Back in the ‘80s I was astonished by the trimorphic descolada virus that made its debut in Speaker for the Dead. I even wrote to Orson Scott Card’s hatrack company and demanded that he stop writing fantasies and get right back to finishing the Ender series! I got an immediate cordial reply from his staff, but I had to wait decades for this book!
I dearly love OSC’s science fiction ideas, but I never been a fan of his and Aaron Johnson’s quirky writing style. I was pleased to find that his writing here is a bit more mainstream.
If you’ve been waiting all these years like me, you might wonder if you should go back to reread and refresh?
Relax! The ideas in those older books are great reads, but if you’re pressed for time or impatient to begin, rest assured that this book begins with chapters and chapters—and more chapters—of historical info dumps to refresh the memory. Gradually the info dumps take up less space in each chapter as the action begins. The info dumps are not very interesting or fun, though you can tell OSC tried to vary them to make them engaging. There are also some long and boring interior monologues explaining character motivation, which I dislike far more than the info dumps.
OSC’s hatrack site says he started writing this book at the beginning of COVID-19, and I would bet anything that the gigantic interior monologue and ahem … info dump … about pooping out in nature were inspired by the universal toilet paper shortage due to our recent pandemic shopping patterns. Curiously, there’s copious amount of shitting going on in this novel.
This book features the intellectually gifted progeny of Bean (the eponymous Shadow), three children and seven grandchildren, members of a post human species self-designated as “leguminates.” And this book is the “big reveal” of their proper names. (See below for character names.) But oh man, how does Card come up with his annoying and idiosyncratic naming conventions? (I picture his family around the dinner table, cackling wildly and drawing straws for the chance to put their two cents in.) There are characters with confusing names, some with weird names, plus they have nicknames, and some descendants and post human spin offs that bear the same names of major characters earlier in the series but look like other major characters. I “endered” up making a list of names to keep track of who’s who. For example, there’s two fracking “Enders” here and neither one is exactly the “Ender” from the first book!
So these children and their one gifted parent—their “normal” human parent having been ruthlessly abandoned as unfit—are aboard their private spaceship. A vision of the battle school director appears, accompanied by two personages, and he tells them to listen. The triumvirate speak of a need to save humanity from the descolada virus.
Once this story gets going and characters interact, the dialogues are fun and refreshing. I greatly enjoyed the depiction of Si Wang-mu and her interactions with people. She is witty, strong, empathetic, and pretty darn funny. There are additional funny bits, which also enjoyed. I could argue how any one of several people is the main character. To me, the protagonist felt like an ensemble of characters. The narrative voice hops back and forth from head to head and then sometimes to an omniscient perspective, often with dizzying effect. Besides the frenetic head hopping, some segues seemed a bit abrupt as did the climax and denouement.
I was hoping for a mind-blowing, freaky-deaky virus story but instead I got an ensemble Becky Chambers style “found family has a Grand Adventure” type narrative. This book is about how to treat other people, as were the last ten books I’ve read, it seems.
The dialogue (whenever it’s not actually an info dump in disguise) is very engaging. The presence and depictions of female characters are credible and multifaceted. The places where dialogue AND women coincide—excellent!
I thought OSC did a great job giving voice to women. Not just one female. This book is full of a variety of strong, smart, and interesting females. The ant queen, Jane, Si Wang-mu, and Thulium all play important roles as does one small boy. Great job capturing the nuances of eight-year-old wiz kid Thulium, a smarty pants who hasn’t had great role models in the past and who is learning to work on appropriate social behavior and act kindly towards others.
NetGalley granted me early access to the audiobook. It was a multi-character production (nine people!!!), but I was disappointed how that was handled. Sometime a narrator would read all of the character parts in a chapter, and sometimes readers each would portray a specific part like a proper audio drama. No consistency. Often the reading felt forced. The effect on me was to visualize two voice actors, meeting awkwardly (COVID-19 elbow bump greeting in the hallway) ones in sweats, the other in jeans, folding chairs in a sterile white studio, nervously waiting for their cue to read—instead of visualizing a scene unfolding. Tying for the other annoying aspect of the voice work is the inadequate representation of a Japanese accent (just like Masser Rackham’s lack of Australian accent in Ender’s book)
The best aspect of the audiobook is the narrators’ entirely credible interpretation of how to render animal voices and genetically modified people. Which reminds me to mention, I typically dislike anthropomorphized animals in stories, but these OSC alien-animals and GMO people were fun, thoughtful ideas—like what is the essence of a species, and at what point do they count as people, and the voice acting successfully conveyed those considerations.
This book is entitled “The Last Shadow.” So how does this last book end? No, I’m not going to reveal the end. Or any part of The Grand Adventure.
Let’s first go to the Very Very End. The Acknowledgements where he gives thanks to Jennifer Ackerman for her books on birds that gave him the inspiration for this book.
He also gives thanks for the voice actors. Maybe his hearing is going. If my math is correct, he’s just past 70? Anyway, that is very sweet of him.
But the rest of the acknowledgment is almost like an end-of-life wrap up. And I will need to add translations for some of his comments. He says he’s aware that this ending will disappoint some (aka it sucks!). He reminds us that none of his books wrap up cleanly, so why should we expect this one to? And he reminds us that at least all of his books have an ending. (Too true; I hate those mid series cliffhangers, but this is a justification reeking of guilt.)
