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Seba Segel #1
The Thirteenth Month
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"Time is the most fluid medium in the universe; humans are its most replaceable element."
There are rules for A mage must never go forward. Keep the secrets of the order in all times. And never, ever travel during the thirteenth month.
Born into a powerful mage family, Narine Anahid Khoren is a time traveler whose life is constantly in flux. Since committing to the order of the Seba Segal at fourteen, she's spent her life traveling through history, trying to make a difference and sacrificing her life in the present for one jumping through the past.
But while the world in 2071 has moved forward, the ancient order of the Seba Segel have become ever more archaic. The secret sect founded by astronomer priests has passed its magic to thousands of generations, perfecting the secrets of divination and time travel, while also amassing power, influence, and riches.
Change is on the horizon, and some in the order would do anything to stop it from coming. When one of the highest laws of mage travel is broken in the thirteenth month, Narine, her friends, and one unsuspecting professor will have to scour history to set the timeline right.
"Time is the most fluid medium in the universe; humans are its most replaceable element."
There are rules for A mage must never go forward. Keep the secrets of the order in all times. And never, ever travel during the thirteenth month.
Born into a powerful mage family, Narine Anahid Khoren is a time traveler whose life is constantly in flux. Since committing to the order of the Seba Segal at fourteen, she's spent her life traveling through history, trying to make a difference and sacrificing her life in the present for one jumping through the past.
But while the world in 2071 has moved forward, the ancient order of the Seba Segel have become ever more archaic. The secret sect founded by astronomer priests has passed its magic to thousands of generations, perfecting the secrets of divination and time travel, while also amassing power, influence, and riches.
Change is on the horizon, and some in the order would do anything to stop it from coming. When one of the highest laws of mage travel is broken in the thirteenth month, Narine, her friends, and one unsuspecting professor will have to scour history to set the timeline right.
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Elizabeth Hunter
83 books6,294 followersELIZABETH HUNTER is an eleven-time USA Today bestselling author of romance, contemporary fantasy, and paranormal mystery. Based in Central California and Addis Ababa, she travels extensively to write fantasy fiction exploring world mythologies, history, and the universal bonds of love, friendship, and family.
She has published over fifty works of fiction and sold over two million books world-wide. She is the author of the Elemental Mysteries, the Irin Chronicles, the Cambio Springs Mysteries, and other works of fiction.
She has published over fifty works of fiction and sold over two million books world-wide. She is the author of the Elemental Mysteries, the Irin Chronicles, the Cambio Springs Mysteries, and other works of fiction.
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"Time is the most fluid medium in the universe; humans are its most replaceable element.”
There are rules for traveling:
A mage must never go forward.
Keep the secrets of the order in all times.
And never, ever travel during the thirteenth month.
Born into a powerful mage family, Narine Anahid Khoren is a time traveler whose life is constantly in flux. Since committing to the order of the Seba Segal at fourteen, she’s spent her life traveling through history, trying to make a difference and sacrificing her life in the present for one jumping through the past.
But while the world in 2071 has moved forward, the ancient order of the Seba Segel have become ever more archaic. The secret sect founded by astronomer priests has passed its magic to thousands of generations, perfecting the secrets of divination and time travel, while also amassing power, influence, and riches.
Change is on the horizon, and some in the order would do anything to stop it from coming. When one of the highest laws of mage travel is broken in the thirteenth month, Narine, her friends, and one unsuspecting professor will have to scour history to set the timeline right.
The Thirteenth Month is the first book in the Seba Segel series, an all-new time travel fantasy series by ten-time USA Today bestseller, Elizabeth Hunter, author of the Elemental Mysteries and the Irin Chronicles.
May 16, 2023
“While time was fluid, chaos was unlimited.”
So this was my first time reading anything by Elizabeth Hunter and I feel secure in saying that I’ve been missing out and that all my fellow readers who didn’t recommend her were clearly trying to hurt me. I’ll admit that I wasn’t overly excited going into it given the time travel element, as so many timeline narratives can swerve into an area of being convoluted at best and contradictory at worst. That being said, Hunter manages to flesh out the magic system enough that you have a good understanding of the world’s parameters without making it feel like you’re reading a drawn-out series of logistics. The world-building was rich, providing the reader with some small idea of Ethiopia and seamlessly distinguishing between the different time periods the story spanned.
This book centers on Narine, a traveler working for a secret society of mages in the year 2071. The Seba Segal works to advise governments and various heavyweights throughout history to achieve the best outcome for the common good while protecting the overall timeline they tend to. The first rule of the order is obviously that you don’t talk about the order, but they do also have a select set of rules to keep the timeline on track:
1. No traveling to the future
2. No traveling during the sacred thirteenth month
(I’ll be forever grateful for the absolute banger of an internet rabbit hole this book led me down on the Ethiopian Calendar, the funnest of facts)
While the first few chapters felt like a veritable smorgasbord of scene-setting, the stakes are raised pretty quickly when Narine and her fellow travelers sense that someone has jumped through time during the thirteenth month, rewriting history and erasing loved ones. Our travelers only have a limited window to correct what was wronged before they too will lose the memory of what their timeline is meant to be. Also we stan any MC that insists on getting a coffee before dealing with an overwhelming catastrophe, nothing like having your own coping skills validated.
The “main” plotline takes place in 2071, but much of the novel switches to six years prior during Narine’s first solo mission for her order. This creates an interesting contrast in the idealistic twenty-two-year-old and the secretive, slightly jaded Narine we see she’ll become. Through that lens we’re able to see her navigate discussions on power and politics, highlighting the way our experiences shape our views of right, wrong, and the world as a whole. It also allows for the added mystery of unraveling what caused her transformation. A bonus is that this switching does scratch a dual POV itch without the broadness that can occur when trying to keep track of sixteen subplots. Yes, I’m thinking of a specific book. No, I will not do them dirty in the review for this absolute gem.
The Thirteenth Month was beautifully written and consuming enough that my roommate was battered with a play-by-play whenever I was forced to put it down. I’m an Elizabeth Hunter convert and will have to take comfort in absolutely everything she’s ever written while I wait for a sequel. Until 2024 just assume I’m on a fainting couch somewhere brooding like a Victorian lady. They don’t travel to Victorian times so this isn’t an easter egg of a comment, it just feels right.
Trigger Warning: Domestic Violence
So this was my first time reading anything by Elizabeth Hunter and I feel secure in saying that I’ve been missing out and that all my fellow readers who didn’t recommend her were clearly trying to hurt me. I’ll admit that I wasn’t overly excited going into it given the time travel element, as so many timeline narratives can swerve into an area of being convoluted at best and contradictory at worst. That being said, Hunter manages to flesh out the magic system enough that you have a good understanding of the world’s parameters without making it feel like you’re reading a drawn-out series of logistics. The world-building was rich, providing the reader with some small idea of Ethiopia and seamlessly distinguishing between the different time periods the story spanned.
This book centers on Narine, a traveler working for a secret society of mages in the year 2071. The Seba Segal works to advise governments and various heavyweights throughout history to achieve the best outcome for the common good while protecting the overall timeline they tend to. The first rule of the order is obviously that you don’t talk about the order, but they do also have a select set of rules to keep the timeline on track:
1. No traveling to the future
2. No traveling during the sacred thirteenth month
(I’ll be forever grateful for the absolute banger of an internet rabbit hole this book led me down on the Ethiopian Calendar, the funnest of facts)
While the first few chapters felt like a veritable smorgasbord of scene-setting, the stakes are raised pretty quickly when Narine and her fellow travelers sense that someone has jumped through time during the thirteenth month, rewriting history and erasing loved ones. Our travelers only have a limited window to correct what was wronged before they too will lose the memory of what their timeline is meant to be. Also we stan any MC that insists on getting a coffee before dealing with an overwhelming catastrophe, nothing like having your own coping skills validated.
