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Rebirth: The Blue Box Heretic
He remembers his name was Richard. He remembers video games and headaches. But the life he knew is gone, replaced by a new, terrifying he's been reborn as a baby named Nondol in a world governed by a bizarre, sarcastic System.
Trapped in an infant's body with the fragmented memories of an adult mind, Nondol must navigate a world of magic, political intrigue, and the daily indignity of diapers. His only guide is a series of infuriating blue quest boxes that offer cryptic advice and zero rewards. In a kingdom where power is everything, he is a Hexad-proficiency mage, a one-in-a-billion prodigy whose very existence makes him the property of the crown.
"Rebirth" is a gripping tale of second chances, a story that blends the wonder of a new life with the cynicism of an old soul. If you love stories of magic, mystery, and a hero who's not afraid to tell a god to go to hell, you'll love this new adventure.
Trapped in an infant's body with the fragmented memories of an adult mind, Nondol must navigate a world of magic, political intrigue, and the daily indignity of diapers. His only guide is a series of infuriating blue quest boxes that offer cryptic advice and zero rewards. In a kingdom where power is everything, he is a Hexad-proficiency mage, a one-in-a-billion prodigy whose very existence makes him the property of the crown.
"Rebirth" is a gripping tale of second chances, a story that blends the wonder of a new life with the cynicism of an old soul. If you love stories of magic, mystery, and a hero who's not afraid to tell a god to go to hell, you'll love this new adventure.
322 pages, Kindle Edition
Published December 12, 2025
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January 27, 2026
Sadly AI
I normally start a book admiring and looking at the cover art for clues. I noticed was that the art was AI generated, and I was disappointed. But one piece of AI cover art wouldn’t mess with a books contents in my opinion. (If you look closely, you can spot that one of the cloaked figures has a sixth finger.) But as I read, I kept getting pulled away from the story by obvious signs of AI writing. I was desperate for content and hoped I was wrong, but at the halfway point I just couldn’t keep going with how annoying it was. It reminded me of that Everweave app that promises you can play solo D&D with an AI Game Master. The book had similar issues as that app does, with repeated phrases and names. Mistakes and lazy writing no decent writer would do. The name Lyra alone was used for 4 different characters halfway through the story. At one point a kingdom leader is introduced with the SAME name as a previous but different character from only a couple paragraphs ago! Spelled the exact same way and no comparisons drawn. When the main character bonds with the princess and they start to fall in love, their relationship and trust is described. And then that description is reused every single time their relationship is mentioned. And again, within paragraphs of each other. Often times the story can’t seem to decide on its own pacing and identity… I was desperate for a simple read, but I just can’t stomach finishing it at this point. AI is such an insult to authors and artists. And this is so obviously written with AI.
I normally start a book admiring and looking at the cover art for clues. I noticed was that the art was AI generated, and I was disappointed. But one piece of AI cover art wouldn’t mess with a books contents in my opinion. (If you look closely, you can spot that one of the cloaked figures has a sixth finger.) But as I read, I kept getting pulled away from the story by obvious signs of AI writing. I was desperate for content and hoped I was wrong, but at the halfway point I just couldn’t keep going with how annoying it was. It reminded me of that Everweave app that promises you can play solo D&D with an AI Game Master. The book had similar issues as that app does, with repeated phrases and names. Mistakes and lazy writing no decent writer would do. The name Lyra alone was used for 4 different characters halfway through the story. At one point a kingdom leader is introduced with the SAME name as a previous but different character from only a couple paragraphs ago! Spelled the exact same way and no comparisons drawn. When the main character bonds with the princess and they start to fall in love, their relationship and trust is described. And then that description is reused every single time their relationship is mentioned. And again, within paragraphs of each other. Often times the story can’t seem to decide on its own pacing and identity… I was desperate for a simple read, but I just can’t stomach finishing it at this point. AI is such an insult to authors and artists. And this is so obviously written with AI.
January 29, 2026
It wasn't entirely horrible, but it wasn't good either. I'd probably rank it around 1.3 stars? Maybe 1.5, if I was feeling generous.
