ARC Review – The Silversmith by L.J. Claren
⭐️ 1.5 stars
⚠️ Spoiler Warning: This review contains full spoilers. If you enjoyed this book, I recommend not reading further. These are my personal thoughts, and while this book didn’t work for me, it may still resonate with others. I received this ARC from the author in exchange for an honest review.
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This book had potential. Ancient bloodlines, secret magic, betrayal, romance. Instead, I got every cliché you can think of, a heroine with no agency, a walking red flag of a love interest, and a villain whose entire motivation is being stuck in a 400-year-old rejection spiral.
Let’s talk characters:
• Ary (Aryella, Ella, etc.): Supposedly the powerful heir of an ancient queen. Wakes from a 400-year sleep with no memory, lives for two years with a fake family, and gets abandoned by her mom at 18. Her powers show up once to save a guy who still loses a leg, then never return. She dies, has a weird limbo chat with her dead brother who confesses he did remember when she was dropped off, then wakes up alive with her heart magically back in her chest. She sends Smyth away, he leaves, and she gets mad that he actually listened.
• Smyth: The broody, scarred, emotionally constipated husband Ary doesn’t remember. He’s also the son of the villain. He treats Ary like property, constantly throws coins at her, tells her what to wear, refuses to give her any answers, and physically overpowers her during “training.” His big romantic gesture? A birthday gift made from the skinned pelt of the wolf that nearly killed her. He calls it his mark. She wears it. This is marketed as love.
• Molochai: The villain. Once besties with Ary’s uncle. Got rejected by Ary’s mom 400 years ago and has been plotting her family’s destruction ever since. He kills the queen slowly and painfully and spends the rest of eternity trying to kill Ary out of bitter, petty spite. Literally rips her heart out in the final fight. Still somehow not the most emotionally unstable man in the book.
• Simeon: Ary’s uncle. He didn’t raise her. When her powers started to develop, he locked her up, erased her memory, and planned to use her as a magical weapon against Molochai. Built an army in a cave while waiting to unleash her. So basically, the “good guy” is a power-hungry warlord.
• Gemma: She exists. She leaves. She comes back. She walks with Ary. She does nothing important.
• Ezra, Caz, and Finn: The escort team. Ezra and Finn barely speak. Caz gets mortally wounded, Ary’s powers finally kick in, and he still loses a leg. That’s the extent of their narrative weight.
• Elias: The betrothed. Gets a POV at the end just to complain that Ary isn’t where she’s supposed to be. Useless.
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Let’s talk about Ary.
She is the “chosen one,” but at no point does she act like it. She follows everyone blindly. She doesn’t question the people keeping secrets from her. She trusts Smyth immediately, even though he never once explains anything or acts like someone who should be trusted. Her one and only magical moment comes when Caz is dying — she uses her powers to keep him alive, but he still loses his leg. Later, she gets attacked by Molochai and her powers do nothing. He reaches into her chest and rips her heart out. She dies. Then has a full chat with her dead brother in limbo, who tells her he remembered she came from magic sleep all along. Then she just wakes up. Alive. Heart back in place. No explanation.
Ary sends Smyth away after learning the truth — that he’s Molochai’s son, that her memory was wiped to forget him, that he’s been working with the enemy. She tells him to go. So he leaves. Then she gets angry that he actually left. That is Ary in a nutshell.
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The romance is an emotional dumpster fire.
Smyth is controlling, secretive, jealous, and obsessed. He constantly tells Ary how much she means to him while never sharing anything meaningful with her. He uses phrases like “touch my girl” and “my queen” but avoids accountability like it’s his job. At one point, he physically pins her down while yelling at her to “fight” — this happens right after a scene where she’s nearly assaulted. When she tells him he crossed a line, he just says, “I know.” Nothing changes.
The romance is all about control. Ary is confused and vulnerable. Smyth is aggressive and intense. They kiss a couple times. She gets flustered. It’s uncomfortable. And yet the story positions them as soulmates.
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The villain?
Molochai’s entire reason for existing is that Ary’s mom didn’t love him back. His solution? Kill the queen. Kill the daughter. Kill anyone who stands in his way. His evil plan is fueled by centuries of rejection. And in the final fight, he literally rips Ary’s heart out like a Mortal Kombat finisher. Still somehow less unhinged than Smyth.
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The twist?
Smyth is Molochai’s son. Simeon was using Ary as a weapon. No one tells her the truth until the end. And when she finds out, her reaction is more about Smyth leaving than being lied to for her entire life. That sums it all up.
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The prophecy?
“One day the young queen born of ancient blood will abandon a life of solitude.” That’s it. That’s the whole prophecy. The entire book hinges on that vague sentence.
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The writing?
The prose tries to be poetic, but often feels like Pinterest quote filler. Example:
“Nightmares hunt you in the quiet and devour your peace.”
Pretty. Also, totally disconnected from when the nightmares actually happen. It feels like the author had some aesthetic lines and built scenes around them just to make them fit.
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The ending?
Ary dies. Has a conversation with her brother in limbo. Learns that people around her were lying the entire time. Wakes up with her heart magically restored. Powers still missing. Smyth is gone. Elias is pouting. The villain? Unresolved. The prophecy? Still vague. The book ends with nothing wrapped up and a hard nudge toward a sequel.
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I kept hoping something would land. That Ary would take control. That the romance would grow into something respectful. That the prophecy would mean something. That the villain would have a motive beyond rejection rage. But no. Instead I got birthday pelt shawls, emotional manipulation, cave armies, heartless girlboss limbo scenes, and a heroine who deserved better than this.
I will not be reading book two.