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Bite
I was running out of options. Jobless, hungry, and exhausted, with no clue what to do next.
Then help came in the form of a business card.
Bite: an underground blood agency matching consenting donors with vampires willing to pay a premium for live feedings.
One bite may not be so bad. It could fix a lot of my problems.
But then one bite turns into two, and the next thing I know I’m standing at a donor gala, catching the eye of the most powerful man in the room.
James Devereaux, vampire king of the Northeast. A vamp who never drinks from the same human twice.
Until me.
He offers a deal I can’t a year as his exclusive donor in exchange for enough money to set me up for life.
There’s just one catch– it isn’t only my blood he wants.
Bite is a dark modern vampire romance that includes scenes and situations that may be triggering for some readers. If you’re unsure or unfamiliar with dark romance, please review the full list of trigger warnings inside this book before reading. This standalone novel has no cliffhangers and guarantees a happily-ever-after (HEA) for the main characters.
Then help came in the form of a business card.
Bite: an underground blood agency matching consenting donors with vampires willing to pay a premium for live feedings.
One bite may not be so bad. It could fix a lot of my problems.
But then one bite turns into two, and the next thing I know I’m standing at a donor gala, catching the eye of the most powerful man in the room.
James Devereaux, vampire king of the Northeast. A vamp who never drinks from the same human twice.
Until me.
He offers a deal I can’t a year as his exclusive donor in exchange for enough money to set me up for life.
There’s just one catch– it isn’t only my blood he wants.
Bite is a dark modern vampire romance that includes scenes and situations that may be triggering for some readers. If you’re unsure or unfamiliar with dark romance, please review the full list of trigger warnings inside this book before reading. This standalone novel has no cliffhangers and guarantees a happily-ever-after (HEA) for the main characters.
346 pages, Kindle Edition
Published October 31, 2025
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About the author
C.J. Primer
27 books583 followersC.J. Primer is an award-winning, bestselling author of steamy romance novels. She specializes in angsty, spicy love stories full of twists and turns and hard-fought happy endings. She writes in multiple genres, including paranormal romance, dark romance, contemporary romance, and fantasy romance. Her most popular books are the bestselling six-pack series, a collection of werewolf shifter romance novels that have captivated millions of readers worldwide across multiple reading platforms.
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November 15, 2025
Bite was exactly the kind of modern vampire chaos I love — dark, a little messy, and way too addictive. The human–vampire dynamic is basically “this is a terrible idea” mixed with “but the chemistry is insane,” and I ate it up. The tension is immediate, the danger feels real, and the way their relationship slips between sharp and soft kept me hooked the whole time.
Some parts moved a little too fast, and a few scenes felt like they needed an extra beat to land, but the vibe more than carried it.
Some parts moved a little too fast, and a few scenes felt like they needed an extra beat to land, but the vibe more than carried it.
January 1, 2026
I haven’t read a vampire romance in ages, and seen this arc and thought why not 🤷 . It absolutely did not disappoint ☺️.
James and Taylor are fascinating characters and this book world created is delicious 😈. I loved the uniquely written bond written between James and Taylor.
While I’m not a fan of BDSM this book had a touch and was totally fine. What I would like to see if there are future books in this setting is an explanation if procreation can occur. This was never explained or touched on.
I am hoping for Bex’s book 🤗
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
James and Taylor are fascinating characters and this book world created is delicious 😈. I loved the uniquely written bond written between James and Taylor.
While I’m not a fan of BDSM this book had a touch and was totally fine. What I would like to see if there are future books in this setting is an explanation if procreation can occur. This was never explained or touched on.
I am hoping for Bex’s book 🤗
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
dnf
November 9, 2025Not in the mood to power through this one. I’m quite bored. DNF at 35%.
November 11, 2025
it had potential but…
There were bits that I liked and unfortunately the bits I liked didn’t outweigh the bits I didn’t.
First, let me say that I don’t know if this is part of a series or a stand alone. There were plot points toward the end that make me think that this isn’t a stand alone.
James’s back story is never addressed. We know literally nothing about him. Why? Taylor’s back story is marginally better.
I thought the addition of Elliot was interesting and the response he had at the end to Taylor’s friend Bex needs more thought.
I am really tired of every bff of the FMC being written exactly the same. Parties too much, drinks too much, mouthy and over all obnoxious. I don’t doubt Bex and Taylor are close and loyal friends but nothing about their friendship stands out from a hundred other similar relationships I’ve read before.
I think if you are going to write a smut heavy vampire novel then just do that and make the sex interesting. Don’t add half done back stories or secondary characters and please leave the 50 Shades nods out.
There were bits that I liked and unfortunately the bits I liked didn’t outweigh the bits I didn’t.
First, let me say that I don’t know if this is part of a series or a stand alone. There were plot points toward the end that make me think that this isn’t a stand alone.
James’s back story is never addressed. We know literally nothing about him. Why? Taylor’s back story is marginally better.
I thought the addition of Elliot was interesting and the response he had at the end to Taylor’s friend Bex needs more thought.
I am really tired of every bff of the FMC being written exactly the same. Parties too much, drinks too much, mouthy and over all obnoxious. I don’t doubt Bex and Taylor are close and loyal friends but nothing about their friendship stands out from a hundred other similar relationships I’ve read before.
I think if you are going to write a smut heavy vampire novel then just do that and make the sex interesting. Don’t add half done back stories or secondary characters and please leave the 50 Shades nods out.
October 28, 2025
Bite is a tantalizing modern day vampire romance that once you sink your teeth into, you'll be craving more!
One bite of Bite will not be enough.
This dark and delicious story took me on a ride! I instantly connected with Taylor, the female main character, who is struggling to get by and make ends meet. Although life knocks her down, she still gets up and pushes forward. (Love a strong FMC.) When seemingly all options are gone, a business card for a donor agency - where donors are matched with vampires to provide live feeds and more - is given to her and she has to decide what to do next.
This story is perfect for those who love dark romances with SPICY spice. There were moments that I was fanning myself because it's HOT. Also, the dark, spooky and Gothic vibes bring this story to life.
Shout out to CJ for writing incredible characters that are relatable, intriguing, interesting and sometimes hilarious (HELLO BEX)!
Go read this book!
One bite of Bite will not be enough.
This dark and delicious story took me on a ride! I instantly connected with Taylor, the female main character, who is struggling to get by and make ends meet. Although life knocks her down, she still gets up and pushes forward. (Love a strong FMC.) When seemingly all options are gone, a business card for a donor agency - where donors are matched with vampires to provide live feeds and more - is given to her and she has to decide what to do next.
