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Beta Builder: Mumbai in the Metaverse

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"Slumdog Millionaire meets Ready Player One"

A brilliant architect from Dharavi envisions a radical new design for Mumbai.
But when every architecture firm rejects this slum dog, he enters a virtual fantasy world to build out his dreams.

Even as his real-life money runs out, he must quickly learn the rules of this new world and battle powerful online rivals.
Because at stake is a prize.

A prize that could catapult our hero and his family out of poverty. . . out of the slums. . . .
And gift him the chance to transform the city he loves.

200 pages, ebook

Published February 1, 2025

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Profile Image for Rahul Vishnoi.
795 reviews25 followers
July 25, 2025
-A Heart-Warming tale of a Boy Flying on the Wings of Ambition and Talent-
Review of 'Beta Builder' by Sukriti

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"𝐏𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐭𝐲 𝐢𝐧 𝐈𝐧𝐝𝐢𝐚, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐞𝐬𝐩𝐞𝐜𝐢𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐢𝐧 𝐌𝐮𝐦𝐛𝐚𝐢 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐥 𝐝𝐞𝐚𝐥. 𝐎𝐫𝐠𝐚𝐧𝐢𝐜, 𝐚𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐧𝐭𝐢𝐜, 𝐜𝐨𝐧𝐜𝐞𝐧𝐭𝐫𝐚𝐭𝐞𝐝. 𝐏𝐞𝐫𝐟𝐞𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐠𝐞𝐧𝐞𝐫𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧𝐬. 𝐖𝐡𝐢𝐜𝐡, 𝐡𝐞’𝐝 𝐝𝐞𝐜𝐢𝐝𝐞𝐝, 𝐰𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝 𝐦𝐚𝐤𝐞 𝐢𝐭 𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐦𝐨𝐫𝐞 𝐢𝐦𝐩𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐢𝐯𝐞 𝐰𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐡𝐞 𝐛𝐞𝐜𝐚𝐦𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐟𝐢𝐫𝐬𝐭 𝐬𝐥𝐮𝐦-𝐛𝐨𝐲 𝐭𝐨 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐤 𝐚𝐬 𝐚𝐧 𝐚𝐫𝐜𝐡𝐢𝐭𝐞𝐜𝐭. 𝐇𝐞 𝐰𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝 𝐛𝐞 𝐚𝐧 𝐚𝐫𝐜𝐡𝐢𝐭𝐞𝐜𝐭, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝 𝐦𝐚𝐤𝐞 𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐦𝐚𝐫𝐤 𝐨𝐧 𝐌𝐮𝐦𝐛𝐚𝐢, 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐛𝐞𝐚𝐬𝐭 𝐨𝐟 𝐚 𝐜𝐢𝐭𝐲 𝐡𝐞’𝐝 𝐢𝐧𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐭𝐞𝐝. 𝐀 𝐜𝐢𝐭𝐲 𝐡𝐞 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐝 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐞𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐢𝐧 𝐞𝐪𝐮𝐚𝐥 𝐦𝐞𝐚𝐬𝐮𝐫𝐞."


Imagine you're a corporate employee (you don't have to if you're one). When was the last time you noticed the cleaning crew? Said thanks to a janitor? But wait, what if that janitor is hiding under your table, listening to all the strategies and design details? Listening and Learning. And then using that knowledge to better the projects made by you? The modern day Eklavya.

Javed the janitor wants to be an architect. His father wants him to take a job of site supervisor that, apart from a regular salary of twenty five thousand rupees a month, will also get him a respectable and "nice yellow jacket and a helmet also”. Javed of course has other plans, correcting the pillars (Not Corinthian but Doric) in the models of lazy interns working in the architect firm where he mopes and reads books, using an excuse of 'dusting Then' thoroughly even if they are meant for just decorative purposes.

