns to take care of (their mother died after giving birth), but he’s also taking care of his foster sister’s 8-year/old daughter 😬. He needs help.
Harlow’s (27) an amazing baker and after she gets fired from her Michelin stars job, she’s in need of a job ASAP 😬. So when she applies to an agency and she gets called in to work for a billionaire as a nanny (and not the job she originally signed up for), she can’t say no- especially when she’s getting a six-figure salary that would make any struggling person weep 😅.
As soon as she begins, there’s tension between her and Pierce 👀. This megalomaniac thinks way too highly of himself and isn’t going to make it easy on her 😅. Not to worry though, cause Harlow’s got this 💅. She isn’t gonna let his grumpy a wear her down…
She just needs to maintain the one sweet lie she’s been telling this whole time 🫣
What I liked/loved:
—the banter 🤣. I love how quick witted and sharp they are with each other 🤣 especially once things get steamy 👀
—the tension 👀. Ufff. Yes 👏🏻
—the 🔥. This is on the medium/slow burn side with some early base hits happening in the mid 40s and full home runs by 60% ish 🔥
—the dirty mouth on Pierce 🥵. Yuuuup 💦
—the kids ❤️ especially Olivia 🫶 that girl needs so much love 🫶
—the dance floor scene 🥵. NGL. I wish Harlow had said she knew it was Pierce, but still 🔥
—the twist 👀 didn’t see the guilty person causing the drama as the one causing the drama 👀
—the side characters 👏🏻 I’m glad Harlow has reliable friends on the side
—Pierce scrambling for Harlow 😈. Love it when the guy suffers the consequences of his rashness 😅. I’ll admit. I understood why, but come on man 🤦🏻♀️
—Pierce confronting his foster sister 👏🏻
What I didn’t like/wanted more of:
—the lack of a proper epilogue 😒. We get a one page ish epilogue with no real time frame. If you sign up for the newsletter, we’re supposed to get another one, but I never go it 😭. I just want my epilogue 🤣
—making him grovel more 😑. Man. Pierce really made Harlow feel like ish 😒. He needed to grovel and she needed to not cave in too quickly 😒. I do love that he scrambles to find her, but I needed more scrambling 🤷🏻♀️
—how quickly things happen, as in, I wanted more development 😒. This is less than 300 pages and has 53 chapters plus the epilogue. I wish some of these chapters/scenes had more detail/depth. This also related to the time jumps 😒
—the lack of info on Harlow’s past. What I mean is that we find out how much of a loose character Pierce is, but we don’t know much about Harlow 😐.
Overall, I enjoyed this ❤️ I just wish there was more at the end
⚠️safety squad⚠️
-no cheating/sharing/omd
-neglectful parents/mom
-foster system upbringing
-mild owd: not true owd but the H’s assistant causes drama between the MCs. In another scene, a woman hits on the H but he makes he clear he doesn’t want her
-not really omd: the h’s ex hires her and then doesn’t pay her. He comes by later in the book to pay her
-HEA/epilogue
An 18 year age gap from Whitney G had me one-clicking faster than I could blink 👀. This is my favorite from Whitney G’s newest releases 👏🏻.
Pierce (45) can’t believe he has twins; even after many positive paternity tests have confirmed it 😅, he’s in shock. Not only does he have newborns to take care of (their mother died after giving birth), but he’s also taking care of his foster sister’s 8-year/old daughter 😬. He needs help.
Harlow’s (27) an amazing baker and after she gets fired from her Michelin stars job, she’s in need of a job ASAP 😬. So when she applies to an agency and she gets called in to work for a billionaire as a nanny (and not the job she originally signed up for), she can’t say no- especially when she’s getting a six-figure salary that would make any struggling person weep 😅.