This story is perfect for those who love dark romances with SPICY spice. There were moments that I was fanning myself because it's HOT. Also, the dark, spooky and Gothic vibes bring this story to life.
Shout out to CJ for writing incredible characters that are relatable, intriguing, interesting and sometimes hilarious (HELLO BEX)!
Go read this book!
November 30, 2025
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ A Dark, Addictive Vampire Romance With a Fresh Twist
Bite by C.J. Primer hooked me from the very first chapter. The premise alone, an underground blood-donation agency where donors are matched with vampires willing to pay, felt genuinely unique, and the execution fully delivered. The pacing is smooth, the worldbuilding is easy to fall into, and the story develops without the usual plot gaps you sometimes see in dark romance.
What I loved most was how believable the progression felt. The dynamic between the main characters grows in a natural, compelling way, blending darker elements with emotional depth and character development. James Devereaux is exactly the kind of morally gray, magnetic vampire king you want to read about, and the tension between him and the FMC keeps the pages turning.
For a dark romance, the balance between heat, plot, and atmosphere is spot-on. I found myself fully immersed, almost like I was inside the story rather than just reading it. And while this is my first book by C.J. Primer, it definitely won’t be my las, I’m already eyeing the rest of her series.
If you enjoy dark modern vampire romance with a twist, strong character chemistry, and a storyline that actually goes somewhere, this is absolutely worth the read. I highly recommend it and can’t wait to see what the author publishes next.
Sonya
BookboundandBlushed
Bite by C.J. Primer hooked me from the very first chapter. The premise alone, an underground blood-donation agency where donors are matched with vampires willing to pay, felt genuinely unique, and the execution fully delivered. The pacing is smooth, the worldbuilding is easy to fall into, and the story develops without the usual plot gaps you sometimes see in dark romance.
What I loved most was how believable the progression felt. The dynamic between the main characters grows in a natural, compelling way, blending darker elements with emotional depth and character development. James Devereaux is exactly the kind of morally gray, magnetic vampire king you want to read about, and the tension between him and the FMC keeps the pages turning.
For a dark romance, the balance between heat, plot, and atmosphere is spot-on. I found myself fully immersed, almost like I was inside the story rather than just reading it. And while this is my first book by C.J. Primer, it definitely won’t be my las, I’m already eyeing the rest of her series.
If you enjoy dark modern vampire romance with a twist, strong character chemistry, and a storyline that actually goes somewhere, this is absolutely worth the read. I highly recommend it and can’t wait to see what the author publishes next.
Sonya
BookboundandBlushed
October 31, 2025
The second this book was announced, I was invested!!! Like counting down the days kind of invested! I had a million ideas of what it might be, and it turned out to be nothing like I expected but EVERYTHING I wanted.
I honestly can’t even put into words how much I loved this one. This story gave me absolutely everything I needed sexy, spicy, empowering, and chalked full of those “find yourself and take what you want” vibes. I felt all the feels with this one.
Highly, highly recommend. 🖤🫦
I honestly can’t even put into words how much I loved this one. This story gave me absolutely everything I needed sexy, spicy, empowering, and chalked full of those “find yourself and take what you want” vibes. I felt all the feels with this one.
Highly, highly recommend. 🖤🫦
November 7, 2025
I wanted to really love this, truly I did. I'm a huge fan of this author, those werewolf books were *chefs kiss.. but sadly this book fell flat for me. The 'relationship' between the main characters came across transactional and besides an obsession with her blood and the mystery surrounding it, James was too aloof. I just didn't buy any real connection until the very end.... there was zero growth or relationship building. The sexy times and dirty talk were top tier, kudos for that.
December 4, 2025
⭐️⭐️⭐️
🌶🌶.5
🔥🔥🔥.5
Taylor is struggling to survive, jobless, hungry, and desperate, until she discovers Bite, an underground agency connecting humans with vampires for paid feedings. What starts as a way to solve her problems quickly spirals into something much more dangerous when she catches the attention of James Devereaux, the powerful vampire king of the Northeast. Unlike any other, James never drinks from the same human twice—until Taylor. He offers her a life-changing deal to be his exclusive donor for a year, but soon she realizes he wants more than just her blood.
Overall, this was a solid read, though it didn’t really stand out for me. I liked the FMC; she was bold and ballsy, but also grounded enough to accept a situation she didn’t agree with when she really had no choice. The MMC was the classic mysterious type, trying to deny his attraction at first, but once he claimed her as his, it was clear she was his and his alone. He definitely drew the line at blood, and even outside of that, he wasn’t exactly willing to share.
The story was entertaining and moved at a nice pace, so it was easy to get through, but honestly, it didn’t leave a lasting impression compared to some of the other books I’ve read. It’s enjoyable enough if you’re looking for a fun, quick read, but it’s not one I think I’ll remember long-term.
⟣Tropes⟢
✅ Touch her and 💀
✅ Obsessive/JP MMC
✅ Dirty Talk
✅ Fated Mates
✅ Single POV (first person)
✅ Sharing (he gets a bl*w job while she gets pleasured by another male)
✅ OM (other OM's before MMC)
✅ FMC not Virgin
✅ He falls first
✅ Vampire
✅ Contract Agreement
✅ MINE
✅ HEA
🌶🌶.5
🔥🔥🔥.5
Taylor is struggling to survive, jobless, hungry, and desperate, until she discovers Bite, an underground agency connecting humans with vampires for paid feedings. What starts as a way to solve her problems quickly spirals into something much more dangerous when she catches the attention of James Devereaux, the powerful vampire king of the Northeast. Unlike any other, James never drinks from the same human twice—until Taylor. He offers her a life-changing deal to be his exclusive donor for a year, but soon she realizes he wants more than just her blood.
Overall, this was a solid read, though it didn’t really stand out for me. I liked the FMC; she was bold and ballsy, but also grounded enough to accept a situation she didn’t agree with when she really had no choice. The MMC was the classic mysterious type, trying to deny his attraction at first, but once he claimed her as his, it was clear she was his and his alone. He definitely drew the line at blood, and even outside of that, he wasn’t exactly willing to share.
The story was entertaining and moved at a nice pace, so it was easy to get through, but honestly, it didn’t leave a lasting impression compared to some of the other books I’ve read. It’s enjoyable enough if you’re looking for a fun, quick read, but it’s not one I think I’ll remember long-term.