The plot isn't all that original, a pretty standard litrpg reincarnation story. However the plot is rather rushed and disjointed. My biggest problem was that the book doesn't follow it's own logic in a very heavy-handed attempt to make the main character look good. It really needs a very critical editor to go over it.
Especially in the beginning of the book, leaving aside the far too sarcastic system that really didn't hit the right spot, the book just rushed through years in a page or two. This also led to a lot of "tell, not show" developments. This particularly stood out in regards to the relationship between the main character and Ceanna. You tell 14 year old teenagers who have never met before that they are now engaged, because of "duty" to the kingdom and they don't have any qualms about it. And then in the span of 10 pages they have become best friends and true partners in life. Yeah, definitely how that would go. It's frustrating, as it would have been easy enough to show a developing relationship and trust during their schooling and training.
Oh, and then at the end of the book, a girl who was mature enough at 14 to put her kingdom's interest over hers, will leave without a second thought because of "true love"?
I do wish the story had set it's own rules to magic and world building and then just stuck to those rules. The entire world has stats, but no one has evern thought to level up and increase their stats or noticed that a higher strength stat makes carrying stuff easier. We even get a new stat introduced mid-book, but the importance of levels or the effect of improving stats is never actually shown.
Also, this world has magic. Earth magic as one of the main branches of it. But no one has ever thought to use it in battle or to defend themselves - the royal guards, who claim to have seen battlemages in action, are shocked by the idea of an earth wall raised to stop charging opponents. Also no one - not magic users who regularly craft wands for themselves, no melee fighters - have ever thought to use staff before. Has the army heard of spears? Polearms? I'm perfectly happy to suspend belief when reading LitRPGs as long as the book stays true to itself, but this is just sloppy.
This same of lack of logic shows in the monsters and adventurers. A kingdom that has never thought of stats and levels and has never had to deal with monsters - anyone can form an adventurer group and set out to dungeons and there's a survival rate of over 60% at first encounters? And if anyone dies, it's the random person who wasn't named. An obvious Red Shirt moment. And on that point, if you want to add life and name minor side characters, don't name them all the same. There are at least 4 characters named Lyra (3 of them introduced over about 20 pages), although the Archer Lyra and Scout Lyra might be the same person. It just gets confusing. And any new people who I assume get recruited to replace anyone who did die, immediately folds into the group without any time needed for the group to learn to fight together and not argue about a loot. It takes time for any group or military troop to learn to work together. That's what practice and drills are for.
Also the main character goes to a 20 person raid that has never been cleared before and you know all the tactics, phases of the boss and how to get through the phase. And they don't figure it out in advance, they don't get the information from the system, they just "know it", because they're the main character. You have a lvl 70 raid on farm at first attempt with a 5 minute clear. Mhmm. Tell me you've never led a raid before, without telling me you've never led a raid before.
There are plenty of other gaping holes in the logic of the narrative.
Your adventurers hit lvl 60 in four months - and you're worried they won't get to lvl 100 in the next 8 months?
You have dungeons and monsters who drop enchanted and special gear and materials as well as money, and the kingdom's economy isn't wrecked?
You get mages, your supposed "scholars and puzzle-solvers" facing magma golems. And you use your frostbolts not to damage, but to slow them. You don't use air spells to cool the magma down. You don't combine elements. No, the scholarly mages only solution is that they will run in and beat the golem to death with their staff. I could have maybe forgiven that in the first 5-man training session due to lack of experience. But the scene wasn't all that well written in the first place, and then the entire scene was re-used, word for word, int he 10 person training montage? The scene with the gods outrage of the main characters speed-levelling being re-used word-for-word? That's just lazy writing.
A rather unsatisfying ending - no, I hadn't had time to care for the A and B raid groups who died. No, the plot twist in the ending did not make sense and was utterly unsatisfying.
Some of these issues in isolation I could have overlooked, but by the end of the book just too many issues had piled up for me to be able to give it any higher of a ranking.
