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The Kindom Trilogy #2
Le Jour de l'expiation
Les Jeveni ont enfin trouvé la liberté sur la lointaine planète Capamame, libérés de l’oppression de la Parentèlité grâce à leur alliance avec la stoïque Chono, l’intrépide Jun et l’imprévisible Six, qui a défait la famille Nightfoot.
Mais lorsque Six et Chono retournent dans le Treble, leur rêve d’indépendance est mis à rude épreuve. Les Secrétaires sont déterminés à reprendre le pouvoir et n’ont pas l’intention de perdre leur contrôle sur les Jeveni.
Sans compter que, à Capamame, Jun et le collecteur Masar luttent pour protéger la colonie fraîchement installée, menacée par une population débordant de ressentiment et par un saboteur anonyme qui sème le chaos et la mort…
Mais lorsque Six et Chono retournent dans le Treble, leur rêve d’indépendance est mis à rude épreuve. Les Secrétaires sont déterminés à reprendre le pouvoir et n’ont pas l’intention de perdre leur contrôle sur les Jeveni.
Sans compter que, à Capamame, Jun et le collecteur Masar luttent pour protéger la colonie fraîchement installée, menacée par une population débordant de ressentiment et par un saboteur anonyme qui sème le chaos et la mort…
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October 26, 2024
This is the sequel I was hoping for, filled with tension, political intrigue, and action. The finale is going to be epic.
January 29, 2025
4.5 rounded up
These Burning Stars is like The Book Ever so obviously I was going to love the sequel. We pick up not long after the conclusion of book 1, but with the core cast facing a new set of issues. What does a utopia look like? How do you enforce peace? When is violence necessary - if at all?
These are not unusual questions in science fiction and fantasy, but Jacobs wields the ability to make them feel fresh. The stakes are lower and the plot narrows onto a murder mystery, which works well. Six takes a much larger role in this story, and Chono, my Chono, one of the most interesting and complex weirdos I've read in a long time. I do think we feel the hole left behind by one of the more charismatic characters from book 1, which has a bit of thematic heft for the cast alongside the reader, but you feel it all the same.
Chono and Six have so many issues, I think they should smooch about them.
These Burning Stars is like The Book Ever so obviously I was going to love the sequel. We pick up not long after the conclusion of book 1, but with the core cast facing a new set of issues. What does a utopia look like? How do you enforce peace? When is violence necessary - if at all?
These are not unusual questions in science fiction and fantasy, but Jacobs wields the ability to make them feel fresh. The stakes are lower and the plot narrows onto a murder mystery, which works well. Six takes a much larger role in this story, and Chono, my Chono, one of the most interesting and complex weirdos I've read in a long time. I do think we feel the hole left behind by one of the more charismatic characters from book 1, which has a bit of thematic heft for the cast alongside the reader, but you feel it all the same.
Chono and Six have so many issues, I think they should smooch about them.
April 16, 2025
4.5 stars
These Burning Stars was one of my favorite reads of 2024, so I was really excited to continue with the Kindom Trilogy. On Vicious Worlds is a really strong sequel that has me very excited for the release of the final book.
On Vicious Worlds explores the illusion of utopia and what institutions will do in the name of “peace.” There are two main storylines, each exploring one of the major consequences of the conflict in These Burning Stars. Bethany Jacobs expertly weaves together many different perspectives to create these two plot threads. I love the way that Jacobs plays with timeline and the reader’s assumptions in order to slowly build a sense of unease and suspense. I thought the storylines complimented each other really well.
[WARNING: details and names in the rest of the review hint at spoilers for These Burning Stars]
I do have to admit that I was considerably more invested in the Farren Eyce side of the story; to the point that I almost felt disappointed when the story switched back to the Kindom. There was so much more happening with Jun and Masar. The faceless threat and the disintegrating political situation at Farren Eyce made for an action-packed and fast paced storyline that I couldn't wait to get back to. In contrast, Six and Chono’s chapters felt a little bit slow and dragged out. Their side of the story relies mostly on the relationship dynamic between Six and Chono. Which is fascinatingly fucked up and well done, but it didn’t hold my attention as much.
This series has fascinating characters. They are complicated, engaging, and a little bit unhinged. Their relationships are messy and all consuming leading to some really interesting character dynamics. These are characters that have been forced into roles that they do not fit: savior, saint, martyr. I really enjoyed the new perspectives that we got in this sequel. It was interesting to be in the heads of characters that had intrigued me in the first book.
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These Burning Stars was one of my favorite reads of 2024, so I was really excited to continue with the Kindom Trilogy. On Vicious Worlds is a really strong sequel that has me very excited for the release of the final book.
On Vicious Worlds explores the illusion of utopia and what institutions will do in the name of “peace.” There are two main storylines, each exploring one of the major consequences of the conflict in These Burning Stars. Bethany Jacobs expertly weaves together many different perspectives to create these two plot threads. I love the way that Jacobs plays with timeline and the reader’s assumptions in order to slowly build a sense of unease and suspense. I thought the storylines complimented each other really well.
[WARNING: details and names in the rest of the review hint at spoilers for These Burning Stars]
I do have to admit that I was considerably more invested in the Farren Eyce side of the story; to the point that I almost felt disappointed when the story switched back to the Kindom. There was so much more happening with Jun and Masar. The faceless threat and the disintegrating political situation at Farren Eyce made for an action-packed and fast paced storyline that I couldn't wait to get back to. In contrast, Six and Chono’s chapters felt a little bit slow and dragged out. Their side of the story relies mostly on the relationship dynamic between Six and Chono. Which is fascinatingly fucked up and well done, but it didn’t hold my attention as much.
This series has fascinating characters. They are complicated, engaging, and a little bit unhinged. Their relationships are messy and all consuming leading to some really interesting character dynamics. These are characters that have been forced into roles that they do not fit: savior, saint, martyr. I really enjoyed the new perspectives that we got in this sequel. It was interesting to be in the heads of characters that had intrigued me in the first book.
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December 8, 2024
3.5 Stars
This is a solid science fiction sequel. In a year sparse with science fiction releases, it was great to read this one.
While not a personal favourite, this was still a good read. It had good characters, plot and enough worldbuilding to scratch that itch. I wish it was more innovative, but I feel that one about almost all the science fiction published in 2024.
If you are looking to start a new series, I would recommend this one but you'll need to start back at the beginning with These Burning Stars.
Disclaimer I received a copy of this book from the publisher.
This is a solid science fiction sequel. In a year sparse with science fiction releases, it was great to read this one.
While not a personal favourite, this was still a good read. It had good characters, plot and enough worldbuilding to scratch that itch. I wish it was more innovative, but I feel that one about almost all the science fiction published in 2024.
If you are looking to start a new series, I would recommend this one but you'll need to start back at the beginning with These Burning Stars.
Disclaimer I received a copy of this book from the publisher.
September 22, 2024
Whilst this did suffer from second book syndrome, it still kept me on the edge of my seat.
This felt like a side quest to the build up of the final confrontation.
Without the Capamame gate key, Kindom agents can't reach the escaped Farren Eyce and the Wheel. However, this isn’t a happy ever after. There is distrust, loss, and now there are deaths taking place and attacks against Jun’s casting.
Chono and Six returns to the Treble a fugitive and traitor, United to damn the Kindom for their crimes.
I definitely should have reread book one before diving onto this because it took me a while to familiarise myself with the characters and the ending of book one.