⟣Tropes⟢
✅ Touch her and 💀
✅ Obsessive/JP MMC
✅ Dirty Talk
✅ Fated Mates
✅ Single POV (first person)
✅ Sharing (he gets a bl*w job while she gets pleasured by another male)
✅ OM (other OM's before MMC)
✅ FMC not Virgin
✅ He falls first
✅ Vampire
✅ Contract Agreement
✅ MINE
✅ HEA
November 3, 2025
One of the best vampire romances I've read.
Taylor- Beautiful, young with a traumatic childhood. Struggling to make ends meet living in a crappy apartment with no one but her kitten. Desperate enough to take up an offer she usually would turn down.
James- the vampire king. Never drinks from the same source twice, sensual being, grumpy but caring toward Taylor but apathetic to virtually everyone else.
Taylor is fired from her job for refusing her bosses advances, she's days away from losing her studio apartment the one she clawed her way to keeping after leaving the foster care system and her best friend Bex recommends Bite a live blood donor scheme… this is where she meets James the vampire king. James never drinks from the same source twice but he can't stop coming back to Taylor so he has her sign a long term donor contract for 5 million dollars a bargain she just can't afford to turn down. Living in his mansion is an experience for her but the biggest change is the fact that James pushes her out of her comfort zone constantly. James as a vampire is a sensual being but it never really means anything to him until Taylor. He realises there's something different about her blood he involves a scientist to help him figure it out as he's heard rumours of a special bond… but it can't be right? And if it is how will Taylor take it?
I loved this it was possibly one of the best vampire romances I have read in a long time. I really enjoyed it it was easy to read I couldn't put it down and read it in one day. It was well written the characters were well written and I loved Bex character she was the badass bestie and I sincerely hope that the author makes this into a series. I loved that Taylor grew as a person from a nervous young woman to a strong woman who new what she wanted and stood tall as she took it
I read a free copy of this as a arc and am leaving a voluntary review
Taylor- Beautiful, young with a traumatic childhood. Struggling to make ends meet living in a crappy apartment with no one but her kitten. Desperate enough to take up an offer she usually would turn down.
James- the vampire king. Never drinks from the same source twice, sensual being, grumpy but caring toward Taylor but apathetic to virtually everyone else.
Taylor is fired from her job for refusing her bosses advances, she's days away from losing her studio apartment the one she clawed her way to keeping after leaving the foster care system and her best friend Bex recommends Bite a live blood donor scheme… this is where she meets James the vampire king. James never drinks from the same source twice but he can't stop coming back to Taylor so he has her sign a long term donor contract for 5 million dollars a bargain she just can't afford to turn down. Living in his mansion is an experience for her but the biggest change is the fact that James pushes her out of her comfort zone constantly. James as a vampire is a sensual being but it never really means anything to him until Taylor. He realises there's something different about her blood he involves a scientist to help him figure it out as he's heard rumours of a special bond… but it can't be right? And if it is how will Taylor take it?
I loved this it was possibly one of the best vampire romances I have read in a long time. I really enjoyed it it was easy to read I couldn't put it down and read it in one day. It was well written the characters were well written and I loved Bex character she was the badass bestie and I sincerely hope that the author makes this into a series. I loved that Taylor grew as a person from a nervous young woman to a strong woman who new what she wanted and stood tall as she took it
I read a free copy of this as a arc and am leaving a voluntary review
November 13, 2025
With ‘Bite’, C. J. Primer strays from her usual pack, venturing into fang territory. The author continues to prove her creativity resource bag is bottomless. James and Taylor—a little hat tip from the author in the names there—start intense, and it just keeps getting hotter from there.
* There is a scene that had me curling inward in a deep cringe. I’m listing this as a trigger warning: It’s not cheating, but it feels just as dirty. The first time you see your person’s ‘anatomy’ it shouldn’t be in another person’s mouth—especially to completion. I know that it’s part of this world’s vampire culture and that boundary needed to be tested for James to develop, but I almost walked away, and for someone like ME where there’s nary a line uncrossed … Fair warning.
Excellent book, as I always anticipate from one of my favorite authors. Definitely worth the read.
*** Recommended ***
MMC:
✨James
FMC:
✨Taylor
HEA/Cliffhanger:
✨HEA
Tropes:
👉vampire romance
👉dark gothic romance
👉fated mates
👉touch her and ☠️
Triggers:
💥18+
💥sex
💥profanity
💥violence
💥death
💥decapitation
Burn Speed:
✨medium - ish
Spice Level:
✨🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
✨MF
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
* There is a scene that had me curling inward in a deep cringe. I’m listing this as a trigger warning: It’s not cheating, but it feels just as dirty. The first time you see your person’s ‘anatomy’ it shouldn’t be in another person’s mouth—especially to completion. I know that it’s part of this world’s vampire culture and that boundary needed to be tested for James to develop, but I almost walked away, and for someone like ME where there’s nary a line uncrossed … Fair warning.
Excellent book, as I always anticipate from one of my favorite authors. Definitely worth the read.
*** Recommended ***
MMC:
✨James
FMC:
✨Taylor
HEA/Cliffhanger:
✨HEA
Tropes:
👉vampire romance
👉dark gothic romance
👉fated mates
👉touch her and ☠️
Triggers:
💥18+
💥sex
💥profanity
💥violence
💥death
💥decapitation
Burn Speed:
✨medium - ish
Spice Level:
✨🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
✨MF
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
November 3, 2025
𝐑𝐀𝐓𝐈𝐍𝐆: 4.5 rounded up for GR
𝐒𝐏𝐈𝐂𝐄: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
This book felt like True Blood, The Vampire Diaries, Tinder, and DoorDash had a baby…and I devoured every single chaotic, sexy, delicious minute of it. It was the perfect blend of paranormal romance and modern-day tech culture, creating a world that feels both darkly seductive and eerily realistic.
The concept of the donor app was so unique and I loved how the donors held so much control and power! It flipped the usual vampire dynamic around in such a smart, empowering way.
Now normally I don’t care for a blonde MMC but James’ possessiveness and the way he spoke and carried himself was magnetic. The tension of all the secrets had me spiraling. My only complaint was I felt like the ending was a little rushed and it’s a rare time I honestly thought “damn this could be a longer book and I wouldn’t even mind it!” I’m insanely excited for the next book in 2026!
⭐️ 𝐎𝐕𝐄𝐑𝐀𝐋𝐋 - HIGHLY RECOMMEND!!!