The plot isn't all that original, a pretty standard litrpg reincarnation story. However the plot is rather rushed and disjointed. My biggest problem was that the book doesn't follow it's own logic in a very heavy-handed attempt to make the main character look good. It really needs a very critical editor to go over it.
Especially in the beginning of the book, leaving aside the far too sarcastic system that really didn't hit the right spot, the book just rushed through years in a page or two. This also led to a lot of "tell, not show" developments. This particularly stood out in regards to the relationship between the main character and Ceanna. You tell 14 year old teenagers who have never met before that they are now engaged, because of "duty" to the kingdom and they don't have any qualms about it. And then in the span of 10 pages they have become best friends and true partners in life. Yeah, definitely how that would go. It's frustrating, as it would have been easy enough to show a developing relationship and trust during their schooling and training.
Oh, and then at the end of the book, a girl who was mature enough at 14 to put her kingdom's interest over hers, will leave without a second thought because of "true love"?
I do wish the story had set it's own rules to magic and world building and then just stuck to those rules. The entire world has stats, but no one has evern thought to level up and increase their stats or noticed that a higher strength stat makes carrying stuff easier. We even get a new stat introduced mid-book, but the importance of levels or the effect of improving stats is never actually shown.
Also, this world has magic. Earth magic as one of the main branches of it. But no one has ever thought to use it in battle or to defend themselves - the royal guards, who claim to have seen battlemages in action, are shocked by the idea of an earth wall raised to stop charging opponents. Also no one - not magic users who regularly craft wands for themselves, no melee fighters - have ever thought to use staff before. Has the army heard of spears? Polearms? I'm perfectly happy to suspend belief when reading LitRPGs as long as the book stays true to itself, but this is just sloppy.
This same of lack of logic shows in the monsters and adventurers. A kingdom that has never thought of stats and levels and has never had to deal with monsters - anyone can form an adventurer group and set out to dungeons and there's a survival rate of over 60% at first encounters? And if anyone dies, it's the random person who wasn't named. An obvious Red Shirt moment. And on that point, if you want to add life and name minor side characters, don't name them all the same. There are at least 4 characters named Lyra (3 of them introduced over about 20 pages), although the Archer Lyra and Scout Lyra might be the same person. It just gets confusing. And any new people who I assume get recruited to replace anyone who did die, immediately folds into the group without any time needed for the group to learn to fight together and not argue about a loot. It takes time for any group or military troop to learn to work together. That's what practice and drills are for.
Also the main character goes to a 20 person raid that has never been cleared before and you know all the tactics, phases of the boss and how to get through the phase. And they don't figure it out in advance, they don't get the information from the system, they just "know it", because they're the main character. You have a lvl 70 raid on farm at first attempt with a 5 minute clear. Mhmm. Tell me you've never led a raid before, without telling me you've never led a raid before.
There are plenty of other gaping holes in the logic of the narrative.
Your adventurers hit lvl 60 in four months - and you're worried they won't get to lvl 100 in the next 8 months?
You have dungeons and monsters who drop enchanted and special gear and materials as well as money, and the kingdom's economy isn't wrecked?
You get mages, your supposed "scholars and puzzle-solvers" facing magma golems. And you use your frostbolts not to damage, but to slow them. You don't use air spells to cool the magma down. You don't combine elements. No, the scholarly mages only solution is that they will run in and beat the golem to death with their staff. I could have maybe forgiven that in the first 5-man training session due to lack of experience. But the scene wasn't all that well written in the first place, and then the entire scene was re-used, word for word, int he 10 person training montage? The scene with the gods outrage of the main characters speed-levelling being re-used word-for-word? That's just lazy writing.
A rather unsatisfying ending - no, I hadn't had time to care for the A and B raid groups who died. No, the plot twist in the ending did not make sense and was utterly unsatisfying.
Some of these issues in isolation I could have overlooked, but by the end of the book just too many issues had piled up for me to be able to give it any higher of a ranking.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 1, 2026
Very weak sauce
So the story is pretty weak from the beginning with broad strokes and little detail of world building that was realistic. The premier mage is a horrible teacher and everyone just ignores this. The story is just so poorly told. The breaking point for me was when a hundred 100 poorly armed and unarmed bandits attack 25 Royal guards and are winning. The story is clearly not rooted in anything resembling any reality that's ever existed it's poorly told and poorly navigated.
