~3.5~
Holy lack of communication, batman.
Tiber and Gabriel made great strides in book 2, but here? I wanted to shake them both. Tiber did not do right by himself, Gabe, or his pack by not sharing information with Gabe (if not as his partner, than as the town sheriff).
How could he not tell Gabe that someone tried to kill their dogs?? Poor Ferd ended up on an IV at the vet's, and Tiber's all, Um, He ate something he shouldn't have. Yeah, POISON ffs, and you're "handling it" on your own by running around like a crazy person with Duke (not that it was Duke's fault - Duke is the BEST boy!).
That's not to say Gabe was blameless. What's with being all weird and secretive? It made no sense that Gabe was planning to move in with Tiber permanently yet didn't trust Tiber enough to discuss the case or share his doubts and fears.
This frustrated me SO MUCH, I wanted to scream. Using no/miscommunication as a plot device is amateur hour. I did not expect that here (and blame RJ Scott because that is not Eli's schtick).
I kind of guessed where the mystery was going and don't think there was enough focus on the actual murder. Poor guy lost his life as an accessory in some fucked up game of revenge.
Plus, let's face it: Gabe had no business investigating that murder at all, and Sam should have been arrested. I don't understand why he wasn't? He was the only suspect.
I didn't like how much Gabe beat himself up for "not being there for his FaMiLy." The same family who emotionally abused him for being gay? Sam was an adult when Gabe left and never stood up for Gabe. He turned their younger brother against Gabe and kept blaming Gabe for everything.
What part of "undercover investigation" did Sam not understand? It was Sam's responsibility to support his kids and run the business he chose to keep. I was annoyed with Sam and Lori for treating Gabe like shit for so long and didn't feel much sympathy for them here.
I still enjoyed this story though. The pacing was excellent. I was glued to my Kindle. My heart was in my throat when Frank went missing! Frank cuddling into Tiber and moving his little feet about broke me. And that epilogue ... perfection.
I can forgive a lot when a book includes animals as MCs. Everyone in the pack (Duke, Ferdinand, Gracie, Leo, Fudge, Patch, and Frank) has a distinct personality. I liked them more than I liked the human MCs lol.
Book 2 was my favorite, and I would definitely read another book featuring these MCs.
P.S. My friend Jen's review reminded me that in the second book Gabe's niblings turned 6 on October 6: "It's the twins' sixth birthday. Sam's twins. Well, and Lori's. Obviously."
But then a couple paragraphs later: "Going to a party with four-year-olds? Me?"
A few pages after that: "By the time we reached the decorated front door with two sixth birthday banners, I was smiling" and "The good room as my dad used to call it - all set up for a sixth birthday."
Of course in this book, the twins are 4 and in preschool.
Talk about an editing and continuity fail.
I've gone back and forth, but I'm rounding my rating down to 3 stars because this kind of thing is well and truly unacceptable in a published work you're selling for five bucks.