Amidst all this upheavals in his life, his constant anchor is Shefali, his childhood sweetheart. He wants to be together but first has to earn enough to convince her bitter father. Sukriti, like any author worth her salt, humanises this bitter man too. She writes: "Her father was not a happy man. He’d burned to be an actor, but instead been pushed into a mercantile life and marriage to a simple woman. His bitter conviction that he could’ve been a hero now leaked out of him in boasts and brags, in parading his best and biggest possessions. Shefali didn’t intend for her future husband to be like that too.'

Shefali introduces Javed to HomeGame. The engineers who coded HomeGame are the original Alpha Builders but a player can adapt their designs into something new, qualifying as a Beta Builder. This sends bella ringing in Javed's curious mind. So he can design Mumbai in an entirely new way? Why not.

But what really happens? Does Javed manage to impress his boss at the architect firm for designing something better than those who actually have studied in expensive schools? Or does he, forced to look after rumbling stomach, ends up in the 25k/month jobx as advised by his drunk of a father? And what this HomeGame is going to have a place in his life? Will it catapult him into a new glory? Or will he reduced to a goggled addict? Will he be able to capitalise on the prospect of a builders' competition, where the prize money stands at 25 lakh. Also look out for the crazy funny way of blocking a spam account inside the game. It will crack you up into giggles. Also, look out for what Javed does with Antila.


It's a delight to read and author's work who's at the top of her game. Sukriti's prose is sharp and smooth at the same time. Like a quill searing through butter. She drops many references and I was googling everything frantically, learning new things in every page: Sameep Padors's temple of steps, Mies van der Rohe, material used in construction of Delhi's Lotus Temple, Egypt's Karnak Temple, Mumbai's Asiatic Library, House of Infinie and so much more.
I loved the numerous architectureal references strewn throughout the book. The author writes: “It’s believed that good architecture should be memorable enough to draw and recognise with just a few lines.”

The author adds a touch of social issues and political concerns, mixing her story with a strong socio-political commentary on poverty tourism (you can always identify the rich people visiting slums of Dharavi by their gaze always trained upon their expensive shoes lest they get dirty.) Also, look out for a paragraph on how different poverty is in developing and developed nations. She also talks about a facelift project for Dharavi slim in Mumbai.

The book is well equipped with an emotional heft and a game's addictive adventurous world. Javed is written neatly. His hand will definitely pull your heartstrings. There is a lot of wonder that Beta Builder offers.
Let yourself dive in.
Profile Image for Bookswithavinish.
1,648 reviews46 followers
September 17, 2025
Sukriti YJ’s Beta Builder is a bold and imaginative novel that fuses social realism with virtual escapism, weaving a narrative that is as much about survival in Mumbai’s slums as it is about the liberating possibilities of digital worlds.

The protagonist, a gifted architect whose visionary designs for Mumbai are repeatedly dismissed by traditional firms. His journey into a virtual environment is not merely an escape, but a reassertion of agency—an attempt to craft, quite literally, the future he is denied in the real world.

This dual narrative—struggling against systemic poverty offline while battling rivals online—keeps the tension alive and adds layers of metaphor.

The “beta building” becomes more than a technical term; it signifies constructing hope out of incomplete systems, both social and digital.

The novel highlights pressing themes of class, urban inequality, and the democratizing potential of technology. Dharavi is not reduced to stereotype; instead, it is presented as a crucible of ingenuity, resilience, and latent talent.

The same time, the depiction of the virtual world critiques globalized techno-capitalism, where even digital utopias are governed by competition, gatekeeping, and high stakes.

Sukriti writes with cinematic flair—clearly aware of the visual richness of both slumscapes and virtual environments. The prose is accessible, often brisk, propelling the reader forward with the same urgency the hero feels as his money dwindles. However, in places the narrative does lean heavily on familiar tropes from gaming fiction, which may feel predictable to seasoned readers of speculative fiction. Yet, the cultural grounding in Mumbai gives it a fresh and distinctive identity, rescuing it from cliché.

In sum, Beta Builder succeeds as both an inspirational underdog story and a thoughtful exploration of how marginalized voices might claim space in both physical and digital architectures.