𝐒𝐏𝐈𝐂𝐄: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
This book felt like True Blood, The Vampire Diaries, Tinder, and DoorDash had a baby…and I devoured every single chaotic, sexy, delicious minute of it. It was the perfect blend of paranormal romance and modern-day tech culture, creating a world that feels both darkly seductive and eerily realistic.
The concept of the donor app was so unique and I loved how the donors held so much control and power! It flipped the usual vampire dynamic around in such a smart, empowering way.
Now normally I don’t care for a blonde MMC but James’ possessiveness and the way he spoke and carried himself was magnetic. The tension of all the secrets had me spiraling. My only complaint was I felt like the ending was a little rushed and it’s a rare time I honestly thought “damn this could be a longer book and I wouldn’t even mind it!” I’m insanely excited for the next book in 2026!
⭐️ 𝐎𝐕𝐄𝐑𝐀𝐋𝐋 - HIGHLY RECOMMEND!!!
December 10, 2025
I enjoyed this one way more than I expected. I didn’t know vampire romance was something I’d love until this book. 🧛The modern-day setting made it even better.
CJ Primer is a new-to-me author and her writing really worked for me. The conflict stays low and the spice is written incredibly well. So well that I’d happily volunteer as a blood donor if vampires existed 😂.
Tropes that did for me: voyeurism, cat and mouse, forced proximity, touch her & ☠️, vampire + willing human blood donor dynamic, and an ordinary girl who catches the eye of a very powerful vampire king.
👆🏽👆🏽👆🏽If that is your vibe, this book will deliver. I need more vampy spice!
I gratefully received an ARC for free and I’m posting this review voluntarily.
CJ Primer is a new-to-me author and her writing really worked for me. The conflict stays low and the spice is written incredibly well. So well that I’d happily volunteer as a blood donor if vampires existed 😂.
Tropes that did for me: voyeurism, cat and mouse, forced proximity, touch her & ☠️, vampire + willing human blood donor dynamic, and an ordinary girl who catches the eye of a very powerful vampire king.
👆🏽👆🏽👆🏽If that is your vibe, this book will deliver. I need more vampy spice!
I gratefully received an ARC for free and I’m posting this review voluntarily.
December 24, 2025
I love the books from cj primer. As i did this one. But i expected more darkness.
That's the biggest reason to drop a star. Although i loved it. It didnt meet expectations.
I can imagine if someone didnt read anything dark yet it can be seen as dark.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
That's the biggest reason to drop a star. Although i loved it. It didnt meet expectations.
I can imagine if someone didnt read anything dark yet it can be seen as dark.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
October 31, 2025
I could not put this book down. I am absolutely convinced that anything that CJ Primer writes is amazing! Her books are unpredictable and leave me wanting more. Make sure to read the trigger warnings.
October 28, 2025
Omg CJ has done it again!!! Absolutley amazing!! For this being her first ever Vampire romance she NAILED IT!!! This was a breath of fresh air!! I absolutely love everything CJ writes but this one might just take the cake for me! James & Taylor’s story will suck you in from the first chapter and leave you wanting more!! It was hot, had a great plot, amazing twists and did I mention hot?!
James the centuries old vampire with his playboy attitude and his dirty mouth….YES PLEASE!🔥🔥 Taylor may be down on her luck but little did she know it was all about to change with just…one…bite….
James the centuries old vampire with his playboy attitude and his dirty mouth….YES PLEASE!🔥🔥 Taylor may be down on her luck but little did she know it was all about to change with just…one…bite….
November 22, 2025
Build up був непоганий, далі все покотилось з горба для мене. Мені не сподобалось, не повірила нічому і нікому в цій історії.
December 14, 2025
Had a great time reading this. Fast paced interesting plot and good spicy scenes
November 28, 2025
⭐️⭐️.5
The first third of the book was excellent. The introduction to the world was strong. Vampires live amongst human and ostensibly restrict themselves to blood bags. But unfortunate circumstance sees our FMC Taylor in need of fast cash. Enter Bite, an escort services that connects willing humans with hungry vampires looking to satisfy an array of hungers. She reluctantly signs up, intending to make enough to cover rent and get out again. Things change when she attracts the attention of a notorious and powerful vampire king, MMC James Devereaux. I was super excited to see where this book would take us.
The second third of the book is basically a chain of various sexual encounters with little to nothing happening in between. The spice level is satisfying but there’s not a lot of on-page chemistry or relationship building between the main characters. But if you like a powerful, brooding and possessive MMC it’s easy enough to look past.
The final third is where the disappointment set in: nothing actually happens. There are plenty of opportunities for some sort of situation to develop. My money was on a kidnapping/touch her and die scenario, hinted at by multiple references to security concerns and James’s position in vampire society. I always like when a story delves into the physical cost of a blood donor situation; there are throw-away references to Taylor being dizzy after apparently feeding her vampire literally every day. Maybe the ride or die BFF Bex would fall into the wrong hands.
But… Nope. Nothing. Nada. The only thing vaguely resembling a conflict and resolution is the singular chapter in which Taylor “runs away” demanding time to consider her place. The up-to-now emotionally constipated James suddenly realizes he’s willing to do anything to please her and agrees to give her space despite his aforementioned vampiric brooding and possessiveness. And then she moves back in with him *the next morning,* they form a powerful blood bond and her cat even deigns to (kinda) be nice to him.
And that’s it. That’s the whole book. I watched the percentage creep up and up in my Kindle, sure that the big twist or cliffhanger was only a click away, but it never materialized. There’s not even a set up for another book to imply that everything that went right for Taylor in this one is about to come crashing down.
The writing is good and the premise is promising but the lack of an actual storyline made me wish I’d DNF-ed it.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The first third of the book was excellent. The introduction to the world was strong. Vampires live amongst human and ostensibly restrict themselves to blood bags. But unfortunate circumstance sees our FMC Taylor in need of fast cash. Enter Bite, an escort services that connects willing humans with hungry vampires looking to satisfy an array of hungers. She reluctantly signs up, intending to make enough to cover rent and get out again. Things change when she attracts the attention of a notorious and powerful vampire king, MMC James Devereaux. I was super excited to see where this book would take us.
The second third of the book is basically a chain of various sexual encounters with little to nothing happening in between. The spice level is satisfying but there’s not a lot of on-page chemistry or relationship building between the main characters. But if you like a powerful, brooding and possessive MMC it’s easy enough to look past.
