2.5 ⭐️
So listen, everyone who loves this book, I’m so sorry (look away) - I’m so happy for you and genuinely so sad for me 😭
Where to start.
Firstly, the pacing was so off, in the sense that at the start there were times where I would feel really engaged and be having fun, but then suddenly it would be really rather dull and boring, then it never picked back up until right at the very end.
Overall I think this book is really underwhelming and overhyped. It is also very predictable and unoriginal, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, I can see how people would vibe with this and have fun but at the same time, I wasn't hooked enough to not be bothered by it. If that makes sense? This is constantly sold as fourth wing with wolves and honestly, the idea of this was fun, but the execution just didn't work out for me. It is very trope heavy but with no real delivery on a lot of them - eventually the boring times just lost me so much that I checked out.
The FMC, Meryn, started out as such an interesting character to me. She is tough, a street fighter and has a lot of responsibilities to take care of her family... but as we went on I just found her so irritating. I understand her disdain towards her upbringing vs how the nobles live, like I get it but I just wanted to be like 'girl stop going on about it'. Eventually, she was just so annoying the whole time.
As for Stark, YES. I am so on board with this man! Mysterious, morally grey and broody. No notes, love him. I feel like we were given crumbs and I am begging for more!! Kudos to him because he carried this book, based on not a lot.
However, let's talk about the slow burn. Why did Stark get barely any air time? I do not care about the other love interest, like I DON'T CARE. I feel it was obvious they aren't end game so I struggled to connect to this part of the story and they spent so much time together. Also the nickname kitten makes me want to put my head through a wall, hahah sorry but ick.
I needed Meryn and Stark to have more time to really build up on that tension and slow burn. The odd times they interacted I was eating it up! But I feel like I waited over 70% to really get much from them that wasn’t told to us. I am hanging on by a thread that their development will ramp up in the next book because currently that is all I really care about.
In general, I do think this book could have been way shorter and have much less filler throughout. So much of the book felt a bit pointless, being told so many things that added nothing to the story. Honestly there were times I skimmed parts because I truly just wanted to be done with it.
I will say the ending was actually good and the only reason I pushed through - but also didn’t really hit that hard because I was so disconnected from it.
Potentially I’d want to read book 2, but honestly, if I read, it will mostly be for Stark!
I am interested to see how it will play out but realistically the majority of this book was so predictable and boring, I’m worried it could flop again. Although this didn’t work for me, I can see how this would be enjoyable for people so I hope if you’ve got this far and plan to read this book, that you fall into that category and have a fun time! Because it’s never fun not enjoying a book. Sigh.
Thank you so much to my beautiful friend Luiza for gifting me this book, I’m sorry I didn’t love it as much as you but I’m so grateful for you and so grateful for this gift - you are such a angel of a friend 🥹💖
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Pre-read: Oh the romantasy era is so back baby!! Heard this is fourth wing vibes with warewolves & honestly that sound great to me 🤭