An excerpt of this fell onto my FYP, and immediately I was drawn. I read this in about 6 hours, and I enjoyed it! It’s a strong 3.5, and my only reasonings for not 5 stars are more of preference rather than anything about the author, the world she built, and her overall strong voice.
First of all, the spice? DELICIOUS. The scene I read on TT was the plus one (iykyk) and as a bisexual woman, I nearly passed away, my curiosity at a fricken 15.
I never read one pov books, though, and if I had known, I wouldn’t have read this, so thankfully I went in blind and the hooks were already in me. I would’ve enjoyed the OB members side of things, as well as a few POVs from Kieran, his thoughts on why Aubrey drew him in so quickly compared to others.
I do wish the final claiming scene went a bit longer, maybe even ended a little more sensually, since the plot twist twisted exactly in the way I thought it would. Meant to be in theory, yes, but I wanted more of their true identities chemistry.
Now onto what I wish was tweaked (and I do say that with the utmost constructive appreciation for the author and her story!) the FMC barely spoke! She had short lines, a mask in place at all times, but I can probably count on one hand the amount of times she actually said words aloud to the MMC, circling back to their chemistry. She genuinely had no out loud words spoken until at least chapter 5, maybe even 6.
Again, the author did a FABULOUS job at this, but the world-building and description became a bit over the top, and I found myself skipping multiple pages, because we were trapped inside the FMC’s head, describing the scene while waiting with bated breath to actually have the scene play out. Maybe it’s a show vs tell thing, but I’d loved more dialogue between characters, again, especially because of the plot twists that kept hitting until the very last chapter with the Mistress!
I’d loved Sera’s pushback, maybe some explanation, or an anecdote about how she thought she was being careful but Kieran was a step or two ahead — something to link the beginning to the ending for the reader.
Overall, I did devour this book, and enjoyed the plot, as it was something I hadn’t read before. I will be picking up book two next summer, and can’t wait to see what else this world has for us! (Maybe one members balls hanging off Mistress’ neck in book two, particularly 😂)