The first part, titled Mr. Gwyn, is the story of Jasper Gwyn, a renowned author with a taste for the whimsical who decides suddenly, one day, that he will no longer write. After a hiatus in which he comes across a few quirky characters, he decides to become a copyist, a profession of his own invention that makes portraits of patrons for a living. What’s interesting about this premise is that rather than actual portraits of paint or photography, these portraits are made from words, words which are assembled after a lengthy period of solitude with the subject in meticulous circumstances that Gwyn has set up prior to their meeting. The whole concept is heady and kind of pretentious, I know, but bear with me. After he disappears, his assistant, Rebecca, endeavors to find him through what seems to be several hidden clues in his writings, and makes a shocking discovery about the portraits that throws the reader for a loop.
The second novella is a “fictional” book titled Three Times at Dawn; fictional in the sense that this is one of the in-universe written works mentioned in the first part. It is much shorter than Mr. Gwyn, and is comprised of three chapters that each tell a separate story that occurred at dawn. The style of the novella is very strange: largely dialogue-based, often between just two characters; and with no quotation marks or indications of who is talking, it is up to the reader to keep track. On its own, the stories would make no sense, but they start to come to life knowing the background information of Mr. Gwyn.
My thoughts? Honestly, this book was a little too pretentious, which you think would be right up my alley, but here’s the issue: it had little to no drive, at least until the very end. From reading the back of the book before buying it, it seemed like the bulk of Mr. Gwyn was going to be about his disappearance, and Rebecca’s journey to finding out where the eclectic author went. In reality, however, that comprised only a few chapters at the end. Because of this lack of overt conflict, the book dragged so much that I had to read it over a long period of time, episodically, because the combination of textbook-like density coupled with the slow pacing made it an exhausting read. The premise is unique, for sure, and there were some incredibly gorgeous passages of word painting that truly moved me, but it felt like swimming through really fancy mud for those nuggets of truly astounding writing. Sometimes I like books that are slower-paced, but it’s very difficult to pull off such a style without it dragging. This book, unfortunately, is a prime example.
Spoilers ahead, for those who want to read it first.
The main lure of Three Times at Dawn is that we finally get to read the golden prose of Jasper Gwyn, whose literary genius is praised throughout Mr. Gwyn as being nothing short of virtuosic. Being perfectly honest, however, I was kind of let down. The format of the novella is a bit jarring at first, as I would often lose track of who was talking at any given moment. To the author’s credit, the transitions between the straight dialogue and the more descriptive passages were very smooth due to this technique, so it served a good purpose. I just don’t know if it’s worth your reader getting lost halfway down the page of indented, un-quotation-marked dialogue between two people and having to flip back to when the exchange started. However, maybe that's just my short attention span talking. I did like the subtle homages to the events of Jasper Gwyn, and it was an interesting game to try and find out whose portrait was hidden in the novella. Overall, it was an interesting way to follow up Mr. Gwyn.
Overall, I would recommend the book for the atmosphere and meticulous character-building, the interesting premise and at times virtuosic prose. However, be prepared for the book to have all of the drive and pacing of a funeral dirge, and be just a bit pretentious for its lack of direction. If you are looking for a well-paced mystery/crime novel (which, idiot that I am, thought it was initially), then you will be disappointed. 3/5