"By now, doubt was little more than a ghost in the back of my mind, barely seen or heard."
This novella is a haunting, intimate exploration into the tension between belief and skepticism, memory and truth, all while weaving a slow-burning, deeply engaging narrative. Dalton’s prose is beautifully precise, evoking darkness and wonder in the smallest details, especially when the pacing is deliberately languid.
Having inhaled The Gloaming earlier this year, I eagerly picked up Michael and was immediately drawn into Jamie Dalton’s rich, atmospheric world again. The story's reflective tone is a masterclass in subtlety and mood, exploring memory, identity, and the quiet, uncanny ways one life can touch another.
The clinical, careful writing style mingled with Dalton’s vernacular makes you feel as though you’re in a modern conversation with an ancient, unknowable being: an observer watching David as he, in turn, observes Michael. That layered distance is what makes the story so compelling. We’re never quite sure whose truth we’re reading, or how much is memory reshaping itself.
Set in 2015, that juxtaposition between Michael’s agelessness and the contemporary world adds such a fascinating tension. Dalton's capture of both men voice's feels authentic to their time and nature; David grounded in modern skepticism, Michael steeped in something timeless. And because these “sessions” are recorded entirely from David’s recollection, it opens up so many questions: when did he write this down? How much has been lost—or invented—in the telling?
Following Michael's journey from that first blur of memory, the slow uncovering of who ((or what)) he is, I would have loved glimpses into Michael’s POV, his thoughts, his growing awareness, the way memories returned, because Dalton’s writing makes you ache to see the story through his eyes.
The ending is elegantly vague, leaving room for imagination and lingering questions, and it stays with you long after the last page. Fans of The Gloaming will appreciate the subtle connections, especially the brief mention of Isabel, and newcomers might find themselves captivated by Dalton’s immersive gothic atmosphere.
Michael is a thoughtful, intimate read that showcases Dalton’s talent for character, mood, and mystery. I can’t wait to see where her world goes next.