Comments, observations, conjecture...
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It appears that the author must have taken the editing advice to heart and revised copy. Definitely not pristine and goof free, but the errors aren't all that significant. English is a second language for this author? That being the case, the writing is pretty impressive. Yeah, the pain for magic descriptions are pretty redundant at this point.
About the "political commentary" that some reviewers find annoying... I've taken it as kind of a running riff relative to the MC's rather unique mindset. Caine is narcissistic, misogynistic, sex obsessed, dragon greedy, selfish, violent, vengeful, and a self-described sociopath. Of course he doesn't like liberals, social programs, etc. Yep, he's one hard core conservative, raised to proper standards of demonic values. Of course he demands "loyalty" (fealty) oaths. Hmmm.... oh, smirk...
Author's prerogative, but the superfluous political commentary is too irrelevant to serve as parody or comic relief. The conservative snark, carried over into the following books, just gets annoyingly lame; significantly disruptive to the point of affecting ratings. The passages could simply be cut and their absence wouldn't be noticed.