As soon as she begins, there’s tension between her and Pierce 👀. This megalomaniac thinks way too highly of himself and isn’t going to make it easy on her 😅. Not to worry though, cause Harlow’s got this 💅. She isn’t gonna let his grumpy a wear her down…
She just needs to maintain the one sweet lie she’s been telling this whole time 🫣
What I liked/loved:
—the banter 🤣. I love how quick witted and sharp they are with each other 🤣 especially once things get steamy 👀
—the tension 👀. Ufff. Yes 👏🏻
—the 🔥. This is on the medium/slow burn side with some early base hits happening in the mid 40s and full home runs by 60% ish 🔥
—the dirty mouth on Pierce 🥵. Yuuuup 💦
—the kids ❤️ especially Olivia 🫶 that girl needs so much love 🫶
—the dance floor scene 🥵. NGL. I wish Harlow had said she knew it was Pierce, but still 🔥
—the twist 👀 didn’t see the guilty person causing the drama as the one causing the drama 👀
—the side characters 👏🏻 I’m glad Harlow has reliable friends on the side
—Pierce scrambling for Harlow 😈. Love it when the guy suffers the consequences of his rashness 😅. I’ll admit. I understood why, but come on man 🤦🏻♀️
—Pierce confronting his foster sister 👏🏻
What I didn’t like/wanted more of:
—the lack of a proper epilogue 😒. We get a one page ish epilogue with no real time frame. If you sign up for the newsletter, we’re supposed to get another one, but I never go it 😭. I just want my epilogue 🤣
—making him grovel more 😑. Man. Pierce really made Harlow feel like ish 😒. He needed to grovel and she needed to not cave in too quickly 😒. I do love that he scrambles to find her, but I needed more scrambling 🤷🏻♀️
—how quickly things happen, as in, I wanted more development 😒. This is less than 300 pages and has 53 chapters plus the epilogue. I wish some of these chapters/scenes had more detail/depth. This also related to the time jumps 😒
—the lack of info on Harlow’s past. What I mean is that we find out how much of a loose character Pierce is, but we don’t know much about Harlow 😐.
Overall, I enjoyed this ❤️ I just wish there was more at the end
⚠️safety squad⚠️
-no cheating/sharing/omd
-neglectful parents/mom
-foster system upbringing
-mild owd: not true owd but the H’s assistant causes drama between the MCs. In another scene, a woman hits on the H but he makes he clear he doesn’t want her
-not really omd: the h’s ex hires her and then doesn’t pay her. He comes by later in the book to pay her
-HEA/epilogue
October 5, 2024
This was such a ridiculous story.
Does it deserve the 3 stars I’m giving it? Nope! But I’m doing it anyway because I had such a fun time reading this and that’s all that matters to me today 😂🤷🏾♀️
Does it deserve the 3 stars I’m giving it? Nope! But I’m doing it anyway because I had such a fun time reading this and that’s all that matters to me today 😂🤷🏾♀️
October 12, 2024
DNF at 20(something)%
I've read a bunch of you saying this is crazy and ridiculous but fun so you just read on, and while I agree it's bonkers, I'm not having any fun. It's so bizarrely outside the real of humor that I think the scenes belong in some kind comedy club.
This is mostly in poor taste and a waste of time and money.
Please don't come at me for rating this book before I "finish" because there's no law out there you have to finish a product before you rate it. That's actually one of the dumbest arguments I've see go around on social media. I've wasted enough Saturday morning time now. See ya next time.
I've read a bunch of you saying this is crazy and ridiculous but fun so you just read on, and while I agree it's bonkers, I'm not having any fun. It's so bizarrely outside the real of humor that I think the scenes belong in some kind comedy club.
This is mostly in poor taste and a waste of time and money.
Please don't come at me for rating this book before I "finish" because there's no law out there you have to finish a product before you rate it. That's actually one of the dumbest arguments I've see go around on social media. I've wasted enough Saturday morning time now. See ya next time.
October 7, 2024
No one writes a sassy, steamy, snarky rom-com like Whitney G. I absolutely LOVE her heroes. I don’t even know how to describe what it is about them except that I crave more each time I reach the end of the book. One Sweet Lie is no exception and Pierce was hilariously difficult when it came to his children and Harlow. I was totally taken by this story and could not stop reading it. This is a fast read with characters that are wonderfully relatable and a storyline that was addicting. I need more of this couple, more of the children and more from this author.
Dual POV
Safe
Dual POV
Safe
no-way-jose
January 10, 2025No rating, DNF at 8%. I love my hero to be a grumpy jerk, but this guy was not it. He was unreasonably rude in a way that made him look beyond ignorant. I couldn’t even get thru the first chapter of his nonsense. His whole conversation with the police detective and nurse was unrealistically rude and idiotic. Not impressed.
October 6, 2024
4 stars ⭐️
October 6, 2025
venía de lectura de -1 estrellas, y este libro me ha salvado... LO QUE ME HE REIDO CON ESTE LIBRO...
Los protagonistas son todo lo que está bien, tiene el spicy justo y necesario.
3.5
Los protagonistas son todo lo que está bien, tiene el spicy justo y necesario.
