Earlier this year, preparatory to reading this novel, I read the post-exile version of August 1914, which I described as "a shapeless mess." This volume is slightly less of a mess, but is rather shapeless, and is hopeless as a novel. As with its predecessor, the Red Wheel version of August 1914, the book is part-documentary, part historical diatribe, almost entirely a lightly-disguised infodump, and very little novel. It is neither fish nor fowl, with beautiful passages amid pointless storytelling.
The book is a major disappointment, especially given that AS has been one of my favorite modern authors.
[I have only just learned that some anonymous donor has made it possible for the third and fourth Knots of The Red Wheel, to be translated into English. They are apparently even more bloated than this thousand-page whale, with the Third Knot being divided into four volumes, of which the first is nearly 700 pages. That alone should warn the reader that the author had lost all control of the project.]
Many of the characters of August 1914 reappear here, often with big gaps in their stories that don't quite get filled in. I suspect the author originally intended to have it start with Vorotnytsev at the front, and end with Vorotnytsev returning to the front, which would have given the thing some sort of shape. In fact, he doesn't appear until Chapter 12 (we get his wife in Moscow in Chapters 8, 9 and 11) and he bows out of the book several chapters before the end, but he's dithering at GHQ in Mogilev, not yet returned to his unit. The story wanders from character to character, bouncing all over Russia, then to Switzerland for Lenin, a few chapters about this one, a chapter about that one, lots of snapshots, but no connected narrative. Nothing seems balanced, and there seems to be little motion. There is a lot of betrayal, both political and sexual. (We get a chapter, almost at the end, which should be an important location, in which a character who has no other scene in this book gets out of bed, reluctantly, and goes down to the front door to get the newspapers, and then thinks about how he's addicted to the papers, but finds them empty. It makes a point, but not much of one, and not in any interesting way. Not to mention that it took me 20 minutes of combing through the tables of contents of two books to figure out who this guy was, anyway.) Hmmm.
As with the previous volume, AS keeps cramming in long history chapters (they're in a smaller font, and he half apologizes for them in his author note, admitting that they don't really belong in a novel, but he can't help himself), which are frankly annoying because the author's voice keeps breaking in to make wisecracks or accusations about the text the author has composed, or the quotes, but then he pretends to use the POV voice of a historical figure (or a party bias) to comment, and it's difficult to sort that all out. So, one can't really take it as history, because it isn't. But it isn't fiction; not of any kind that is supposed to engage a reader. Sometimes the style reminds me of Carlyle's The French Revolution, (and maybe that's its excuse for existing?) but that work wasn't pretending to be a novel. Hmmm.
The use of Point of View is very problematical throughout the book. Most of the book doesn't consist of scenes told "as they happen" but as memories in some character's head, given as a summary infodump. So, we get a paragraph in someone's mental voice, with their slant, followed by a paragraph from the narrator's POV, with the narrator's slant, then back, then back, and we often have to read a sentence or two to make out which is which, if we CAN make out which is which, and sometimes this allows AS to make clever commentary on the character's thoughts, but often it just creates muddle. The book is strongest (some of the Lenin sections being standout) when AS shuts up and gives us, for instance, Lenin rattling around in his own schismatic self, telling us all we need to know.
So, technically, this book is mostly an example I could point my students to of How Not To Execute POV. (With individual paragraphs that are shining examples of exactly how TO do it.) The dialogue is even worse. Frankly speaking, it's mostly pure bullshit. It's true that the book is set among political characters, but tons of the dialogue is just people speechifying at each other, in polished Duma speeches (and then we get big chunks of speeches from the Duma...), making their various arguments at length in a completely artificial manner. Scene after scene starts decently and then turns into speeches. And if they don't speak the speeches, they go over them in their heads. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump.
And then you get a simple, brilliant observation like: "Where the train had passed, the rails had a wet metallic gleam, ahead of it they were coated with white frost." And that puts you right in the scene. Until the next endless speech. And then you get exposed to the villagers' complaints about the towns, and why they will never like nor trust them, marvelously clear, but then we get speeches about that.
I'm very interested in the historical period, so I never got completely bored; but the little snatches of good novel (and there are hundreds of them in these thousand pages) kept reminding me how awful the rest of it really was. It doesn't help that AS seems to have convinced himself that "things really weren't all that bad" for Russia in WWI, and that the supposed causes of the Revolution weren't the millions of dead or the grinding poverty of 90% of the population, but Kadet propaganda, funded in part by the Germans. (Yes, the Germans did really fund subversion, but blaming Russia on the Germans is, well, stupid.) He seems to ignore his own evidence, and his own narrative.
You could get a good Master's Thesis out of Solzhenitsyn's Treatment of Women in November 1916, but for myself the book isn't worth the trouble to analyze that closely. It's a mess. It's a slog to read. I read it mostly out of duty, out of respect for an important writer. But now I think I'll stop, and leave the rest untouched. Life is too short.