He offers some reasons why he could have actually written the fracking book I had expected; he could have written a boring book like the heavy hitters (aka hard science fiction?), or he could have wrongly delved into the realm of magic (ahem—no magic? What the heck is the philadic (sp) ant communion, the instantaneous travel, and the creation of an ahooay (sp) soul but singularity type magic?) But he didn’t want to bore his audience, and he didn’t want to write about tiny aliens (OMG OSC, go read Project Hail Mary right now), and he did want to write a human-oriented impactful story and he expressed his love for the youngsters in his life. Also he admits he struggled for years but could not come up with a motive why a civilization would create such a nasty (aka interesting?) virus. In an a nutshell, he basically says the story of the descolada will not be written by me; it will have to be the next generation of writers. Geeze it takes guts to acknowledge all of this. I have to give him respect for that.
So this book IS the last, like the title says. I’ve read lots of serial novels and I notice a peak in quality around book one, two, or three, followed by a slow and steady decline, and then I start wondering maybe my beloved author should start drawing their pension and not rely so much on writing. It’s really sad and touching that this author is obviously self-conscious about his writing and is contemplating more than just the book ending.
From Uncle Orson’s website (which also goes on about toilet paper—again with the pooping!)
After a two-year drought, I've finished writing two novels since the start of 2020, and just wrote the first forty pages or so of The Last Shadow, the final tie-it-all-together volume of my combined Ender and Shadow series. Maybe my retirement plan ("Write Till You Die") is going to work out after all.
After a two-year drought, I've finished writing two novels since the start of 2020, and just wrote the first forty pages or so of The Last Shadow, the final tie-it-all-together volume of my combined Ender and Shadow series. Maybe my retirement plan ("Write Till You Die") is going to work out after all.
After a two-year drought, I've finished writing two novels since the start of 2020, and just wrote the first forty pages or so of The Last Shadow, the final tie-it-all-together volume of my combined Ender and Shadow series. Maybe my retirement plan ("Write Till You Die") is going to work out after all.
Yeash. How do you rank the quality or enjoyment in this situation? What I wanted and what should have been isn’t what the author wanted to give or maybe could give. The audiobook is 13 hours long. About half of that is a mind numbing info dump. The plot is simplistic but wacky.
Granted, he wrote some really decent female characters. It’s not easy for him to give power and autonomy to women, considering he is a direct descendant of Brigham Young, a thoroughly despicable autocrat, who commanded his mormon wives to obey their husband, bow their head and say “yes.” At least women don’t have to veil their faces anymore. OSC has been so programmed that he may not know he has been. I know I was unaware of my own mormon programming. But aware or not, he is required to echo the propaganda of the patriarchy under the threat of incalculably harsh penalties for all of eternity. People, it is not easy being a white man, wealthy, talented, well-educated, and being told that single people must serve you when you become a god and you will have many wives to pop out the babies to inhabit that planet you will someday rule. I guess I am a tad worked up about the ending. And Mormonism.
Dear Orson Scott Card, I’m sorry that you weren’t able to deliver the book i asked for all those years ago. I understand, but I’m not going give excuses, mince words, or give out pity stars. I have been where you are theologically and have absorbed the same doctrine. I also know that like me, you aren’t allowed to read anti-Mormon literature (aka real church history), but I assure you that the plan of salvation, eternal progression, and the whole Mormon end-of-life narrative is complete fiction. Please try to enjoy the freedom of that knowledge now, when you are feeling hyper aware of the end of your life. The truth is freeing.
Stand up like a man against that patriarchy of the fifteen. They know they’re wrong, but they don’t have the kindness or humility of you. This act could be a great legacy.
#BLM
LGBT+ Ally
Love one another; love the earth.
Dinosaur bones are real; Adam and Eve aren’t. DNA is real; Nephi isn’t.
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Characters from The Last Shadow
The people, or leguminates, onboard the spacecraft Herodotus are all descendants of Bean and Petra Arcanian. Three adults and seven children.
Cincinnatus Delphiki “Uncle Sargent” the querulous muscle, named his children after rare earth
* Dysprosium “Dis” - twin boy bully
* Lanthanum “Lance” - twin boy bully
* Thulium “Ultima” “Ulian” “Thullie” - girl, youngest of all
Andrew Delphiki “Uncle Ender” the brains and leader, named his children after esteemed leaders
* Mazer Rackham “Boss”
* Petra Arkana Delphiki “Little Mum”
Carlotta Delphiki “Aunt Carlotta” or “Aunt Bella” the nurturer, named her children after city names (omitting “Rotterdam” from consideration.)
* Brussels “Sprout” - boy, kind
* Delphi “China” “Blue” - boy, next youngest of all, tender hearted, thulium’s best friend.
Other Characters
These people are all characters from previous novels.
* Hyrum Graff - appears as an angel holograph to Carlotta to save humanity from the descolada. Does he ever give any reasonable evidence to support his fear? Um, no. But he’s now embedded in the computer like the gift of the holy ghost. Ping! And he brings two personages:
* Jane - A super-smart post human who is capable of instant travel and she looks like Valentine. Origin: When Ender Sr was unconscious he mind linked with the ant queen, which created a data dump from a computer stack overflow, kernel panic, or something or other. It bifurcated to make the two post-human personages of “Peter” and “Jane,” and then Ender’s human body died.
* Peter “Andrew” “Ender” “Peter” - super-smart post human like Jane but confused and frustrated because he has the primal urges of Peter and the empathetic urges of Andrew (Ender) and no memories to rely on. Alzheimers perhaps? Origin same as Jane.
* Miro Hibera - from the Lusitanian planet, brother of Ella Hibera who created descolata cure with the supernal help of Jane. Miro is Jane’s husband
* Si Wang-mu - From the Path planet. Peter’s wife
I don’t remember how the last two characters pinged into existence. In retrospect, it felt like a rough cut.
Audiobook Readers (please pardon any typos for now)
Stefan Rodniki
Emily Rankin
Scott Brick
Gabriel Decure
Justine Heyer
Kirby Heyborn
Judy Young
John rubenstein
Orson Scott Card