3.5
October 23, 2024
★ 4 ★
📖 what it's about:
After getting fired from a Michelin starred restaurant, Harlow Hawthorne visits an agency with a box of baked goods but is mistaken for someone applying for a live-in nanny position. When the agency discloses the salary—money that could help her open her own bakery one day—Harlow lies, claiming she is indeed there for the nanny position and that she has experience with children.
Pierce Dawson is skeptical when he learns that Harlow has applied for the nanny position. She’s young, yet insists she has a decade of nannying experience. After multiple failed interviews with other candidates, Pierce reluctantly hires Harlow, fully expecting her to quit within the week.
📝my thoughts:
Whitney G. is an author who knows how to write great banter, heated scenes, and awesome characters, so it was a no-brainer for me to pick up this book. I love the single-dad trope and knew I would fly through it in one sitting.
Pierce was kind of an asshole (the good kind *wink*) if I’m being honest, and at times I wanted to reach through the pages and punch him in the balls. But I love this author’s work, so I knew I’d be swooning soon enough. The way he treated Harlow—never allowing her any time off and making her look after his kids and niece without rest—had me boiling, but I loved how Harlow stood up for herself. For me, Harlow, Olivia, and the twins stole the show—I could legit read a whole book with just them! Overall, this was an enjoyable read, and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
🩷 FMC: 5+/5
💙 MMC: 4/5
📖 Story: 4/5
⌛️ Pace: 4/5
❤️🔥 Heat: 3/5
👩❤️💋👨 Romance: 3.5/5
🤩Overall Rating: 4 🌟
🗣️POV: Dual (1st)
🎧 or 📖: I read this book on my Kindle.
📜Favorite Character[s]: Harlow.
💜Tropes: Single dad x Live-in Nanny, Billionaire MMC, Close Proximity, Age gap.
📚Series or Standalone: Standalone.
🤔 Would I recommend: Yes!!
📖 what it's about:
After getting fired from a Michelin starred restaurant, Harlow Hawthorne visits an agency with a box of baked goods but is mistaken for someone applying for a live-in nanny position. When the agency discloses the salary—money that could help her open her own bakery one day—Harlow lies, claiming she is indeed there for the nanny position and that she has experience with children.
Pierce Dawson is skeptical when he learns that Harlow has applied for the nanny position. She’s young, yet insists she has a decade of nannying experience. After multiple failed interviews with other candidates, Pierce reluctantly hires Harlow, fully expecting her to quit within the week.
📝my thoughts:
Whitney G. is an author who knows how to write great banter, heated scenes, and awesome characters, so it was a no-brainer for me to pick up this book. I love the single-dad trope and knew I would fly through it in one sitting.
Pierce was kind of an asshole (the good kind *wink*) if I’m being honest, and at times I wanted to reach through the pages and punch him in the balls. But I love this author’s work, so I knew I’d be swooning soon enough. The way he treated Harlow—never allowing her any time off and making her look after his kids and niece without rest—had me boiling, but I loved how Harlow stood up for herself. For me, Harlow, Olivia, and the twins stole the show—I could legit read a whole book with just them! Overall, this was an enjoyable read, and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
🩷 FMC: 5+/5
💙 MMC: 4/5
📖 Story: 4/5
⌛️ Pace: 4/5
❤️🔥 Heat: 3/5
👩❤️💋👨 Romance: 3.5/5
🤩Overall Rating: 4 🌟
🗣️POV: Dual (1st)
🎧 or 📖: I read this book on my Kindle.
📜Favorite Character[s]: Harlow.
💜Tropes: Single dad x Live-in Nanny, Billionaire MMC, Close Proximity, Age gap.
📚Series or Standalone: Standalone.
🤔 Would I recommend: Yes!!
October 12, 2024
Harlow needs a job after losing her own working as a pastry chef. Her dream is to open her own bakery and she takes a nannying job for billionaire turned daddy overnight Pierce who expects her to be available to him 24/7. After a month of non-stop nannying she is almost going crazy not having a personal life and Pierce is trying hard to avoid the nanny who he finds hard to ignore and sexy as hell. The two of them give into their passion but when he finds out about her lie and never having been a real nanny he throws her out and must learn to forgive her and discover that there were others who also wanted her gone.
I love alpha billionaire romances and I really liked Harlow and her relationship with the children and Olivia in this book. I hated Denise and I loved most the other staff. In my opinion Harlow could have made Pierce grovel a bit more but all in all I really loved this book and how long it was. I enjoy all of Whitney G's books and novellas and this was no different and I can't wait for the next.