This deals with the idea of displacement. Of having accomplished the impossible and dealing with the fallout of tearing thousands of people from the lives they knew. Even if it was to save them.
Not to mention, certain characters are now revered as saviours, mascots, martyrs. Roles they despise. Power comes from controlling the populace and their attitudes.
"But there has always been a significant difference between reality and perception.”
Unfortunately, I wasn’t as blown away as I was with book one, but I wonder if this is because I read it after the high of discovering another new favourite sci fi trilogy in the Devoured Worlds.
I think what made book one so astounding to me was the incredible world building and the culture surrounding the gender and assimilation. Book two focuses on two timelines clashing for a climatic end setting up a nail biting book three.
Thank you to Little Brown Book Group for providing an arc in exchange for a review.
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This felt like a side quest to the build up of the final confrontation.
Without the Capamame gate key, Kindom agents can't reach the escaped Farren Eyce and the Wheel. However, this isn’t a happy ever after. There is distrust, loss, and now there are deaths taking place and attacks against Jun’s casting.
Chono and Six returns to the Treble a fugitive and traitor, United to damn the Kindom for their crimes.
I definitely should have reread book one before diving onto this because it took me a while to familiarise myself with the characters and the ending of book one.
This deals with the idea of displacement. Of having accomplished the impossible and dealing with the fallout of tearing thousands of people from the lives they knew. Even if it was to save them.
Not to mention, certain characters are now revered as saviours, mascots, martyrs. Roles they despise. Power comes from controlling the populace and their attitudes.
"But there has always been a significant difference between reality and perception.”
Unfortunately, I wasn’t as blown away as I was with book one, but I wonder if this is because I read it after the high of discovering another new favourite sci fi trilogy in the Devoured Worlds.
I think what made book one so astounding to me was the incredible world building and the culture surrounding the gender and assimilation. Book two focuses on two timelines clashing for a climatic end setting up a nail biting book three.
Thank you to Little Brown Book Group for providing an arc in exchange for a review.
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December 23, 2024
On my blog.
Rep: lesbian mc, lesbian amputee li, bi mc & li, nonbinary mc, genderfluid side character
CWs: gore, violence
Galley provided by publisher
Sometimes, you read an incredible book and it’s hard to imagine just how the sequel might better it. It’s an unenviable task, for sure, writing that second book and clearly reflected in the existence of the phrase “second book syndrome”. These Burning Stars was one such incredible book, so it was hard to see just how On Vicious Worlds might go further. And, maybe, On Vicious Worlds is not a better book (it’s hard to see how the reveal regarding Six might be topped, after all), but it’s just as good.
The story begins a few months after the end of book one: Six and Chono are back in the Kindom, Jun and Masar are doing their best to keep the new Jeveni world going. These storylines run parallel for much of the book, with a few flashbacks to Six’s past, until they converge in an ending that will leave you wanting more, so much more.
At the minute, I think the Kindom Trilogy may be some of the best science fiction out there. It has incredibly detailed worldbuilding, twists and turns and politicking galore, and characters and relationships that make you want to gnaw your arm off (the Chono-Six-Esek dynamic was incredible in book one, the continuation of it in this even better, but the whole direction that Masar-Effegen-Bene is taking? Colour me intrigued). Basically, everything you might want in a book! And each book is guaranteed to leave you wanting more.
The first book was a revenge story, but book two is about what happens after the revenge. The series as a whole I think looks closely at redemption and how single acts in and of themselves do not offer it (and, like with Six’s at the end of book one, can be rejected because they, ultimately, do nothing). On Vicious Worlds takes Chono’s original defection and follows her as its consequences and what further actions she needs to take come clear. Chono, by the way, has some of my absolute favourite scenes in this book, particularly in the final quarter where she variously wrecks Six, Paiye and Ilius (that bastard) in quick succession. Really, Chono may even be my favourite character of the book, although that’s a hard call to make because this series has the virtue of not having a single POV I prefer to the rest (and I’m always picking out favourite POVs even when I don’t mean to).
Really, I can’t say enough about how much I love this series, but as ever, that is more expressed in shakingscreamingcrying and memes than uh… useful words. Messages I sent while reading this include such gems as “haha im in danger” and “CHONOSIX”. Which I think tells you all you need to know about this one.
But don’t just take my word for it! If there’s any science fiction you should be reading right now, it’s this series. So, what are you waiting for? Read it and see for yourself.
Rep: lesbian mc, lesbian amputee li, bi mc & li, nonbinary mc, genderfluid side character
CWs: gore, violence
Galley provided by publisher
Sometimes, you read an incredible book and it’s hard to imagine just how the sequel might better it. It’s an unenviable task, for sure, writing that second book and clearly reflected in the existence of the phrase “second book syndrome”. These Burning Stars was one such incredible book, so it was hard to see just how On Vicious Worlds might go further. And, maybe, On Vicious Worlds is not a better book (it’s hard to see how the reveal regarding Six might be topped, after all), but it’s just as good.
The story begins a few months after the end of book one: Six and Chono are back in the Kindom, Jun and Masar are doing their best to keep the new Jeveni world going. These storylines run parallel for much of the book, with a few flashbacks to Six’s past, until they converge in an ending that will leave you wanting more, so much more.
At the minute, I think the Kindom Trilogy may be some of the best science fiction out there. It has incredibly detailed worldbuilding, twists and turns and politicking galore, and characters and relationships that make you want to gnaw your arm off (the Chono-Six-Esek dynamic was incredible in book one, the continuation of it in this even better, but the whole direction that Masar-Effegen-Bene is taking? Colour me intrigued). Basically, everything you might want in a book! And each book is guaranteed to leave you wanting more.
The first book was a revenge story, but book two is about what happens after the revenge. The series as a whole I think looks closely at redemption and how single acts in and of themselves do not offer it (and, like with Six’s at the end of book one, can be rejected because they, ultimately, do nothing). On Vicious Worlds takes Chono’s original defection and follows her as its consequences and what further actions she needs to take come clear. Chono, by the way, has some of my absolute favourite scenes in this book, particularly in the final quarter where she variously wrecks Six, Paiye and Ilius (that bastard) in quick succession. Really, Chono may even be my favourite character of the book, although that’s a hard call to make because this series has the virtue of not having a single POV I prefer to the rest (and I’m always picking out favourite POVs even when I don’t mean to).
Really, I can’t say enough about how much I love this series, but as ever, that is more expressed in shakingscreamingcrying and memes than uh… useful words. Messages I sent while reading this include such gems as “haha im in danger” and “CHONOSIX”. Which I think tells you all you need to know about this one.
But don’t just take my word for it! If there’s any science fiction you should be reading right now, it’s this series. So, what are you waiting for? Read it and see for yourself.