So the story is pretty weak from the beginning with broad strokes and little detail of world building that was realistic. The premier mage is a horrible teacher and everyone just ignores this. The story is just so poorly told. The breaking point for me was when a hundred 100 poorly armed and unarmed bandits attack 25 Royal guards and are winning. The story is clearly not rooted in anything resembling any reality that's ever existed it's poorly told and poorly navigated.
March 14, 2026
Well...
I think if I knew I was going to be reborn - before I died the first time - I would leave myself a message not to read this book when I reappeared.
Once again we have a story (told in the first person) of a person reborn as an infant in some faraway planet/world/timeline which has MAGIC.
And this reborn person at the age of 16 is not only loaded with magic - but he is supposed to save the world - and get married to the savory 16 year old princess. Meanwhile the gods who oversee everything use smarmy messages (in a BLUE BOX) whenever he gains a level - and ultimately tell him what they are up to.
So I gave this story one star - because the author started and finished his lame story. On my planet - Effort - has to be worth at least one star. HOWEVER - I already sent myself a message not to read any Terry Carter Blue Box Heretic Rebirth sequels in this life.
I never did figure out the Heretic piece of this story.
I think if I knew I was going to be reborn - before I died the first time - I would leave myself a message not to read this book when I reappeared.
Once again we have a story (told in the first person) of a person reborn as an infant in some faraway planet/world/timeline which has MAGIC.
And this reborn person at the age of 16 is not only loaded with magic - but he is supposed to save the world - and get married to the savory 16 year old princess. Meanwhile the gods who oversee everything use smarmy messages (in a BLUE BOX) whenever he gains a level - and ultimately tell him what they are up to.
So I gave this story one star - because the author started and finished his lame story. On my planet - Effort - has to be worth at least one star. HOWEVER - I already sent myself a message not to read any Terry Carter Blue Box Heretic Rebirth sequels in this life.
I never did figure out the Heretic piece of this story.
December 22, 2025
A Promising Start to a New Series...
Rebirth: The Blue Box Heretic throws you into what looks like your standard reincarnation story—and then pulls the rug out from under you. There's something darkly funny about watching Nondol stuck in a baby's body, armed with nothing but adult wit and a System that's more sass than support. Those opening chapters walk this interesting line between laugh-out-loud moments and genuine discomfort, never getting too bogged down in all the RPG stat stuff.
As things develop, the story starts weaving together threads of magic, power, and what it means to truly own something—or someone. It gets messy in ways that feel intentional, like the author's poking at things we'd rather not examine too closely. The pacing can feel a bit whiplash-y at times, jumping forward when you might want to linger, but the heart of it? That's solid.
This reads like someone finding their voice mid-stride—a little unpolished here and there, but unafraid to commit to what it's building. You can feel the foundation being laid for something larger, something that might really go somewhere.
Rebirth: The Blue Box Heretic throws you into what looks like your standard reincarnation story—and then pulls the rug out from under you. There's something darkly funny about watching Nondol stuck in a baby's body, armed with nothing but adult wit and a System that's more sass than support. Those opening chapters walk this interesting line between laugh-out-loud moments and genuine discomfort, never getting too bogged down in all the RPG stat stuff.
As things develop, the story starts weaving together threads of magic, power, and what it means to truly own something—or someone. It gets messy in ways that feel intentional, like the author's poking at things we'd rather not examine too closely. The pacing can feel a bit whiplash-y at times, jumping forward when you might want to linger, but the heart of it? That's solid.
This reads like someone finding their voice mid-stride—a little unpolished here and there, but unafraid to commit to what it's building. You can feel the foundation being laid for something larger, something that might really go somewhere.
February 2, 2026
Rebirth by Terry Carter is a fantasy Gamelit and LitRPG novel that tells the story of Richard, who dies and is reborn as a baby named Nondol in a magical kingdom. He uncovers the truth about her existence and discovers a new world. This journey is an exploration of a fantasy realm where he races against power, ultimately learning about his new destiny. It is a humorous, adventurous, and dramatic novel in an enchanted world.