I love alpha billionaire romances and I really liked Harlow and her relationship with the children and Olivia in this book. I hated Denise and I loved most the other staff. In my opinion Harlow could have made Pierce grovel a bit more but all in all I really loved this book and how long it was. I enjoy all of Whitney G's books and novellas and this was no different and I can't wait for the next.
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October 13, 2024
I got through it but like wtf happened to this author’s work
I miss the days of reasonable doubt and turbulence. This isn’t it. I miss full length stories that made sense and the endings weren’t so rushed. Also the typos.
I miss the days of reasonable doubt and turbulence. This isn’t it. I miss full length stories that made sense and the endings weren’t so rushed. Also the typos.
December 15, 2025
3,5⭐
Los libros de esta autora son, con frecuencia, la mejor de las opciones como lectura, sobre todo si te asola un bloqueo lector, como es mi caso. Su sencillez y su objetivo de resultar directa, le lleva a desarrollar romances de lo más entretenidos que te alejan notablemente del aburrimiento.
Una dulce mentira, seduce en base a la construcción de un romance por entero básico y predecible, pero a la par dulce, al integrar en su historia, personajes adorables. Es tal su corta extensión, que se trata de un relato con gran capacidad para convencer y atrapar, en el que se fusionan sentimientos y erotismo, como seña de identidad del estilo de la autora. A pesar de que pudiera parecer un libro apresurado en su desarrollo, lo cierto es que se sabe jugar bien con los tiempos, alejando con ello cualquier atisbo de decepción, sus descripciones directas, no obvian detalle interesante, sino que concentra en pocas páginas, una historia amena.
Una mentira piadosa, se convierte en el contexto y paisaje perfecto para esta historia de amor encarnada por personajes principales que, aun no contando con demasiadas aristas, saben adornar la trama sin que su falta de profundidad sea un elemento negativo.
Whitney G. siempre sabe lo que el lector busca para alcanzar el tan ansiado entretenimiento. Con este libro, se observa una intención porque su estilo se rodeo de una cuidada sensibilidad, relatando con ello escenas del todo bonitas.
Su extensión, algo más corta de lo acostumbrado, hace de él un libro por completo ágil, que se lee en un suspiro. Aunque pueda parecer que se trata de una historia con escasos giros argumentales, lo cierto es que tiene gran capacidad para hacer que su lectura sea recomendable y en sus páginas finales nos espera una pequeña sorpresa argumental que aunque no goza del desarrollo espero, hace que su historia se cierre con una gran sonrisa.
Reseña completa en el blog: https://aeternamdea.blogspot.com/2025...
Los libros de esta autora son, con frecuencia, la mejor de las opciones como lectura, sobre todo si te asola un bloqueo lector, como es mi caso. Su sencillez y su objetivo de resultar directa, le lleva a desarrollar romances de lo más entretenidos que te alejan notablemente del aburrimiento.
Una dulce mentira, seduce en base a la construcción de un romance por entero básico y predecible, pero a la par dulce, al integrar en su historia, personajes adorables. Es tal su corta extensión, que se trata de un relato con gran capacidad para convencer y atrapar, en el que se fusionan sentimientos y erotismo, como seña de identidad del estilo de la autora. A pesar de que pudiera parecer un libro apresurado en su desarrollo, lo cierto es que se sabe jugar bien con los tiempos, alejando con ello cualquier atisbo de decepción, sus descripciones directas, no obvian detalle interesante, sino que concentra en pocas páginas, una historia amena.
Una mentira piadosa, se convierte en el contexto y paisaje perfecto para esta historia de amor encarnada por personajes principales que, aun no contando con demasiadas aristas, saben adornar la trama sin que su falta de profundidad sea un elemento negativo.
Whitney G. siempre sabe lo que el lector busca para alcanzar el tan ansiado entretenimiento. Con este libro, se observa una intención porque su estilo se rodeo de una cuidada sensibilidad, relatando con ello escenas del todo bonitas.
Su extensión, algo más corta de lo acostumbrado, hace de él un libro por completo ágil, que se lee en un suspiro. Aunque pueda parecer que se trata de una historia con escasos giros argumentales, lo cierto es que tiene gran capacidad para hacer que su lectura sea recomendable y en sus páginas finales nos espera una pequeña sorpresa argumental que aunque no goza del desarrollo espero, hace que su historia se cierre con una gran sonrisa.