May 28, 2025
4.25/5
this was just pure, adrenaline-fueled fun, especially that final third - i love a book with an intense build-up that goes kinda insane towards the end.
on vicious worlds starts off a lot slower than the first book but once the plot gains momentum, it refuses to let go until the end. almost every chapter ends with a mini-cliffhanger and had me dying to know what would happen next. i have to admit, i did find jun and masar's storyline more interesting than six and chono's this time around, but i think that's fair since the first book was all about the six-chono-esek drama.
six and chono continue to be fascinating characters with so much complicated, difficult history and feelings between them and i just wanted them to sit the fuck down and unpack it all (but obviously they didn't have time for all that). i really liked seeing chono grow stronger in her beliefs and willing to fight against anyone for them. also, the way jun and masar just did not catch a break in this book was crazy - the murder-mystery angle in their storyline was quite well done and while i'm not sure how i feel about the reveal, it was unexpected for sure and that showdown in the shuttle was both wild and depressing. it was also intriguing and sadly unsurprising to see the jeveni's attempt at a utopian state fail. i'm liking how the political themes are being dealt with and i hope that continues in the third book.
my one major gripe so far is that the big bad villain being set up for the final book feels a bit generic, at least compared to the kind of antagonist esek was but then again those are big shoes to fill.
i really cannot wait to see how this all wraps up (crossing my fingers that everyone i like makes it out alive with their sanity intact).
(also did not see the poly relationship coming but we love to see it. this series is so unapologetically queer).
this was just pure, adrenaline-fueled fun, especially that final third - i love a book with an intense build-up that goes kinda insane towards the end.
on vicious worlds starts off a lot slower than the first book but once the plot gains momentum, it refuses to let go until the end. almost every chapter ends with a mini-cliffhanger and had me dying to know what would happen next. i have to admit, i did find jun and masar's storyline more interesting than six and chono's this time around, but i think that's fair since the first book was all about the six-chono-esek drama.
six and chono continue to be fascinating characters with so much complicated, difficult history and feelings between them and i just wanted them to sit the fuck down and unpack it all (but obviously they didn't have time for all that). i really liked seeing chono grow stronger in her beliefs and willing to fight against anyone for them. also, the way jun and masar just did not catch a break in this book was crazy - the murder-mystery angle in their storyline was quite well done and while i'm not sure how i feel about the reveal, it was unexpected for sure and that showdown in the shuttle was both wild and depressing. it was also intriguing and sadly unsurprising to see the jeveni's attempt at a utopian state fail. i'm liking how the political themes are being dealt with and i hope that continues in the third book.
my one major gripe so far is that the big bad villain being set up for the final book feels a bit generic, at least compared to the kind of antagonist esek was but then again those are big shoes to fill.
i really cannot wait to see how this all wraps up (crossing my fingers that everyone i like makes it out alive with their sanity intact).
(also did not see the poly relationship coming but we love to see it. this series is so unapologetically queer).
August 16, 2024
I continue to stand in awe of Bethany Jacobs. Dark and violent, the sequel to These Burning Stars is everything I had hoped for—at its heart, deeply layered character studies. Seeing what these characters are willing to do, the lengths they will go to, in the face of losing what they love is both grievous and empowering. All so flawed yet endlessly human. As always, Chono is nothing short of a delight to follow, intensified by her complicated relationship with Six. Each character, and I mean it, each character will surprise you in some manner. While at some points slower than the first installment, this book is still an engaging and alluring experience. The world is filled with intricate details, and the series continues to cement itself as an incredible space opera (one of my new favorite series, in general). If you loved the first book, this second one will likely connect with you too. I am so excited to see where this trilogy ends, especially after that ending. Thank you NetGalley and Orbit for sending me an advanced digital copy in exchange for an honest review! 4.25 / 5.0 ⭐️
December 21, 2024
4.25⭐️
While this suffered a bit from second book syndrome it still left me excited to see how the trilogy will conclude. I enjoyed the surprise throuple thrown into the mix.
While this suffered a bit from second book syndrome it still left me excited to see how the trilogy will conclude. I enjoyed the surprise throuple thrown into the mix.
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July 30, 2024IT HAS A COVERRR
AAAHHH OCTOBER RELEASE DATE??
AAAHHH OCTOBER RELEASE DATE??
August 27, 2024
3.5. Very well written but suffers from middle book syndrome. I also didn’t like that we had so much action in this book. Jacob’s shines when they write intimate character moments and I wish we’d had a lot more. Still excited to know what happens next.
October 6, 2024
I AM ONCE AGAIN ASKING FOR SIX AND CHONO TO KISS
These Burning Stars has been my favorite read this year to date. Which is a little unfortunate because it was also my very first read for 2024, and that means my other 200+ books haven't reached that same high. There were some admittedly lofty expectations with this sequel. Were those expectations met?
We're thrown into the action right away: a suspicious death on the Jeveni new world, hinting at a possible serial killer, has thrown the new colony into fear and distrust. Chono and Six are battling Treble power politics and unstable coups. Who's the mastermind behind the scenes? Who can be trusted, if not those that we love?
Much like its predecessor, the action in On Vicious Worlds has you by the throat, but this time it's the interpersonal relationships that really shine. There is platonic love, romantic love, familial love, and all the complications in those relationships that unhealed trauma can cause. Chono and Six were my favorites. The INTIMACY, the PAIN, the FOREHEAD PRESSING! Who needs kissing when you have that? (Me. I do. Give me Six and Chono HEA next book.)
The one thing I didn't enjoy as much was Masar's POV. The conflict overlapped Jun's, and while Jun was actively involved in the detective work, Masar spent too much time not doing a whole lot except angsting over his polyamorous romance. Go have a threesome with your bf and gf, I don't really care. Your home is falling apart! There are murderers to catch!
Thank you NetGalley and Orbit for the ARC!
These Burning Stars has been my favorite read this year to date. Which is a little unfortunate because it was also my very first read for 2024, and that means my other 200+ books haven't reached that same high. There were some admittedly lofty expectations with this sequel. Were those expectations met?
We're thrown into the action right away: a suspicious death on the Jeveni new world, hinting at a possible serial killer, has thrown the new colony into fear and distrust. Chono and Six are battling Treble power politics and unstable coups. Who's the mastermind behind the scenes? Who can be trusted, if not those that we love?
Much like its predecessor, the action in On Vicious Worlds has you by the throat, but this time it's the interpersonal relationships that really shine. There is platonic love, romantic love, familial love, and all the complications in those relationships that unhealed trauma can cause. Chono and Six were my favorites. The INTIMACY, the PAIN, the FOREHEAD PRESSING! Who needs kissing when you have that? (Me. I do. Give me Six and Chono HEA next book.)
The one thing I didn't enjoy as much was Masar's POV. The conflict overlapped Jun's, and while Jun was actively involved in the detective work, Masar spent too much time not doing a whole lot except angsting over his polyamorous romance. Go have a threesome with your bf and gf, I don't really care. Your home is falling apart! There are murderers to catch!
Thank you NetGalley and Orbit for the ARC!
September 16, 2025
4.5⭐️
Wtf did I just read?!? Miss Jacobs is QUICKLY becoming one of my favorite authors. I fear I may never read a space opera as entertaining as this ever again 😂
Reread on 9/15
I find it fascinating to go back and reread a beloved book cuz I definitely noticed some issues but apart from some minor things, it’s still a solid sequel and I’m beyond excited to get to that third book!!!!!
Wtf did I just read?!? Miss Jacobs is QUICKLY becoming one of my favorite authors. I fear I may never read a space opera as entertaining as this ever again 😂
Reread on 9/15
I find it fascinating to go back and reread a beloved book cuz I definitely noticed some issues but apart from some minor things, it’s still a solid sequel and I’m beyond excited to get to that third book!!!!!
February 3, 2025
I received this book for free from Orbit Books in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.