The transformation of Richard was entertaining for the readers, and he wants to know the reason and purpose behind this act. The book has a unique plot that engages the readers. It is full of twists and turns, a magical tale that has many hidden secrets. Fans of fantasy stories will definitely enjoy this read.
The transformation of Richard was entertaining for the readers, and he wants to know the reason and purpose behind this act. The book has a unique plot that engages the readers. It is full of twists and turns, a magical tale that has many hidden secrets. Fans of fantasy stories will definitely enjoy this read.
March 31, 2026
The first half/third of the book felt like the author wanted to fast forward through childhood. Then most of the attention was spent on peripheral characters that ultimately I don't care about or matter later. The way the story goes is also just unfair for the mc (which I think is the point but I don't like that kind of story) right up until the ending where it's a Deus ex machina to resolve it. I hope the next book is more human scale otherwise I might just drop the series. If the next book is like that I think I would have preferred this book to be shorter and part of the next book as an introduction. That might have worked better as an introduction to the universe than this as the book is not that long anyway.
December 24, 2025
Rebirth: The Blue Box Heretic by Terry Carter is a fast-paced fantasy novel that blends adventure, humor, and self-discovery. The book explores themes of second chances, personal growth, and adapting to an unfamiliar world. It’s the kind of story that pulls you in quickly, with a playful tone balanced by moments of tension and consideration.
Reading it felt light but engaging, perfect for unwinding while still enjoying a sense of momentum. Fans of fantasy, game-inspired storytelling, and unconventional heroes will likely find this an enjoyable read. It’s approachable, entertaining, and well-suited for readers who like imaginative worlds and character-driven journeys.
Reading it felt light but engaging, perfect for unwinding while still enjoying a sense of momentum. Fans of fantasy, game-inspired storytelling, and unconventional heroes will likely find this an enjoyable read. It’s approachable, entertaining, and well-suited for readers who like imaginative worlds and character-driven journeys.
December 27, 2025
This book blends magic systems, royal politics and quiet domestic moments to explore second chances and control. "Rebirth: The Blue Box Heretic" by Terry Carter presents a clever fantasy about rebirth, identity and power through the eyes of an infant carrying an adult conscience. The narrative takes you at the center of danger while humor softens the darker themes. The pacing keeps curiosity alive even when fragments feel unresolved. Overall, the book sets a strong foundation for a longer saga about freedom, fate and self-determination.
January 27, 2026
SHOW DONT TELL
There was so much potential with that blurb, but reading this is akin to nails on a chalk board. It’s all telling like events have already happened and the mc is narrating them as an after thought. ALL OF IT. Honestly, this is probably the first one star review I’ve ever submitted-(I’ve had Kindle Unlimited for 7+ years). I’m sorry T Carter, this ain’t it, I will read your next series though, hopefully it’s better and there is no child wife forced down our throats.
There was so much potential with that blurb, but reading this is akin to nails on a chalk board. It’s all telling like events have already happened and the mc is narrating them as an after thought. ALL OF IT. Honestly, this is probably the first one star review I’ve ever submitted-(I’ve had Kindle Unlimited for 7+ years). I’m sorry T Carter, this ain’t it, I will read your next series though, hopefully it’s better and there is no child wife forced down our throats.
February 14, 2026
The early parts were kind of interesting, since the protagonist was an adult mind trapped in a baby's body. The book doesn't do anything with the relatively unusual premise, instead it just rapidly skips forward until he's a teenager, so it's a semi-standard Isekai story.
I started to lose interest when it started talking about groups of soldiers beating 4:1 and 20:1 odds. Then it devolved into the protagonist telling the locals about game dungeons and game monsters and everyone assuming the local gods were going to follow those templates exactly.
I started to lose interest when it started talking about groups of soldiers beating 4:1 and 20:1 odds. Then it devolved into the protagonist telling the locals about game dungeons and game monsters and everyone assuming the local gods were going to follow those templates exactly.