Reseña completa en el blog: https://aeternamdea.blogspot.com/2025...
March 27, 2025
This book was very cute and I finished it in one day. I give it 4.5 ⭐️ because the ending felt very rushed and left me wanting so much more. How did Pierce make everything up to Harlow? How did he reconcile with a person who had loved him for years? What about Olivia’s mom? So many questions, but overall it was very cute and I don’t regret reading it.
October 5, 2024
one sweet lie
As always Whitney G out did herself on another book! This book is such a cute love rom com! I can’t wait for her next release!
As always Whitney G out did herself on another book! This book is such a cute love rom com! I can’t wait for her next release!
December 8, 2024
Якось все так швидко.
Звідки взялось кохання, якщо взаємодії між головними героями, як такої, то і не було 😩
Звідки взялось кохання, якщо взаємодії між головними героями, як такої, то і не було 😩
April 30, 2025
I needed a palate cleanser after reading a super dark book. Whitney G is my guaranteed bet! Great writing with all the feels.
September 30, 2025
Novela corta para pasar la tarde sin más
October 9, 2024
2.5 stars generously rounded up. I've read several books by this author and have easily given them 4 or 5 stars. Unfortunately, this book was nothing like the others. It felt extremely rushed and was in desperate need of copy editing. I can overlook a few mistakes, but this had serious mistakes with plot holes, timeline errors, and a problem with consistency when it came to details. Additionally, the ending was very abrupt. I'm glad this wasn't my first book by the author, as it would likely have been my last.
October 16, 2024
seriously what a stupid book. the MCM was such a asshole. this whole book was so poorly written! waste of time
October 3, 2024
(3.6 Stars)
Harlow Hawthorne was going to deliver cupcakes but somehow one little lie made her Pierce Dawson’s new nanny. She always told the truth since an incident as a child but will this one white lie be a good change or not? Pierce needs a nanny stat after a very interesting turn of events. Will Harlow be able to help him out and maybe even be the very thing this grumpy man needs in his life? A cute and silly romcom with some kiddy shenanigans, campiness and some moments you go “did that really just happen!?” Told in first person and dual POV
Harlow Hawthorne was going to deliver cupcakes but somehow one little lie made her Pierce Dawson’s new nanny. She always told the truth since an incident as a child but will this one white lie be a good change or not? Pierce needs a nanny stat after a very interesting turn of events. Will Harlow be able to help him out and maybe even be the very thing this grumpy man needs in his life? A cute and silly romcom with some kiddy shenanigans, campiness and some moments you go “did that really just happen!?” Told in first person and dual POV
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November 30, 2024
So at first I was shocked by how absurdly bad this was and then I finally caught on that it was supposed to be funny…but it wasn’t so it was just laughably bad. My advice to Whitney G. would be to read her earlier books and plagiarize them at this point. Like what’s going on? Swear I used to like some of her stuff. Anywho, I could go on an on about how absolutely nothing in this book made sense, how the nearly 20 year age gap was never brought up, how the sex scenes were so fucking random with no build up, how inappropriate and shit at her job Harlow was and how equally inappropriate and shit at being a boss Pierce was but honestly I’m just super glad this book is over and I never have to think about it again and it doesn’t even deserve anymore thoughts from me so bye!
October 6, 2024
Wildly fun. A not-so-real nanny and an unreal grumpy billionaire clash and grudgingly fall in love in this hilarious rom-com.
I laughed out loud at least three times with this story. It has surreal comedy moments and cute kids time and a stormy romance. Fun, fun, fun.
Harllow and Pierce make for an unlikely couple, but that's what makes their crush so entertaining. He's super rich, uber snarky and beyond suspicious. And there goes this unemployed chef who happens to take naughty advantage of a nanny position that almost falls into her lap.
Against all odds, they become a nanny-boss tandem. She barely breathes through the mountainous workload of taking care of two babies and a girl, and he fights the temptation to claim her by ignoring her reasonable pleas and drowning her in crazy nanny rules. I enjoyed it all a lot.
Of course, there are baked goodies, a very smart girl, two adorable babies in need of an army's attention, some hot times, incredibly snarky dialogues, and a bit of a drama at the end that binds everyone's emotional issues into a happy ending. Loved it :-D
I laughed out loud at least three times with this story. It has surreal comedy moments and cute kids time and a stormy romance. Fun, fun, fun.
