Thank you to Luna Literary for letting me read and review this book early. All thoughts are my own!!
I adored the first four books in this series, so I’m very sad to say that this one didn’t quite hit the mark for me. I loved certain parts of it, but the things that I struggled with ultimately overshadowed the good.
I’ll start with what I enjoyed! I loved Janie and her relationship with Maya. She fought for her through the whole book, and I really enjoyed their bond. I also really loved Jack’s bond with Maya as well. It was very sweet to watch her open up to him once she trusted that he was sticking around. I really loved seeing the other characters again! I will always love interconnected stand-alone stories because I love to see each couple from previous books, so I was so glad to have them present in this book.
I liked that Janie acknowledged the power dynamic between her and Jack while she was paying him to take care of Maya. I usually don’t like nanny romances because they don’t acknowledge that power dynamic. I loved their connection, and I really loved how their relationship developed over a longer period of time.
However, my main issue with this book is that a lot of the story feels underdeveloped or unfinished. There were things that were introduced that never really saw a resolution, and it was distracting.
First, I feel like Jack’s nightmares causing him to physically harm Janie, even unconsciously, should’ve had more focus. That is absolutely something that should’ve been addressed, preferably with a professional who could help him. I know that Jack and Janie talked about it once, but physically harming someone, even unconsciously, is concerning. So, the fact that it just never happened again felt so weird to me when it was, in my opinion, a big deal.
Second, I really struggled with how Janie’s family’s treatment of her went unresolved. I know she ends up getting out of the legal battle, and she manages to be fully independent. However, I really struggled with the fact that Janie never really stood up to her family. Even her sister, who Janie expressed so much love for, treated her poorly, and it went unaddressed. Yes she gave them attitude and sass, but I really feel like there should’ve been a more conclusive ending for that plot point.
Third, it felt like the identity and conflict surrounding Maya’s biological father was very out of the blue. There were extremely minor comments addressing that he was not involved, but for it to be this huge legal battle that she had to fight felt so random and like it came out of nowhere. Considering that it was resolved pretty quickly after it was introduced, I really struggled to be invested in Janie’s battle against him.
Lastly, I didn’t like that there was all this secrecy around why Jack called her “Ace,” just for us to never learn the actual reason behind it. Unless I missed where he told her the reason, that was another thread that lead nowhere.
I am also not a big fan of love interests who were/are military. I was willing to give this book a fair chance because I loved every other book in this series, but unfortunately even that aspect of Jack’s character felt so half-hearted. With this book being just around 300 pages (at least the ARC version was), I’m afraid it wasn’t long enough to flesh out a lot of the story the way it deserved.
I still love and adore the first four books in this series, but unfortunately this one was not for me.