The final third is where the disappointment set in: nothing actually happens. There are plenty of opportunities for some sort of situation to develop. My money was on a kidnapping/touch her and die scenario, hinted at by multiple references to security concerns and James’s position in vampire society. I always like when a story delves into the physical cost of a blood donor situation; there are throw-away references to Taylor being dizzy after apparently feeding her vampire literally every day. Maybe the ride or die BFF Bex would fall into the wrong hands.
But… Nope. Nothing. Nada. The only thing vaguely resembling a conflict and resolution is the singular chapter in which Taylor “runs away” demanding time to consider her place. The up-to-now emotionally constipated James suddenly realizes he’s willing to do anything to please her and agrees to give her space despite his aforementioned vampiric brooding and possessiveness. And then she moves back in with him *the next morning,* they form a powerful blood bond and her cat even deigns to (kinda) be nice to him.
And that’s it. That’s the whole book. I watched the percentage creep up and up in my Kindle, sure that the big twist or cliffhanger was only a click away, but it never materialized. There’s not even a set up for another book to imply that everything that went right for Taylor in this one is about to come crashing down.
The writing is good and the premise is promising but the lack of an actual storyline made me wish I’d DNF-ed it.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
January 2, 2026
A totally new and fresh take on modern vampires! This concept was so fun, and I loved the characters.
November 29, 2025
I fully admit to being a sucker (pun very intended) for vampire dark romance books, and I’m well aware I am not alone. While my interest in the topic isn’t particularly unique, this read was a nice reminder how each author’s approach in their storytelling continues to revamp (pun intended) the subgenre.
I get particularly excited when I come across vampire books that have a modern/contemporary timeframe, and the author makes it known to the reader that humans aren’t only aware of the existence of vampires, but that the two species must then exist side by side. The logistics/specifics of the vampire lore (for example: sunlight threshold of vampires, vampire rights/legality, civil tensions of species, the sexual allure of vampires to humans, etc) varies GREATLY from story to story, and I had SUCH fun time experiencing Taylor Holt’s adventures navigating life (namely, STAYING alive) in a modern world filled with devilishly tempting vampires, as well as the woes of being a human adult with human responsibilities (ie - finances, and never really maintaining a life without worrying about money).
I should maybe clarify that yes, this read is ABSOLUTELY “fun,” however - I am a semi frequent reader of dark (and dark-ish) romance.
To further explain my bookish stance, my water bottle has a sticker says “Morally Grey Is My Favorite Color.”
Primer pulls NO punches in showing the very matter-of-fact, “the way things are, are the way things are” nature of how society “allows”(or rather, turns a blind eye? For the most part?) the transactional relationship between humans and vampires. And Taylor’s strained financial situation forces her to explore the even shadier world of getting paid to meet the vampires’ needs… and if you’re anything like me, you won’t even care to look back, while being lead straight into darkly sinful extravagance, carnal depravity, and 👏so👏much👏more.
Although the majority of the book is of the “pleasures of the flesh” mindset, I need to shine a light on the character Bex, and the corresponding friendship/partnership/soulmate/soulsister between her and Taylor. The easygoing, full of love, but also honest to a fault, communication style between Taylor and Bex made me look forward to anytime they interacted. Additionally, Ozzy the cat will absolutely go in my own “Bookish Animal Sidekick Hall of Fame” as a personal favorite.
Comic Con “bite” cosplay idea: a small group of well-groomed, high-end, escort-esque attire, with everyone wearing a slim, silver, “bite” company bracelet
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I get particularly excited when I come across vampire books that have a modern/contemporary timeframe, and the author makes it known to the reader that humans aren’t only aware of the existence of vampires, but that the two species must then exist side by side. The logistics/specifics of the vampire lore (for example: sunlight threshold of vampires, vampire rights/legality, civil tensions of species, the sexual allure of vampires to humans, etc) varies GREATLY from story to story, and I had SUCH fun time experiencing Taylor Holt’s adventures navigating life (namely, STAYING alive) in a modern world filled with devilishly tempting vampires, as well as the woes of being a human adult with human responsibilities (ie - finances, and never really maintaining a life without worrying about money).
I should maybe clarify that yes, this read is ABSOLUTELY “fun,” however - I am a semi frequent reader of dark (and dark-ish) romance.
To further explain my bookish stance, my water bottle has a sticker says “Morally Grey Is My Favorite Color.”
Primer pulls NO punches in showing the very matter-of-fact, “the way things are, are the way things are” nature of how society “allows”(or rather, turns a blind eye? For the most part?) the transactional relationship between humans and vampires. And Taylor’s strained financial situation forces her to explore the even shadier world of getting paid to meet the vampires’ needs… and if you’re anything like me, you won’t even care to look back, while being lead straight into darkly sinful extravagance, carnal depravity, and 👏so👏much👏more.
Although the majority of the book is of the “pleasures of the flesh” mindset, I need to shine a light on the character Bex, and the corresponding friendship/partnership/soulmate/soulsister between her and Taylor. The easygoing, full of love, but also honest to a fault, communication style between Taylor and Bex made me look forward to anytime they interacted. Additionally, Ozzy the cat will absolutely go in my own “Bookish Animal Sidekick Hall of Fame” as a personal favorite.
Comic Con “bite” cosplay idea: a small group of well-groomed, high-end, escort-esque attire, with everyone wearing a slim, silver, “bite” company bracelet
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
December 25, 2025
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Bite pulled me in fast and kept its teeth in me almost the entire time. From the start, there’s a sharp sense of tension that doesn’t rely on constant shock value but instead builds through atmosphere, unease, and character dynamics and that’s where this book really shines for me.
Emotionally, I found myself genuinely invested. The story balances vulnerability and intensity in a way that made the characters feel human, even when the situation itself leaned dark. I felt the fear, the pull, the internal conflict and those emotional beats landed well more often than not. There’s a simmering edge throughout the book that made it hard to put down, especially during the middle stretch where everything tightens and the stakes feel personal.
The writing style is engaging and accessible without feeling shallow. Primer does a good job creating mood and tension, and I appreciated how the darker elements were handled with restraint rather than excess. Nothing felt gratuitous; instead, the story trusted the reader to sit in the discomfort and read between the lines.
That said, this wasn’t quite a five-star read for me. A few moments felt slightly rushed, particularly when it came to emotional transitions. There were places where I wanted to linger longer with the characters’ reactions or see certain conflicts explored a bit more deeply before moving on. With just a bit more space for reflection and payoff, those moments could have hit even harder.
