thank you to netgalley for sending me this arc in exchange for an honest review.
i went into this arc with high hopes, partly because the blurb was pretty compelling - i hadn't read what is considered 'romantasy' in a while and thought that this would be a nice venture back into the subgenre. unfortunately, i found that a lot of the execution fell short.
what i enjoyed was (1) the concept of the magic system. i found it to be interesting and it does have some real potential. there's definitely a foundation there for something very rich and fleshed out if it was further developed. and (2) i also did appreciate that the pacing was decently fast, the story does move on pretty quickly, which could appeal to a reader-base that prefers a snappier story.
however, there were a fair few things that i thought could be improved upon.
firstly, a recurring and glaring issue (in my eyes) is that the key elements of the story are told, rather than shown. e.g. we're told that magic was the thing that killed viola's father but we never really go beyond that to dive into a more emotionally charged exploration of how that's affected viola as a character. similar,y the fact that her sister, olivia, doesn't have magic but still chose to go to gorhail in viola's place is simply told, rather than, again, explored in a way that would add weight to the situation, and as a result of that, i personally felt like it was quite difficult to feel invested in the characters and the stakes.
following on from that, maybe this is just a personal preference thing but regarding character backstory/motivations/relationships, viola's hardheadedness and stubbornness about magic feels very unjustified, especially since it comes at such a high cost to her and her family, and again this is stemming from the fact that we're only told very blatant, surface-level facts about what has happened. additionally, viola's relationship with olivia seems like it should have carried more significance at the beginning of the book and it just doesn't feel right. there's very little emotionality in this relationship, nor is there depth both before and after the 12-year time skip. that jump felt really abrupt and to me, it undermined the potential to delve deeper into their relationship and see it evolve as there was a massive break in emotional continuity.
another thing regarding character motivations specifically was olivia's whole role in this story. her 'saving' viola from 'years of a life she didn't want' by attending gorhail just felt unnatural (i want to say it doesn't fit with her character but we didn't really get to know olivia that well) and story-wise, what about what olivia herself wanted? being at gorhail and pretending to be able to wield magic was made out to be holding this massive stop sign but the narrative just does not explore this tension in nearly enough depth.
even when we switch over to sylas's perspective, the relationships between the different characters still feel awkward and flat. there is very little to no dialogue or internal thoughts that feel authentic and complex and the 'tell, not show' issue is still seen throughout, where feelings and conflicts are described rather than shown through dialogue or action.
moving the characters aside, the setting, to me, feels shaky at best and it's unclear whether the author wanted this to be a standard fantasy world or an urban one. the mixing of the modern and non-modern magical world is a delicate act and i'm not fully convinced by how the author has merged the two. this lack of firm commitment to fully build out the world made it difficult for me to fully immerse myself in this.
the dates at the beginning of the chapters also raise some concern. they seem quite disconnected from the overall narrative and one key detail stood out very jarringly to me once i'd noticed it: one of the chapters starts off with thursday 18th november, 1939, which in normal circumstances would be fine, but in reality, this was actually a saturday. it's little errors like this that really pull me out of the story and the author would do well to conduct more rigorous fact-checking if they are to include details such as this.
unfortunately, i decided to dnf at 25% becausei just really wasn't able to conect with the characters, nor could i get lost in the world. while the blurb is strong, the execution thus far just seemed quite lazy in the character work, the writing, the worldbuilding and made it difficult for me to fully get into it. for context, i am a relatively fast reader - i will typically get through about 100 pages per day, which in this case would normally mean that i would have finished this book in 4 days, but in actuality, it took me 4 days to only get just over the 100-page mark, which i think is telling enough