An energetic, socially conscious tale that blends the grit of reality with the thrill of virtual dreams. While it borrows familiar beats from popular narratives, it's Mumbai setting and focus on architecture give it originality and depth.

Must read♥️♥️
Profile Image for Anurag Kumar.
733 reviews8 followers
November 14, 2024
You'll be totally awestruck by the narrative of this read which takes to another world of fiction that is extraordinary.

The book is a work of fiction that will take one on rollercoaster of emotions and feelings that are genuine enough to be dived in.

A perfectly well engaging work by the author.
184 reviews
November 14, 2024
Beta Builder, was my recent read that showed me a different world that is worth an experience.

Written after a deep insight and precision,the book will give you a perfect entertainment that will last really long.

The display of thoughts and emotions in the read made me stay glued to the same that will be both engaging and entertaining.
190 reviews
November 14, 2024
If you like reading books of a different kind,then this would drive you speechless by its narrative and expression.

The entire read is a plethora of emotions that will go deep into your heart and mark it's impression on your soul.

The language and easy presentation of the read made it a wholesome encounter.
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179 reviews2 followers
November 14, 2024
It was one of the most incredible reads to be influenced by.
Narrating the journey of an ordinary boy that will give you a vibrant idea of young minds that will keep you stuck in the same.

The easy delivery of the read and the plethora of emotions the book contains are indeed a pleasure to be influenced by.
183 reviews1 follower
November 14, 2024
It was just a random read but trust me a worthwhile experience to be engrossed with.

Written in a benevolent manner,the book will take you on a wholesome journey towards experiencing a new endeavour in a nutshell.

Loved the character development and the plot which are both different than usual one's of its kind.
76 reviews
November 18, 2024
Javed's love for architectural beauty was always equivalent as his emotions for Shefali.

And as love knows no limits, experience his journey that will give you limitless experience worth a lifetime.
A simple story with a diversified plot to entact your thoughts in the most alluring manner.

Perfect entertainment!!!
33 reviews
November 18, 2024
Dreams are the catalyst for action. And that's the real source of inspiration when you go beyond your wildest expectations. An incredibly captivating read that will captivate you with its depth of diversity of thought and leave you wondering about what is ahead. In a nutshell, a full entertainment experience.
128 reviews
November 18, 2024
If you like reads that are quite different from the real world showcasing extraordinary thoughts weaved in a fabulous tale, then this could be the next much awaited read to be awestruck with.

A phenomenal delivery,a fabulous plot and down to earth characters to connect with experience the depth of the real world.
139 reviews1 follower
November 18, 2024
For Javed, the love and insight of architectural beauty have always been the motivation. Although he knew his reality and financial viability, his attitude had always inspired him to have a firm belief in the same.

The flow of the read is flawless and heartful enough for one to understand the power of resilience and perseverance.
147 reviews
November 18, 2024
Beta Builder is a read that shows the dynamics of the journey of Javed's life and his extraordinary dreams that was more beyond the imagination of the reader.

The book will take you on a holistic entertainment that will heighten your spirit and give you the motivation to work towards your dream with positive attitude and zest to accomplish what one wants.
147 reviews
November 18, 2024
Beta Builder is a perfectly well engaging work of fiction which will take you on an entertainment journey of Javed and you'd find yourself captivated by the flow of this read.
The book's easy narrative will give you a wholesome reading encounter to be amazed with this one. An amazing reading getaway.
212 reviews1 follower
November 18, 2024
I love to engage into reads that are quite and indifferent in nature,giving one the glimpse of possibilities that one could experience while engaging into phenomenal story telling.

My recent work although a work of fiction held a captivating factor to hold the reader to the story from the very beginning till the end.
218 reviews1 follower
November 18, 2024
A read to savour and enter a world of an ordinary boy who will take you on a journey which is both captivating and engaging into to be influenced by.

The easy narrative and the fulfilling content made me live the story by its delightful experience.

A read to be totally engrossed in delivered smartly.
224 reviews1 follower
November 18, 2024
I was totally amazed by the intricate writing style of the read and knew it would leave me with an extraordinary experience to be influenced with.