After the fantastic reading experience of These Burning Stars, its sequel, On Vicious Worlds, was definitely one of my most anticipated reads of 2024. I don't know if it was my high expectations or my poor memory, but On Vicious Worlds didn’t work as well for me as its predecessor. However, I still enjoyed returning to the characters and the interesting world of The Kindom trilogy again.
I wish that I had had the time to reread These Burning Stars,s before picking up On Vicious Worlds, as I think that would have not only been really helpful to comprehending to not only the events and characters, but also beneficial to my overall enjoyment of the novel. Without a list of dramatis personae or a recap of the convoluted plot points, which even includes one character assuming the identity of another, I was picking at my brain to try and remember the finer details of the characters, their loyalties, their secrets, and how everything went down. I would recommend a refresh for returning fans of the series and would not recommend reading These Burning Stars, without reading its predecessor first.
By far the standout of On Vicious World for me is the relationships between the characters. Author Bethany Jacobs excels at writing complex bonds between her characters. Two of her characters, Six and Chono, and their ineffable relationship, which seems to transcend all kinds of normal definitions—friendship, love, rivalry, enemies—were absolutely spellbinding to watch. If I choose to read the next book in the trilogy, it will undoubtedly be because of them.
Unfortunately, I couldn’t help but to feel the gaping hole left by the absence of the utterly diabolical Essek. That woman was a fiery loose cannon and it was hard not having her around raising literal and metaphorical hell. I missed worrying what her wicked mind would cook up yet. And I also missed that juxtaposition of her character with Chono’s. Luckily, Six is still an incredibly complex and interesting character, so I was able to stay invested. I really enjoyed seeing a peak of their life before the events of These Burning Stars and inside their mind. It was also delightful to feel “in the know” of Six's schemes this time around.
I cannot say the same for Jun Ironway, who seems like a watered down and less capable version of herself in On Vicious Worlds. I was disappointed that she seemed completely out of her depth, especially without the presence of her paramour, Liis. But the same goes for most of the characters in the novel, as suddenly paranoid characters are not noticing things that should cause suspicion, political geniuses are outsmarted, double crossers are double crossed with both of their eyes wide open, and combat experts are soundly defeated in battle.
What’s more, is that I didn’t feel like the stakes were nearly as high in On Vicious Worlds. Perhaps it was the lack of Essek or the mere fact that it felt like all of the characters were wildly in over their heads in different parts of the universe, but the main mystery of discovering the identity of the Avatar just didn’t intrigue me too much. Plus, I felt that the pacing left a little something to be desired. On Vicious Worlds swings from one fight scene to a lot of standing around and discussing the political implications of another. I had trouble wanting to pick the book up during the lulls in action and it took me most of the month of January to finish the novel (though admittedly, I was also reading other books simultaneously). And a lot of the book felt like mere setup for the next one.
At this point, I am uncertain if I want to pick up the next book in the trilogy or not. On Vicious Worlds just didn’t capture me the way These Burning Stars did. I would still like to know what happens to Chono and Six, but I am not sure I want to muddle through trying to remember the ins and outs of the governing bodies in the world, the alliances, and everything else to find this out.
After the fantastic reading experience of These Burning Stars, its sequel, On Vicious Worlds, was definitely one of my most anticipated reads of 2024. I don't know if it was my high expectations or my poor memory, but On Vicious Worlds didn’t work as well for me as its predecessor. However, I still enjoyed returning to the characters and the interesting world of The Kindom trilogy again.
I wish that I had had the time to reread These Burning Stars,s before picking up On Vicious Worlds, as I think that would have not only been really helpful to comprehending to not only the events and characters, but also beneficial to my overall enjoyment of the novel. Without a list of dramatis personae or a recap of the convoluted plot points, which even includes one character assuming the identity of another, I was picking at my brain to try and remember the finer details of the characters, their loyalties, their secrets, and how everything went down. I would recommend a refresh for returning fans of the series and would not recommend reading These Burning Stars, without reading its predecessor first.
"The ground underfoot is a knife’s edge, and she wears soft shoes.”
By far the standout of On Vicious World for me is the relationships between the characters. Author Bethany Jacobs excels at writing complex bonds between her characters. Two of her characters, Six and Chono, and their ineffable relationship, which seems to transcend all kinds of normal definitions—friendship, love, rivalry, enemies—were absolutely spellbinding to watch. If I choose to read the next book in the trilogy, it will undoubtedly be because of them.
Unfortunately, I couldn’t help but to feel the gaping hole left by the absence of the utterly diabolical Essek. That woman was a fiery loose cannon and it was hard not having her around raising literal and metaphorical hell. I missed worrying what her wicked mind would cook up yet. And I also missed that juxtaposition of her character with Chono’s. Luckily, Six is still an incredibly complex and interesting character, so I was able to stay invested. I really enjoyed seeing a peak of their life before the events of These Burning Stars and inside their mind. It was also delightful to feel “in the know” of Six's schemes this time around.
“They gave the first half of their life to killing one person, but the rest of their life will be for keeping this one alive.”
I cannot say the same for Jun Ironway, who seems like a watered down and less capable version of herself in On Vicious Worlds. I was disappointed that she seemed completely out of her depth, especially without the presence of her paramour, Liis. But the same goes for most of the characters in the novel, as suddenly paranoid characters are not noticing things that should cause suspicion, political geniuses are outsmarted, double crossers are double crossed with both of their eyes wide open, and combat experts are soundly defeated in battle.
What’s more, is that I didn’t feel like the stakes were nearly as high in On Vicious Worlds. Perhaps it was the lack of Essek or the mere fact that it felt like all of the characters were wildly in over their heads in different parts of the universe, but the main mystery of discovering the identity of the Avatar just didn’t intrigue me too much. Plus, I felt that the pacing left a little something to be desired. On Vicious Worlds swings from one fight scene to a lot of standing around and discussing the political implications of another. I had trouble wanting to pick the book up during the lulls in action and it took me most of the month of January to finish the novel (though admittedly, I was also reading other books simultaneously). And a lot of the book felt like mere setup for the next one.
At this point, I am uncertain if I want to pick up the next book in the trilogy or not. On Vicious Worlds just didn’t capture me the way These Burning Stars did. I would still like to know what happens to Chono and Six, but I am not sure I want to muddle through trying to remember the ins and outs of the governing bodies in the world, the alliances, and everything else to find this out.
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April 8, 2025
3.25/5
We went from a heist sci-fi to a murder mystery in space focusing on my least favourite characters of last book. And I'm afraid I don't see the point of the avatar villain here.
Again, I liked the ending and how things were moving in the larger plot, but I feel like this mystery took too much screen time and drowned the empire collapsing. I'll change the rating if this mystery is actually relevant for the last book in the series.
We went from a heist sci-fi to a murder mystery in space focusing on my least favourite characters of last book. And I'm afraid I don't see the point of the avatar villain here.
Again, I liked the ending and how things were moving in the larger plot, but I feel like this mystery took too much screen time and drowned the empire collapsing. I'll change the rating if this mystery is actually relevant for the last book in the series.
November 21, 2024
I need this for now....
September 8, 2024
Thank you so much to Orbit and Netgalley for the chance to read On Vicious Worlds as an ARC! Bethany Jacobs jump-started my recent sci-fi obsession with These Burning Stars (which I absolutely adored), so I could NOT wait to get my hands on this title.
