Something I felt just at the begining of the story and was confirmed several times afterwards was that the story, even though was hard to calsify, followed certain structure which I tend to dislike as I regard it as archaic and cliche, very closely, for example: when it comes to the name of the chapters, there is always a lot of foreshadowing: “The prince dissolves the council”; “The party of war takes action”. Is not that it spoils the story (I don't consider that a good story is only about the plot, it has to do with how that plot is developed, how it is told. A great example of this is the film Titanic.) but it annoys me, I take as the author is saying “Ok, in case you don't get it, here the big deal, the important is this, pay attention to this, you featherhead.” I mean, the chapters are pretty straightforward, I don't need further indications to understand what is happening! The names of the chapters could have been more interesting or just numbers, no names. There is the example of 3 chapters called Providence von Rosen: Act 1, 2, and 3. Those are quite good, but the second part of those names describe what is that the Countess von Rosen do! Is that really necessary? It reminded me of Julius Verne's chapter titles.
Another of this characteristic of this writing tradition is setting the action in a fictional European country, like in Voltaire's satire “Candide”. While the reader understands that that work is a parody, the fictional barony of Thunder-ten-Tronckh works very well whereas in this work the imaginary countries of Grunewarld and Gerolstein simply aren't believable, that in such a small countries as described, the citizens would recognize the sovereign, the political scenario in which the people who all despise the monarch and have made a strong army would wait so long as to start their revolution, etc. Continuing with things that are not convincing, I think the main character, Otto, in that way. I accept that love can make humans act stupidly, but one cannot be that blind for love as he is to accept everything that is wife does to overthrow him. Not to mention the shadow his wife's almost certain infidelity (that in the end wasn't that certain, but if everybody tells you your significant other is having an affair it will most surely and negatively affect your vision on the other.) After all that, he forgives her just because he loves her. No, sorry, call me a cynical but I am closer to Rhet Butler's idea of love, even the most infinite love has a limit and when Otto received his repentant wife he should have said “Frankly, my dear, I don't give a damn.”
However, not everything is negative. I particulary enjoyed the use of the language, certain turn of phrases, well it is Stevenson, not his most well known story, but Stevenson still. I specially appreciate lines coming from the Prince and from the Countess Von Rosen. The description of natural landscapes are superb, quite precise and yet not dull nor lengthy, you can perfectly imagine the setting. And this two things combined makes this work perfect for a theatre adaptation, the dialogues are very dramatical, while I read I visualized it as a play. The only implausible or difficult scene to adapt would be the one of Otto's wife escaping from the unheaval, running thorugh the forest until dawn.
As I stated about the main character, I don't buy it, thus, I don't like it. On the other, we have Countess Von Rosen, a character that is described as wicked and evil at first, but we discover that she does have a tender heart, It is, by far, the most lively character, utterly impulsive and unpredictable. She is a bit selfish, though, but who isn't? It appears she tries to have the most fun she can and live her life to the fullest. It was a surprise when she decided to help Otto, but she did so because she was in love with him. And then she surprises us again with his reaction to his lover being stabbed, the same lover she spoiled the plan to: she rides her horse at full throttle to meet him, almost killing the princess. This character provides the very best of the plot: when we know how she really is we are gifted with a great and unexpected twist.
I am also fond of some views of the novel regarding certain topics, views that I would think cotrovertial in the times it was published: the antiroyalism shown in letting the rulers be deposed by a Red Rebellion; the non-judgmental stance about sex outside marriage that it takes, the place and role women could have in society was also unconventional for the age, as we have a female character who fits better to rule than a male one.
Nonetheless, the author doesn't really make a point in this topics, they are not emphatized because in the spotlight there is Otto's marriage. The main theme is relationships within marriage. In particular it explores all those many ways in which communication can break down. The novel that portrays all the doubts, hesitations and moral ambiguities that can beset a marriage.
To sum up, I think this novel weak point are the characters, the way in which the act is not how anybody would, specially the main character: he delivers not one but several very deep and philosophical reflections and yet, every time he does something he is extremely anxious and worried how people thought of him and his decision. Well, may be he is just an sceptic. But it is more than redeemed by the interesting dialogues and profound reflections, (an example of the later being when Dr. Gotthold says: 'it is ourselves that we cannot forgive, when we refuse forgiveness to our friend. Some strand of our own misdoing is involved in every quarrel.”