The Gist of this YA story is decent but especially in the beginning, some sentences were awkward or had missing words. Even after reading a sentence several times, I would give up on its meaning and just move on. Other times thoughts were worded in an unusual way, for example, saying "soak and wet" instead of soaking wet. I also had a problem with one of the characters bragging about catching and killing 20 dolphins when dolphins are a protected species. When you finally get to the end and look back, you can say, this was a good YA story, but the writing was a struggle for me.