The “main” plotline takes place in 2071, but much of the novel switches to six years prior during Narine’s first solo mission for her order. This creates an interesting contrast in the idealistic twenty-two-year-old and the secretive, slightly jaded Narine we see she’ll become. Through that lens we’re able to see her navigate discussions on power and politics, highlighting the way our experiences shape our views of right, wrong, and the world as a whole. It also allows for the added mystery of unraveling what caused her transformation. A bonus is that this switching does scratch a dual POV itch without the broadness that can occur when trying to keep track of sixteen subplots. Yes, I’m thinking of a specific book. No, I will not do them dirty in the review for this absolute gem.
The Thirteenth Month was beautifully written and consuming enough that my roommate was battered with a play-by-play whenever I was forced to put it down. I’m an Elizabeth Hunter convert and will have to take comfort in absolutely everything she’s ever written while I wait for a sequel. Until 2024 just assume I’m on a fainting couch somewhere brooding like a Victorian lady. They don’t travel to Victorian times so this isn’t an easter egg of a comment, it just feels right.
Trigger Warning: Domestic Violence
May 16, 2023
A whole new world for Elizabeth Hunter!
Time travel.
The phrase itself has a "what could go wrong" hidden in it. Do you go forward or back? If you change one thing, can you see the impact on the timeline? The Seba Segal exists because one small event can change the course of history.
Narine is a traveler. One in a long line of powerful mages. She understands the danger in going back in time to warn of a coming disaster. If you stay too long your memories of home can fade away. It's also very unwise to form close "personal relationships". The intrigue is just beginning.
To me, this book gets better the longer you read it. Setting the scenes in a world most readers will never see is a big task, I suppose. Ms. Hunter has a talent for describing a place so well that you can almost see it. After the initial setup the story really takes off. It's clear this book is just the appetizer for a six course meal. Savor it.
I am honored to be on the advance reader team for Ms. Hunter. I received this book before it's public release so I could post my honest review.
Time travel.
The phrase itself has a "what could go wrong" hidden in it. Do you go forward or back? If you change one thing, can you see the impact on the timeline? The Seba Segal exists because one small event can change the course of history.
Narine is a traveler. One in a long line of powerful mages. She understands the danger in going back in time to warn of a coming disaster. If you stay too long your memories of home can fade away. It's also very unwise to form close "personal relationships". The intrigue is just beginning.
To me, this book gets better the longer you read it. Setting the scenes in a world most readers will never see is a big task, I suppose. Ms. Hunter has a talent for describing a place so well that you can almost see it. After the initial setup the story really takes off. It's clear this book is just the appetizer for a six course meal. Savor it.
I am honored to be on the advance reader team for Ms. Hunter. I received this book before it's public release so I could post my honest review.
May 16, 2023
Wow wow wow wow. I didn’t know what to expect when I read time traveling mages, but just WOW.
This is Elizabeth at her best! She knows how to weave and tell a story and keep you on the edge of your seat and captivated.
This one mind tripped my brain. Like it was amazing. I loved that it was set in Ethiopia, I loved the premise of everything and I definitely loved ALL the twists. 🤯 mind blown. I was seriously biting my nails at some points. It was incredible! I’m so so so excited for more!!! Gah!
This is Elizabeth at her best! She knows how to weave and tell a story and keep you on the edge of your seat and captivated.
This one mind tripped my brain. Like it was amazing. I loved that it was set in Ethiopia, I loved the premise of everything and I definitely loved ALL the twists. 🤯 mind blown. I was seriously biting my nails at some points. It was incredible! I’m so so so excited for more!!! Gah!
May 23, 2023
I can not express to you enough how amazing this new book by Elizabeth Hunter is! This new series sure started with a bang! Elizabeth has a way of creating refreshing new concepts on already done ideas, and the world building in this book shows you how adept she is at just that.
In the way that the Irin Chronicles was a breathtaking new spin on a series about angels, The Thirteenth Month is a completely singular take on time travel lore. The story is so richly immersed into the Ethiopian culture that you can feel the love the author has for the city of Addis and you can’t help but loose a piece of your heart to it as well. The tale is a rich tapestry seamlessly weaving together the culture, magic and science wholly unique to the Seba Segal universe. My heart pounded so many times in this story, the many mysteries keeping me on the edge of my seat, while I was furiously texting a friend who had already read it every time my kind screamed “NO WAY!”. Which was a lot by the way! Without having any major cliffhangers (thank you!) the book leads us perfectly into the “dying for more” bibliophile phase that one needs to highly anticipate the next in series. Which I am!!!
As someone who didn’t know much about Ethiopia, its traditions, culture, speech etc..when I first read this book, it took me a little bit to sink into the setting, language/phrases etc... Ms. Hunter does an excellent job slowly immersing you into it all, and in a short time I felt right at home and I know you will too. Well done, 5 stars.
In the way that the Irin Chronicles was a breathtaking new spin on a series about angels, The Thirteenth Month is a completely singular take on time travel lore. The story is so richly immersed into the Ethiopian culture that you can feel the love the author has for the city of Addis and you can’t help but loose a piece of your heart to it as well. The tale is a rich tapestry seamlessly weaving together the culture, magic and science wholly unique to the Seba Segal universe. My heart pounded so many times in this story, the many mysteries keeping me on the edge of my seat, while I was furiously texting a friend who had already read it every time my kind screamed “NO WAY!”. Which was a lot by the way! Without having any major cliffhangers (thank you!) the book leads us perfectly into the “dying for more” bibliophile phase that one needs to highly anticipate the next in series. Which I am!!!
As someone who didn’t know much about Ethiopia, its traditions, culture, speech etc..when I first read this book, it took me a little bit to sink into the setting, language/phrases etc... Ms. Hunter does an excellent job slowly immersing you into it all, and in a short time I felt right at home and I know you will too. Well done, 5 stars.
May 29, 2023
Elizabeth Hunter is always a must read for me. Plus, I love a well-written time travelling novel. So, I was keen to check out this new series. While, it was a bit slow to get started --as the first in the series it needed the world building and character establishment -- it set things up well for when the tension did start to rise. This novel included a mix of traditions, magic, futuristic, and technology. It also incorporates some big issues like: colonisation, domestic violence, global warming/pollution, time, culture, and equality. These things were woven into the world building and plot. The strength, as I find in all Hunter's novels, was the characters. They are both realistic and complex, with even minor characters being well developed. The main complication in the plot for this novel was 'resolved' but still with a lot of unanswered questions to keep the series going. Intrigued to see where this is heading!
Pet peeve- there were a few grammatical 'mistakes' that could have been picked up in editing like stating 'where' instead of 'were' and 'you' instead of 'your' to name a couple. This didn't effect the overall reading experience but was just an annoyance.
Pet peeve- there were a few grammatical 'mistakes' that could have been picked up in editing like stating 'where' instead of 'were' and 'you' instead of 'your' to name a couple. This didn't effect the overall reading experience but was just an annoyance.