The first thing I will say about beginning On Vicious Worlds is: REREAD THESE BURNING STARS. I did *not* do this before starting book two and I deeply wish I had- even just a refresh on the last few chapters of book one would be a good idea. This book picks up QUICK and left me no room for recalling details- but I have no complaints about the pacing. OVW is definitely the kind of book that would do well with a brief synopsis of book one at the beginning, but not rereading book one before jumping right in was a total "me" problem. All this to say... learn from my mistake and reread TBS. I felt like I was caught up and truly understood what was going on around the 50% mark of OVW, if that's any consolation.
My only other MINOR complaint (other than initial confusion on wtf was going on, which was 100% my own fault) is that some chapters take place in the past; while this is not a problem in and of itself, I wish there had been more cues that those particular chapters occurred previously. With so many names and dates and names of years, I found it hard to keep track of what was past and what was present; even just something like "x number of years ago" in the chapter heading details would have helped clear some of my confusion. This, of course, is my opinion- otherwise, I really have no complaints about this book.
I really enjoyed the pacing of this book; the overarching plot unfolding had me swearing under my breath while I was reading at work, and I was constantly on the edge of my seat about what could possibly happen next. I am so excited (and stressed) for the third installment of this series, and will be anxiously awaiting its release! Bethany Jacobs... I am equally impressed by and afraid of you. On Vicious Worlds releases on October 15th, and if you haven't already started this series, take this as your sign to do so!
The first thing I will say about beginning On Vicious Worlds is: REREAD THESE BURNING STARS. I did *not* do this before starting book two and I deeply wish I had- even just a refresh on the last few chapters of book one would be a good idea. This book picks up QUICK and left me no room for recalling details- but I have no complaints about the pacing. OVW is definitely the kind of book that would do well with a brief synopsis of book one at the beginning, but not rereading book one before jumping right in was a total "me" problem. All this to say... learn from my mistake and reread TBS. I felt like I was caught up and truly understood what was going on around the 50% mark of OVW, if that's any consolation.
My only other MINOR complaint (other than initial confusion on wtf was going on, which was 100% my own fault) is that some chapters take place in the past; while this is not a problem in and of itself, I wish there had been more cues that those particular chapters occurred previously. With so many names and dates and names of years, I found it hard to keep track of what was past and what was present; even just something like "x number of years ago" in the chapter heading details would have helped clear some of my confusion. This, of course, is my opinion- otherwise, I really have no complaints about this book.
I really enjoyed the pacing of this book; the overarching plot unfolding had me swearing under my breath while I was reading at work, and I was constantly on the edge of my seat about what could possibly happen next. I am so excited (and stressed) for the third installment of this series, and will be anxiously awaiting its release! Bethany Jacobs... I am equally impressed by and afraid of you. On Vicious Worlds releases on October 15th, and if you haven't already started this series, take this as your sign to do so!
November 20, 2024
Review originally on JamReads
On Vicious Worlds is the second novel in the space opera series The Kindom Trilogy, written by Bethany Jacobs, and published by Orbit Books. It's not a secret that the first instalment on this series, These Burning Stars, ended being one of my favourite books last year, so I was pretty hyped for this one; and Jacobs has delivered, with a sharp instalment which explores power and the sacrifices made to keep it, with an excellent and captivating political plot.
A sequel which chooses to be split into two storylines, both tense and action packed, subtly interwoven, slowly binding them together to prepare for the final instalment. On one hand, we have Six and Chono, in the heart of the Treble, prisoners outside a jail, being forced to participate in the fight for the power at the core of the Kindom; part coerced by others, but with a small chance to change the things for the Jeveni.
On the other hand, a couple of months after the Jeveni's escape, a string of murders is creating unrest across the Jeveni colonist; the fragile social structure is crumbling as not everybody is on the same page, and Jun will see her life threatened.
Through these two plotlines, Jacobs makes an interesting exploration of the dynamics behind power and its implication; despite there might be at different levels, as its core, we can see how they share some elements. Tension is kept high most of the time, especially as we can feel the threat over our characters, especially on the Jeveni's plot, where it's mixed with technological elements and the best of murder mysteries.
In this second instalment, Jacobs goes deeper into the exploration of the Kindom politics, especially on those internal fights between the Hands and the houses for the power; and with the second plotline, we get a bigger dive into how the Jeveni work as society. The pacing is excellent, tense from the start, and keeping you wondering what will happen on the next page until the end.
On Vicious Worlds is the confirmation of how an excellent author we have on Bethany Jacobs; if you like smart space opera plots woven together with intricate political threads, the whole Kindom Trilogy should be your go to book. I can't wait to see how everything is wrapped in the final book on this series!
On Vicious Worlds is the second novel in the space opera series The Kindom Trilogy, written by Bethany Jacobs, and published by Orbit Books. It's not a secret that the first instalment on this series, These Burning Stars, ended being one of my favourite books last year, so I was pretty hyped for this one; and Jacobs has delivered, with a sharp instalment which explores power and the sacrifices made to keep it, with an excellent and captivating political plot.
A sequel which chooses to be split into two storylines, both tense and action packed, subtly interwoven, slowly binding them together to prepare for the final instalment. On one hand, we have Six and Chono, in the heart of the Treble, prisoners outside a jail, being forced to participate in the fight for the power at the core of the Kindom; part coerced by others, but with a small chance to change the things for the Jeveni.
On the other hand, a couple of months after the Jeveni's escape, a string of murders is creating unrest across the Jeveni colonist; the fragile social structure is crumbling as not everybody is on the same page, and Jun will see her life threatened.
Through these two plotlines, Jacobs makes an interesting exploration of the dynamics behind power and its implication; despite there might be at different levels, as its core, we can see how they share some elements. Tension is kept high most of the time, especially as we can feel the threat over our characters, especially on the Jeveni's plot, where it's mixed with technological elements and the best of murder mysteries.
In this second instalment, Jacobs goes deeper into the exploration of the Kindom politics, especially on those internal fights between the Hands and the houses for the power; and with the second plotline, we get a bigger dive into how the Jeveni work as society. The pacing is excellent, tense from the start, and keeping you wondering what will happen on the next page until the end.
On Vicious Worlds is the confirmation of how an excellent author we have on Bethany Jacobs; if you like smart space opera plots woven together with intricate political threads, the whole Kindom Trilogy should be your go to book. I can't wait to see how everything is wrapped in the final book on this series!
November 1, 2024
This series is exceptional and highly under the radar right now. A large, bright scifi epic spanning decades and light-years. There's political intrigue, exciting battles, and fiercely beloved relationships between characters who are highly intelligent and creative.
The first book was a surprise banger and I was hoping the same magic could be captured in the sequel, but I shouldn't have worried too much. From the first chapter (a bit of a prequel story, set during the unseen time of the first book) I was swept away by the author's writing. What they chose to say and how they chose to say it... I could literally feel how the new knowledge impacted my interpretation of all the text that followed. And I think that's really brilliant and a rare talent.
I cannot say enough good things about this series.
Audiobook Notes:
Natalie Naudus is a treasure. There's a wide cast and she's able to do different voices for each of them so that I can easily follow along with who is talking at any time-- even if it's a character putting on an affect as part of a disguise. The book is dense and there's a lot going on, so I wouldn't necessarily suggest exclusively absorbing this story through audio (at least not until the end when storylines become a little more straightforward), but I would definitely recommend listening to her narration.