Harllow and Pierce make for an unlikely couple, but that's what makes their crush so entertaining. He's super rich, uber snarky and beyond suspicious. And there goes this unemployed chef who happens to take naughty advantage of a nanny position that almost falls into her lap.
Against all odds, they become a nanny-boss tandem. She barely breathes through the mountainous workload of taking care of two babies and a girl, and he fights the temptation to claim her by ignoring her reasonable pleas and drowning her in crazy nanny rules. I enjoyed it all a lot.
Of course, there are baked goodies, a very smart girl, two adorable babies in need of an army's attention, some hot times, incredibly snarky dialogues, and a bit of a drama at the end that binds everyone's emotional issues into a happy ending. Loved it :-D
October 19, 2024
This was a cute/funny/quick read!!! It had a lot of laugh out loud moments! The interview scene 🤣!
I loved the chemistry between Harlow & Pierce! The tension was palpable!
The interactions with the kids were soooo cute! Loved Olivia (her Mom- not so much).
The ending was sweet! I would have enjoyed an epilogue…but I believe a short story is coming out soon and I look forward to reading that!!
Thank you to WG for an ARC in exchange for an honest review!! Xo
I loved the chemistry between Harlow & Pierce! The tension was palpable!
The interactions with the kids were soooo cute! Loved Olivia (her Mom- not so much).
The ending was sweet! I would have enjoyed an epilogue…but I believe a short story is coming out soon and I look forward to reading that!!
Thank you to WG for an ARC in exchange for an honest review!! Xo
October 10, 2024
I'm giving this 4 stars because I really enjoy Whitney's books. While this one kept me entertained, I was annoyed with how quickly Pierce reacted to things and pulled the plug. No communication. Pierce is upset. I guess this means this is over. And over. And over... again. And Harlow just kept going back. I liked the book, I swear.
November 28, 2024
Крротенька та весела історія. Як на мене трохи кострубато написано, веселі діалоги, але... Не знаю не мені не вистачило плавності сюжету. Мені дуже шкода було Харлоу, я б звільнилась тисячу разів на її місці з таким графіком роботи.
Але це було весело і легко
Але це було весело і легко
December 18, 2025
Un completo despropósito. Toda la historia precipitada, con secundarios que aparecen de la nada al final del libro y que no sabes a qué viene eso. En fin, es lo primero que leo de ella y no creo que repita.
Las dos estrellas es porque, al menos, se lee rápido 😅.
Las dos estrellas es porque, al menos, se lee rápido 😅.
September 4, 2025
This one was so cute .. loved the kids!!! character building for her family sucked … even her bff kinda fell flat .. why did she call her mom by her name .. Meh ..also the lies all the lies meh .. and his extreme reaction to said lie meh but the story with them too top notch .. super cute 💕💕
October 4, 2025
Whitney siempre llega cuando más la necesito
October 7, 2024
What a fun read! This was my first by Whitney G. and won't be my last. Pierce was sort of a jerk to Harlow at first, but he made it up at the end with that amazing declaration of love!
November 6, 2024
Fun, funny, and sexy! Pierce Dawson is your typical Whitney G hero with his blunt, outrageously direct manner yet his thoughts were so opposite to his words and actions. Harlow Hawthorne was indomitable, practical and sassy. Loved this story - it was a lighthearted read and I laughed a lot!
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October 6, 2024
3.75 Stars
His voice was capable of talking me out of my panties.
This was adorable. Point blank. It was a cute relatively quick read. (I read it in one sitting 😁)
It had all the makings of a solid romance including the hilarious dynamic of a sassy little nine year old girl, Olivia. Tbh I think Olivia was my favorite character. She might've been Pierce's niece but she the stole the show for me.
“Get out of my room, Uncle Brooks. I would like to be left alone.”
“You don’t mean that.”
“I mean every word I say.” She sounded just like me. “Should I say them in French for you to better understand?”
I don't want to spoil anything, but I will say that it's been a while since I enjoyed a Whitney G. book. They've been piling up on my TBR list but this one just screamed read it asap once I heard about it. So, I did. And it was a nice reminder of how much I enjoy this authors work. Her stories are always creative and filled with little nuggets of sass and quality comedy. So, I'll pretend to be surprised when I decide to dive into all her previous releases I've set aside until now.
But, and I say this still with a happy just finished a book I enjoyed warmth in my stomach...I also didn't enjoy this one as much as I hoped. (frowny face) Let me explain..