May 19, 2023
This book was completely different and unexpectedly captivating. I love time travel, but this time travel book is unlike any other. I did not allowed myself to read any of the teasers or little excerpts, so that I would come into this with no preconceived notions about anything, and it blew me away .
There is so much unbelievable world building that Elizabeth Hunter excels at. She creates some of the most amazing worlds that you just fall in love with, and that are so enjoyable to read about.
This book at first may seem a little slow moving but it’s really not. There’s just so much information that we need to get to be able to get into the story and once you do you can’t get out of the story! You can’t put it down ,you have to find out what’s going to happen next! There are so many twists and turns that it keeps you guessing from one moment to the next!
This book is one that I will return to over and over.
There is so much unbelievable world building that Elizabeth Hunter excels at. She creates some of the most amazing worlds that you just fall in love with, and that are so enjoyable to read about.
This book at first may seem a little slow moving but it’s really not. There’s just so much information that we need to get to be able to get into the story and once you do you can’t get out of the story! You can’t put it down ,you have to find out what’s going to happen next! There are so many twists and turns that it keeps you guessing from one moment to the next!
This book is one that I will return to over and over.
May 22, 2023
“A single pebble can make a wave that destroys a mountain”
The Thirteenth Month is a captivating tale about a time traveling mage who learns, despite her best efforts, that what happens in the past can have a significant affect on the future.
Narine is a traveler from Ethiopia who works for the secret society of mages called the Seba Segel. The story takes place during Narine’s home timeline of 2071 and a past timeline of 1920. Travelers have to follow certain rules: it is forbidden to travel during Pagume, a sacred holiday encompassing the thirteenth month, and it is also forbidden to ever travel into the future. Time travel is limited to only changing things that won’t greatly affect the timeline. When Narine feels a shift during Pagume, she knows someone has broken the law and traveled which could have dire consequences. She enlists her friends to help solve the problem when she learns that this shift has made someone close to her disappear from existence. As more and more of her allies start to be removed from her timeline entirely, Narine realizes that a link from her past - history’s past - may be the cause.
My take:
At first, I wasn’t sure how I felt about reading a book that was both futuristic Sci-Fi and Historical Fiction, however the author does a great job of weaving the strands of both these times into one beautiful novel full of twists and turns. And when I say this novel takes you for a ride… you end with wind-blown hair and questioning your own life decisions. I like the way she addressed time-travel without it being too complex, however also giving the power limits. All the revelations are spoilers, so I can’t share… but that just means you should read it yourself!
The world building in the beginning got off to a slow start, but once the novel picked up speed it never slowed. The suspense was palpable. There was a plot twist that I didn’t figure out until just before it was revealed, which lends a nod to the author’s storytelling ability.
I am definitely going to read the next book in this series because there are still so many questions that need answers!
*I received an advanced reader copy of this book in exchange for my honest review. All opinions are my own.
The Thirteenth Month is a captivating tale about a time traveling mage who learns, despite her best efforts, that what happens in the past can have a significant affect on the future.
Narine is a traveler from Ethiopia who works for the secret society of mages called the Seba Segel. The story takes place during Narine’s home timeline of 2071 and a past timeline of 1920. Travelers have to follow certain rules: it is forbidden to travel during Pagume, a sacred holiday encompassing the thirteenth month, and it is also forbidden to ever travel into the future. Time travel is limited to only changing things that won’t greatly affect the timeline. When Narine feels a shift during Pagume, she knows someone has broken the law and traveled which could have dire consequences. She enlists her friends to help solve the problem when she learns that this shift has made someone close to her disappear from existence. As more and more of her allies start to be removed from her timeline entirely, Narine realizes that a link from her past - history’s past - may be the cause.
My take:
At first, I wasn’t sure how I felt about reading a book that was both futuristic Sci-Fi and Historical Fiction, however the author does a great job of weaving the strands of both these times into one beautiful novel full of twists and turns. And when I say this novel takes you for a ride… you end with wind-blown hair and questioning your own life decisions. I like the way she addressed time-travel without it being too complex, however also giving the power limits. All the revelations are spoilers, so I can’t share… but that just means you should read it yourself!
The world building in the beginning got off to a slow start, but once the novel picked up speed it never slowed. The suspense was palpable. There was a plot twist that I didn’t figure out until just before it was revealed, which lends a nod to the author’s storytelling ability.
I am definitely going to read the next book in this series because there are still so many questions that need answers!
*I received an advanced reader copy of this book in exchange for my honest review. All opinions are my own.
May 21, 2023
This was my first time reading Elizabeth Hunter, and I have to say I was pleasantly surprised!
Not only is the underlying premise of The Thirteenth Month intriguing, but Hunter offers a fresh take on the whole business of time travel. She presents one that is centered on tradition, magic, star mapping, and mysticism rather than quantum mechanics and calculation (although future-forward tech does make its appearance in this world).
Our protagonist, Narine, is a 28-year-old time traveler who comes from a long lineage of mages. She introduces us to the hustle and bustle of Addis Ababa, Ethiopia, circa 2071, and the intricate practices of the Seba Segel.
From there, we enter the very heart of mage society and the responsibilities and customs therein. It is the sacred month of Pagume, wherein time travel is not allowed due to the dangerous possibilities of war and time unraveling. But when Narine's mentor and all local memories of him suddenly disappear, suspicions emerge that someone may have changed history for the worse.
The Thirteenth Month is a great read for those who enjoy suspense, historical fiction, sci-fi, or who want to switch up their reading palette this summer.
Not only is the underlying premise of The Thirteenth Month intriguing, but Hunter offers a fresh take on the whole business of time travel. She presents one that is centered on tradition, magic, star mapping, and mysticism rather than quantum mechanics and calculation (although future-forward tech does make its appearance in this world).
Our protagonist, Narine, is a 28-year-old time traveler who comes from a long lineage of mages. She introduces us to the hustle and bustle of Addis Ababa, Ethiopia, circa 2071, and the intricate practices of the Seba Segel.
From there, we enter the very heart of mage society and the responsibilities and customs therein. It is the sacred month of Pagume, wherein time travel is not allowed due to the dangerous possibilities of war and time unraveling. But when Narine's mentor and all local memories of him suddenly disappear, suspicions emerge that someone may have changed history for the worse.
The Thirteenth Month is a great read for those who enjoy suspense, historical fiction, sci-fi, or who want to switch up their reading palette this summer.
May 29, 2023
A 4.5 stars read.
I'm a big fan of this author, because I always enjoy all her books that I've read and always adore the main characters. So I was super excited with this new series, it's time travel urban fantasy, and I love it, it's a great start.
What I like:
- african inspired.
- it's set in 2071 in addis ababa, where everything is thriving, futuristic and peaceful and it's just beautiful.
- the magic, it's pretty complex, time travel is not that simple, there's so many rules like you can jump to the future, what you change in the past there's always an effect and consequences, it needs magic, blood sacrifice and algorithm.
- the mystery, what really happen, the who, the why, got me keep turning the page, I suspect everything and everyone and always expecting something bad will happen.
- the characters, I adore and admire Narine, she's a fighter and so smart, she handle everything so well and calm, she's been through a lot, she has weak moment but she always comeback stronger.
- the timeline, the switch between past and present, it's upped the ante.
- the friendship, the love, the family, all really heartwarming.