The first book was a surprise banger and I was hoping the same magic could be captured in the sequel, but I shouldn't have worried too much. From the first chapter (a bit of a prequel story, set during the unseen time of the first book) I was swept away by the author's writing. What they chose to say and how they chose to say it... I could literally feel how the new knowledge impacted my interpretation of all the text that followed. And I think that's really brilliant and a rare talent.
I cannot say enough good things about this series.
Audiobook Notes:
Natalie Naudus is a treasure. There's a wide cast and she's able to do different voices for each of them so that I can easily follow along with who is talking at any time-- even if it's a character putting on an affect as part of a disguise. The book is dense and there's a lot going on, so I wouldn't necessarily suggest exclusively absorbing this story through audio (at least not until the end when storylines become a little more straightforward), but I would definitely recommend listening to her narration.
July 25, 2025
On Vicious Worlds is the second book of the The Kindom Trilogy . Strange, I detest most characters, found the infiltration of Capamame like Kinder Garden Play and still do not understand the game of Chono… and yet, I had no trouble to read on and on?!
This suffered a bit from second book syndrome, needing a new twist for the newly populated planet. A twist that ended up mostly in the form of “teenage” angst and self-blame – I really do not like that plot! Overall, the action and suspense remained solid, with a few eyerolls here and there at some “evolving relationships”. The next one, is not yet published (but soon out), no idea where this will go to. I’ll probably read this and find out (or I might just have lost interest by then). So, in summary, ambivalence all over.
This suffered a bit from second book syndrome, needing a new twist for the newly populated planet. A twist that ended up mostly in the form of “teenage” angst and self-blame – I really do not like that plot! Overall, the action and suspense remained solid, with a few eyerolls here and there at some “evolving relationships”. The next one, is not yet published (but soon out), no idea where this will go to. I’ll probably read this and find out (or I might just have lost interest by then). So, in summary, ambivalence all over.
December 10, 2025
4.5/5
Such a great sequel! The dysfunctional relationships continue but we do see progress and things go bad. I like how the fallout of These Burning Stars unfolds and how different people react to it. There's also hinting to some people, who I hope we'll see in the sequel because we only got crumbs so far.
There was a plot twist I did not see coming and I loved that, and also how it unravels. The complicated feelings people have make a lot of sense and also hurt me deeply, especially at the end. Can't wait for the finale!
Such a great sequel! The dysfunctional relationships continue but we do see progress and things go bad. I like how the fallout of These Burning Stars unfolds and how different people react to it. There's also hinting to some people, who I hope we'll see in the sequel because we only got crumbs so far.
There was a plot twist I did not see coming and I loved that, and also how it unravels. The complicated feelings people have make a lot of sense and also hurt me deeply, especially at the end. Can't wait for the finale!
March 20, 2025
This book had many of the same strengths as the first in the series - intriguing characters, propulsive action, complex but not too convoluted political intrigue. Two issues kept it from being the 5 star read its predecessor was for me: a cringe-inducing sex scene (my advice to sci fi authors - it's rarely necessary, much less advisable, just don't do it), and the character Effegen, who felt underdeveloped, given her important role in the story. Looking at a plot synopsis of the first book, I see she was in it too, but she's the only repeat character I don't remember, and it's only been six months.
November 9, 2024
i have many thoughts on this but not the energy to write them out, but this is an excellent sequel and one of my new favorite series
September 11, 2024
Thank you to NetGalley and Orbit for an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
3.75 stars, rounded up
While I enjoyed this book, I'm disappointed that it didn't come close to my level of enjoyment for the first book, These Burning Stars (which was an easy 5 stars!). This book is a lot more action-focused, with the politics and character work in the background. Many characters felt more like set pieces, with them making choices necessary for the plot that didn't seem to correlate with their personality. To me, this book suffers from middle book syndrome.
To start with the good things—Chono remains my favorite character, and seeing her become more and more confident in herself and her choices was wonderful. A few minor characters from the first book had important roles in this book, and their interactions with Chono added a lot of layers to her history and background to understand her character even better. Of course, I loved the constant tension between her and Six that has me DYING to read the next book. At first On Vicious Worlds felt like it was backpedaling a bit for no reason, with lots of flashbacks to Six's history before the events of book 1. But it slowly started to make sense why these chapters were included, as they connected to the current timeline and added more depth to Six's interactions with various characters. Liis is also a favorite, and remains a badass. Jun is wonderful as well, though she didn’t seem as badass as she was in the first book.
Treble politics undergoes a complete transformation in this book that was very enticing to follow. The ending was wild, with enough closure for the main storyline of this book while also providing a lot of intrigue for the final book in this trilogy.
However, On Vicious Worlds is a lot more violent and gory than These Burning Stars—it felt like there was a detailed fight scene every other chapter. As a visual reader, my brain often glazes over fight scenes because I have a hard time picturing them, and that was certainly the case for this book, which got tiring due to the sheer frequency. In retrospect, many of the fights were necessary to the plot, but the high amount made the already slow-paced plot drag even more. Casting also felt a little more cartoonish than I remember it being in the first book.
Half of this book focuses on the mystery of who is killing collectors in the new Jeveni homeworld of Farren Eyce, and as a result, it spends a lot more time with Masar. I liked Masar in the first book, but since he is hyperfocused on this mystery throughout the book, it seemed like there wasn't much else to his character. There was a romantic relationship (complete with sex scene) with one character that felt like it came out of nowhere. But my big complaint about the mystery is that there wasn't much progress made in solving it until a certain character conveniently returned to the narrative, after being gone on a trip that was glossed over in the beginning. It was disappointing to see characters that were so smart and strong in the first book seemingly fumble for so long until someone who should have been there the whole time saved them. And then the reveal of the avatar's identity came across as completely random—I don't remember there being any hints in the narrative beforehand as this character's personality did a complete 180 after the reveal that felt very mustache-twirling silly. The twist in These Burning Stars was surprising but satisfying because it made complete sense with what we knew of the characters involved. But in this book, I felt like I didn't know the characters at all and couldn't make sense of their choices.
I definitely still plan to read the next book as the ending has me so curious, but my sky-high expectations have been lowered. I do hope book 3 returns to more of the character and political focus of These Burning Stars.
3.75 stars, rounded up
While I enjoyed this book, I'm disappointed that it didn't come close to my level of enjoyment for the first book, These Burning Stars (which was an easy 5 stars!). This book is a lot more action-focused, with the politics and character work in the background. Many characters felt more like set pieces, with them making choices necessary for the plot that didn't seem to correlate with their personality. To me, this book suffers from middle book syndrome.
To start with the good things—Chono remains my favorite character, and seeing her become more and more confident in herself and her choices was wonderful. A few minor characters from the first book had important roles in this book, and their interactions with Chono added a lot of layers to her history and background to understand her character even better. Of course, I loved the constant tension between her and Six that has me DYING to read the next book. At first On Vicious Worlds felt like it was backpedaling a bit for no reason, with lots of flashbacks to Six's history before the events of book 1. But it slowly started to make sense why these chapters were included, as they connected to the current timeline and added more depth to Six's interactions with various characters. Liis is also a favorite, and remains a badass. Jun is wonderful as well, though she didn’t seem as badass as she was in the first book.
Treble politics undergoes a complete transformation in this book that was very enticing to follow. The ending was wild, with enough closure for the main storyline of this book while also providing a lot of intrigue for the final book in this trilogy.