February 5, 2026
Good story, needs editing
This was good. Good story, original premise, the plot was new, good pacing and dialogue mostly. But it needs editing. Some of the character names are reused so you're not sure if it's a new character or not and there are three or four instances of duplicate text, two versions of the same plotline but summarized by the same text. It was a little jarring. I actually haven't seen that done before.
This was good. Good story, original premise, the plot was new, good pacing and dialogue mostly. But it needs editing. Some of the character names are reused so you're not sure if it's a new character or not and there are three or four instances of duplicate text, two versions of the same plotline but summarized by the same text. It was a little jarring. I actually haven't seen that done before.
March 9, 2026
good book, great premise, bad presentation
Like the title says. The book was written well. It has a great plot and a unique story. But the presentation is somewhat lacking in places, as seen by how the protagonist seemingly goes from first to third to first person in a couple of chapters, most of it done in first person. Please fix this as it destroys pace and tension that has been built up.
Like the title says. The book was written well. It has a great plot and a unique story. But the presentation is somewhat lacking in places, as seen by how the protagonist seemingly goes from first to third to first person in a couple of chapters, most of it done in first person. Please fix this as it destroys pace and tension that has been built up.
December 28, 2025
Disjointed mess
Started of really good. It was a typical reincarnation story with a way too sarcastic system that ruined most of story in the beginning. Then around the 50% mark it became this disjointed, repeating, slog with a ending that left a lot to be desired. I am really enjoying the authors other series and was really disappointed with this one.
Started of really good. It was a typical reincarnation story with a way too sarcastic system that ruined most of story in the beginning. Then around the 50% mark it became this disjointed, repeating, slog with a ending that left a lot to be desired. I am really enjoying the authors other series and was really disappointed with this one.
February 12, 2026
Even Gods just want to have fun
Spoiler
What happens when children of the Gods are left in charge? They play games of course. Games of life and death. I enjoyed it, but it could use another editing pass as there are some duplicates of text in a few sections. Looking forward to the sequel.
Spoiler
What happens when children of the Gods are left in charge? They play games of course. Games of life and death. I enjoyed it, but it could use another editing pass as there are some duplicates of text in a few sections. Looking forward to the sequel.
February 27, 2026
Good story needs editing
I like where the story is going. The beginning to middle was pretty strong, but I feel like they ran out of steam on editing after that. There were repeated lines, then whole repeated sections. And a whole meaningful piece missing. It was enough to be confusing and take me out of the immersion. Fix that and you'll have a good story.
I like where the story is going. The beginning to middle was pretty strong, but I feel like they ran out of steam on editing after that. There were repeated lines, then whole repeated sections. And a whole meaningful piece missing. It was enough to be confusing and take me out of the immersion. Fix that and you'll have a good story.
February 27, 2026
DNF at 4%
Sadly, this book wasn't for me. While i understand that rebirth starts with birth itself, this doesn't make this early time more interesting and no grand quest like "sit up, baby" will change that fact. The author seems to disagree with me and has the mc monologuing on and on about trivial stuff.
Life is too short..
Sadly, this book wasn't for me. While i understand that rebirth starts with birth itself, this doesn't make this early time more interesting and no grand quest like "sit up, baby" will change that fact. The author seems to disagree with me and has the mc monologuing on and on about trivial stuff.
Life is too short..
July 27, 2026
Rebirth: The Blue Box Heretic
Well, this was certainly a different tale, told very well. A soul from Earth, Reborn on another World, A World with Magic and abilities beyond those of mortal men. No! Not Superman! Just a computer gaming nerd, with chops!
Very engaging story, thanks to the author for sharing it with all the readers!
Well, this was certainly a different tale, told very well. A soul from Earth, Reborn on another World, A World with Magic and abilities beyond those of mortal men. No! Not Superman! Just a computer gaming nerd, with chops!
Very engaging story, thanks to the author for sharing it with all the readers!
December 19, 2025
Decent story but terrible editing
The story was cute overall but I found myself quite confused when some content started to repeat itself and show up out of order. Some serious editing issues for sure.