What I don't like: a bit slow at the beginning and lots repetitions, but I get it because this is the first book from a series, so the foundation of the magic and rules and the world gotta be explain over and over.
Recommended: yes especially if you love time travel urban fantasy
I'm a big fan of this author, because I always enjoy all her books that I've read and always adore the main characters. So I was super excited with this new series, it's time travel urban fantasy, and I love it, it's a great start.
What I like:
- african inspired.
- it's set in 2071 in addis ababa, where everything is thriving, futuristic and peaceful and it's just beautiful.
- the magic, it's pretty complex, time travel is not that simple, there's so many rules like you can jump to the future, what you change in the past there's always an effect and consequences, it needs magic, blood sacrifice and algorithm.
- the mystery, what really happen, the who, the why, got me keep turning the page, I suspect everything and everyone and always expecting something bad will happen.
- the characters, I adore and admire Narine, she's a fighter and so smart, she handle everything so well and calm, she's been through a lot, she has weak moment but she always comeback stronger.
- the timeline, the switch between past and present, it's upped the ante.
- the friendship, the love, the family, all really heartwarming.
What I don't like: a bit slow at the beginning and lots repetitions, but I get it because this is the first book from a series, so the foundation of the magic and rules and the world gotta be explain over and over.
Recommended: yes especially if you love time travel urban fantasy
April 24, 2024
Having been born into a powerful mage family, Narine has been committed to the order of Seba Segel since age 14, traveling back through time on assignments as she works to make a difference where — and when — she can. But by 2071, the ancient order has remained with a firmer hold on its archaic ways, continuing to gain power, wealth, and influence. When it’s clear that someone has traveled back in time during the thirteenth month, breaking sacred laws, Narine and her friends must use their wits and their powers to set the timeline right again.
Hunter is a new author to me, and I was delighted to head into a complex time-travel story with such a rich setting. I also discovered the Ethiopian calendar, a real system featuring twelve months, each thirty days long, and an additional five or six epagomenal days forming a thirteenth month called Pagumē. Pagumē marks the time just before the new year, aligning closely with the astronomical solar year, and is a time of reflection, finalizing plans, settling debts, and reflection before the renewal of Meskerem, the New Year. It is during this period, when one year merges into the next, when there are strict laws against traveling. This is time travel where the voyager can elicit changes that ripple ahead through time. With any change that happens, especially one that would directly impact a traveler, anyone with time travel abilities will sense and feel the change. They are able to retain their memories of the “before” for longer than those without the magic.
This was a fascinating read, and a familiar concept in the time-play arena. There were so many aspects at play, and that was mainly attributable to the fact that Hunter created a main character with a complete life. Things get in the way, elements need to be considered — and yet, she is also a very experienced traveler and someone set on things being harmonious and what’s best for the most people. Once Narine begins her investigation into the illegal time travel, the effects of which she felt and impact her directly, the broader the scope and the more urgent the search becomes. Woven into the story is her first solo time travel assignment — bringing in both elements of what a typical trip into the past might look like and what happens when events of yesteryear ripple out to impact the future. Though the villain was a little too dastardly, I don’t think it harmed the action or the character.
Hunter is a prolific writer, and I look forward to continuing with this series and maybe seeing what else she has on the shelf.
Hunter is a new author to me, and I was delighted to head into a complex time-travel story with such a rich setting. I also discovered the Ethiopian calendar, a real system featuring twelve months, each thirty days long, and an additional five or six epagomenal days forming a thirteenth month called Pagumē. Pagumē marks the time just before the new year, aligning closely with the astronomical solar year, and is a time of reflection, finalizing plans, settling debts, and reflection before the renewal of Meskerem, the New Year. It is during this period, when one year merges into the next, when there are strict laws against traveling. This is time travel where the voyager can elicit changes that ripple ahead through time. With any change that happens, especially one that would directly impact a traveler, anyone with time travel abilities will sense and feel the change. They are able to retain their memories of the “before” for longer than those without the magic.
This was a fascinating read, and a familiar concept in the time-play arena. There were so many aspects at play, and that was mainly attributable to the fact that Hunter created a main character with a complete life. Things get in the way, elements need to be considered — and yet, she is also a very experienced traveler and someone set on things being harmonious and what’s best for the most people. Once Narine begins her investigation into the illegal time travel, the effects of which she felt and impact her directly, the broader the scope and the more urgent the search becomes. Woven into the story is her first solo time travel assignment — bringing in both elements of what a typical trip into the past might look like and what happens when events of yesteryear ripple out to impact the future. Though the villain was a little too dastardly, I don’t think it harmed the action or the character.
Hunter is a prolific writer, and I look forward to continuing with this series and maybe seeing what else she has on the shelf.
May 25, 2023
I finished The Thirteenth Month a few days ago and I am still reeling from just how amazing this book is! This book pulled me in, kept me enthralled, and I'm still thinking about it days later. That is the mark of a great book!
Magic, ancient traditions, and time travel are perfectly woven together by Elizabeth Hunter's masterful storytelling. I have always appreciated her talent for intricate world building, particularly in the Irin Chronicles and the Elemental Mysteries series. With a setting and culture that many readers have little prior knowledge or experience of, her fictional world creates an opportunity for the reader to learn more about the rich traditions and culture of Ethiopia. Her love of Addis Ababa, Ethiopia and her extensive research shine through in this book.
Time travel novels are not typically something that I enjoy reading, but this book is the exception. The ability to time travel is based on magical talent rather than a scientific or technological approach, with rules/boundries of the magical system clearly laid out. It read more like a fantasy in this respect, which worked for me.
Narine, a mage with a talent for time travel, is a fascinating character. I was curious about her from the first; powerful, strong, loyal, and with a soft heart for those few close to her. With the story told through the eyes of "current" Narine in 2071 and the Narine of six years prior, the reader experiences almost a dual POV, which sounds like it could be confusing, but was perfectly executed.
I'm finding it difficult to review the plot without giving away any spoilers, but I will say that I did not see the plot twist coming! You need to read this book for yourself! There are still questions unanswered and I am looking forward to reading more in the Seba Segal series.
I received an advance copy from the author and am leaving my honest review voluntarily.
Magic, ancient traditions, and time travel are perfectly woven together by Elizabeth Hunter's masterful storytelling. I have always appreciated her talent for intricate world building, particularly in the Irin Chronicles and the Elemental Mysteries series. With a setting and culture that many readers have little prior knowledge or experience of, her fictional world creates an opportunity for the reader to learn more about the rich traditions and culture of Ethiopia. Her love of Addis Ababa, Ethiopia and her extensive research shine through in this book.
Time travel novels are not typically something that I enjoy reading, but this book is the exception. The ability to time travel is based on magical talent rather than a scientific or technological approach, with rules/boundries of the magical system clearly laid out. It read more like a fantasy in this respect, which worked for me.
Narine, a mage with a talent for time travel, is a fascinating character. I was curious about her from the first; powerful, strong, loyal, and with a soft heart for those few close to her. With the story told through the eyes of "current" Narine in 2071 and the Narine of six years prior, the reader experiences almost a dual POV, which sounds like it could be confusing, but was perfectly executed.
I'm finding it difficult to review the plot without giving away any spoilers, but I will say that I did not see the plot twist coming! You need to read this book for yourself! There are still questions unanswered and I am looking forward to reading more in the Seba Segal series.
I received an advance copy from the author and am leaving my honest review voluntarily.