To earn the full five stars, I would’ve loved:
• More depth in a few key emotional turning points
• Slightly slower pacing in places to let tension fully bloom
• A bit more exploration of character motivations as the story escalates
Overall, Bite is a strong, compelling read that delivers mood, emotion, and tension with confidence. It left me satisfied but still wanting just a little more and honestly, that’s a good place for a book to be.
Bite pulled me in fast and kept its teeth in me almost the entire time. From the start, there’s a sharp sense of tension that doesn’t rely on constant shock value but instead builds through atmosphere, unease, and character dynamics and that’s where this book really shines for me.
Emotionally, I found myself genuinely invested. The story balances vulnerability and intensity in a way that made the characters feel human, even when the situation itself leaned dark. I felt the fear, the pull, the internal conflict and those emotional beats landed well more often than not. There’s a simmering edge throughout the book that made it hard to put down, especially during the middle stretch where everything tightens and the stakes feel personal.
The writing style is engaging and accessible without feeling shallow. Primer does a good job creating mood and tension, and I appreciated how the darker elements were handled with restraint rather than excess. Nothing felt gratuitous; instead, the story trusted the reader to sit in the discomfort and read between the lines.
That said, this wasn’t quite a five-star read for me. A few moments felt slightly rushed, particularly when it came to emotional transitions. There were places where I wanted to linger longer with the characters’ reactions or see certain conflicts explored a bit more deeply before moving on. With just a bit more space for reflection and payoff, those moments could have hit even harder.
To earn the full five stars, I would’ve loved:
• More depth in a few key emotional turning points
• Slightly slower pacing in places to let tension fully bloom
• A bit more exploration of character motivations as the story escalates
Overall, Bite is a strong, compelling read that delivers mood, emotion, and tension with confidence. It left me satisfied but still wanting just a little more and honestly, that’s a good place for a book to be.
November 22, 2025
4.5 stars. 3 peppers
Decadent & dark, this vampire romance oozes seduction & caught me by complete surprise. The writing has an almost poetic feel and I loved its immersive quality. While Taylor seems to live on the edge of powerlessness, her determination to survive, despite her situation, made her likable. I was drawn in by both her desperation & grit. I loved James’ blatant darkness & possessiveness. His brutal obsession was made palatable by his obvious devotion & tenderness with Taylor. This book is spicy & intense & I was surprised at the emotional slow-burn of their relationship.
Set in a world where vampires exist among humans, there are multiple ways for them to feed, including in-person donors & donation bags. Bite is a service, like Hinge for vampires, that matches donors & vampires. It’s illicit and shrouded in secrecy. Desperate for money to make rent, Taylor signs up to be an in-person donor, despite her better judgement and meets James. He ultimately makes her an offer she can’t refuse and sets her on a path that explores the dark world of vampires & the thrill of having control. While not as overtly spicy as other books, it’s still very spicy & includes elements voyeurism & submission.
The one plot hole that I wish I knew more about is Taylor’s history. The story heavily eludes to the fact that her parents died tragically. It was a primary theme in the entire piano scene and it seemed to indicate that we would find out her history at the end. But we didn’t. I don’t know if this book is part of a greater series but if I had one critique, that’s it. That said, it wasn’t enough to detract from my enjoyment of this book. I absolutely loved this ride!!
4.5 stars 3 peppers
Decadent & dark, this vampire romance oozes seduction & caught me by complete surprise. The writing has an almost poetic feel and I loved its immersive quality. While Taylor seems to live on the edge of powerlessness, her determination to survive, despite her situation, made her likable. I was drawn in by both her desperation & grit. I loved James’ blatant darkness & possessiveness. His brutal obsession was made palatable by his obvious devotion & tenderness with Taylor. This book is spicy & intense & I was surprised at the emotional slow-burn of their relationship.
Set in a world where vampires exist among humans, there are multiple ways for them to feed, including in-person donors & donation bags. Bite is a service, like Hinge for vampires, that matches donors & vampires. It’s illicit and shrouded in secrecy. Desperate for money to make rent, Taylor signs up to be an in-person donor, despite her better judgement and meets James. He ultimately makes her an offer she can’t refuse and sets her on a path that explores the dark world of vampires & the thrill of having control. While not as overtly spicy as other books, it’s still very spicy & includes elements voyeurism & submission.
The one plot hole that I wish I knew more about is Taylor’s history. The story heavily eludes to the fact that her parents died tragically. It was a primary theme in the entire piano scene and it seemed to indicate that we would find out her history at the end. But we didn’t. I don’t know if this book is part of a greater series but if I had one critique, that’s it. That said, it wasn’t enough to detract from my enjoyment of this book. I absolutely loved this ride!!
4.5 stars 3 peppers
December 7, 2025
Title: Bite
Author: C.J. Primer
Review: I received an (ARC) Advanced Reader Copy for MY honest review for free.
Taylor is struggling in a dead-end job just to survive. When that doesn't pan out, she becomes desperate. Her bestie tells her how she can make quick cash and all it takes is one bite. Taylor is repulsed but also intrigued. Her curiosity gets the better of her. She signs up to become a blood donor for the elite company, 'Bite' and quickly realises that it's not so bad, as long as she sticks to blood only and not the additional services.
Taylor receives an invitation to a gala with a big cash incentive that will pay her rent for the next two months. She accepts, and when she arrives she catches the eye of the vampire king himself.... James Devereaux.
After just one taste, James had to have her. He offers Taylor a deal she can't refuse, one year as his exclusive donor in exchange for enough money to set her up for life. What could go wrong...?
**
This book had me intrigued as I haven't read many books in the vampire realm. I was undecided on how to rate this book as I did really enjoy reading it in theory, but the plot was lacking in areas and when I got to the end, I was left scratching my head. However, I'm sure there will be a second book to delve deeper into Taylor's family history and why her blood is so special. The smut was hot, and I liked that Taylor had the space to explore her sexuality without being pushed into anything but also not kink shamed either. Some of the characters were sketchy, but I guess that falls under the whole creepy vampire vibe.
Stars: 3.5/5 ★
Spice: 3/5 🌶️
Recommend: Yes
Notes: ARC received through BookSirens
Author: C.J. Primer
Review: I received an (ARC) Advanced Reader Copy for MY honest review for free.
Taylor is struggling in a dead-end job just to survive. When that doesn't pan out, she becomes desperate. Her bestie tells her how she can make quick cash and all it takes is one bite. Taylor is repulsed but also intrigued. Her curiosity gets the better of her. She signs up to become a blood donor for the elite company, 'Bite' and quickly realises that it's not so bad, as long as she sticks to blood only and not the additional services.