The opening chapters and ones that followed had me hooked. I was invested. And so, as the story progressed I naturally was just eating up all that sexual tension between Pierce and Harlow. Although, looking back there wasn't as much as I expected and now I'm a little sad. 😔 Anyway! I think once I reached the halfway mark, and they finally crossed the boss/nanny line and became more I found myself underwhelmed. I know! I was as surprised as you are. That's THE moment we impatiently wait for.
As the story continued and eventually wrapped up that feeling stuck with me. And I think it had alot to do with the disjointed way the book is paced. The timeline is very unclear and marked by diaper changes etc. And yes, while that was amusing (and added character) it also left me feeling at a loss of how long Harlow had been working for Pierce and even how long they'd been together romantically. Call it a pet peeve but I hate when I can't get a clear grasp on the timeline in a book.
So, while I do believe that was the main contributing factor in my discontent with the romance aspect of the story there was also the niggling issue of feeling as if there was no depth between Harlow and Pierce. It was clear from the jump they had an attraction and some chemistry (although not as electric as other books by this author 🥵). I felt we didn't actually see Harlow and Pierce develop any feelings or fall in love with one another. We were simply told they did. Part of that, I know, was how the story is told and how we jump days/weeks in nearly every chapter so it was hard to pick up on little details. Sadly I don't remember any little details sprinkled in that did anything to further that connection between the two either.
To say I was a bit meh when the heat spiked between them was disappointing for me. (seriously what is wrong with me 😫) I felt like there just wasn't any true one-on-one moments where they showed the reader they had a deep connection. Something worth crossing those lines to take hold of and make your own, ya know? Just like they had the hots for one another. 😆
Aside from Harlow's dream of owning her own bakery and her history of brutal honesty and then lying just enough to get by I don't think I actually knew who Harlow was as a person.
I do feel we were given more knowledge about Pierce and what made him into the man he is when the book opens. And we see a little of the man he is outside of his business but it felt like it was still out of reach. Just a tease really and I wanted to dig deeper. Especially when you know who pops up toward the end!
And maybe I found the premise about the lie Harlow told a bit ridiculous. Not at the beginning but maybe when the truth comes out? I sorta really really hate when one of the MCs, particularly the MMC find out the truth about something and then completely obliterate the FMC. Basically just hey I know the truth you lying dick and then they cut all ties immediately. Including a bunch of interruptions and never letting the other person get one second to explain before the scene is done. Ugh. Yeah, I am not a fan of that sort of scene and that'll never change unless the lie, motives or deception is just unforgivable. In this books case it was not. I was a bit annoyed how dramatic the scene was tbh because it was like, not that big a deal to me? 🤷🏻♀️
Definitely a me problem. 😆
Ultimately though the only thing that could have made this book better for me was more depth between Harlow and Pierce. I just didn't feel that had some deep meaningful connection the way the author portrayed it to be. It felt like there were holes in their relationship partly because of all the scenes and conversations we never get to see or experience first hand or in real time. Even a few on page dates, late night convos, sweet text messages or intimate early mornings in bed would have made such a huge difference. That's the good stuff I want to nibble on, thankyouverymuch!
But alas the book is done. And while I wouldn't call everything I detailed above a rant (except maybe the lie reveal scene lol) I would categorize it as a disappointment for me. I expected more and I wanted more from the story that just wasn't there.
I'd also say that everything I detailed above was definitely a me problem and not necessarily a book/writing problem. I'm a picky reader as it is so again, maybe I expected too much. 🤣🤷🏻♀️
Bottom line was I did enjoy this. It was everything I expected it to be (for the most part). It was fun, it was cute and considering I wanted/expected more from it like a momma bear watching her child perform. I like to think of it as a compliment rather than a critique whenever it happens.
Just give me more of those (intimate moments) goodies, Whitney! Don't leave me starving out here. A girl's gotta eat. 💜😉🤌🏻
His voice was capable of talking me out of my panties.
This was adorable. Point blank. It was a cute relatively quick read. (I read it in one sitting 😁)
It had all the makings of a solid romance including the hilarious dynamic of a sassy little nine year old girl, Olivia. Tbh I think Olivia was my favorite character. She might've been Pierce's niece but she the stole the show for me.
“Get out of my room, Uncle Brooks. I would like to be left alone.”
“You don’t mean that.”
“I mean every word I say.” She sounded just like me. “Should I say them in French for you to better understand?”