The story was cute overall but I found myself quite confused when some content started to repeat itself and show up out of order. Some serious editing issues for sure.
Read
January 1, 2026Terry Carter is truly talented.
This book is amazingly well written and just sucks you in and makes you not realize how much time has passed. I love the interaction between the MC and the system, too funny.
This book is amazingly well written and just sucks you in and makes you not realize how much time has passed. I love the interaction between the MC and the system, too funny.
January 10, 2026
Just not enthused
This was different. Started off well and it was an amazing interesting premise. The MC stopped being the MC in the middle of the book and my interest flagged. I tapped out at page 189. Hope you enjoy it more.
This was different. Started off well and it was an amazing interesting premise. The MC stopped being the MC in the middle of the book and my interest flagged. I tapped out at page 189. Hope you enjoy it more.
January 15, 2026
So empty
Not sure what story the author was trying to tell, but this fell really flat. Most of the book is build up and character/team development and that all gets flushed with the most ridiculous deus ex machina.
Note to self: do not continue
Not sure what story the author was trying to tell, but this fell really flat. Most of the book is build up and character/team development and that all gets flushed with the most ridiculous deus ex machina.
Note to self: do not continue
February 6, 2026
Seems AI generated...
Multiple cut and paste of whole sections. Repetitive quotes. Unimaganative characters and reuse of names, confusing. Would not recommend except as what not to do.
Multiple cut and paste of whole sections. Repetitive quotes. Unimaganative characters and reuse of names, confusing. Would not recommend except as what not to do.
February 8, 2026
Horrible editing and proofreading
The title said it all! There seems to be a total lack of proof reading and editing. Several parts of the story repeated itself and parts that were talked about were deleted and not talked about. Very disappointing.
The title said it all! There seems to be a total lack of proof reading and editing. Several parts of the story repeated itself and parts that were talked about were deleted and not talked about. Very disappointing.
February 17, 2026
Embarassing
There were many times where a paragraph would be repeated, or levels that didn't progress reasonably for what happened in the story. So many plot holes, so many open ended questions. All in all not just in need of an editor, but poor writing as well.
There were many times where a paragraph would be repeated, or levels that didn't progress reasonably for what happened in the story. So many plot holes, so many open ended questions. All in all not just in need of an editor, but poor writing as well.
February 25, 2026
Interesting premise desperate for editing
I'll try to avoid spoilers.
I don't think I have ever seen this pair of tropes matched up before
The RPG of the litrpg is a bit heavy for me.
Large blocks of text repeat.
I'll try to avoid spoilers.
I don't think I have ever seen this pair of tropes matched up before
The RPG of the litrpg is a bit heavy for me.
Large blocks of text repeat.
March 9, 2026
Fun
It was a good rebirth story but it didn't really have any depth to it. It's a fun read, a bit new author-ish. Lastly, it's kinda or ends abruptly, without resolution or rewards for the kingdom.
It was a good rebirth story but it didn't really have any depth to it. It's a fun read, a bit new author-ish. Lastly, it's kinda or ends abruptly, without resolution or rewards for the kingdom.
Read
March 27, 2026Bland
As interesting premise, poorly executed.
Bouncing between POVs was disruptive. There are ways to handle it and this failed.
The protagonist was a distant observer to too much of the plot.
As interesting premise, poorly executed.
Bouncing between POVs was disruptive. There are ways to handle it and this failed.
The protagonist was a distant observer to too much of the plot.
May 28, 2026
Fun
This was a fun read, for the most part. There were some parts where the MC got really annoying. IpThough, that might be just a me thing.
Highly recommended, for the most part.
This was a fun read, for the most part. There were some parts where the MC got really annoying. IpThough, that might be just a me thing.
Highly recommended, for the most part.
December 14, 2025
Superb
I can't express just how great this book is. It said end of book one. Don't forget to write book two like so many authors do. Thanks for an early Xmas present.
I can't express just how great this book is. It said end of book one. Don't forget to write book two like so many authors do. Thanks for an early Xmas present.
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