Taylor receives an invitation to a gala with a big cash incentive that will pay her rent for the next two months. She accepts, and when she arrives she catches the eye of the vampire king himself.... James Devereaux.
After just one taste, James had to have her. He offers Taylor a deal she can't refuse, one year as his exclusive donor in exchange for enough money to set her up for life. What could go wrong...?
**
This book had me intrigued as I haven't read many books in the vampire realm. I was undecided on how to rate this book as I did really enjoy reading it in theory, but the plot was lacking in areas and when I got to the end, I was left scratching my head. However, I'm sure there will be a second book to delve deeper into Taylor's family history and why her blood is so special. The smut was hot, and I liked that Taylor had the space to explore her sexuality without being pushed into anything but also not kink shamed either. Some of the characters were sketchy, but I guess that falls under the whole creepy vampire vibe.
Stars: 3.5/5 ★
Spice: 3/5 🌶️
Recommend: Yes
Notes: ARC received through BookSirens
November 7, 2025
Bite by C.J. Primer is everything a dark vampire romance should be — seductive, dangerous, and just a little bit unhinged. This story takes the classic allure of vampires and gives it a modern, gritty twist that feels both fresh and familiar. The atmosphere drips with tension, and the chemistry between the leads is nothing short of electric.
I loved that Primer didn’t shy away from the darker edges of desire and power. The relationship at the heart of the book walks a fine line between passion and obsession, and that intensity makes every scene feel alive. The city setting adds an extra layer of sharpness — a perfect backdrop for creatures who thrive in the shadows.
What really worked for me was the character work. Both leads have depth, scars, and motives that make them more than archetypes. There’s a push and pull between danger and vulnerability that feels honest to the genre without being cliché. The pacing keeps you hooked, and the writing style is sharp and atmospheric, with flashes of poetic beauty.
If I had one minor critique, it’s that some of the emotional beats rush by a little too fast — I wanted just a bit more space to sink into their connection. But overall, Bite is a darkly addictive, immersive read that hits all the right notes for fans of paranormal romance.
Dark Romance · Vampire Fiction · Urban Fantasy · Modern Gothic · Slow Burn · Power Dynamics · Forbidden Desire
I loved that Primer didn’t shy away from the darker edges of desire and power. The relationship at the heart of the book walks a fine line between passion and obsession, and that intensity makes every scene feel alive. The city setting adds an extra layer of sharpness — a perfect backdrop for creatures who thrive in the shadows.
What really worked for me was the character work. Both leads have depth, scars, and motives that make them more than archetypes. There’s a push and pull between danger and vulnerability that feels honest to the genre without being cliché. The pacing keeps you hooked, and the writing style is sharp and atmospheric, with flashes of poetic beauty.
If I had one minor critique, it’s that some of the emotional beats rush by a little too fast — I wanted just a bit more space to sink into their connection. But overall, Bite is a darkly addictive, immersive read that hits all the right notes for fans of paranormal romance.
Dark Romance · Vampire Fiction · Urban Fantasy · Modern Gothic · Slow Burn · Power Dynamics · Forbidden Desire
November 11, 2025
Bite by C.J. Primer is a dark, modern vampire romance. Taylor is the main female character who is having a hard time with life at the moment. Having lost her job, savings and on the verge of losing her apartment, something has to give. That’s when her friend gives her a business card to a vampire donor agency, a place where you literally are paid to feed vampires. She’s matched with a few other vampires until she is matched with sophisticated and sexy James, a King amongst vampires who is instantly attracted to Taylor and wants her for his own.
This is definitely a dark romance with some very spicy scenes. I like that the characters like each other, even though Taylor is struggling, she is still a strong character that sticks to her principals and isn’t pushed into anything. She is instantly attracted to James but is also intrigued with him which goes both ways.
I also enjoyed the intriguing twist that James has when it comes to Taylor’s blood and that he will stop at nothing to figure out the answer. It doesn’t hurt that he is easy on the eyes and mesmerising at the same time )especially from Taylor’s perspective).
Overall, this is a really good, dark, gothic, spicy read with a few twist and turns to keep you guessing.
ARC received for a fair, honest and sometimes long review. All opinions are my own. 😊
More of my reviews can be found on my blog: http://thehotmesslibrary.blogspot.com
This is definitely a dark romance with some very spicy scenes. I like that the characters like each other, even though Taylor is struggling, she is still a strong character that sticks to her principals and isn’t pushed into anything. She is instantly attracted to James but is also intrigued with him which goes both ways.
I also enjoyed the intriguing twist that James has when it comes to Taylor’s blood and that he will stop at nothing to figure out the answer. It doesn’t hurt that he is easy on the eyes and mesmerising at the same time )especially from Taylor’s perspective).
Overall, this is a really good, dark, gothic, spicy read with a few twist and turns to keep you guessing.
ARC received for a fair, honest and sometimes long review. All opinions are my own. 😊
More of my reviews can be found on my blog: http://thehotmesslibrary.blogspot.com
November 15, 2025
When Taylor finds herself in hard times, her best friend Bex suggests that there may be a solution to her problems, something she herself does, providing her with the extra cash when she needs it. Taylor initially rejects it, but with no job on the horizon, it becomes 'needs must'.
When Taylor accepts one of her jobs, a gala, she comes in contact with the Vampire King James Devereaux. James is instantly mesmerised by her. Normally, he only uses the donors once, and that is it, but there is something about Taylor that has him enthralled. He offers her a contract, something she has to seriously consider. Can she be that person he wants, for that length of time?
James may say it's the blood that has him coming back for more, but it's more than that, something deeper, something in her that calls to him. Taylor finds that her boundaries are falling, things she thought she would never do, she now does, and enjoys them. James has a way of making everything around her melt away until there is only him and her. This hold frightens her. Will she lose herself to him? Will he take away her choice? Is this special connection and what it entails the only reason he wants to be with her? Fear and insecurities have to be faced by Taylor. James needs to open up about himself and show her that it's all the different facets of her he wants, not only the red stuff.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
When Taylor accepts one of her jobs, a gala, she comes in contact with the Vampire King James Devereaux. James is instantly mesmerised by her. Normally, he only uses the donors once, and that is it, but there is something about Taylor that has him enthralled. He offers her a contract, something she has to seriously consider. Can she be that person he wants, for that length of time?