May 30, 2023
4.5 stars!
I received this as an ARC from Valentine PR in exchange for my honest review. When I found this on their website, I immediately knew I needed to read this!!
This was such a unique read! I mean, time travel?? hello?! How could I say no?
This book follows our FMC Narine who is a time traveler and powerful mage. In this world, there is only one month where you're not allowed to time travel or change anything. If you do, something terrible will happen. Well, that's The Thirteenth Month!
This whole book kept me intrigued from beginning to end! I didn't want to put this down. I love the concept of time travel and this book gives me "Stargate Atlantis" vibes in terms of the time traveling and power. Elizabeth Hunter did a phenomenal job with the world building! I felt like I could see everything in my mind as it was happening.
I received this as an ARC from Valentine PR in exchange for my honest review. When I found this on their website, I immediately knew I needed to read this!!
This was such a unique read! I mean, time travel?? hello?! How could I say no?
This book follows our FMC Narine who is a time traveler and powerful mage. In this world, there is only one month where you're not allowed to time travel or change anything. If you do, something terrible will happen. Well, that's The Thirteenth Month!
This whole book kept me intrigued from beginning to end! I didn't want to put this down. I love the concept of time travel and this book gives me "Stargate Atlantis" vibes in terms of the time traveling and power. Elizabeth Hunter did a phenomenal job with the world building! I felt like I could see everything in my mind as it was happening.
May 21, 2023
Let me start by saying that I was hesitant about a book about time travel, they aren't my favorite. However, the way Elizabeth Hunter creates worlds, especially this one, it became, for me, a wonderful mystery with time travel thrown in. She is also an expert in developing and nurturing relationships in her characters. Not only blood families, but found and created families. So that the reader feels for all of them, even if that feeling is hate or disdain.
As this is a whole new world with lots of intricacies, I will admit that this started slow for me. Once this new world fleshed itself out in my mind, I wasn't able to stop reading and needed to solve the mystery... and it ended exactly like it should have.
Yep, the next 2 will be at the top of my TBR!!
As this is a whole new world with lots of intricacies, I will admit that this started slow for me. Once this new world fleshed itself out in my mind, I wasn't able to stop reading and needed to solve the mystery... and it ended exactly like it should have.
Yep, the next 2 will be at the top of my TBR!!
May 18, 2023
This book is the first in the magic world of Seba Segel. I sincerely hope there will be many more. There is an intricate world building that takes you in straight away and complex system of magic that the reader learns about throughout the story. I can’t tell you about the story because I don’t like leaving spoilers. I can tell you that I loved the characters, their friendships and deep human love and hate. I loved that this story made me think about life and how each little decision we make can impact our lives and many that come after us. I love strong female characters in this book regardless of their physical or magical powers, they all shine with kindness and love.
May 22, 2023
I was lucky enough to score an ARC for Elizabeth Hunter's newest book, The Thirteenth Month, which comes out tomorrow, May 23rd. Because I've loved everything I've read from her so far, this went on my TBR list as soon as she told us about it. And because she often shares glimpses of her life and home in Ethiopia, I was super excited for my extended visit to the country by way of the pages of her first (I think) story set there.
Fact: The Ethiopian calendar differs from the Gregorian calendar in that the Ethiopian calendar has 12 months consisting of 30 days each ... for a total of 360 days. The remaining 5 days (or 6 in a leap year) make up the 13th month. It is highly respected as a time of peace, renewal, celebration, and more.
In The Thirteenth Month, we meet Narine, a time traveling Mage who is tasked with advising leaders and heads of state in the past based on the known outcome in her current time. The goal is not to change fixed points in time - because those events will always find a way - but to help limit the suffering of innocents as much as possible. Her magic is strong, and she is good at her job, even if her bosses in the ancient order of the Seba Segal don't always appreciate her methods.
The first half of the book is world building and establishing Narine's life. Elizabeth once described this book as her love letter to Ethiopia and without ever having been, I can still agree wholeheartedly. It's vivid and bright with color and sound. Narine loves her home and it shows on every page. We meet her family and friends, and see her work challenges. We learn about the 13th month and why it's forbidden to time travel during this holy time. There are many threads of information and story to follow. I'm a mystery reader, so with each new thread my brain tried to predict how they tied together.
And then ... all hell breaks loose. The second half of the book is intense. The who and why have become more clear but Narine is still trying to figure out the how. Then there is the question of who to trust as her world is literally changing around her. The vibe is more adventure-y than action-y, though there are some impressive action scenes too. I read the last 30ish percent on the edge of my seat. I wasn't sure how the book could possibly end without a massive cliffhanger, but my fear was unfounded. I loved Narine's approach and reflection once the immediate danger had passed, and the ending lines were absolutely beautiful. I am happily awaiting book 2.
Tech: I enjoyed the modern/futuristic tech elements, including AI. I know AI is a huge topic of discussion right now, and in this story, the future trajectory of its use is done responsibly.
Time Travel: So many ways to do time travel, and I'm on board as long as the author can make it make sense, and it definitely worked here. The blend of biological magic, natural elements, and a wee bit of tech was brilliant. As was the limitation, responsibilities, and consequences. And something that so many stories overlook - the aging of the traveler while they are outside of their own time - was not only addressed, but done so magnificently.
Words: When I read a book set in a place outside of the United States, with characters that are from that area, I hope the author chooses to use as many regionally accurate terms, spellings, and phrasings as possible, and there was an abundance here. Written in English, everything was obvious based on context, but I enjoyed the opportunity to look up terms and experiences (via the dictionary on my reader or a source online) to better understand and visualize the Ethiopian culture, which always makes for a richer reading experience.
I highly recommend this book. I'm not sure what genre I'd put it in, since it has elements of so many, but it is officially listed as fantasy. I'd say it's more a story about one woman's journey to live her own life instead of the life thrust on her from generations long passed.
Fact: The Ethiopian calendar differs from the Gregorian calendar in that the Ethiopian calendar has 12 months consisting of 30 days each ... for a total of 360 days. The remaining 5 days (or 6 in a leap year) make up the 13th month. It is highly respected as a time of peace, renewal, celebration, and more.
In The Thirteenth Month, we meet Narine, a time traveling Mage who is tasked with advising leaders and heads of state in the past based on the known outcome in her current time. The goal is not to change fixed points in time - because those events will always find a way - but to help limit the suffering of innocents as much as possible. Her magic is strong, and she is good at her job, even if her bosses in the ancient order of the Seba Segal don't always appreciate her methods.
The first half of the book is world building and establishing Narine's life. Elizabeth once described this book as her love letter to Ethiopia and without ever having been, I can still agree wholeheartedly. It's vivid and bright with color and sound. Narine loves her home and it shows on every page. We meet her family and friends, and see her work challenges. We learn about the 13th month and why it's forbidden to time travel during this holy time. There are many threads of information and story to follow. I'm a mystery reader, so with each new thread my brain tried to predict how they tied together.
And then ... all hell breaks loose. The second half of the book is intense. The who and why have become more clear but Narine is still trying to figure out the how. Then there is the question of who to trust as her world is literally changing around her. The vibe is more adventure-y than action-y, though there are some impressive action scenes too. I read the last 30ish percent on the edge of my seat. I wasn't sure how the book could possibly end without a massive cliffhanger, but my fear was unfounded. I loved Narine's approach and reflection once the immediate danger had passed, and the ending lines were absolutely beautiful. I am happily awaiting book 2.
