Window Undressing

by Jane Nin

When her boss awards her the "honor" of staying after hours to design the store's holiday window display, the unexpected sequence of events gives new meaning to the phrase "winter wonderland."

SilkWords LLC is the go-to source for interactive women’s fiction. Blurring the line between fiction and gaming, SilkWords.com offers high quality romance and erotica that allows individual readers to choose how stories proceed. Two formats are available: branched fiction ("pick your path") and linear stories that are produced with reader participation. Window Undressing is a branched fiction. To learn more about our unique reading experience, visit www.silkwords.com.

Genres: Novella, Erotica

58 pages, Kindle Edition

First published May 16, 2014

About the author

Jane Nin is new to writing erotica but has been entertaining very dirty fantasies for years. This is her first work of fiction.

Reviews

[Bernadette Robinson · Rating 3 out of 5]

2.5 stars. This is another very short read written by Jane Nin and produced by Silkwords LLC. The story is interactive and offers the reader different options as to how they want the story to evolve.

This is the second short story that I've read by Jane Nin and like the previous one that I read (The Night I Wore A Mask) has just the right amount of erotic content to fulfil and keep you entertained for the length of the story.

Once again you the reader is the main character, the action takes place while window dressing a window one evening and with the help of James the Security Guard and Patrick another Window Dressing occupant working in another shop your sexual dreams might come true.

With several paths to choose from, which one will you choose James or Patrick? Or if like me you wanted to know what happened in both scenarios then you can read one, then go back and read the other option.

There is just the right amount of character development and plot to fill the short story.

Thanks to the Publishers and NetGalley for the chance to read this story in exchange for an honest review.

[Sonja · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 stars
The characters were interesting; I loved the fact that the reader could choose how the story proceeded, and by doing this could change the way the characters developed and interacted. It is an unique addition to the story.

I received a copy of this book via NetGalley in return for an honest review. My thanks for the opportunity.

[Melissa · Rating 2 out of 5]

I like the idea of a Choose Your Own Adventure erotic novel. However, only one of the storylines really seemed to work for me. The other ones seemed rushed and just seemed as after thoughts. This book seemed to be the author's thoughts on how a story could go and they want your opinion on what storyline to use.

I was given this book in exchange for an honest review via Netgalley.