James may say it's the blood that has him coming back for more, but it's more than that, something deeper, something in her that calls to him. Taylor finds that her boundaries are falling, things she thought she would never do, she now does, and enjoys them. James has a way of making everything around her melt away until there is only him and her. This hold frightens her. Will she lose herself to him? Will he take away her choice? Is this special connection and what it entails the only reason he wants to be with her? Fear and insecurities have to be faced by Taylor. James needs to open up about himself and show her that it's all the different facets of her he wants, not only the red stuff.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
November 16, 2025
Vampires are the reason I fell in love with monsters in the first place. If I were ever given the chance to become one? I’d say yes before the question even finished leaving their lips. Bite taps directly into that obsession. It follows a woman who’s down on her luck and desperate to make money fast, so desperate that when her friend recommends a vampire feeding site, she actually considers it. And honestly? Getting paid to let gorgeous, powerful vamps feed from you sounds like a win-win. Nothing like being a live-in, warm-blooded donor… right?
The premise hooked me instantly. It’s seductive, dangerous, and somehow still feels grounded in the very human struggle of needing a break. The idea of being matched with elite vampires, earning stacks of cash, and maybe, just maybe, finding something deeper along the way? Total fantasy fuel. And while the vampires in this world don’t view love the same way humans do (and yes, I pouted about that), watching the FMC try to navigate her connection with a vampire who has spent centuries being an arrogant, emotionally constipated menace was so satisfying. The way he starts to unravel around her? I lived for that.
If you crave a story that blends a solid plot with vampires, intensity, emotional tension, and a whole lot of spice, this is absolutely your next read. I don’t know if there’s going to be a second book, but I need to know where their story goes. If there is more coming, I will be first in line, fangs out and ready.
The premise hooked me instantly. It’s seductive, dangerous, and somehow still feels grounded in the very human struggle of needing a break. The idea of being matched with elite vampires, earning stacks of cash, and maybe, just maybe, finding something deeper along the way? Total fantasy fuel. And while the vampires in this world don’t view love the same way humans do (and yes, I pouted about that), watching the FMC try to navigate her connection with a vampire who has spent centuries being an arrogant, emotionally constipated menace was so satisfying. The way he starts to unravel around her? I lived for that.
If you crave a story that blends a solid plot with vampires, intensity, emotional tension, and a whole lot of spice, this is absolutely your next read. I don’t know if there’s going to be a second book, but I need to know where their story goes. If there is more coming, I will be first in line, fangs out and ready.
February 6, 2026
Nicole
I had such high hopes for this story! But it fell flat and boring! Taylor didn't start asking real questions until 70% of the book! I knew it was gonna go nowhere! Why didn't we get any inkling Jane's was into Taylor that much! Why did I skip over all the boring sex! When you write a story you have to make some things believable like human emotion and connections! I loved the premise but the relationship stalled and then all of a sudden he's obsessed bc she is his mate! What about the doctor and Bex? Now that story I would read bc I know she would rock his world. But a character like Bex can become tiring, irksome so if you do write her story have some truth and grit about her. There was no angst. I kept thinking someone would try to kill Taylor or James. Why was the butler mute? Surely I wasn't the only one that there was more of a story w the cat? And can we talk about how nothing was learned about her family dying but she sensed alot of blood? I mean come on that was just a let down! What did James do in hundreds of years and what is his personality like, how did he get to be in that high position?? Why was not more security around James...I feel like they just willy nilly got into cars and went places. What other businesses does James own and in other countries? The doctor, oh my gosh we need to know more!! This was a great premise it just wasn't fully written out bn the 2 leading characters.
I had such high hopes for this story! But it fell flat and boring! Taylor didn't start asking real questions until 70% of the book! I knew it was gonna go nowhere! Why didn't we get any inkling Jane's was into Taylor that much! Why did I skip over all the boring sex! When you write a story you have to make some things believable like human emotion and connections! I loved the premise but the relationship stalled and then all of a sudden he's obsessed bc she is his mate! What about the doctor and Bex? Now that story I would read bc I know she would rock his world. But a character like Bex can become tiring, irksome so if you do write her story have some truth and grit about her. There was no angst. I kept thinking someone would try to kill Taylor or James. Why was the butler mute? Surely I wasn't the only one that there was more of a story w the cat? And can we talk about how nothing was learned about her family dying but she sensed alot of blood? I mean come on that was just a let down! What did James do in hundreds of years and what is his personality like, how did he get to be in that high position?? Why was not more security around James...I feel like they just willy nilly got into cars and went places. What other businesses does James own and in other countries? The doctor, oh my gosh we need to know more!! This was a great premise it just wasn't fully written out bn the 2 leading characters.
November 6, 2025
I didn't like this book at all. I skimmed through a lot of it just to finish.
I didn’t feel any genuine connection or love developing between the main characters, especially from the MMC's side. I didn't particularly like James. I understand that being broody and mysterious was his whole shtick (considering he's a vampire), but his lack of interest in building a relationship with Taylor was disappointing. He seemed solely focused on understanding why her blood was so irresistible to him, which made him a poor MMC. It felt like he was only interested in her blood; even when he protected her, it seemed more about safeguarding his blood bag.
The power dynamics in their relationship were also questionable. Taylor’s feelings for him were puzzling, especially since she knew almost nothing about him. Her reason for liking him became clear with one excerpt: "Nobody has ever chosen me before. Not my parents, who died and left me to the state." It’s hard to believe that her deceased parents didn’t care for her, yet she equates that with the MMC “choosing” her as a blood bag, as if that signifies real affection. It reflects poor logic. I don't know if I've read an FMC so thoroughly brainwashed by an older, charismatic male. I generally prefer my FMCs to be strong and independent, so this one was not for me.
I didn’t feel any genuine connection or love developing between the main characters, especially from the MMC's side. I didn't particularly like James. I understand that being broody and mysterious was his whole shtick (considering he's a vampire), but his lack of interest in building a relationship with Taylor was disappointing. He seemed solely focused on understanding why her blood was so irresistible to him, which made him a poor MMC. It felt like he was only interested in her blood; even when he protected her, it seemed more about safeguarding his blood bag.
The power dynamics in their relationship were also questionable. Taylor’s feelings for him were puzzling, especially since she knew almost nothing about him. Her reason for liking him became clear with one excerpt: "Nobody has ever chosen me before. Not my parents, who died and left me to the state." It’s hard to believe that her deceased parents didn’t care for her, yet she equates that with the MMC “choosing” her as a blood bag, as if that signifies real affection. It reflects poor logic. I don't know if I've read an FMC so thoroughly brainwashed by an older, charismatic male. I generally prefer my FMCs to be strong and independent, so this one was not for me.
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