I don't want to spoil anything, but I will say that it's been a while since I enjoyed a Whitney G. book. They've been piling up on my TBR list but this one just screamed read it asap once I heard about it. So, I did. And it was a nice reminder of how much I enjoy this authors work. Her stories are always creative and filled with little nuggets of sass and quality comedy. So, I'll pretend to be surprised when I decide to dive into all her previous releases I've set aside until now.
But, and I say this still with a happy just finished a book I enjoyed warmth in my stomach...I also didn't enjoy this one as much as I hoped. (frowny face) Let me explain..
The opening chapters and ones that followed had me hooked. I was invested. And so, as the story progressed I naturally was just eating up all that sexual tension between Pierce and Harlow. Although, looking back there wasn't as much as I expected and now I'm a little sad. 😔 Anyway! I think once I reached the halfway mark, and they finally crossed the boss/nanny line and became more I found myself underwhelmed. I know! I was as surprised as you are. That's THE moment we impatiently wait for.
As the story continued and eventually wrapped up that feeling stuck with me. And I think it had alot to do with the disjointed way the book is paced. The timeline is very unclear and marked by diaper changes etc. And yes, while that was amusing (and added character) it also left me feeling at a loss of how long Harlow had been working for Pierce and even how long they'd been together romantically. Call it a pet peeve but I hate when I can't get a clear grasp on the timeline in a book.
So, while I do believe that was the main contributing factor in my discontent with the romance aspect of the story there was also the niggling issue of feeling as if there was no depth between Harlow and Pierce. It was clear from the jump they had an attraction and some chemistry (although not as electric as other books by this author 🥵). I felt we didn't actually see Harlow and Pierce develop any feelings or fall in love with one another. We were simply told they did. Part of that, I know, was how the story is told and how we jump days/weeks in nearly every chapter so it was hard to pick up on little details. Sadly I don't remember any little details sprinkled in that did anything to further that connection between the two either.
To say I was a bit meh when the heat spiked between them was disappointing for me. (seriously what is wrong with me 😫) I felt like there just wasn't any true one-on-one moments where they showed the reader they had a deep connection. Something worth crossing those lines to take hold of and make your own, ya know? Just like they had the hots for one another. 😆
Aside from Harlow's dream of owning her own bakery and her history of brutal honesty and then lying just enough to get by I don't think I actually knew who Harlow was as a person.
I do feel we were given more knowledge about Pierce and what made him into the man he is when the book opens. And we see a little of the man he is outside of his business but it felt like it was still out of reach. Just a tease really and I wanted to dig deeper. Especially when you know who pops up toward the end!
And maybe I found the premise about the lie Harlow told a bit ridiculous. Not at the beginning but maybe when the truth comes out? I sorta really really hate when one of the MCs, particularly the MMC find out the truth about something and then completely obliterate the FMC. Basically just hey I know the truth you lying dick and then they cut all ties immediately. Including a bunch of interruptions and never letting the other person get one second to explain before the scene is done. Ugh. Yeah, I am not a fan of that sort of scene and that'll never change unless the lie, motives or deception is just unforgivable. In this books case it was not. I was a bit annoyed how dramatic the scene was tbh because it was like, not that big a deal to me? 🤷🏻♀️
Definitely a me problem. 😆
Ultimately though the only thing that could have made this book better for me was more depth between Harlow and Pierce. I just didn't feel that had some deep meaningful connection the way the author portrayed it to be. It felt like there were holes in their relationship partly because of all the scenes and conversations we never get to see or experience first hand or in real time. Even a few on page dates, late night convos, sweet text messages or intimate early mornings in bed would have made such a huge difference. That's the good stuff I want to nibble on, thankyouverymuch!
But alas the book is done. And while I wouldn't call everything I detailed above a rant (except maybe the lie reveal scene lol) I would categorize it as a disappointment for me. I expected more and I wanted more from the story that just wasn't there.
I'd also say that everything I detailed above was definitely a me problem and not necessarily a book/writing problem. I'm a picky reader as it is so again, maybe I expected too much. 🤣🤷🏻♀️
Bottom line was I did enjoy this. It was everything I expected it to be (for the most part). It was fun, it was cute and considering I wanted/expected more from it like a momma bear watching her child perform. I like to think of it as a compliment rather than a critique whenever it happens.
Just give me more of those (intimate moments) goodies, Whitney! Don't leave me starving out here. A girl's gotta eat. 💜😉🤌🏻
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