Tech: I enjoyed the modern/futuristic tech elements, including AI. I know AI is a huge topic of discussion right now, and in this story, the future trajectory of its use is done responsibly.
Time Travel: So many ways to do time travel, and I'm on board as long as the author can make it make sense, and it definitely worked here. The blend of biological magic, natural elements, and a wee bit of tech was brilliant. As was the limitation, responsibilities, and consequences. And something that so many stories overlook - the aging of the traveler while they are outside of their own time - was not only addressed, but done so magnificently.
Words: When I read a book set in a place outside of the United States, with characters that are from that area, I hope the author chooses to use as many regionally accurate terms, spellings, and phrasings as possible, and there was an abundance here. Written in English, everything was obvious based on context, but I enjoyed the opportunity to look up terms and experiences (via the dictionary on my reader or a source online) to better understand and visualize the Ethiopian culture, which always makes for a richer reading experience.
I highly recommend this book. I'm not sure what genre I'd put it in, since it has elements of so many, but it is officially listed as fantasy. I'd say it's more a story about one woman's journey to live her own life instead of the life thrust on her from generations long passed.
May 25, 2023
WOW. Like I’m writing this review immediately after finishing this book and I am just in awe. While I’m still relatively new to this type of genre of book (I’ve always been strictly a romance girlie) this book really had me on the edge of my seat and reading faster than my brain could comprehend. The world-building is so amazing and I enjoy the fantasy/science-fiction story being told in countries that we all know today. I love the diversity and how so many ethnicities, races, religions, and cultures were mentioned. The world we live in today is so diverse, and will only continue to be in the future, so I love seeing books about a future where we’re all woven tightly together. The magic system/hierarchy in this book is something so unique but also familiar at the same time, all the powers being connected to the earth/sky/space somehow. I loved reading about their jumps and even my heart was racing, it felt like I was there with them!
I enjoy how the plot starts relatively quick in the book, some books of this genre do chapters and chapters of exposition before getting to anything of substance but this book had me hooked by chapter 3. I audibly gasped, cursed, cried, and screamed MULTIPLE times throughout this book the twists and turns were amazing. I really love how this story takes place in the future/modern world since most fantasy books take place in an older time. I will say, though, I did see some plot points coming and wished they hadn’t UGHHH. The fact that this story “really” only took place during a matter of days but you felt like you had been reading a tell-all of these characters lives just shows the talent that the author has! As a reader, being sucked into another world so deeply that you truly forget your reality is all we wish for and Elizabeth Hunter did this beautifully.
Speaking of characters, I truly loved every single one of them, with the exception of some of the elders, of course lol. I loved Narine from the beginning and how it’s mentioned many times she was raised in a strong, mainly female household. Narine is determined and strong and caring (to a fault 🙄 if you’ve read the book you know the reason for my reaction). As someone who always holds grudges and doesn’t forgive when someone really betrays me, I could never do or look past things the way Narine did. Tadesse and Aida literally just need to get married already. And I love Jamila because she’s an independent, hardworking businesswoman who would do anything for Narine. I knew the moment “an American” was mentioned and so focused on, Jacob was going to be an important character. I liked him from the beginning and just knew there was more to him than meets the eye. The magic described between Narine and Jacob has me DYINGG for more information!!
Overall, I was so so pleasantly surprised by this book and by the halfway mark, I couldn’t put it down and felt the need to finish or else!! I loved this first book in the Seba Segel series and will be impatiently waiting for book two. Thank you so much to ValentinePR and Elizabeth Hunter for gifting me an ARC of this book.
I enjoy how the plot starts relatively quick in the book, some books of this genre do chapters and chapters of exposition before getting to anything of substance but this book had me hooked by chapter 3. I audibly gasped, cursed, cried, and screamed MULTIPLE times throughout this book the twists and turns were amazing. I really love how this story takes place in the future/modern world since most fantasy books take place in an older time. I will say, though, I did see some plot points coming and wished they hadn’t UGHHH. The fact that this story “really” only took place during a matter of days but you felt like you had been reading a tell-all of these characters lives just shows the talent that the author has! As a reader, being sucked into another world so deeply that you truly forget your reality is all we wish for and Elizabeth Hunter did this beautifully.
Speaking of characters, I truly loved every single one of them, with the exception of some of the elders, of course lol. I loved Narine from the beginning and how it’s mentioned many times she was raised in a strong, mainly female household. Narine is determined and strong and caring (to a fault 🙄 if you’ve read the book you know the reason for my reaction). As someone who always holds grudges and doesn’t forgive when someone really betrays me, I could never do or look past things the way Narine did. Tadesse and Aida literally just need to get married already. And I love Jamila because she’s an independent, hardworking businesswoman who would do anything for Narine. I knew the moment “an American” was mentioned and so focused on, Jacob was going to be an important character. I liked him from the beginning and just knew there was more to him than meets the eye. The magic described between Narine and Jacob has me DYINGG for more information!!
Overall, I was so so pleasantly surprised by this book and by the halfway mark, I couldn’t put it down and felt the need to finish or else!! I loved this first book in the Seba Segel series and will be impatiently waiting for book two. Thank you so much to ValentinePR and Elizabeth Hunter for gifting me an ARC of this book.
May 26, 2023
4.5 Stars 🌟
I was actually excited about this new book. I get Elizabeth Hunter's newsletter (having read and loved every single one of her books...) and she had posted snippets of her new book as kind of teasers, so I was definitely interested. This is the beginning of a series so there is the world that has to be built and then there are characters to be introduced. Both were done extremely well.
Ms. Hunter has the talent to build a setting and make it so rich...so real...that you can actually picture the setting and almost taste the coffee just from the descriptions. We get to meet the female MC Narine. She comes from a long line of time travelers and we slowly start to get a feel for her personality.
This story is told in two different time periods, there is the "now" and then there is the "6 years ago" time period. Each time is done in her POV and the set up is done perfectly. I went into this cold (other than the brief snippets which were basically two excerpts from the first chapter) so I was finding out things as the story went along.
This is a time traveling story and sometimes there can be too much in terms of explanations and it takes away from the story. This one was done in a way that somehow made perfect sense. And somehow, even with going back and forth between the two timelines, the tension began to build and build. I started trying to figure out in my head where this was going and I actually had several possible ideas. Little by little as things unraveled, I was right on some and WAY off on others.
Without going into spoilers, lets just say that I enjoyed the heck out of this story. Believe it or not, it does not end in a cliffhanger (which was something I was almost positive was going to happen as I was reading). So, things are basically tied up, but there are enough open ended things that totally set up the continuation of the story. Yes, I am TOTALLY going to be continuing....
I loved the character's - Nadine has a rich and strong support system that we really don't get to meet until the later parts of the book. The only issue I had with this story was the way Nadine deals with a certain situation and a certain someone near the end. I think she gave WAY too many chances and honestly, I had a hard time with the fact that she acted in the way she did. But....it is what it is and I still loved the story.
So - another winner. Can't wait for book 2 :)
I was actually excited about this new book. I get Elizabeth Hunter's newsletter (having read and loved every single one of her books...) and she had posted snippets of her new book as kind of teasers, so I was definitely interested. This is the beginning of a series so there is the world that has to be built and then there are characters to be introduced. Both were done extremely well.