However, On Vicious Worlds is a lot more violent and gory than These Burning Stars—it felt like there was a detailed fight scene every other chapter. As a visual reader, my brain often glazes over fight scenes because I have a hard time picturing them, and that was certainly the case for this book, which got tiring due to the sheer frequency. In retrospect, many of the fights were necessary to the plot, but the high amount made the already slow-paced plot drag even more. Casting also felt a little more cartoonish than I remember it being in the first book.
Half of this book focuses on the mystery of who is killing collectors in the new Jeveni homeworld of Farren Eyce, and as a result, it spends a lot more time with Masar. I liked Masar in the first book, but since he is hyperfocused on this mystery throughout the book, it seemed like there wasn't much else to his character. There was a romantic relationship (complete with sex scene) with one character that felt like it came out of nowhere. But my big complaint about the mystery is that there wasn't much progress made in solving it until a certain character conveniently returned to the narrative, after being gone on a trip that was glossed over in the beginning. It was disappointing to see characters that were so smart and strong in the first book seemingly fumble for so long until someone who should have been there the whole time saved them. And then the reveal of the avatar's identity came across as completely random—I don't remember there being any hints in the narrative beforehand as this character's personality did a complete 180 after the reveal that felt very mustache-twirling silly. The twist in These Burning Stars was surprising but satisfying because it made complete sense with what we knew of the characters involved. But in this book, I felt like I didn't know the characters at all and couldn't make sense of their choices.
I definitely still plan to read the next book as the ending has me so curious, but my sky-high expectations have been lowered. I do hope book 3 returns to more of the character and political focus of These Burning Stars.
January 11, 2025
This book was so fun to me. I found it really difficult to put down, and all of the various plot threads were compelling. The romantic tension really gets at what I like in a violent dystopian sci fi romance (bleeding, pining, killing for one another, etc), and while I only remember broad strokes of the world and story from when I read the first book, I didn't feel lost or like I needed to reread it.
I think the covers and titles do this series a disservice; it's bloody and grim and has a lot going on, and These Burning Stars sounds like a book about a nineteen-year-old hottie and her grouchy boyfriend named Blade. I wish the marketers had done it a little more justice, because it's one of my favorite series from the past several years.
I think the covers and titles do this series a disservice; it's bloody and grim and has a lot going on, and These Burning Stars sounds like a book about a nineteen-year-old hottie and her grouchy boyfriend named Blade. I wish the marketers had done it a little more justice, because it's one of my favorite series from the past several years.
December 23, 2024
Kind of a mixed bag, lots of words saying nothing and political discussion/intrigue which I am not the most fond of. But...there were some good action scenes and drama forwarding the story. I will read the next but this wasn't as good as the first.
February 23, 2025
Not as compelling as the first one. Took a while to get into.
October 11, 2024
Thanks to NetGalley and the Editor. I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review
When I started this one I had expectations. A lot of them. And, in the beginning, I wasn’t really so happy with the book. Mind me, it wasn’t bad. But it was not as good as I expected. The chapters that followed Chono and Six were great, but the ones set on the new Jeveni colony were… meh. We get many people being stupid and making problems, and I don’t deal with stupidity so well, so I wasn’t interested in those.
Mind me, I get why they were being stupid, at least up to a point, and I am not saying that this was unrealistic or implausible. It’s the other way around because it is highly plausible and hence tremendously depressing.
I was glad to see more of Masar around, he gets his own POV, and we get to know better Effegen, too. And this I enjoyed, but still… the parts with them as protagonists weren’t my favorite.
So the first half of the reading was a tad meh. It wasn’t properly boring, but I wasn’t hooked and I was feeling disappointed.
Chono and Six are another thing altogether. They are two characters that are bigger than life, in their own peculiar way, and they are masterpieces. I don’t know what this says about the author who created them, and I don’t know what it says about me, since I appreciate them so much (probably nothing good, but… oh well!), but you should start this series because they are here. Simple as that.
Anyway, back to the book per se. Things changed quickly after reaching the halfway point (given or taken). The pace picks up, almost every chapter ends with a cliffhanger, twists, and plots, and things all start happening and I couldn’t put it down. I was immersed, I was hooked and I needed to follow through.
This book is still dark, action-packed, and chock full of politics and intrigues. It has it all. Complicated feelings, deep psychological and emotional insights, action, fights, mysteries, and intrigues. It really has it all.
And I don’t have the words to express how amazingly well everything is intertwined and developed. It is magistrally done and I am in awe. But… the author is also sadistic, she hates her characters (there is no other explanation here) and she made them go through hell and back. She is up there, with authors like Sanderson and Robin Hobb. I am not saying they wrote similarly or that if you love one you’ll love the other, but all these authors are quite brutal with their characters (and with us, poor readers, who fell in love with said characters). And by the end, this book will take your feelings and thorn them to pieces before your eyes. It is brutal. It is merciless. And it is soooo good. But also… why did you torture us so???
I know it sounds all a bit mysterious, but I can’t really say more, or refer to anything specific because there is a high risk of spoilers and I won’t do that. You have to see what happens, discover what’s going on (and suffer) by yourself.
What I can say is that when I reviewed the first book I said that it reminded me a lot of Ann Leckie’s series, Imperial Radch, but that it was easier to follow. In this second book, I didn’t see the similarities anymore, and on one hand, I was a tad disappointed, because to me it was a plus, but at the same time, I am not really disappointed. I am making sense here? I am trying to say that this series is evolving, and I am still liking where is going.
Also, I said that the characters needed some serious therapy. And I stand by it. But now it’s me that needs therapy, too!!
All things considered, I loved the first one most, but this is a good sequel, and I still loved it. And if you enjoyed the first one, obviously you need to read this one, too!!
When I started this one I had expectations. A lot of them. And, in the beginning, I wasn’t really so happy with the book. Mind me, it wasn’t bad. But it was not as good as I expected. The chapters that followed Chono and Six were great, but the ones set on the new Jeveni colony were… meh. We get many people being stupid and making problems, and I don’t deal with stupidity so well, so I wasn’t interested in those.
Mind me, I get why they were being stupid, at least up to a point, and I am not saying that this was unrealistic or implausible. It’s the other way around because it is highly plausible and hence tremendously depressing.
I was glad to see more of Masar around, he gets his own POV, and we get to know better Effegen, too. And this I enjoyed, but still… the parts with them as protagonists weren’t my favorite.
So the first half of the reading was a tad meh. It wasn’t properly boring, but I wasn’t hooked and I was feeling disappointed.
Chono and Six are another thing altogether. They are two characters that are bigger than life, in their own peculiar way, and they are masterpieces. I don’t know what this says about the author who created them, and I don’t know what it says about me, since I appreciate them so much (probably nothing good, but… oh well!), but you should start this series because they are here. Simple as that.
Anyway, back to the book per se. Things changed quickly after reaching the halfway point (given or taken). The pace picks up, almost every chapter ends with a cliffhanger, twists, and plots, and things all start happening and I couldn’t put it down. I was immersed, I was hooked and I needed to follow through.
This book is still dark, action-packed, and chock full of politics and intrigues. It has it all. Complicated feelings, deep psychological and emotional insights, action, fights, mysteries, and intrigues. It really has it all.
And I don’t have the words to express how amazingly well everything is intertwined and developed. It is magistrally done and I am in awe. But… the author is also sadistic, she hates her characters (there is no other explanation here) and she made them go through hell and back. She is up there, with authors like Sanderson and Robin Hobb. I am not saying they wrote similarly or that if you love one you’ll love the other, but all these authors are quite brutal with their characters (and with us, poor readers, who fell in love with said characters). And by the end, this book will take your feelings and thorn them to pieces before your eyes. It is brutal. It is merciless. And it is soooo good. But also… why did you torture us so???