The book's easy delivery and writing style brought the characters into life and made dive into the read in the most appealing manner.

A wholesome reading experience to be impressed by the narrative of the read.
52 reviews1 follower
November 19, 2024
This might be the next eagerly anticipated book that will leave you in awe if you enjoy reading about exceptional ideas that are woven into a fantastic story and are very different from the real world. An amazing performance, an amazing story, and relatable people who allow you to feel the complexity of the real world.
70 reviews
November 19, 2024
Javed has always been driven by his appreciation and understanding of architectural beauty. His attitude had always encouraged him to have a strong belief in the same, even though he was aware of his financial feasibility and reality. One may comprehend the strength of resiliency and perseverance because of the read's perfect and heartfelt flow.
73 reviews
November 19, 2024
The novel Beta Builder depicts the dynamics of Javed's life path and his remarkable dreams, which go beyond the reader's capacity to imagine. The book will take you on a journey of holistic entertainment that will uplift your soul and inspire you to pursue your goals with a positive outlook and a desire to achieve your goals.
84 reviews
November 19, 2024
A book to enjoy and immerse yourself in the world of a regular youngster who will lead you on an interesting and compelling adventure. I was drawn into the story by its enjoyable experience because of its simple plot and satisfying content. A cleverly executed read that will keep you completely absorbed.
87 reviews
November 19, 2024
The read's complex writing style completely astounded me, and I knew it would provide me with an incredible experience that would impact me. The book's straightforward approach and delivery let the characters come to life and drew the reader in in the most enticing way. An enjoyable reading experience that will leave you impressed by the story.
87 reviews
November 19, 2024
I enjoy stories that are unique and stand out from the typical ones of their kind. The read transports us to a satisfying experience with its straightforward delivery and writing style, all while being framed in an engrossing and engaging plot. For everyone who enjoys reading for a change, this is a must-read.
190 reviews3 followers
November 14, 2024
I loved the story by its vividness and vibrant plot that was both a perfectly one.

The book narrates the journey of Javed and his big dreams that glittered her subtle eyes.

A read to experience the intensity of dreams which can make one go wild.
192 reviews1 follower
November 14, 2024
A dream is not just a part of an individual but it's the entire thought process that drives the journey ahead.

And this read shows the journey of Javed with which you'll find yourself connected with from the very beginning to the end.

A magnificent read !!!
214 reviews1 follower
November 14, 2024
A wholesome entertaining read taking us into the lanes of Mumbai,which will take you on a phenomenal story to be awestruck with.

The book's easy narrative and extravagant writing style will take you to another level.

A masterpiece read penned in simplicity.
174 reviews
November 14, 2024
I liked the story by its vividness and vibrant nature that was quite indifferent from which I usually engross myself in.

Written in a captivating manner, gave me a new insight and a refreshing imagination of what the land of Mumbai can be in the future.

Highly recommended!!!
210 reviews1 follower
November 14, 2024
Beta Builder,is the story of a common guy whose dreams where way beyond than his finances.

The simple yet thoughtful nature of Javed will make you engage into the story which will be a perfect read.

The author's insight and writing style made the content a commendable read to avail.
75 reviews
November 18, 2024
I enjoyed the storyline and the captivating way the original concept was presented, showcasing the wonder of a young mind that will arouse your curiosity to carefully examine the path that would change Javed's life. A healthy book to be inspired by.
129 reviews1 follower
November 18, 2024
Beta Builder is a marvellous read penned in an intricate manner narrating the story of a sweeper whose dreams were way bigger than his pocket.

The easy narrative of the book and it's presentation made me indulge into the story from the very beginning till the end of the read.
201 reviews
November 18, 2024
I took this read into account thinking of what it has to offer and trust me it was just a worthwhile experience entering into a totally different phase of the city of dreams through the eyes of a sweeper,Javed.

A wholesome entertaining read in a nutshell to be intrigued with.
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