Ms. Hunter has the talent to build a setting and make it so rich...so real...that you can actually picture the setting and almost taste the coffee just from the descriptions. We get to meet the female MC Narine. She comes from a long line of time travelers and we slowly start to get a feel for her personality.
This story is told in two different time periods, there is the "now" and then there is the "6 years ago" time period. Each time is done in her POV and the set up is done perfectly. I went into this cold (other than the brief snippets which were basically two excerpts from the first chapter) so I was finding out things as the story went along.
This is a time traveling story and sometimes there can be too much in terms of explanations and it takes away from the story. This one was done in a way that somehow made perfect sense. And somehow, even with going back and forth between the two timelines, the tension began to build and build. I started trying to figure out in my head where this was going and I actually had several possible ideas. Little by little as things unraveled, I was right on some and WAY off on others.
Without going into spoilers, lets just say that I enjoyed the heck out of this story. Believe it or not, it does not end in a cliffhanger (which was something I was almost positive was going to happen as I was reading). So, things are basically tied up, but there are enough open ended things that totally set up the continuation of the story. Yes, I am TOTALLY going to be continuing....
I loved the character's - Nadine has a rich and strong support system that we really don't get to meet until the later parts of the book. The only issue I had with this story was the way Nadine deals with a certain situation and a certain someone near the end. I think she gave WAY too many chances and honestly, I had a hard time with the fact that she acted in the way she did. But....it is what it is and I still loved the story.
So - another winner. Can't wait for book 2 :)
August 18, 2023
A New Series set in Intriguing New World
An intricate world inhabited by intriguing characters made all the more fascinating by the elements & repercussions of time travel. EH weaves a complex & compelling story that you can feel w/ all your senses. A diverse cast of characters to get acquainted with & learn about their past -future - past & the possibilities of what next. I took this trip slow so as to better appreciate & savor this new adventure.
An intricate world inhabited by intriguing characters made all the more fascinating by the elements & repercussions of time travel. EH weaves a complex & compelling story that you can feel w/ all your senses. A diverse cast of characters to get acquainted with & learn about their past -future - past & the possibilities of what next. I took this trip slow so as to better appreciate & savor this new adventure.
December 11, 2025
This review was originally posted on Books of My Heart
Review copy was received from Author. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.
What can I say? Another excellent read from Elizabeth Hunter. I am not a fan of time travel, so it took me a bit to get my head around the first couple time jumps, but that happened pretty fast. I loved this story. The world is rich with complex magic, well drawn characters and lots of cultural aspects.
The Thirteenth Month is the start of a new series set in Ethiopia about 40 years in the future, and also many times in the past. There are a variety of mages in the Seba Segel who help advise governments and leaders throughout time to save lives as they can. There are mages who are diviners (look at futures), alchemists, hedge mages, weavers and travelers. We learn a bit about the different magics.
Narine is a traveler from a family of travelers. I really liked her as we got to know her. She certainly made some mistakes though. These mistakes, and the fact her mother is pretty independent, make her not a favorite of the council. The council decides when traveling should happen, and is worth the risk.
I'm not going to spoil the story but it's Narine's life over about a six year period and how she gets stuck in the past. It has a huge impact on her life, her family and time itself. It's frightening because women in the past are just not always treated well. Or rather men in any time period seem to think they should make all the decisions and have all the control. But her power and knowledge is exciting. I'm so glad this is the start of a new series and can't wait to read more.
Review copy was received from Author. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.
What can I say? Another excellent read from Elizabeth Hunter. I am not a fan of time travel, so it took me a bit to get my head around the first couple time jumps, but that happened pretty fast. I loved this story. The world is rich with complex magic, well drawn characters and lots of cultural aspects.
The Thirteenth Month is the start of a new series set in Ethiopia about 40 years in the future, and also many times in the past. There are a variety of mages in the Seba Segel who help advise governments and leaders throughout time to save lives as they can. There are mages who are diviners (look at futures), alchemists, hedge mages, weavers and travelers. We learn a bit about the different magics.
Narine is a traveler from a family of travelers. I really liked her as we got to know her. She certainly made some mistakes though. These mistakes, and the fact her mother is pretty independent, make her not a favorite of the council. The council decides when traveling should happen, and is worth the risk.
I'm not going to spoil the story but it's Narine's life over about a six year period and how she gets stuck in the past. It has a huge impact on her life, her family and time itself. It's frightening because women in the past are just not always treated well. Or rather men in any time period seem to think they should make all the decisions and have all the control. But her power and knowledge is exciting. I'm so glad this is the start of a new series and can't wait to read more.
May 23, 2023
Elizabeth Hunter has officially mastered world-building. In this brand new series we find an enticing new take on time travel, mystery & romance. I’m left feeling quite satisfied with this first taste but still looking forward to hearing more about these characters because my interest has definitely been piqued. I was lucky to receive an advance copy of this book and despite having just finished it, I find that I already want to read it again to undoubtedly get more out of it the second time (knowing what I know now). Admittedly, the early sections are heavy on information however this plot concept is so unique that you need those details and a solid understanding of the characters in order to fully appreciate the intricacies of rest of the story. The little breadcrumb clues we find woven into the story (some obvious, some hidden) somehow keep us curious, ponderous and anxious all at once. By the time we really start to understand what is happening we’re already in the thick of the story. This book is a an absolute roller coaster. You start with that initial climb upwards while gathering information and slowly picking up sped to find the pieces suddenly start to fall into place and your new awareness launches you directly into the drops and loops for the rest of the ride. I absolutely recommend this book and am eagerly anticipating Book 2 & 3 of this brilliantly unfolding trilogy.
June 16, 2023
Elizabeth Hunter has crafted another world superbly. The Thirteenth Month, book 1 in the Seba Segel series introduces us to an organization that has been a constant in time, using alchemy, divination, and magic to do the most good for the most people without altering those events that are tasary, fixed point on the timeline that will find a way to happen no matter how many times an attempt to circumvent them are made. The main character, Narine, is a traveler for the organization, and she traverses time and the politics of the Seba Segel with confidence and ownership of her actions and choices. The story contains many characters who bring a fullness to the story and add to the mystery and intrigue present at every turn. The story is told between several timelines, and the time travel angle is fascinating and you’re sure to be thinking about it long after the book concludes.
I cannot wait for summer of 2024 and to get more of Narine’s story which feels like it is just beginning as she gathers friends old and new and moves forward after a challlenging start to the New Year in Ethiopia.
Pick this book up today! You can’t go wrong with an Elizabeth Hunter of any sort, but this series promises to be special.
I cannot wait for summer of 2024 and to get more of Narine’s story which feels like it is just beginning as she gathers friends old and new and moves forward after a challlenging start to the New Year in Ethiopia.
Pick this book up today! You can’t go wrong with an Elizabeth Hunter of any sort, but this series promises to be special.
June 2, 2023
***Minor spoiler included!***
4+ rounded up to 5 because not only am I a loyal fan, the milieu is so unique and interesting that it gives me life. So, 5 stars it is.
We meet the protagonist, a new heroine in a new world. There’s a lot of potential for growth and future books set in Ethiopia, and the author surely would love to continue the research trips, combined with family visits.
It’s a fantasy book set some decades in the future, so technically sci-fi but in the same vein that J.D. Robb’s In Death series is sci-fi… The focus there is on the mystery, here on the time travel mystery, but for both the sci-fi/future aspect is completely secondary. This might change in the later books of the series but holds true with the first book.