I know it sounds all a bit mysterious, but I can’t really say more, or refer to anything specific because there is a high risk of spoilers and I won’t do that. You have to see what happens, discover what’s going on (and suffer) by yourself.
What I can say is that when I reviewed the first book I said that it reminded me a lot of Ann Leckie’s series, Imperial Radch, but that it was easier to follow. In this second book, I didn’t see the similarities anymore, and on one hand, I was a tad disappointed, because to me it was a plus, but at the same time, I am not really disappointed. I am making sense here? I am trying to say that this series is evolving, and I am still liking where is going.
Also, I said that the characters needed some serious therapy. And I stand by it. But now it’s me that needs therapy, too!!
All things considered, I loved the first one most, but this is a good sequel, and I still loved it. And if you enjoyed the first one, obviously you need to read this one, too!!
October 22, 2024
As with the first book each chapter starts with the year. Once again it's mostly told through two time tracks, though they're much closer temporally than they were in the first. Many of the same characters return to reprise their same roles. There's a lot that's the same, though the situation has changed. I enjoyed reading this, but it's decidedly inferior in every way to the first book. Jacob's afterword explains the circumstances involved that led to this decline, which although providing insight, doesn't affect my enjoyment. It has almost everything that I liked about the first, except it isn't done as well. It also has a lot of narratives choices that I believe to be questionable. Despite this, the qualities that I enjoyed are still present and it's worth reading for the characters. Again, this is a good book.
The best part of the first book for me was its narrative sleight-of-hand, which couldn't be credibly repeated. This one does a different trick, but it's much more obvious, less believable, and definitely less impressive. The other aspect I most enjoyed was the character work. Everything about the characters was excellent. This time they're merely good, which is a problem of relative comparison. The main problem is that the characters and so limited and portrayed differently. In the first book the main characters are cool, competent, and consistent. They remained consistent, albeit in a different way, but were far less cool and much less competent. Having the characters being shown to be far less impressive than the reader was led to believe isn't inherently bad, but I would like there to be a clear narrative purpose for having done so. I wasn't able to discern any such purpose other than "because the plot requires it", which is a failing to me.
There are sex scenes again, including a threesome, which was interesting though somewhat confusing because of how gender works in this setting. I believe I understood the configuration that was involved, but due to the intentionally vague writing it's difficult to know for sure. I don't take issue with this other than sometimes I don't remember everything about every character so it makes it more difficult to imagine exactly what's going on. A sentiment such as "we're all just people, nothing else matters" is alright, but it does pose some practical difficulties. It is conducive though to believing whatever you want to believe is happening.
I'll be reading the final book of the trilogy, but given how this one ends, I expect it to be of similar quality to this one rather than the first. Which is to say, I expect it to be a good read, but nothing special. That being said, I await more books from Jacobs in the future. If the third book doesn't meet expectations, then that'll indicate to me that Jacobs is far better at writing standalones than series. Here's to hoping that's a viable path.
Rating: 3.5/5
The best part of the first book for me was its narrative sleight-of-hand, which couldn't be credibly repeated. This one does a different trick, but it's much more obvious, less believable, and definitely less impressive. The other aspect I most enjoyed was the character work. Everything about the characters was excellent. This time they're merely good, which is a problem of relative comparison. The main problem is that the characters and so limited and portrayed differently. In the first book the main characters are cool, competent, and consistent. They remained consistent, albeit in a different way, but were far less cool and much less competent. Having the characters being shown to be far less impressive than the reader was led to believe isn't inherently bad, but I would like there to be a clear narrative purpose for having done so. I wasn't able to discern any such purpose other than "because the plot requires it", which is a failing to me.
There are sex scenes again, including a threesome, which was interesting though somewhat confusing because of how gender works in this setting. I believe I understood the configuration that was involved, but due to the intentionally vague writing it's difficult to know for sure. I don't take issue with this other than sometimes I don't remember everything about every character so it makes it more difficult to imagine exactly what's going on. A sentiment such as "we're all just people, nothing else matters" is alright, but it does pose some practical difficulties. It is conducive though to believing whatever you want to believe is happening.
I'll be reading the final book of the trilogy, but given how this one ends, I expect it to be of similar quality to this one rather than the first. Which is to say, I expect it to be a good read, but nothing special. That being said, I await more books from Jacobs in the future. If the third book doesn't meet expectations, then that'll indicate to me that Jacobs is far better at writing standalones than series. Here's to hoping that's a viable path.
Rating: 3.5/5
March 22, 2025
Thanks to Orbit Books and Netgalley for the ARC.
4.5/5
The second book in this series has certainly cemented this as a favorite new Sci-Fi series I have read in the last year or so. It's full of so many wonderful, complex characters that never fail to surprise you by their actions and the directions these actions take the series are also sometimes so unexpected, it keeps you wondering who is going to end up surviving till the end of the book.
***Potential Spoilers for These Burning Stars***
The story is split between two locations, Capamame, where the Jeveni have settled and are trying to build their new lives, and back in the Treble, where Chono and Six have returned to try and salvage what was left after the death of Esek Nightfoot. Each of the threads plays out simultaneously and the back and forth really builds the tension throughout. Some of the characters that I thought would be minor and only appear in the first book have come back with a vengeance and there are plans within plans within plans and of course betrayals that I sure didn't see coming. A character that has become a favorite is Masar and I loved the addition of so much of his story here and the growing relationship he has with Bene and Effegen and I will admit I am very worried for his continued survival as we go the last book. That would break my heart to lose Masar. The politics, machinations of the various Secretaries and what really is the ultimate goal of Six are all things that come into play here and make this a fascinating story and am really looking forward to how all of this craziness is going to work out in the final book. I know we are going to lose important characters and it's going to be tough when that happens, I am sure!! I listened to the audio and once again, Natalie Naudis, does a wonderful narration of the story!!
4.5/5
The second book in this series has certainly cemented this as a favorite new Sci-Fi series I have read in the last year or so. It's full of so many wonderful, complex characters that never fail to surprise you by their actions and the directions these actions take the series are also sometimes so unexpected, it keeps you wondering who is going to end up surviving till the end of the book.
***Potential Spoilers for These Burning Stars***
The story is split between two locations, Capamame, where the Jeveni have settled and are trying to build their new lives, and back in the Treble, where Chono and Six have returned to try and salvage what was left after the death of Esek Nightfoot. Each of the threads plays out simultaneously and the back and forth really builds the tension throughout. Some of the characters that I thought would be minor and only appear in the first book have come back with a vengeance and there are plans within plans within plans and of course betrayals that I sure didn't see coming. A character that has become a favorite is Masar and I loved the addition of so much of his story here and the growing relationship he has with Bene and Effegen and I will admit I am very worried for his continued survival as we go the last book. That would break my heart to lose Masar. The politics, machinations of the various Secretaries and what really is the ultimate goal of Six are all things that come into play here and make this a fascinating story and am really looking forward to how all of this craziness is going to work out in the final book. I know we are going to lose important characters and it's going to be tough when that happens, I am sure!! I listened to the audio and once again, Natalie Naudis, does a wonderful narration of the story!!
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