I liked the (temporary) resolution in the end. I thought it was well done and in line with the main character’s stubbornness and decisive way of dealing with things that arise. Going anywhere when knowing a confrontation is imminent is really tough and she chooses to do so regardless time and time again. Kudos to her.
For once, I wouldn’t switch my mundane profession with hers.
Looking forward to part two!
4+ rounded up to 5 because not only am I a loyal fan, the milieu is so unique and interesting that it gives me life. So, 5 stars it is.
We meet the protagonist, a new heroine in a new world. There’s a lot of potential for growth and future books set in Ethiopia, and the author surely would love to continue the research trips, combined with family visits.
It’s a fantasy book set some decades in the future, so technically sci-fi but in the same vein that J.D. Robb’s In Death series is sci-fi… The focus there is on the mystery, here on the time travel mystery, but for both the sci-fi/future aspect is completely secondary. This might change in the later books of the series but holds true with the first book.
I liked the (temporary) resolution in the end. I thought it was well done and in line with the main character’s stubbornness and decisive way of dealing with things that arise. Going anywhere when knowing a confrontation is imminent is really tough and she chooses to do so regardless time and time again. Kudos to her.
For once, I wouldn’t switch my mundane profession with hers.
Looking forward to part two!
June 7, 2023
Wow what an amazing Book! I wish I could give it Thirteen Stars :-)
I was so lucky to receive an ARC of The Thirteenth Month, and I thoroughly enjoyed page.
Time-travel is a tricky subject... I find it often reads as implausible, However Ms Hunter has not only made time travel plausible, she has made it entirely riveting. The story of the Seba Segal is enticing, magical and combines the fantastical with the everyday problems of relationship issues and family dramas.
Set in culturally rich locations, Ms Hunter showcases her knowledge of these far of places with all the details she has included... food, buildings, daily routines.. all are described in loving detail here.
As with all Ms Hunters books, the story is rooted in the people, the connections they form... and I love seeing those relationships form and grow.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book and I highly recommend it!
Enjoy!
I was so lucky to receive an ARC of The Thirteenth Month, and I thoroughly enjoyed page.
Time-travel is a tricky subject... I find it often reads as implausible, However Ms Hunter has not only made time travel plausible, she has made it entirely riveting. The story of the Seba Segal is enticing, magical and combines the fantastical with the everyday problems of relationship issues and family dramas.
Set in culturally rich locations, Ms Hunter showcases her knowledge of these far of places with all the details she has included... food, buildings, daily routines.. all are described in loving detail here.
As with all Ms Hunters books, the story is rooted in the people, the connections they form... and I love seeing those relationships form and grow.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book and I highly recommend it!
Enjoy!
June 11, 2023
I need to start my review by saying I'm an Elizabeth Hunter fan and have been since she started writing.
The Thirteenth Month is not my favorite of her novels by far. I found it overly descriptive and got bogged down in some of the details of clothing etc. I feel the story suffered a bit because of this however in typical EH fashion I loved her characters and look forward to some of the secondary characters being fleshed out a bit more in future books.
I did find this novel tough to read and it took me a bit longer than usual...I'm a book every 2 days kinda reader. I think I took 4 because of the starting and stopping of the story. I also know that building a new world and explaining the ins and outs of new concepts can slow a story down and I have hope for the future novels to follow. I will be checking them out.
For me this outting is a 3 star with caveats to world building.
The Thirteenth Month is not my favorite of her novels by far. I found it overly descriptive and got bogged down in some of the details of clothing etc. I feel the story suffered a bit because of this however in typical EH fashion I loved her characters and look forward to some of the secondary characters being fleshed out a bit more in future books.
I did find this novel tough to read and it took me a bit longer than usual...I'm a book every 2 days kinda reader. I think I took 4 because of the starting and stopping of the story. I also know that building a new world and explaining the ins and outs of new concepts can slow a story down and I have hope for the future novels to follow. I will be checking them out.
For me this outting is a 3 star with caveats to world building.
May 24, 2023
ARC READ REVIEW
I was one of the lucky ones that was send Thirteenth Month to arc read ! First of all thank you for the opportunity and the trust!
This book was everything I expected it to be and more! It was thrilling, and I just couldn’t put the book away. The fact that Elizabeth created such an amazing world, if absolutely blew me away. I finished this book in one sitting and I think that says enough about the story building. The Thirteenth Month is a real page turner and if you like the fantasy genre I would highly recommend to give this one a change !
Elizabeth congratulations with this amazing book, I’m definitely going to order the physical version of The Thirteenth Month!
I was one of the lucky ones that was send Thirteenth Month to arc read ! First of all thank you for the opportunity and the trust!
This book was everything I expected it to be and more! It was thrilling, and I just couldn’t put the book away. The fact that Elizabeth created such an amazing world, if absolutely blew me away. I finished this book in one sitting and I think that says enough about the story building. The Thirteenth Month is a real page turner and if you like the fantasy genre I would highly recommend to give this one a change !
Elizabeth congratulations with this amazing book, I’m definitely going to order the physical version of The Thirteenth Month!
May 18, 2023
Started this book not knowing if it would be for me. Time travel stuff can be too much for me, my brain gets carried away and I way over thinks things. I love the way it was done in this book. Anytime my ADHD brain would start to wander thinking about time travel, this story pulled it right back.
I can't wait for the next one! I want to know all the things!
I loved the subtle strength of the MC, it built up in the best way.
The only disappointment I had with this book was when it ended.
I can't wait for the next one! I want to know all the things!
I loved the subtle strength of the MC, it built up in the best way.
The only disappointment I had with this book was when it ended.
May 23, 2023
Another amazing world that has me completely caught in its grip by Elizabeth Hunter.
I loved the whole concept of the story, world and rules surrounding it. I found it easy to follow as everything is explained. Time jumps in books are my favourite thing as you get to see the same story play out over different times in the characters lives.
I cannot wait to continue reading this series.
Five stars ⭐️
I loved the whole concept of the story, world and rules surrounding it. I found it easy to follow as everything is explained. Time jumps in books are my favourite thing as you get to see the same story play out over different times in the characters lives.
I cannot wait to continue reading this series.
Five stars ⭐️
May 28, 2023
A wonderful new world filled with deeply drawn characters - I loved it!
An original time traveling story peopled by flawed yet perfect humans & mages.
Wisdom and insight about our present, deeply divided and violent times was sobering and meaningful.
I look forward to the further books in this both intriguing and charming series. Elizabeth Hunter is strong in both of these.
A wonderful adventure!
An original time traveling story peopled by flawed yet perfect humans & mages.
Wisdom and insight about our present, deeply divided and violent times was sobering and meaningful.
I look forward to the further books in this both intriguing and charming series. Elizabeth Hunter is strong in both of these.
A wonderful adventure!
August 10, 2023
Amazing many layered story
Layers, like in a wonderful lasagna or 20 layer tort, savory and sweet. It is fascinating to note that just because something is forbidden does not mean it is impossible. Friendships can run deeper than family ties. Read the book if you like to travel. Or coffee. Or tantalizing food. Or deep relationships. Worth the time!
Layers, like in a wonderful lasagna or 20 layer tort, savory and sweet. It is fascinating to note that just because something is forbidden does not mean it is impossible. Friendships can run deeper than family ties. Read the book if you like to travel. Or coffee. Or tantalizing food. Or deep relationships. Worth the time!
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